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第三讲 分门别类,直取应用文写作
一、常规写作文体之9大书信类
(一)建议信
建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,一定要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力,并注意要礼貌当先。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:点明写信背景及写信原因
①Knowing you would like to improve your spoken Chinese, I am offering you the following suggestions.
知道你想提高你的汉语口语,我给你以下建议。
②Learning/Knowing that you have trouble in making friends,I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
得知你在交友方面有困难,我写信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。
2.光彩夺目中间句:提出具体建议
①I strongly recommend/suggest that you (should) join a volunteer club so that you can improve your ability.
我强烈建议你参加志愿者俱乐部,这样的话,你能够提高你的能力。
②Besides, it is advisable to read Chinese newspapers, magazines or novels in your spare time.
此外,建议你在业余时间阅读中文报纸、杂志或小说。
③More importantly,it is also a good choice for you to read English every morning.
更重要的是,每天早上阅读英语对你来说也是一个不错的选择。
④What's more,you may as well join in a summer camp, which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.
另外,你不妨参加夏令营,这不但会开拓你的视野而且有助于你培养团队精神。
⑤What's more, if I were you, I would correct my pronunciation by listening to Chinese radio programs.
另外,如果我是你,我会听一些中文广播节目来纠正发音。
⑥Last but not least, why not watch some famous Peking Opera videos on the Internet or read some relevant materials?
最后但同等重要的是,为什么不在网上看一些著名的京剧视频或读一些相关的资料呢?
3.完美收官篇尾句:希望采纳建议
①I am firmly convinced that you will regain confidence with your efforts.If you have further questions, don't hesitate to contact me.
我坚信你会通过你的努力重新获得信心。如果你有进一步的问题,请随时与我联系。
②I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.I'm looking forward to getting your good news soon.
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。盼望早日收到你的好消息。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·浙江省金华十校高三一模)假定你是李华,近日,你发现同学们参与外教Peter组织的“英语角”活动的兴趣不高,请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括:
1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Peter,
I'm Li Hua, one of your students.I'm writing to render what I've found about students' interest in our English Corner.
Aimed at cultivating students' interest in English learning, your English Corner undoubtedly offers us students a great platform to enhance our English proficiency.However, I've found students lacking enthusiasm to get involved lately.I think it would be a good idea to showcase the unique charm of English Corner by adding more interactive activities like English drama performance.Additionally, why not undertake a survey to know about what really interests students?
I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change, in which case, the English Corner will surely become one of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
(二)告知信
告知信通常是告知某一项重要信息,如活动安排、上课计划、方案简介等或回复某人关于某事的询问。此类信件要求考生将写作要点言简意赅、清晰准确地传递给对方。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:点明告知缘由
①Overjoyed to know that you are interested in my P.E.optional course of tai chi, I am willing to share with you my tai chi experience and its benefits.
很高兴得知你们对我的太极体育选修课感兴趣,我非常愿意和大家分享我的太极经验及其好处。
②Here I'd like to inform you of some detailed information so that you can make full preparations for it.
在这里,我想告诉您一些详细的信息,以便您可以做好充分的准备。
2.光彩夺目中间句:告知相关内容
①First and foremost,the competition to be held in our school stadium will begin at 2 pm and last for roughly 3 hours.
首先,在我们学校体育场举行的比赛将于下午2点开始,持续大约3个小时。
②So significant is the game that it is required that everyone should present themselves punctually.
比赛如此重要,要求每个人都应该准时到场。
③There are various sports at the sports meeting, including some track and field events and some ball games.
在运动会上有各种各样的运动项目,包括一些田径项目和一些球类比赛。
④Further,it is necessary for you to take a good rest,which will provide enough energy for you.
此外,你有必要好好休息一下,这将为你提供足够的能量。
3.完美收官篇尾句:表达愿望或期待
①Please contact me if further information is needed.Looking forward to your early reply.
如果需要进一步的信息,请与我联系。期待你的早日回复。
②I sincerely hope that the information is beneficial to you./I sincerely hope that you can benefit from the information.
我真诚地希望这些信息对你有益。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·浙江省绍兴蕺山外国语学校检测)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Luke非常喜欢中国茶文化。近期市文化馆将举办中国茶文化展。请写一封信告知Luke这一消息。内容包括:
1.时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Luke,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Luke,
Knowing your strong enthusiasm for Chinese tea culture, I'm writing to share with you the related news about a tea culture exhibition.
As is scheduled, the exhibition will commence at the cultural center next weekend, running for ten days, during which time all kinds of tea from different regions of China will be on show and the significance of tea in Chinese culture will be highlighted.In addition, there will be talks about the history and tradition of tea drinking and even a tea ceremony demonstration.
I do hope you can take the chance to quench your thirst for the magnificent Chinese culture.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(三)求助信
求助信是指写信人就某一个问题向收信人寻求帮助,希望收信人就提出的问题提供帮助或给出针对性的解决方法。求助信要简明扼要,语气委婉、真诚。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:点明写信目的
①I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand.
我写信想请您帮我一个忙。
②I'm Li Hua, a senior 3 student in your school.Currently, I'm having trouble learning English so I'm writing in the hope that you could do me a favor.
我是李华,贵校高三年级学生。目前,我在学习英语方面有困难,所以我写信是希望您能帮我一个忙。
2.光彩夺目中间句:陈述求助内容
①Faced with the problems above, I am anxious to get your help.Would you please offer me some advice on how to improve my oral English?
面对以上问题,我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给予我一些关于如何提高英语口语方面的建议吗?
②Would you please be so kind to give me some recommendations on which poem to choose?
针对选哪首诗你可以给我推荐一下吗?
③Besides, what I need are the skills of recitation, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance.
此外,我需要的是背诵的技巧,包括发音和语调,这将完善我的表演。
④I've finished my draft and I am wondering if you can help me polish the language and solve problems in my pronunciation as well.
