专题1 第3讲 提升续写品质的11个满分句式（教师用书word）-【金版新学案】2025年高考英语高三总复习大一轮复习讲义（译林版2020）

第三讲　提升续写品质的11个满分句式 句式1　现在分词作状语 [句型公式]　Doing..., 主语＋did sth 或者主语＋did sth, doing... [句式解读]　现在分词doing常作伴随动作状语和时间状语。doing所表示的动作与主句主语之间构成逻辑上的主谓关系。 [典例展示] ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)Hugging me in his warmest arms, he added, “As expected, you really can make a good shot！” 他用他最温暖的手臂抱着我，补充道：“不出所料，你真的能打出一个好球！” ②(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)David stood firmly in his position, ignoring anything around. 大卫坚定地站在他的位置上，无视周围的任何事情。 [句式练透] 1．(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)听到我的好消息，老师衷心地祝贺我。 Hearing my great news, my teacher congratulated me sincerely. 2．(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)看到他脸上的微笑，我再也忍不住眼泪了。 Seeing his smile on face, I could no longer hold back my tears. 3．(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)他注意到我，转过身来说：“恭喜你！你做得很好。” Noticing me, he turned around and said，“Congratulations! You did a good job.” 4．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)我在那里等着，很担心大卫是否能完成任务。 I was waiting there, feeling so anxious about whether David could finish the task. 5．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)所有的选手都鼓掌，欢迎大卫加入他们。 All of the runners clapped their hands, welcoming David to join them. 句式2　过去分词作状语 [句型公式]　主语＋did sth, done...或者 Done..., 主语＋did sth [句式解读]　过去分词done常作伴随动作状语和原因状语。done所表示的动作与主句主语之间构成逻辑上的动宾关系。 [典例展示] ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)Struck by his words, I made up my mind to make more progress in writing so as to live up to his expectations. 我被他的话打动了，于是我决定在写作上取得更多的进步，以达到他的期望。 ②(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)But bathed in a competitive atmosphere, he was in high spirits and felt a sudden strength inside him. 但处在这种竞争的气氛中，他精神高涨，突然感到一种力量。 [句式练透] 1．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)我被他的精神感动了，我跟着他，一路上为他加油。(move) Moved by his spirit, I followed him and cheered him up_along_the_way. 2．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)大卫被我督促后，他若有所思地抬头看着我。(push) Pushed by me, David looked up at me thoughtfully. 3．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)受热情和鼓励的鼓舞，大卫兴高采烈地加快了步伐。(inspire) Inspired by the enthusiasm and encouragement, David quickened his pace in high spirits. 4．有了所学到的东西，我很快就变得平静多了。(arm) Armed with what I had learned, I quickly became much calmer. 5．我们在温暖的火炉前坐下，解释了鹅是如何不让我们冻僵的。(settle) Settled in front of the warm stove, we explained how the goose had kept us from freezing. 6．被闪闪发光的圣诞树迎接着，穆勒太太一动也不动，看起来很惊讶。(greet) Greeted by the sparkling Christmas tree, Mrs Mueller was rooted to the spot, looking surprised. 句式3　现在分词完成式作状语 [句型公式]　Having done..., 主语＋did sth或者主语＋did sth, having done... [句式解读]　having done所表示的动作发生在主句谓语动词之前，与主句主语之间是主动关系。 [典例展示] ①Having known the whole story, Mali gave me an understanding smile and told me his former experiences in jungle. 知道了整个故事后，马里给了我一个理解的微笑，并告诉了我他以前在丛林里的经历。 ②Having received Joe's message, Charlie and Jane twisted their figures and clutched the rope tightly. 收到乔的消息后，查理和简扭着身子，紧紧地抓住绳子。 [句式练透] 1．我们在学校门口会合后，一大早就乘出租车去了那里。 Having gathered at the school gate, we took a taxi there early in the morning. 2．在被说服改变态度之后，我终于做出承诺要好好学习。 