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三、常规写作文体之4大记叙类 (一)新闻报道 新闻报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据， 对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性、准确性，语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂，不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。 【 布局谋篇 】 【 素材积累 】 1．引人入胜篇首句：新闻报道的导语 ①In order to arouse students' interest in English, our school held an English Drama Competition in our school hall last Sunday afternoon, which turned out to be a great success. 为了激发学生对英语的兴趣，我们学校上周日下午在学校礼堂举行了一个英语话剧大赛，结果非常成功。 ②To help make the nearby community a more harmonious one, our learning group held an activity, whose theme was Community Service, during the summer vacation. 为了使附近的社区更加和谐，我们的学习小组在暑假期间举办了一场以社区服务为主题的活动。 2．光彩夺目中间句：详述事件 ①All the teachers and students in our school participated in a lecture on traffic safety, which was held in our school last week. 我校全体师生都参加了上周在我校举行的交通安全讲座。 ②On arriving at the park, what impressed me most was its fresh air and beautiful scenery. 一到公园，最令我印象深刻的是它新鲜的空气和美丽的景色。 ③However difficult it was, no participants gave up halfway.All the racers held on to the finish line. 无论多么困难，没有参与者半途而废。所有的赛跑运动员都坚持到终点线。 ④Everyone thinks highly of this activity, for it is a good chance to get close to nature. 每个人对该活动的评价都很高，因为这是一个亲近大自然的好机会。 3．完美收官篇尾句：评论或总结 ①Tired as we were, we had a sense of achievement. 尽管我们很累，但是有一种成就感。 ②Therefore, we all think highly of it, and expect more activities like this in the future. 因此，我们都对此寄予厚望，并期待着未来还会有更多这样的活动。 【 即时演练 】 (2024·湖南师大附中调研)假定你是中学生李华，你校最近刚举办了为期2天的年度运动会，请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1．运动会的概况； 2．运动会的亮点； 3．运动会的意义。 注意： 1．写作词数应80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Annual School Sports Meeting: A Memorable Event 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 [参考范文] Annual School Sports Meeting: A Memorable Event Our school recently concluded a thrilling two­day Annual Sports Meeting, held on September 28th and 29th at our school's sports field, marked by multiple exciting activities including students' track and field and teachers' fun games. What caught almost everyone's eye was the teachers' fun games, featuring recreational competitions that aimed to provide the opportunity for teachers to bond their teams and advocate a healthy lifestyle. What a game that offered students and teachers a retreat from their daily studies, granting all of us a chance to relax, have fun and strengthen long­lasting friendships! Our proud efforts to make this game a success are highly appreciated and let's await the festivities of next year. (二)叙事记叙文 叙事短文属于记叙文的写作范畴，文章多以事件为中心，以时间和空间为线索，按事件的发生、发展、结局展开故事。 【 布局谋篇 】 【 素材积累 】 1．引人入胜篇首句：活动时间、地点和目的 ①Our school organised a campus chorus contest on Wednesday afternoon, the theme of which was “Love Our Motherland”． 我们学校在周三下午组织了一场校园合唱比赛，主题是“爱我们的祖国”。 ②In order to let us experience the life in the countryside, our school organized a fruit­picking activity on a farm last weekend. 为了让我们体验乡村生活，我们学校上周末在一个农场组织了一个水果采摘活动。 2．光彩夺目中间句：活动过程 ①As scheduled, the contest took place in the school hall, lasting two hours from 4：00 pm to 6：00 pm. 比赛如期在学校礼堂举行，从下午4点到下午6点持续两个小时。 ②The moment we arrived at the farm, we began with the area of fruit trees and then moved on to the vegetable field. 我们一到农场，就从果树开始，然后又去了菜园。 ③It was applauded by all students and teachers, who donated as many books as they could. 它受到了所有学生和老师的称赞，他们捐赠了尽可能多的书。 3．完美收官篇尾句：个人感受 ①Hopefully, more such activities will be held to help those in need, from which we students will learn the true essence of the harmonious society. 希望能举办更多这样的活动来帮助那些需要帮助的人，从中我们学生将学到和谐社会的真谛。 ②By doing interesting experiments myself, I had lots of fun as well as gaining knowledge. 通过亲自做有趣的实验，我既玩得开心也获得了知识。 【 即时演练 】 (2024·河南省驻马店市高三第一次联考)假定你是李华， 最近你校举办了主题为“Moving Towards Living Independently”的家庭劳动实践活动。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿， 内容包括： 1．活动目的； 2．获取某项生活技能的过程(如烹饪、洗衣等); 3．个人感受。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Moving Towards Living Independently 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 [参考范文] Moving Towards Living Independently To further improve the students' independent sense of life, our school recently held an activity entitled “Moving Towards Living Independently”．