我已经完成了我的草稿,我想知道你是否能帮我润色一下语言,解决我的发音问题。
3.完美收官篇尾句:表示感谢
①I would be grateful if you can spare time to do me a favor. Looking forward to your early reply.
如果你能抽出时间帮我,我将非常感激。期待你的早日回复。
②Knowing you have a busy schedule,I'd appreciate it if you could consider it.
知道你的日程安排很忙,如果你能考虑的话,我会很感激。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·温州市高三第一次适应性考试)假定你是李华,在外刊阅读中遇到了困难,尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写一封邮件寻求帮助,内容包括:
1.尝试方法;
2.请求指导。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Marcus,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Marcus,
I hope this email finds you well.I am writing to seek your guidance on a problem I have been facing while reading foreign magazines.Despite trying various methods, I am unable to comprehend the articles as effectively as I would like to.
I have tried using online translation tools and looking up unfamiliar words in the dictionary, but these methods have not yielded the desired results.I hold the firm belief that with your expertise and guidance, I can improve my reading skills and better understand the content of these magazines.
Would it be possible for us to schedule a meeting or a call to discuss this further? I would greatly appreciate any advice or tips you may have.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(四)邀请信
邀请信是邀请亲朋好友等参加某项活动时所发的邀约性书信。一般邀请信具有简短的特点。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:交代写信背景或者目的
①Our school is going to hold a school uniform design contest at the lecture hall next Friday evening.It's a great honor for us to invite you to be one of the judges.
我们学校将于下周五晚上在讲堂举行一场校服设计比赛。我们很荣幸能邀请你成为评委之一。
②Learning that you're very interested in the Chinese language, I'm writing to invite you to participate in the Chinese Speech Contest for foreign students.
得知你对汉语很感兴趣,我写信邀请你参加针对外国学生的汉语演讲比赛。
2.光彩夺目中间句:介绍邀请参加的活动
①As scheduled, the contest begins at 6 p.m.next Friday, lasting for two hours.15 contestants will participate in the contest.
比赛按计划于下周五下午6点开始,持续两个小时。15名选手将参加比赛。
②The contest, which is scheduled to be held in our school hall on January 18th, will focus on the traditional Chinese culture.
比赛将于1月18日在我们学校礼堂举行,以中国传统文化为重点。
③There is no doubt that you are qualified enough and experienced in presenting your ideas, because of your abundant skills.
毫无疑问,你有足够的资格,有经验来展示你的想法,因为你有丰富的技能。
④Participants will gather in the English corner where they can communicate with each other in English, sharing a knowledge of brilliant English cultures and interesting customs.
参加者将聚集在英语角,在那里他们可以用英语交流,分享灿烂的英语文化和有趣的习俗。
3.完美收官篇尾句:期待接受邀请
①We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience.
如果你能在方便的时候尽早确认参加,我们将不胜感激。
②I sincerely hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.
如果方便的话,我真诚地希望您能接受我们的邀请。
【 即时演练 】
(2023·济宁模拟)假定你是李华,你校英文报Campus Life将为“Never Fading Memories”主题征文大赛举行颁奖活动。请你给外教Caroline写封邮件,邀请她做颁奖嘉宾(award presenter),内容包括:
1.发出邀请;
2.时间、地点;
3.嘉宾活动安排。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Caroline,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Caroline,
I hope this email finds you well.Our English newspaper, Campus Life, will hold an awarding ceremony for the essay competition themed “Never Fading Memories”.I am writing to invite you to be our award presenter and guest speaker.
The ceremony will take place at 9 a.m.this Saturday in the lecture hall.The winners of the competition would be honored if you present medals to them.Besides, you are expected to deliver a short speech and share your insights into the topic.Your considerable expertise and constructive advice would be highly anticipated.
Thanks in advance.Best regards.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(五)申请信
申请信有很多种,如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请等,其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:点明写作目的
①Knowing that you usually take part in the community service, I feel excited and hasten to join you.
知道你们经常参加社区服务,我感到很兴奋,并想尽快加入你们。
②I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to work as a volunteer.
我写信给你是希望我可以获得一个成为志愿者的机会。
2.光彩夺目中间句:介绍自身优势
①I have been actively engaged in a variety of Englishrelated activities, which have greatly enhanced my language skills and interpersonal communication abilities.
我积极参加各种与英语相关的活动,这大大提高了我的语言能力和人际沟通能力。
②In my community work, I will face different people and situations, from which I will learn how to communicate effectively with people.
在我的社区工作中,我将面对不同的人和情况,从中我将学会如何与人有效地沟通。
③I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to our English teacher.
我如此精通英语以至于被选为我们英语老师的助手。
④Not only do I have the qualifications for the job, but I have the right personality for it.
我不仅具备做这份工作的资格,而且具备适合这份工作的性格。
3.完美收官篇尾句:表达期望
①Should you offer me an interview, I would be most grateful.Looking forward to your reply soon.
如果您能给我提供面试机会,我将非常感激。期待您的早日答复。
②Would you mind giving me the honour? Looking forward to hearing from you.
你介意给我这个荣誉吗?期待你的来信。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·成都外国语学校模拟)假定你是李华,你所在的城市要举办“中国传统文化节”,请你写一封邮件给Miss Zhao,申请做文化节志愿者。内容要点如下:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.希望获准。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear Miss Zhao,
I'm Li Hua, a high school student.Learning from the newspaper that volunteers are needed for the coming Traditional Chinese Culture Festival in our city, I'm delightedly writing to apply for this position.
The reasons are as follows.Firstly, as a native Chinese equipped with a good knowledge of traditional Chinese culture, I'm confident that I'm qualified to introduce our treasures to visitors.Moreover, I have a good command of English, which enables me to communicate with foreign guests smoothly.Better yet, with quantities of relevant experience as a volunteer, not only am I enthusiastic and optimistic, but I'm also patient and responsible.