Having been persuaded to change my attitude, I finally make a commitment to studying hard. 3．知道他渴望笔记本电脑后，他们都回答说“是的”。 Having known about his thirsty for a laptop, they all replied “Yes”． 4．在承认了他对他的叔叔所做的一切后，詹姆斯感到松了一口气。 Having admitted/confessed what he had done to his uncle, James felt relieved. 5．她买了一双新靴子后，走进了服装部。 Having bought a pair of new boots, she walked into the clothing department. 句式4　独立主格结构 [句型公式]　名词/代词＋非谓语动词(­ing形式、­ed形式或不定式)/形容词/副词/介词短语 [句式解读]　非谓语动词作状语，其逻辑主语须与主句主语保持一致。若不一致，非谓语动词形式须另带主语，从而构成复合结构的形式作状语，这种结构称为“独立结构”。独立主格结构经常可以和with复合结构互换。 [典例展示] ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)Thunderous applause echoing in the auditorium, scarcely could I wait to share the honor with my teacher. 礼堂里回荡着热烈的掌声，我迫不及待地想和我的老师分享这一荣誉。 ②The rope tied around, the boy was pulled out first. 绳子系好了，男孩先被拉了出来。 [句式练透] 1．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)大卫跟上了这个庞大的队伍，他的小身体左右摇摆。 David kept up with the big troop, his small body rocking from side to side. 2．他点了点头，眼泪开始落下来，弄湿了我的衬衫。 He nodded, tears starting to roll down and wetting my shirt. 3．我在黑暗中的过道上跑来跑去，恐慌充满了我的小胸腔，使我呼吸困难。 I ran up and down the aisles in the dark, panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe. 4．他低着头，肩膀颤抖着，显然是在努力掩饰自己的失望。 Head down and shoulders trembling, obviously, he was trying hard to hide his disappointment. 5．他慢慢抬起垂下的头，泪水溢满了眼睛。 He slowly raised his dropping head, tears filling his eyes. 6．眼睛里闪烁着纯粹的喜悦和骄傲，罗莎莉拉着马库斯的手，邀请他仔细看看。 Eyes shining with pure delight and pride, Rosalee took Marcus' hand, inviting him to have a closer look. 句式5　with复合结构 [句型公式]　with＋名词/代词＋非谓语动词(­ing形式、­ed形式或不定式)/形容词/副词/介词短语 [句式解读]　with复合结构常作伴随动作状语，可使动作或对话描写更生动，多数可以与独立主格互换。 [典例展示] ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)Suddenly, I discovered an unread email from the contest official, with the subject inviting me to attend the award presentation. 突然，我发现了一封来自比赛人员的未读的电子邮件，主题是邀请我参加颁奖典礼。 ②(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)With a fiery mood in my heart, I delivered my short speech. 心中充满激情，我发表了一个简短的演讲。 [句式练透] 1．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)大卫脸上挂着悲伤的表情，一动不动无助地坐着，头无力地低着。 With a sorrowful expression hanging on his face, David sat around motionlessly and helplessly, his head drooping powerlessly. 2．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)空气中笼罩着沉重的寂静，他低下头。 With silence hanging heavily in the air, he ducked down his head. 3．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)空气中回荡着鼓励的声音，大卫带着他独特的跑步风格一次又一次地尝试着。 With the encouragement ringing in the air, David attempted again and again with his unique running style. 4．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)不过，越野跑对他来说并不容易，尤其是有这么多雄心勃勃的跑步者在竞争。 The cross­country run was not easy for him, though, especially with so many ambitious runners competing. 5．他张开嘴，开始跟着唱起来，他那微弱的声音每唱一个字就变得更强一分。 He opened his mouth and began to sing along, with his little voice growing stronger with each word. 6．我心里突然有一种强烈的感情，我笑了回去。 With a sudden strong emotional feeling in my heart, I smiled back. 句式6　虚拟语气 [句型公式]　1.“If sb had done..., sb would have done...”或者“Had sb done..., sb would have done...”如果某人过去……，某人就…… 2．“Without/But for...，sb would have done...”