Students of all grades were actively involved. Considering cooking is an essential life skill and that I'm obsessed with all kinds of delicious food, I chose cooking as my practice project.I surfed the Internet and watched lots of short videos, which gave me much information about cooking techniques.I also turned to my parents for help.They patiently explained their daily routine to me and removed some of my misconceptions about cooking.And luckily, I made it finally. In the process of cooking, I not only learned the importance of independence, but also experienced the difficulty in becoming independent. (三)人物描写 人物描写属于记叙文的写作范畴，写作时要围绕人物组织材料。要做到主题鲜明，内容清楚，并注意结构的完整性。 【 布局谋篇 】 【 素材积累 】 1．引人入胜篇首句：介绍人物基本情况 ①Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history, Cao Cao is my favorite, who has a gift in strategy in military. 在中国历史上的杰出人物中，我最喜欢曹操，他在军事上很有战略天赋。 ②She is a charming lady of medium height with long and blonde hair. 她是一位有魅力的女士，中等身材，留着长长的金发。 2．光彩夺目中间句：介绍人物性格及事迹 ①Being optimistic and energetic, he often takes an active part in after­class activities. 他很乐观而且精力充沛，经常积极参加课外活动。 ②Whenever people around get into trouble, she is willing to help them, which makes her respected by all our neighbours. 每当周围的人遇到麻烦，她乐意帮助他们，这使她受到所有邻居的尊重。 ③Not only did Einstein devote all his life to scientific research but also he cared for human being's peace and development. 爱因斯坦不仅致力于科学研究，而且非常关心人类的和平和发展。 3．完美收官篇尾句：总结升华 ①He sets so good an example for us students that we all should learn from him. 他为我们学生树立了好榜样，我们都应该向他学习。 ②Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions. 她的精神激励着我和数百万女孩去过独立的生活，鼓励着我们为自己的决定负责。 【 即时演练 】 (2020·全国卷Ⅰ改编)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1．人物简介； 2．尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．短文题目和首句已为你写好。 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 [参考范文] The person I respect There are many respectable people around us.And the person I respect most is my physics teacher.She is so patient with each student and devoted to the cause of education that we all respect her. It's her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her.When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits, she patted me gently on the shoulder and gave me great encouragement.She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person. Having set a great example for us students, she fully deserves my respect. (四)日　记 日记是用来记录一天中所发生的有意义的、值得记录的事件。在日记中，人们会对事件发表议论，阐述一下自己的态度或体会。 【 布局谋篇 】 【 素材积累 】 1．引人入胜篇首句：总体描述 ①Last week，we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture，which turned out to be extremely rewarding. 上周，我们带着来我校的外国学生去体验了地道的茶文化，收获颇多。 ②So pleased was I that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the Spring Festival. 我很高兴我的一位中国笔友邀请我和她一起过春节。 2．光彩夺目中间句：详述过程 ①Some picked up rubbish and threw it into the dustbins, while others distributed the leaflets to raise people's awareness of the damage littering can cause. 一些人捡垃圾，把它扔进垃圾箱，而另一些人分发传单，以提高人们对随手乱丢垃圾造成的危害的意识。 ②In the morning, we went to Zhongshan Park by bus, talking and laughing all the way. 早上，我们乘公共汽车去中山公园，一路上我们有说有笑。 ③The moment we arrived at the Chinese Academy of Sciences，we were warmly greeted by a friendly expert standing at the entrance. 我们一到中科院，一位友好的专家就站在门口，热情地迎接我们。 ④We first went to the library with a large collection of books，where we saw students reading attentively. 我们首先去了藏书丰富的图书馆，在那里我们看到学生们在认真地阅读。 3．完美收官篇尾句：表达感受 ①An exhausting as well as meaningful day has ended, but I still remained excited for quite a long time. 劳累而有意义的一天结束了，但我仍然激动了很长一段时间。 ②Activities not only enable us to contribute to society, but also make us aware of the importance of protecting the natural environment. 活动不仅使我们能为社会做贡献，而且使我们意识到保护自然环境的重要性。 【 即时演练 】 (2024·泰安统考一模)昨天，班委会组织你们到学校劳动实践基地参加春耕、春种实践活动。请为校英文报写一篇英语日记，内容包括： 1．活动的过程； 2．活动的意义与感想。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Saturday April 16 Sunny 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 [参考范文] Saturday April 16 Sunny Yesterday, we held spring ploughing and planting practice in the school's labor practice base. The activity lasted for one day.We were divided into several groups and assigned a task which involved planting trees, weeding, and watering vegetables.At noon, we enjoyed a lunch with the vegetables planted by the farmers.Before the sunset, we returned to the school, tired but happy. Through this activity, not only did we realize the value of labor, but we also learned to respect all laborers. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$