If given the precious opportunity, I will spare no effort to present the charm of traditional Chinese culture.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(六)道歉信
道歉信是因过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失,为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:点明写信目的,表达歉意
①I'm writing to make an apology to you because I cannot make it to see you off at the airport this Saturday as scheduled.
我写这封信的目的是向您道歉,因为我本周六不能如期到机场给您送行。
②I am writing this letter to express my apology for not being able to accompany you to watch Chuan Ju performance,which is scheduled on next Monday.
我写这封信是为了对不能陪您观看下周一的川剧演出表示道歉。
2.光彩夺目中间句:说明道歉的原因
①With my father out on a business trip and my mother occupied looking after my little sister at home,I have to take the responsibility of taking care of my grandfather in the hospital these nights.
我父亲出差,母亲在家照顾妹妹,这些晚上我不得不负责在医院照顾我的祖父。
②What troubles me is that yesterday I caught a bad cold and had a high fever and coughed all the time.
让我烦恼的是,昨天我得了重感冒,发高烧,一直咳嗽。
③The reason why I can't get away is that I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend.
我不能离开的原因是我要帮助准备本周末即将举行的英语演讲比赛。
3.完美收官篇尾句:再次道歉,恳求谅解
①I would appreciate it if you can understand my situation and forgive me.
如果你能理解我的处境并原谅我,我将不胜感激。
②I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
我衷心地希望你能够站在我的角度考虑一下,并接受我的道歉。
【 即时演练 】
假定你是李华,你与爱尔兰交换生Philip原定本周日上午一起修改英文演讲稿,你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Philip,
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Philip,
I'm really sorry for not being able to meet up with you this Sunday morning as planned to work on the English speech draft.
Recently, I was given an unexpected opportunity to interview runners as a reporter for the upcoming International Marathon.It's a great honor for me, and I believe it will be a valuable experience for my future career.However, the interview is scheduled for the same time as our meeting, and I cannot reschedule it.I would appreciate it if you allow me to rearrange our meeting to next Sunday morning.If you are available that time, please let me know.
I apologize for any inconvenience caused and appreciate your understanding.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(七)推荐信
推荐信一般是向别人推荐书籍、景点等,说明推荐的理由,并希望对方听取自己的建议。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:点明写信目的和推荐之物
①I'm incredibly happy to have received your email asking me to recommend a Chinese book to you.
我很高兴收到你的电子邮件,请我给你推荐一本中文书。
②I'm more than delighted to know you are curious about the club activities of our school and want to join one next term.I'd like to recommend the table tennis club to you.
我很高兴得知你对我们学校的俱乐部活动很好奇并想在下学期加入一个俱乐部。我想给你推荐乒乓球俱乐部。
2.光彩夺目中间句:说明推荐的缘由
①I'd like to recommend The ThreeBody Problem by Liu Cixin, a fantastic science fiction novel that explores big questions about humanity and the universe.
我想推荐刘慈欣的《三体》,这是一部探索关于人类和宇宙的大问题的奇幻科幻小说。
②I highly recommend this book mainly due to its thrilling plot that will keep you on the edge of your seat.
我强烈推荐这本书,主要是因为它激动人心的情节会让你有种引人入胜的感觉。
③What's more, all the topics are carefully selected and they can help you get a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.
此外,所有的话题都是精心挑选的,它们可以帮助你更好地了解中国的历史和文化。
④Knowing from your last email that you want to visit my city.So delighted am I that I have made a list of attractions deserving visiting for you.
从你上次的邮件中得知你想来我的城市旅游。我很高兴,并为你列出了一系列值得一游的景点。
3.完美收官篇尾句:再次推荐,希望接受
①I guarantee you will enjoy the lectures and greatly benefit from them.
我保证你会喜欢这些讲座,并从中大大受益。
②I hope you will find what I recommend helpful./I hope you will have a good time in China.
希望你能发现我推荐的有帮助。/希望你在中国玩得高兴。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·广州市荔湾区高三模拟)你校举办以“强身健体,全面发展”为主题的征文活动。请你向高三学生推荐一项适合的运动,内容包括:
1.推荐的运动;
2.推荐的理由。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
I would like to recommend basketball as a suitable sport for senior students.
Basketball is an excellent allround sport that not only improves physical fitness but also promotes teamwork and creativity.Firstly, basketball requires constant physical training, which can exercise the muscles of the whole body, improve cardiopulmonary function, enhance endurance and explosive force.Secondly, basketball emphasizes teamwork, which can improve communication skills, collaboration ability and leadership.Finally, basketball games are full of uncertainty and challenges, improving coping ability and psychological quality.
In short, not only can basketball improve physical fitness but also contribute to comprehensive development.
(八)咨询信
咨询信,又称询问信,是写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:点明咨询原因
①I'm more than delighted to join in a poetry recitation competition to be held in our school.So I'm writing to consult you about something relevant to it.
我非常高兴能够参加即将在我们学校举行的诗歌朗诵比赛。所以我写信是想咨询您与之相关的一些事情。
②I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/
concerning the activity.
我写信是想知道你能否提供给我一些关于这项活动的具体信息。
2.光彩夺目中间句:征询具体信息
①Please give me some detailed information about your schedule, so I can reserve a hotel for you in advance.
请给我一些关于您的日程安排的详细信息,这样我可以提前为您预订酒店。
②Since it is the first time for us to go to Australia, we'd like to know the details about the accommodation so that we can make some preparations in advance.
因为这是我们第一次去澳大利亚,我们想知道关于住宿的细节,以便我们可以提前做一些准备。
③Besides, is it possible for you to pick us up at the airport after our arrival?
另外,我们到达后你能到机场接我们吗?
④As for the money you charge, I'm wondering if it covers the entrance fees for visiting the places listed?
关于你收取的费用,我想知道它是否包含了参观所列地点的入场费?
⑤I would like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodations are included.