要不是……，某人…… [句式解读]　读后续写最常用到的是对过去的虚拟，表示对过去发生的事情委婉地表达后悔、遗憾、感谢等情感。 Without/But for...，sb would have done...“要不是……，某人……”句式相当于If there had not been...，sb would have done...或者Had there not been...，sb would have done...。 [典例展示] ①If we hadn't adopted him，he would have lived a miserable life. 如果我们没有收养他，他就会过上悲惨的生活。 ②My car broke down on the highway and without her help, I would never have made it home in my high heels. 我的车在高速公路上抛锚了，没有她的帮助，我不可能穿着高跟鞋回家。 [句式练透] 1．如果再有一次机会，我就不会用一个人的外表来评判他了。 If I had been given one more chance, I wouldn't have judged a person by his appearance. 2．如果不是因为他在军队里接受的训练，他可能就不会成功了。 ①If it hadn't been for his training in the army, he might not have made it.(if) ②But for/Without his training in the army, he might not have made it.(but for/without) 3．如果没有您的帮助和支持，我就不会赢得英语演讲比赛。 ①But for/Without your help and support, I would not have won the English Speech Contest.(but for/without) ②If it hadn't been for your help and support, I would not have won the English Speech Contest.(if) 4．如果没有他的及时帮助，我肯定会错过我的飞机了。 ①But for/Without his timely help, I would have certainly missed my plane.(but for/without) ②If it hadn't been for his timely help, I would have certainly missed my plane.(if) 句式7　部分倒装句(一) [句型公式]　So＋adj./adv.＋be动词/助动词/情态动词＋主语…that...如此……以至于…… [典例展示] ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)Observing the smile on his face blooming like a flower, so excited was I that I burst into tears uncontrollably. 看到他脸上的微笑像一朵花一样绽放，我非常兴奋，所以我无法控制地哭了起来。 ②So moved was the old man by what the boy had done that words failed to convey his emotions. 老人被男孩所做的一切感动得无法用言语表达他的情感。 [句式练透] 1．(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)人群是如此拥挤，我几乎找不到自己的座位。 So crowded were the people that I hardly found my seat. 2．他兴奋得睡不着觉。 So excited was he that he couldn't go to sleep. 3．考试期间，我很紧张，头脑一片空白。 During the exam, so nervous was I that my mind went blank. 4．那天晚上是如此的难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆中。 So unforgettable was that night that it would stay in my memory forever. 5．我如此震惊，以至于睁大了眼睛，目瞪口呆。 So shocked was I that I was dumbfounded with my eyes wide open. 6．她心事重重，没听清母亲的问题。 So busily engaged was her mind that she failed to hear her mother's question. 句式8　部分倒装句(二) [句型公式]　否定词位于句首＋be动词/情态动词/助动词＋主语＋谓语 [典例展示] ①(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)Not only were the audience and other students impressed by the fact that David eventually made it in finishing the race, but also they admired him very much for his great determination. 不仅观众和其他学生对大卫最终完成比赛印象深刻，而且他们也非常钦佩他的坚定决心。 ②(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)Never had I expected that my acts could make such a difference to him. 我从来没有想过我的行为会对他产生如此大的影响。 [句式练透] 1．她不仅为我们带来了精彩的表演，而且还向我们展示了站出来做志愿者的重要性。 Not only did she present us with a great performance, but also she showed us that it is very important to step up and volunteer. 2．我从来没有意识到我是如此的专注，这个美妙的场景被精心记录了下来。 Never before had I realized how attentive I was and the wonderful scene was elaborately recorded. 3．自从我们上次见面后，我就再也没见过他们，这让我真的很抱歉。 Never had I met them since we met last time, which made me genuinely sorry. 4．直到兔子完全看不见了，我们才停止追赶它。 Not until the rabbit got completely out of sight did we stop chasing after it. 5．