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第四讲 投稿&发言稿&倡议书
文体(一) 投稿
投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行写作,将自己未发表的作品投寄给报社、杂志社、出版社、网站等媒介,期望被采用得以发表的行为。所投稿件应紧贴主题,内容应新颖、创新、实用和符合词数要求等。具体写作架构多为三段:
1.出彩亮点首段句
①(2022·全国乙卷)Recently,we conducted a survey concerning different ways to learn English beyond the classroom. The results are as follows.
②At present our city is carrying out a campaign, the content of which is that anyone who is riding an electric bike must wear a helmet.
2.吸引眼球中段句
①(2022·全国乙卷) There are roughly 65% of the students preferring to listen to English songs while 50% of the students choose to watch English movies.
②(2022·全国乙卷) In contrast, students who read English books and visit English learning website are much fewer than those mentioned above, only taking up 18% and 12% separately.
③(2022·全国乙卷) Students can choose what they like to enrich their English-learning experiences.
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3.画龙点睛末段句
①(2022·全国乙卷) The figures of the chart suggest that there are a variety of ways to learn English beyond the classroom with the development of modern technology.
②(2022·全国乙卷) As far as I am concerned, students should do more listening and speaking so that they can develop their communication skills.
1.Last Saturday, our school held an activity themed..., aiming to...上周六,我们学校举办了主题为……的活动,旨在……
2.To enrich our lives and deepen our understanding of...,... was held in the school library last week.为了丰富我们的生活,加深我们对……的理解,上周在学校图书馆举行了……
3.The purpose of the... is to...
该……的目的是……
4.Moreover, as is known to all, setting too much time aside just for... is a waste of time.而且,众所周知,把太多的时间专门用于……是浪费时间。
5.My appeal is that all our students should...
我的呼吁是我们所有的学生应该……
6.Through this activity, I was aware that not only did the activity broaden my horizons but it also fueled my enthusiasm for...
通过这次活动,我意识到这次活动不仅开阔了我的视野,而且激发了我对……的热情。
(2022·全国甲卷改编)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.海洋的重要性;
2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.
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Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. The World Ocean Day is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world so it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean.
文体(二) 发言稿
发言稿也可以是演讲稿,参加者为了在会议上或活动上发表自己的意见、看法等事先准备好的文稿。发言稿要观点鲜明、条理清晰、语言简洁明快。具体写作架构为:
1.出彩亮点首段句
①It’s my great honour to have the opportunity to share with you my opinion on how to take online course more effectively.
②On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
③Good morning, everybody! It is a great honour to speak on behalf of the 2024 senior high school graduates.
2.吸引眼球中段句
①As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school.
②Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods.
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③The thing I desire to do most is to express how thankful I am to my teachers and parents.
3.画龙点睛末段句
①I hope all of us can keep a positive attitude and enjoy a healthy life. Thanks for your listening!
②We are supposed to feel joyful on such an unforgettable day and be full of hope for the future. That’s all. Thank you.
1.Good morning, everyone! I feel honoured to share my feelings on behalf of...
大家早上好!我很荣幸代表……分享我的感受。
2.I suggest we should...我建议我们应该……
3.Firstly, set your goals in learning and work towards it.首先,设定你的学习目标并朝着它努力。
4.Secondly, beat the things that slow you down...
其次,打败那些让你慢下来的东西……
5.Instead of aiming too high, set realistic expectations and look for small improvements and successes as you work towards your goals.
不要把目标定得太高,设定一个现实的期望,在你朝着目标努力的过程中寻找一些小的进步和成功。
6.This will make you feel good about your little successes and motivate you to keep up with the good work.
这会让你对自己的小成功感觉良好,并激励你继续努力。
7.Thank you for your listening (to my speech).
谢谢大家的聆听(我的演讲)。
(2021·全国乙卷改编)你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1.分析优势与不足;
2.提出学习建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.题目、首句和尾句已为你写好。
Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone,
It’s a great honour for me to stand here and address my speech titled“Be smart online learners”.
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Thus we will become smart online learners. Thank you for listening!
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Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone,
It’s a great honour for me to stand here and address my speech titled“Be smart online learners”.Actually, we benefit a lot from the rapid development of the Internet. For example, we are taking advantage of various online programs for further study, which allow us to learn knowledge wherever we are at any time, making it easier to earn a degree. However, it can be difficult for some students without self-control and self-discipline. Therefore, I would like to recommend tips to be smart online learners. First, get organized and make sure we have materials on hand to take reliable notes. Besides, making a schedule will contribute to our efficiency.
Thus we will become smart online learners. Thank you for listening!
文体(三) 倡议书
倡议书是为发起某项活动而写的号召性的公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。具体写作架构为:
1.出彩亮点首段句
①Earth Day is coming. To build a beautiful home, we should save our natural resources and not destroy the environment.
②On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am writing to call on everyone to take part in our summer program named“Care for the Aged”.
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③I am writing to call on everyone to fight against wasting food and take an active part in saving food.
2.吸引眼球中段句
①If we can change our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth.
②As a citizen, we are supposed to behave ourselves, obeying laws, rules and regulations in a persistent and consistent manner.
③It’s everyone’s responsibility to protect the environment.
④To meet the challenges of the senior year, it’s high time that we should take action to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.
3.画龙点睛末段句
①Let’s join our hands and take action immediately.
②I am convinced that, with our joint efforts, the phenomenon of wasting food will disappear.
③Let’s take action right now! I’m convinced our efforts will eventually pay off.
1.I’d like to call on all the students to...
我想号召所有的学生……
2.I’m appealing to all of you to... and...
我呼吁大家……并且……
3.At the same time, we should be aware that...
同时,我们应该意识到……
4.We are supposed to choose to...
我们应该选择……
5.Hopefully, you can join in the action and offer help to those in need.
希望你们能加入行动,为那些需要帮助的人提供帮助。
6.Let’s spare no efforts to...
让我们不遗余力地来……
7.Every effort makes a difference. Let’s work together to...
每一次努力都会有所不同。让我们一起努力去……
假定你是学生会主席李华,为了倡导“美丽校园,绿色生活”的环保理念,请你写一则倡议书,内容包括:
1.倡议目的;
2.具体做法;
3.期待参与。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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To make our living environment more beautiful, on behalf of the Students’ Union, I’m writing to call on everyone to lead an eco-friendly life.
To achieve this goal, we should bear/keep the following rules in mind. Firstly, sticking to the habit of walking to school or taking public transportation is a good choice to reduce the release of carbon dioxide. It’s also important to recycle everything recyclable. Most importantly, we’d better launch a publicity campaign to raise people’s awareness of protecting the environment.
Let’s join our hands and take action immediately. Thank you!
The Students’ Union
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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