我想知道我上这门课程需要付多少钱,是否提供食宿。
3.完美收官篇尾句:表达期待及感谢
①Thank you for your kindness and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
谢谢你的好意,如果您能及时关注这封信,我将不胜感激。
②If there is anything else that needs special attention, please inform me at your convenience.
如果还有其他需要特别注意的事情,请在方便的时候通知我。
【 即时演练 】
假定你是李华,你的网友David邀请你校排球队去他所在城市的一所高中参加为期两天的中学生排球友谊赛。作为排球队队长,请你给David写一封电子邮件询问有关信息,内容包括:
1.愉快接受邀请;
2.询问相关安排;
3.表达感激之情。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear David,
We are very delighted to accept the invitation to have a few friendly volleyball matches, which will no doubt strengthen the friendship of all the schools.As captain of our school volleyball team, I am writing to learn about the arrangement.
First and foremost, since it is the first time for us to go to your city, we would like to know the details about the accommodations so that we can make some preparations in advance.If possible, we would like to live in a hotel near your school.Besides, is it convenient for you to pick us up at the bus station after our arrival? Also, would you please send us the schedule for the matches?
Thank you for all your help and look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(九)感谢信
感谢信是重要的礼仪文书,是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:点明写信目的
①I am writing to convey my genuine gratitude to you for your generous help.
我写这封信是为了对你的慷慨帮助表示真诚的感谢。
②I am writing to express my sincere thanks/gratitude to you for helping me in English learning.
我写这封信是为了表达我对你在英语学习上对我的帮助的衷心感谢。
2.光彩夺目中间句:陈述感谢理由
①Without your encouragement and advice,I wouldn't have benefited so much from the experience.
如果没有你的鼓励和建议,我就不会从这次经历中收获这么多。
②It was you who encouraged me to be confident to express myself fluently in Chinese.
是你鼓励我自信地用中文流利地表达自己。
③What's more, whenever I was overwhelmed by homesickness,you were always with me, and were ready to give me a hand.
更重要的是,每当我被乡愁所淹没时,你总是和我在一起,随时准备帮助我。
④You are so kind and selfless that you have given me a great deal of constructive and instructive help/assistance.
你是如此的善良、无私,给了我很多建设性和指导性的帮助。
⑤It goes without saying that I have made great progress in English with your help.
不言而喻,在你的帮助下,我在英语方面取得了很大的进步。
3.完美收官篇尾句:再次表示感谢
①Without your assistance, my English couldn't have got better in such a short time.Thanks again for your kind help.
没有你的帮助,我的英语不可能在这么短的时间内有所提高。 再次感谢你的帮助。
②I will be more than pleased if I can show you around Canada in return for your kindness.
如果我能带你游览加拿大以回报你的好意,我将非常高兴。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·湖南省部分名校联盟高三冲刺)假定你是学生会主席李华,学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动(Work Creates a Better Life)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束,请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.外教的帮助;
3.活动的反响。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Patrick,
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Patrick,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the Work Creates a Better Life, which has turned out to be an amazing success.
It is so nice of you to have offered us a variety of presentation skills and creative suggestions on our show.It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc.Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills.Most importantly, this activity helped students receive wide admiration and gain their tremendous confidence.
Many thanks for your time and support.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、常规写作文体之5大非书信类
(一)演讲稿
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等。演讲稿文体通常要有吸引力,要明确发言的对象。在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:寒暄及点明演讲主题
①I'm Li Hua. It is a great privilege to speak here to express a warm welcome to you on behalf of our school.
我是李华。我很荣幸能在这里代表我们学校向你们表示热烈的欢迎。
②I'm very happy to give a speech about “How to Stay Motivated in Learning English”, which poses a great challenge for many students.
我很高兴能做一个关于“如何在学习英语中保持动力”的演讲,这对许多学生来说是一个巨大的挑战。
2.光彩夺目中间句:演讲具体内容
①To begin with, we are supposed to stay with motivated individuals, which allows us to feel the positive energy between each other.
首先,我们应该和积极进取的人待在一起,这让我们能够感受到彼此之间的正能量。
②Secondly, manageable goals should be set so that we can take the right steps to make progress in English.
其次,应该设定可实行的目标,以便我们能够采取正确的方法来在英语上取得进步。
③Most importantly,we may keep our interest in learning English by appreciating English films and reading various English magazines.
最重要的是,我们可以通过欣赏英语电影和阅读各种英语杂志来保持我们对学习英语的兴趣。
3.完美收官篇尾句:升华主题及感谢聆听
①In a word, reading has a great influence on me, which broadens my horizons, raises my curiosity, and satisfies my desire to keep learning.
总而言之,阅读对我有很大的影响,它拓宽了我的视野,提高了我的好奇心,满足了我不断学习的愿望。
②For a greener environment and a more prosperous future, let's all clear our plates! Thank you!
为了一个更环保的环境和更繁荣的未来,让我们光盘行动吧!谢谢大家!
【 即时演练 】
(2024·云南省大理州高三统一检测)第十九届亚运会于2023年9月23日在中国杭州开幕,这激发了人们对运动的热爱,促进了经济发展的同时也增进了国际交流与合作。假定你是李华,并作为志愿者参与了此次亚运会,你被邀请在你校学生大会上演讲,分享你做志愿者的心得。内容包括:
1.做志愿者的过程;
2.做志愿者的感受。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Ladies and gentlemen,
[参考范文]
Ladies and gentlemen,
I am honored to share my experience as a volunteer in the 19th Asian Games in Hangzhou China, which truly inspired me throughout the volunteering process.
During the Asian Games, one of my main tasks was to assist spectators and guide them to their designated seating areas.Besides, I was involved in promoting cultural exchange among participants and visitors.This aspect of volunteering allowed me to showcase the beauty and diversity of my country.
My journey as a volunteer in the 19th Asian Games was an unforgettable experience.I learned valuable lessons about teamwork, cultural diversity, and the power of sports to bring people together.I will carry the memories and lessons with me for a lifetime. Thanks for your listening.