直到那时，梅根(Megan)才说出一整天困扰她的东西。 Not until then did Megan pour out what had been disturbing her the whole day. 句式9　部分倒装句(三) [句型公式]　n．/adj./adv.＋as/though＋主语＋谓语，主句或v.＋as/though＋主语＋助动词，主句“尽管……” [典例展示] ①Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry. 尽管我们很害怕，但我们还是决定去找哈利。 ②Surrounded as we were by the enemy, we managed to march forward. 虽然我们被敌人包围着，但我们还是设法前进了。 [句式练透] 1．尽管他是个孩子，但他知道很多物理知识。 Child as/though he was/is, he knew/knows a lot about physics. 2．虽然他很穷，但是很诚实。 Poor as/though he was, he was honest. 3．尽管他读得很快，他未能在两天之内读完这本书。 Fast as he read, he didn't finish the book in two days. 4．虽然我非常崇拜她，但我不能原谅她的错误。 Much though I admired her, I could not excuse her faults. 5．他工作很努力，但总不能让人满意。 Hard as he tried, he never seemed able to do the work satisfactorily. 6．虽然正在下着大雨，我还是要出去散步。 Hard as it is raining, I'm going out for a walk. 句式10　全部倒装句 [句型公式]　1.Here/There/Out/In/Up/Down/Away/Now/Then...＋谓语(表示运动的不及物动词)＋主语 2．介词短语＋谓语动词(不及物动词，如lie, stand, sit, exist, stretch, come或系动词be)＋主语(名词) 3．分词短语＋be＋主语(名词) [典例展示] ①There, before Bobby's eyes, lay twelve red roses, with leaves of green and tiny white flowers all tied together with a big silver tape. 在鲍比面前，放着十二朵红玫瑰，绿叶和白色的小花被银色的大胶带捆在一起。 ②Inside the room sat the stranger, or rather his uncle, with his forehead up, talking happily with his father. 这个陌生人在房间里坐着，或者更确切地说，是他的叔叔，他抬着前额，和他的父亲愉快地交谈着。 [句式练透] 1．车停在房前，我的宝贝女儿从车里走出来，上了台阶。 The car pulled in front of the house, and out of it emerged my precious daughter, making her way up the steps. 2．黑暗中传来一个他以前从未听过的声音。 Out of the darkness came a voice he had never heard before. 3．简的丈夫站在前门，找不到她，他非常焦急。 At the front door stood Jane's husband who suffered great anxiety when she was nowhere to be found. 4．在他僵硬的脸上露出恐惧和仇恨的表情。 On his rigid face there stood an expression of horror and hatred. 5．在她前面是另一条长长的通道，她勉强看见兔子匆匆跳了进去。 In front of her was another long passage and she just managed to catch sight of the rabbit hurrying down it. 句式11　强调句 [句型公式]　It is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who＋其他 [句式解读]　强调句可以强调除谓语之外的其他成分，在读后续写中最常见的是强调主语和状语。 [典例展示] ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)It is my considerate teacher who inspires me to face my fear bravely and positively. 是我体贴的老师激励我勇敢而积极地面对我的恐惧。 ②(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)It was not until my name was announced that I realized I won the first prize. 直到我的名字被公布，我才知道我获得了一等奖。 [句式练透] 1．(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)直到那一刻，我才意识到我非常渴望获得这个奖项来证明自己。 It wasn't until that moment that I realized I was so desperate for the prize to prove myself. 2．(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)是我可爱的老师的鼓励和欣赏改变了我的生活！ It was the encouragement and appreciation from my lovely teacher that changed my life! 3．(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)就在那时，我意识到如果没有他，我就不可能发现自己有这样的潜力。 It was then that I realized that without him I couldn't have found such potential in myself. 4．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)就在那一刻，我看到了大卫的决心。 It was at that moment that I saw David's determination. 5．是你从我小时候就一直照顾着我，把你无私的爱倾注在我身上。 It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child, showering your selfless affection on me. 