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第七讲 图表作文&图画作文
文体(一) 图表作文
图表作文通常以表格或图形来呈现,体裁多为说明文、应用文或议论文,学生需根据图片提供的数据和文字进行分析,得出令人信服的结论。常见的命题形式有表格、柱状图、饼状图、曲线图等。图表中的数据信息往往较多,写作时要读懂表格或图形,认真分析图表内各数据或各信息之间的关系,抓住主要特征,归纳主题。具体写作结构为:
1.出彩亮点首段句
①With the approach of Mother’s Day, our class will hold a class meeting with the theme of“Thank mothers”on that day.
②Today, bike-sharing is taking off on the streets of China.
2.吸引眼球中段句
①According to the result of the survey, we can see that the older the students are, the more likely they are to celebrate their mothers’ and classmates’ birthday.
②The reason for this phenomenon is that students gradually learn to express gratitude to people around them.
③In addition, bike-sharing can reduce carbon emissions, which is beneficial to environmental protection.
④However others tend to believe that iPad costs so much money that not everyone can afford it.
3.画龙点睛末段句
①From where I stand, each of us should give mothers a blessing wherever we are.
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②In my opinion, we should make full use of bike-sharing for the sake of the environment and our health.
1.The table shows the changes in the number of... over the period from... to...
该表格描述了在……年到……年间……数量的变化。
2.As is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table,...
如图所示……
3.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...
这些数据资料使我们得出结论……
4.The graph provides some interesting data regarding...
该图为我们提供了有关……的有趣数据。
5.The percentage of... stayed the same between... and...
……至……期间……的比率维持不变。
6.The percentage of... is slightly larger/smaller than that of...
……的比例比……的比例略高(低)。
7.There is not a great deal of difference between... and...
……与……的区别不大。
(2022·全国乙卷改编)学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.学习活动状况描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well.
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Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well. As the chart shows, students adopt different ways to learn English beyond the classroom.
The percent of the students who listen to English songs is as high as 65%.50% of them watch English movies while only 18% read English books. Those who visit English-learning websites account for 12%.
The figures of the chart suggest that there are a variety of ways to learn English beyond the classroom. Students can choose what they like to enrich their English-learning experiences.
Personally, students should do more listening and speaking so that they can develop their communication skills.
文体(二) 图画作文
图画作文一般提供一幅或几幅图画,要求学生捕捉图画所传递的信息或反映的现象,进行发散思维,合理拓展,从而得出结论或提出解决问题的方法或建议。图画作文通常也有一些文字提示,学生要将文字与图画结合在一起得出论点。图画作文需要进行合乎逻辑的推理,具体写作结构为:
1.出彩亮点首段句
①Last week, we went on a journey to the lake with my parents.
②As we can see from the picture, polar bears are forced to leave their habitats due to global warming.
2.吸引眼球中段句
①Low-carbon living is surely a way of great significance.
②We can walk, ride a bike or take public transport and take a shopping bag while shopping.
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③Artists are free to produce various styles and forms, showing the abstract beauty of line.
④Although it seems that the kid does not respect his dad, it is their communication that has gone wrong.
3.画龙点睛末段句
①Yesterday, our class went on a journey to...
②This way, I believe they will gradually have a positive relationship and become the father and son that we all really admire.
③From that day on, Jack and I became friends and we will never forget the day we met.
1.The pictures vividly depict..., by stressing the fact that...
图画通过强调……生动地描绘了……
2.This picture above reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of...
上图揭示了一个很常见的现象……
3.From the portrayal, we can conclude that the painter wants to convey such a message:...
从这幅画中,我们可以得出结论,画家想要传达这样一个信息:……
4.Apparently, the intended meaning of the drawing is that...
显而易见,这幅漫画的含义是……
5.The purpose of the drawing is to show us that utmost importance should be attached to...
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们应该高度重视……
6.To make the most of our lives, we must capitalize on chance, maintain an optimistic attitude, and work hard to achieve our goals.
为了让我们的生活更加充实,我们必须抓住机会,保持乐观积极的态度,努力学习以实现我们的目标。
7.It is high time that we enhanced people’s awareness to...
我们应该提高人们的……意识了。
假定你是红星中学高三学生李华,你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记叙整个过程。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Last week I took part in a farmwork program in the suburbs.
At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the program with the theme“Working is the most beautiful”.And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.
When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip. On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.
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