(二)通 知
通知分为书面通知和口头通知。通知一般用于公布即将发生的事情,如宣布举行比赛,举办讲座、画展、晚会,召开研讨会等。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:点明通知的目的
①May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.(口头通知)
请大家注意一下,我要宣布一件事。
②In order to enrich students' afterschool activities, our school will organize a tour of visiting Beijing Ancient Architecture Museum.(书面通知)
为了丰富学生的课外生活,我们学校将组织参观北京古建筑博物馆。
2.光彩夺目中间句:告知相关信息
①There will be a party/speech/contest held by the Students' Union.It will begin at 8:00 am and last about 3 hours.
将有一个由学生会举办的晚会/演讲/比赛。它将从早上8点开始,持续大约3小时。
②At the beginning, a mini lecture related to the music festival will be arranged, after which there will be various fantastic performances given by students.
一开始会安排一个与音乐节相关的小型讲座,之后会有同学们各种各样精彩的表演。
③This museum is famous all over the country for its unique antiques which can show you the abundance and greatness of Beijing ancient architecture.
这个博物馆以其独特的古董而享有盛誉,它可以向你展示北京古代建筑的丰富和伟大。
④As scheduled, all the students of International Department are required to gather at 9 am on Sunday morning.
国际系的所有学生必须如期在周日上午9点集合。
⑤You can tell stories which are related to the origins of traditional festivals and some legends concerning Chinese culture.
你可以讲一些与传统节日的起源有关的故事和一些关于中国文化的传说。
3.完美收官篇尾句:号召参与,表达祝愿
①Those who are interested in the activity are welcome.
欢迎那些对这项活动感兴趣的人。
②Anyone interested in it is supposed to sign up at our office by this Friday afternoon,which is the deadline we set for the event.
任何对它感兴趣的人都应该于本周五下午之前在我们的办公室报名,这是我们为这次活动设定的最后期限。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·江苏省扬州市高三期中)你校正在开展阳光体育活动,校学生会拟以“体育精神”为主题举办摄影展。请你代表学生会,在校英文报上发布一则通知,征集摄影作品,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.作品内容和要求;
3.投稿方式和截止日期。
注意: 1.词数80词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
Students' Union
[参考范文]
Notice
Aiming to promote sun sports and showcase typical examples, our school will hold a photography exhibition on the theme of sports spirit.
Students are required to take original photos with a mobile phone or camera, documenting impressive sporting scenes on campus.Each student is supposed to submit only one entry with a title and personal information including name, class and email address.Please send your file package to photoexhi@qq.com by the end of November.
Your active participation is highly anticipated.
Students' Union
(三)征文投稿
投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行写作,所投稿件应紧贴主题,内容应新颖、创新、实用,符合字数要求等。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:概述所述问题或现象
①English, as we all know, is a widely used language, connecting people all over the world.
众所周知,英语是一种被广泛使用的语言,它将世界各地的人们联系在一起。
②Mastering the universal language can definitely open up more possibilities in the future.
掌握这门通用语言绝对可以在未来开辟更多的可能性。
2.光彩夺目中间句:详细介绍基本情况
①Moreover, English will serve as a window to the world, allowing me to gain a global view towards life, understand people from different cultures and make more friends.
此外,英语将成为一扇通往世界的窗户,让我们从全球视野看待生活,了解来自不同文化的人,结交更多的朋友。
②It goes without saying that it takes a period of time to become accustomed/adapt/adjust to the life in a new place.
毫无疑问,要适应一个新地方的生活是需要一段时间的。
③It is high time that we human beings took/should take proper measures to keep the balance of nature.
该是我们人类采取适当的措施来维护生态平衡的时候了。
④As a student, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly, enduring all kinds of hardship.
作为一名学生,我们有责任认真、踏实地完成学业,忍受各种困难。
3.完美收官篇尾句:进行总结
①In a word, if knowledge enriches the mind, then English adds wings.
总而言之,如果知识丰富了思想,那么英语就会如虎添翼。
②In conclusion,all of us young people should learn from them and shoulder our responsibility.
总之,我们所有年轻人都应该向他们学习,并承担起我们的责任。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·西安市高三上学期联考)你校英文报正在开展以“My Favourite Book”为题的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.该书简介(书名、内容等);
2.读后感受。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
My Favourite Book
Of all the books I read, I like A Dream of Red Mansions best.
It describes a tragic love story of the two characters, through which one witnesses the history of rise and fall of four big families.It covers various subjects, ranging from medicine to architecture, making it one of the four classics in Chinese literature.
After reading A Dream of Red Mansions, I feel life is as beautiful as a poem, which is full of ups and downs, sadness and happiness.As a teenager, I should cherish the present and look forward to the future.I think the book has its own brandnew look in both ideological content and artistic skills and a permanent artistic charm worthy of inheritance.
(四)宣传稿
宣传稿是通过一定形式向公众传递信息的手段,为了告知听众某项事物,让其了解相关事项,是应用文的一种。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:点明宣传主题
A design competition about environmental protection is to be held in the school hall next Sunday.
一场关于环境保护的设计比赛将于下周日在学校大厅举行。
2.光彩夺目中间句:详细信息
①A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years.
最近一项调查表明在过去的三年里我们学校的学生健康状况越来越差。
②Our camp offers good accommodation, so you don't have to be anxious about a rest place after hiking.
我们营地提供良好的住宿,所以你们不用担心远足后休息的地方。
③The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking.
这个节目的目的是培养英语学习的兴趣,以及听、说实践能力。
④Experience the exciting whitewater rafting and you'll gain the experience you have never got.
你们将体验令人兴奋的激流漂筏,将获得你们从未有过的经历。
3.完美收官篇尾句:愿望和意义
①I believe you'll have a deeper understanding of protecting the environment after this interesting and meaningful competition.
我相信在这个有趣且有意义的竞赛后,你们会对保护环境有更深的理解。
②Looking forward to your joining and let's do what we can to help reduce traffic congestion.