句式12　形容词(短语)作状语 [句型公式]　形容词(短语), 主语＋谓语…或者主语＋谓语…，形容词(短语) [句式解读]　形容词(短语)作状语可以增强感染力，使描述更生动、形象。形容词(短语)作状语可位于句首、句末或句中。 [典例展示] ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)Then I advanced towards the presentation, full of expectation. 然后，我满怀期待地走向了颁奖典礼。 ②Visibly sweaty and nervous, Paula said that she had bad news to tell him. 保拉显然汗流浃背，也很紧张，她说她有个坏消息要告诉他。 [句式练透] 1．回到家时，我看到母亲坐在餐桌旁，又担心又累。 When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired. 2．乔治和我对我们的车是如何修好的感到惊讶，我们在想该如何感谢他。 Surprised at how our car got repaired, George and I were wondering how we should thank him. 3．他是那样谦虚、平易近人，很快使大家放松下来。 Modest and easy to approach, he soon put everyone completely at ease. 4．母亲悄悄地走出房间，怕惊醒了婴儿。 The mother sneaked out of the room, afraid/fearful of waking the baby up. 5．我一下子屏住了呼吸，不敢确定我儿子会有什么反应。 For a moment I held my breath, not sure how my son would react. 6．她在船上感到很无助，没法四处走动，只能坐在一个地方。 In the boat she felt helpless, unable to move around, sitting in one spot. 句式13　无灵主语句(一) [句型公式]　(a burst/wave/surge/sense/feeling of＋)情感名词＋有灵动词(短语)＋sb表示“某人感到……” 或“一阵/一种……向某人袭来” [句式解读]　 常见名词 happiness/joy/delight/ecstasy(高兴，快乐)，sadness/sorrow(伤心)，anger/rage(生气)，despair/hopelessness(绝望)，excitement(兴奋)，fear/scare/horror/fright(害怕，恐惧)，surprise/astonishment(惊讶，震惊)，regret(后悔)，satisfaction(满意)，confusion/ puzzlement(困惑)，panic(恐慌)，relief(宽慰)，frustration(沮丧)，pride(骄傲)，guilt(内疚)，disappointment(失望)等 常见有灵动词(短语) seize/take hold of(侵袭，突然控制), swallow(吞噬，淹没)，flood over(席卷)，creep over(不知不觉地产生), grip(紧抓)，give way to(被……代替), tear...into pieces(把……撕成碎片)，deprive...of...(剥夺)，sweep over/rush over(袭来，席卷)，choke(使说不出话来), fail(使无能为力), desert/abandon(抛弃)等 [典例展示] ①A wave/burst/sense of panic seized/took hold of/swept over her. 她感到一阵惊慌。 ②Despair/Hopelessness choked her words. 她绝望得说不出话来。 [句式练透] 1．内疚和担忧一阵阵涌上她的心头。(rush over) A surge of guilt and worry rushed over her. 2．我惊讶得说不出话来。(deprive...of) Astonishment deprived me of my power of speech. 3．恐惧使她站在地上一动不动。(root) Fear rooted her to the ground. 4．考试失败让我很失望。(take possession of) Disappointment took possession of me due to the failure of my exam. 5．现在，乐观变成了怀疑。(give way to) By now optimism had given way to doubt. 6．一阵紧张的情绪涌上他的心头。(wash over) A wave of nervousness washed over him. 7．他突然感到不寒而栗。(sweep over) A chill of horror suddenly swept over him. 8．他很激动。(seize) Excitement seized him. 句式14　无灵主语句(二) [句型公式]　表示身体部位/音、容、笑的名词＋有灵动词(短语) [句式解读]　 常见名词 face, laughter, smile, tear, words等。 常见动词 (短语) light up/brighten (照亮)，linger (继续存留)，well up (涌出)，flash (闪烁)，crumple (弄皱)等。 [典例展示] ①Her face brightened when I gave her the present. 我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。 ②Laughter lingered around the room. 笑声萦绕在房间里。 [句式练透] 1．当她见到她分开多年的最好的朋友时，她的脸上洋溢着纯粹的喜悦和幸福。(light up) Her face lit up with sheer delight and happiness when she saw her best friend after years apart. 2．当小女孩醒来时，她母亲破涕为笑。(give way to) As the little girl woke up, her mother's tears gave way to laughter. 3．完成早餐后，双胞胎开心起来。(brighten) Having finished the breakfast, the twins' faces brightened. 4．他的话让我全身不寒而栗。(send sb a quiver) His words sent me a quiver through my body. 5．她满面怒容。(cloud over) Her face clouded over with anger. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$