期待你的加入,让我们尽我们所能来帮助减少交通拥堵。
【 即时演练 】
(2021·浙江6月卷)昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.观展感受;
3.推荐观展。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
The students' Chinese painting exhibition was held by our school yesterday.As far as I know, this exhibition will last for a month in the school art gallery.
What pleases me most is that their artistic talent is extremely shocking.I am deeply impressed by their talent for painting.By attending the exhibition, not only can you appreciate the beauty of Chinese paintings, but also can enrich your mind.Therefore, I strongly appeal to all the students in our school to taste these wonderful works carefully in our spare time.Eventually, every one is sure to receive an unexpected joy.
(五)倡议书
倡议书属于应用文的一种,是为倡议或发起某项活动而写的号召性的、公开提议性的专用文体。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:点明发出的倡议及目的
①To answer the call of our country to develop students' overall competence, the Student Union is here to call on everyone to participate in the weeklong activity “Labor is the Most Beautiful”.
为了响应我国培养学生整体能力的号召,学生会呼吁大家参加为期一周的“劳动最美”的活动。
②I am writing to call on all students to participate in the “Read Classics, Learn English” activity, whose theme is to appreciate the charm of English classics and promote English learning.
我写信呼吁所有学生参加“读经典,学英语”活动, 其主题是领略英语经典的魅力,促进英语学习。
2.光彩夺目中间句:详细介绍倡议的具体内容
①Nowadays, many students attach great importance to academic learning while ignoring labor education, which is actually equally important.
如今,许多学生非常重视学业,但忽视了劳动教育,它其实同样重要。
②It can cultivate our strong will, enhance our sense of teamwork and offer a platform to put what we have learned in class to practical use.
它可以培养我们坚强的意志,增强我们的团队合作意识,并提供一个平台,让我们把在课堂上学到的东西付诸实践。
③It also can equip us with valuable life skills needed for the future.
它还可以为我们提供未来所需的宝贵的生活技能。
3.完美收官篇尾句:表明决心和希望
①So, all my fellows, come and enjoy the pleasure of labor and the satisfaction from it.
所以,我所有的伙伴们,来享受劳动的乐趣和从中获得的满足吧。
②I am convinced that, with our joint efforts, the phenomena of wasting food will disappear.
我深信,在我们的共同努力下,浪费食物的现象将会消失。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·浙江省杭州市第九中学统测)假如你是李华,随着亚运会的成功举办和圆满结束,借着亚运会的余晖,本着“传承亚运精神、发扬亚运精神”的宗旨,你所在的城市开展了“全民健身运动 (National Fitness Program)”。请你代表学生会,给全校学生写一封倡议书,呼吁大家积极参与活动,内容包括:
1.发起倡议;
2.具体做法;
3.活动意义。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
Dear fellow students,
After all, the greatest wealth is health.
The Student Union
[参考范文]
Dear fellow students,
With the successful holding and complete conclusion of the Asian Games,the National Fitness Program is proceeding with full vigor in our city.Here, on behalf of the Student Union, I strongly advocate that every student should take an active part in it.
Initially, working out for one hour every day tops the list of my recommendation, during which time you can jog, walk or swim.Besides, it is also advisable to develop a sport skill, such as playing table tennis and basketball.You are also supposed to join a sport club in our school, where not only can you make more friends but also sharpen your excellent skills.Let's work out and keep moving.You can build up your body, strengthen your willpower and fully appreciate the unique charm of sports.
After all, the greatest wealth is health.
The Student Union
三、常规写作文体之4大记叙类
(一)新闻报道
新闻报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据, 对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性、准确性,语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂,不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:新闻报道的导语
①In order to arouse students' interest in English, our school held an English Drama Competition in our school hall last Sunday afternoon, which turned out to be a great success.
为了激发学生对英语的兴趣,我们学校上周日下午在学校礼堂举行了一个英语话剧大赛,结果非常成功。
②To help make the nearby community a more harmonious one, our learning group held an activity, whose theme was Community Service, during the summer vacation.
为了使附近的社区更加和谐,我们的学习小组在暑假期间举办了一场以社区服务为主题的活动。
2.光彩夺目中间句:详述事件
①All the teachers and students in our school participated in a lecture on traffic safety, which was held in our school last week.
我校全体师生都参加了上周在我校举行的交通安全讲座。
②On arriving at the park, what impressed me most was its fresh air and beautiful scenery.
一到公园,最令我印象深刻的是它新鲜的空气和美丽的景色。
③However difficult it was, no participants gave up halfway.All the racers held on to the finish line.
无论多么困难,没有参与者半途而废。所有的赛跑运动员都坚持到终点线。
④Everyone thinks highly of this activity, for it is a good chance to get close to nature.
每个人对该活动的评价都很高,因为这是一个亲近大自然的好机会。
3.完美收官篇尾句:评论或总结
①Tired as we were, we had a sense of achievement.
尽管我们很累,但是有一种成就感。
②Therefore, we all think highly of it, and expect more activities like this in the future.
因此,我们都对此寄予厚望,并期待着未来还会有更多这样的活动。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·湖南师大附中调研)假定你是中学生李华,你校最近刚举办了为期2天的年度运动会,请你给校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.运动会的概况;
2.运动会的亮点;
3.运动会的意义。
注意: 1.写作词数应80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Annual School Sports Meeting: A Memorable Event
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Annual School Sports Meeting: A Memorable Event
Our school recently concluded a thrilling twoday Annual Sports Meeting, held on September 28th and 29th at our school's sports field, marked by multiple exciting activities including students' track and field and teachers' fun games.
What caught almost everyone's eye was the teachers' fun games, featuring recreational competitions that aimed to provide the opportunity for teachers to bond their teams and advocate a healthy lifestyle.
What a game that offered students and teachers a retreat from their daily studies, granting all of us a chance to relax, have fun and strengthen longlasting friendships! Our proud efforts to make this game a success are highly appreciated and let's await the festivities of next year.
(二)叙事记叙文
叙事短文属于记叙文的写作范畴,文章多以事件为中心,以时间和空间为线索,按事件的发生、发展、结局展开故事。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:活动时间、地点和目的
①Our school organised a campus chorus contest on Wednesday afternoon, the theme of which was “Love Our Motherland”.
我们学校在周三下午组织了一场校园合唱比赛,主题是“爱我们的祖国”。
②In order to let us experience the life in the countryside, our school organized a fruitpicking activity on a farm last weekend.
为了让我们体验乡村生活,我们学校上周末在一个农场组织了一个水果采摘活动。
2.光彩夺目中间句:活动过程
①As scheduled, the contest took place in the school hall, lasting two hours from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm.
比赛如期在学校礼堂举行,从下午4点到下午6点持续两个小时。
②The moment we arrived at the farm, we began with the area of fruit trees and then moved on to the vegetable field.
我们一到农场,就从果树开始,然后又去了菜园。
③It was applauded by all students and teachers, who donated as many books as they could.
它受到了所有学生和老师的称赞,他们捐赠了尽可能多的书。
3.完美收官篇尾句:个人感受
①Hopefully, more such activities will be held to help those in need, from which we students will learn the true essence of the harmonious society.
希望能举办更多这样的活动来帮助那些需要帮助的人,从中我们学生将学到和谐社会的真谛。
②By doing interesting experiments myself, I had lots of fun as well as gaining knowledge.
通过亲自做有趣的实验,我既玩得开心也获得了知识。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·河南省驻马店市高三第一次联考)假定你是李华, 最近你校举办了主题为“Moving Towards Living Independently”的家庭劳动实践活动。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿, 内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.获取某项生活技能的过程(如烹饪、洗衣等);
3.个人感受。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Moving Towards Living Independently
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Moving Towards Living Independently
To further improve the students' independent sense of life, our school recently held an activity entitled “Moving Towards Living Independently”.Students of all grades were actively involved.
Considering cooking is an essential life skill and that I'm obsessed with all kinds of delicious food, I chose cooking as my practice project.I surfed the Internet and watched lots of short videos, which gave me much information about cooking techniques.I also turned to my parents for help.They patiently explained their daily routine to me and removed some of my misconceptions about cooking.And luckily, I made it finally.
In the process of cooking, I not only learned the importance of independence, but also experienced the difficulty in becoming independent.
(三)人物描写
人物描写属于记叙文的写作范畴,写作时要围绕人物组织材料。要做到主题鲜明,内容清楚,并注意结构的完整性。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:介绍人物基本情况
①Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history, Cao Cao is my favorite, who has a gift in strategy in military.
在中国历史上的杰出人物中,我最喜欢曹操,他在军事上很有战略天赋。
②She is a charming lady of medium height with long and blonde hair.
她是一位有魅力的女士,中等身材,留着长长的金发。
2.光彩夺目中间句:介绍人物性格及事迹
①Being optimistic and energetic, he often takes an active part in afterclass activities.
他很乐观而且精力充沛,经常积极参加课外活动。
②Whenever people around get into trouble, she is willing to help them, which makes her respected by all our neighbours.
每当周围的人遇到麻烦,她乐意帮助他们,这使她受到所有邻居的尊重。
③Not only did Einstein devote all his life to scientific research but also he cared for human being's peace and development.
爱因斯坦不仅致力于科学研究,而且非常关心人类的和平和发展。
3.完美收官篇尾句:总结升华
①He sets so good an example for us students that we all should learn from him.
他为我们学生树立了好榜样,我们都应该向他学习。
②Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions.
她的精神激励着我和数百万女孩去过独立的生活,鼓励着我们为自己的决定负责。
【 即时演练 】
(2020·全国卷Ⅰ改编)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.
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The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.And the person I respect most is my physics teacher.She is so patient with each student and devoted to the cause of education that we all respect her.
It's her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her.When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits, she patted me gently on the shoulder and gave me great encouragement.She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
Having set a great example for us students, she fully deserves my respect.
(四)日 记
日记是用来记录一天中所发生的有意义的、值得记录的事件。在日记中,人们会对事件发表议论,阐述一下自己的态度或体会。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:总体描述
①Last week,we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture,which turned out to be extremely rewarding.
上周,我们带着来我校的外国学生去体验了地道的茶文化,收获颇多。
②So pleased was I that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the Spring Festival.
我很高兴我的一位中国笔友邀请我和她一起过春节。
2.光彩夺目中间句:详述过程
①Some picked up rubbish and threw it into the dustbins, while others distributed the leaflets to raise people's awareness of the damage littering can cause.
一些人捡垃圾,把它扔进垃圾箱,而另一些人分发传单,以提高人们对随手乱丢垃圾造成的危害的意识。
②In the morning, we went to Zhongshan Park by bus, talking and laughing all the way.
早上,我们乘公共汽车去中山公园,一路上我们有说有笑。
③The moment we arrived at the Chinese Academy of Sciences,we were warmly greeted by a friendly expert standing at the entrance.
我们一到中科院,一位友好的专家就站在门口,热情地迎接我们。
④We first went to the library with a large collection of books,where we saw students reading attentively.
我们首先去了藏书丰富的图书馆,在那里我们看到学生们在认真地阅读。
3.完美收官篇尾句:表达感受
①An exhausting as well as meaningful day has ended, but I still remained excited for quite a long time.
劳累而有意义的一天结束了,但我仍然激动了很长一段时间。
②Activities not only enable us to contribute to society, but also make us aware of the importance of protecting the natural environment.
活动不仅使我们能为社会做贡献,而且使我们意识到保护自然环境的重要性。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·泰安统考一模)昨天,班委会组织你们到学校劳动实践基地参加春耕、春种实践活动。请为校英文报写一篇英语日记,内容包括:
1.活动的过程;
2.活动的意义与感想。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Saturday April 16 Sunny
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Saturday April 16 Sunny
Yesterday, we held spring ploughing and planting practice in the school's labor practice base.
The activity lasted for one day.We were divided into several groups and assigned a task which involved planting trees, weeding, and watering vegetables.At noon, we enjoyed a lunch with the vegetables planted by the farmers.Before the sunset, we returned to the school, tired but happy.
Through this activity, not only did we realize the value of labor, but we also learned to respect all laborers.
四、非常规写作文体之2大议论说明类
(一)个人观点类
个人观点类文章属于议论文范畴,是就某一话题或热点问题阐述自己的观点和看法的文章。在写作过程中,要先明确自己的观点,态度鲜明,不能模棱两可;还要围绕论点多角度论证,论据要确切、充分,最后进行总结,重申自己的观点和立场。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:点明自己的观点
①As Francis Bacon once said,reading makes a full man.A good book can affect our life in one way or another.
正如弗朗西斯·培根所说,读书使人充实。一本好书会以这样或那样的方式影响我们的生活。
②When it comes to how to succeed, many people may think of the proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way.”
当谈及如何成功时,很多人或许会想起谚语“有志者,事竟成。”
2.光彩夺目中间句:详细论证自己的观点
①Not surprisingly, most high school students seldom do housework for lack of time.
不足为奇的是,大多数高中生很少做家务,因为时间不够。
②Not only can it relieve our parents' tiredness after work and strengthen the mutual ties, but also it contributes to cultivating the awareness of labor.
它不仅能减轻父母下班后的疲劳,加强相互之间的联系,而且有助于培养劳动意识。
③For example, I like cleaning my house best, which can help release my study pressure and most importantly save my parents' trouble of sweeping the floor.
例如,我最喜欢打扫我的房子,这可以帮我缓解学习压力,最重要的是省了我父母扫地的麻烦。
3.完美收官篇尾句:总结自己的观点
①Personally, doing the chores is absolutely a necessity.
就我个人而言,做家务是绝对必要的。
②In a word, it pays to do the chores for high school students.
总之, 高中生做家务是值得的。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·常州市高三调研)近来,不少城市的“博物馆热(museum fever)”持续升温,去博物馆已然成为一种新的生活方式。假定你是李华,请给校英文报投稿,就此现象发表评议,内容包括:
1.说明“博物馆热”的现象;
2.分析“博物馆热”产生的原因;
3.谈谈你对“博物馆热”的看法。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Ms/Mr Editor,
Yours,
Li Hua
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Ms/Mr Editor,
Recently, visiting museums has emerged as a new lifestyle in many cities, with several renowned museums becoming the “mustvisit” destinations for the general public.
The surge in “museum fever” can be attributed to various factors.People's increasing enthusiasm for traditional Chinese culture has drawn them to seek a deeper understanding of China's rich cultural heritage and history.Besides, the application of new technologies has made cultural relics more accessible, which appeals to the younger generations.
From my perspective, the museum fever is a pursuit of beauty that can enhance aesthetics and broaden horizons.The immersive experience is of greater significance than anything else.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)图文结合类
图文结合类文章大部分属于议论文或者说明文范畴,图片常为柱状图或者饼状图,要求考生就图片反映的情况进行分析,并阐述观点。
【 布局谋篇 】
【 素材积累 】
1.引人入胜篇首句:阐述图片主要内容
①As the chart shows,students adopt different ways to learn English beyond the classroom.
如图表所示,学生们在课堂之外采用不同的方式来学习英语。
②Recently, I conducted a survey on what books the students in our school like to read.The details are as follows.
最近,我对我们学校的学生喜欢读什么书进行了调查。详情如下。
2.光彩夺目中间句:分析图片反映的情况
①The percent of the students who listen to English songs is as high as 65%.50% of them watch English movies while only 18% read English books.Those who visit Englishlearning websites account for 12%.
听英文歌曲的学生比例高达65%。50%的学生看英文电影,只有18%的学生读英文书。那些访问英语学习网站的人占比12%。
②The figures of the chart suggest that there are a variety of ways to learn English beyond the classroom with the development of modern technology.
图表上的数字表明,随着现代科技的发展,在课堂之外学习英语的方法多种多样。
③35 percent of the students prefer to read cartoons while 30 percent of the students like to read newspapers and magazines.
35%的学生喜欢看漫画,而30%的学生喜欢看报纸和杂志。
④Additionally, as the combination of great thought and wisdom, classics shouldn't be left to gather dust on shelves.
此外,作为伟大的思想和智慧的结合,经典不应该被留在书架上积尘。
3.完美收官篇尾句:总结或者发表观点
①As far as I am concerned,students should do more listening and speaking so that they can develop their communication skills.
就我而言,学生应该多听多说,这样他们就能发展沟通技巧。
②From my perspective, we should read more classics and spread our traditional culture to the world.
在我看来,我们应该阅读更多的经典著作,把我们的传统文化传播给世界。
【 即时演练 】
(2024·河南省实验中学高三模拟)目前,网络语言(Internet slang)在青少年中极为盛行,你校学生会在同学中就对网络语言的看法进行了调查,调查结果见下面饼状图。请根据图中信息,用英语写一篇短文,介绍同学们的看法,并表达自己的观点。
注意:词数80左右。
[参考范文]
At present, Internet slang has become more and more popular among teenagers.According to a survey conducted by our Students' Union, students' opinions on this issue are divided as follows.
Most of the students are in favor of Internet slang.About 35% of the students hold the view that Internet slang is vivid and fashionable.Another 33% of them enjoy its humor and intelligence.And a quarter of the students believe it makes chatting on the Internet more convenient.However, there are 7% of the students thinking Internet slang lacks depth of thought and is too casual.In addition, it is hard for most people to understand and accept this kind of slang.If it is used too much in a passage, it may make readers confused, and even cause misunderstanding.
In my opinion, living in the Information Age, if we are not familiar with Internet slang, we are likely to fall behind.
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