40分写作通关周周赢 专题1 第6讲 读后续写之场景素材(word教参)-【正禾一本通】2025年高考英语高三一轮总复习高效讲义

第六讲　读后续写之场景素材 (一)3类常见的动作描写 第1类　头部动作 1．和眼有关的动作 【词汇积累】 (1)各种“看” ①look 　　　 　 看(指注意或有意识地看) ②see 看(强调看的结果) ③watch 观察(聚精会神地看) ④gaze 凝视；注视 ⑤stare 凝视；盯着看 ⑥glare 怒目而视 ⑦peek 偷看(通过孔隙窥视) ⑧glance 一瞥，看一眼 ⑨peep 窥视，偷看 gaze at 凝视 ⑪stare at 盯住 ⑫glare at 怒目而视 ⑬peep at 偷窥 ⑭glimpse/glance at 瞥一眼 ⑮catch a glimpse of 瞥见 ⑯blink at 朝……眨眼 ⑰look at sb straight in the eye 直视某人的眼睛 ⑱one's eyes fixed on 某人的目光紧盯着…… (2)眼的其他动作 ①exchange a glance 　　　 交换眼色 ②raise/lift one's eyes 抬起眼睛 ③widen one's eyes 瞪大眼睛 ④blink one's eyes 眨眼 ⑤roll one's eyes 翻了个白眼 ⑥one's eyes are wide with horror 　　　　 某人惊恐地瞪大了眼睛 ⑦one's eyes shine/sparkle with excitement 某人眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒 (3)具体描写 ①看＋with/in great surprise/amazement/sorrow/sadness/joy/delight (介词短语修饰) ②看＋excitedly/carefully/happily/sadly (副词修饰) 【典例背诵】 ①He sat up, his eyes fixed on Rose's face. 他坐了起来，眼睛盯着罗丝的脸。 ②With her eyes glued to the phone, she dismissed others' attention. 她目不转睛地盯着电话，无视别人的注意。 ③She laughed, her eyes shining/sparkling excitedly/with excitement. 她笑了，眼睛兴奋地闪闪发光。 【即时演练】　 1．她直视他的眼睛，如实回答了他的问题。 She looked into his eyes and answered his question truthfully. 2．他瞥了一眼听众，深吸了一口气，开始唱歌。 She glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing. 3．然而，他们都站在那里盯着我，一动不动。 And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless. 4．她高兴地唱着歌，用天真的大眼睛凝视着周围的环境。 Singing happily, she gazed at her surroundings with large, innocent eyes. 2．和头有关的动作 【词汇积累】 ①nod one's head 　 　 　 　　 点头 ②hang/drop/lower one's head 低下头 ③shake one's head 摇头 ④scratch one's head 挠头 ⑤raise one's head 抬起头 ⑥rest sb's head on one's shoulder 把头靠在某人的肩上 ⑦buried one's head in 把头埋在……里 ⑧turn one's head 转过头 【典例背诵】 ①Greatly encouraged, Emily nodded her head determinedly and promised to practice hard for the performance. 埃米莉深受鼓舞，她坚定地点了点头，答应要为演出努力练习。 ②When asked，the naughty boy hang his head and was unwilling to tell his mother what he had done in the park yesterday afternoon. 当被问起时，这个淘气的男孩低下了头，不愿意告诉他妈妈他昨天下午在公园做了什么。 【即时演练】　翻译句子 1．他垂下头，泪水落在大腿上。 His head dropped and tears fell on his lap. 2．他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。 He scratched his head, not understanding a word. 3．这位年轻的工程师坐在一块岩石上，双手抱着头。 The young engineer sat down on a rock and rested his head in his hands. 第2类　脚/腿部动作 【词汇积累】 ①wander/stroll 　　　　 漫步闲逛 ②tiptoe 蹑手蹑脚 ③limp 瘸着走 ④flee/escape 逃离 ⑤creep 爬行，蹑手蹑脚地走 ⑥slip into/out of 悄悄溜进/溜出 ⑦dash/rush to 冲向 ⑧chase 追赶；追逐；追捕 ⑨skip 蹦蹦跳跳地走 ⑩make one's way to 前往某处 ⑪stroll/wander aimlessly through the streets 在街上漫无目的地逛 ⑫jump with joy/delight/excitement 高兴地跳了起来 ⑬jump to one's feet 跳起来 ⑭rise to one's feet 站起来 ⑮struggle to one's feet 吃力地站起来 ⑯pace up and down 来回踱步 【典例背诵】 ①(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写)He struggled to run towards the finishing line, with both his legs trembling. 他挣扎着跑向终点线，双腿都在发抖。 ②She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window. 她溜下床，踮起脚尖走向窗户。 【即时演练】　翻译句子 1．他跑过养鸡场，跳过栅栏，冲向他妹妹。 He rushed across the chicken yard, jumped over the fence and dashed toward his sister. 2．当她听到这个惊人的消息时，她突然跳起来。 She jumped to her feet on hearing this amazing news. 3．他在站台上踱来踱去，等火车。 He paced up and down the platform, waiting for the train. 第3类　手部动作 【词汇积累】 ①pound/punch　　　 打，猛击 ②beat 连续击打 ③tap/pat 轻拍 ④seize，grasp，grab，catch/take hold of 抓 ⑤pull/drag 拉 ⑥reach 够 ⑦push 推 ⑧press 按压 ⑨roll 卷 ⑩wipe 擦 ⑪spread one's hand 摊开手 ⑫clap one's hands 拍手 ⑬hold one's hand 握住某人的手 ⑭wave one's hand crazily/madly/wildly 拼命挥手 ⑮stretch one's arms and embrace sb 伸展双臂拥抱某人 ⑯wrap sb in one's arms 抱住某人 ⑰reach out a hand 伸出手 【典例背诵】 ①She tapped/patted him gently on the shoulder. 她轻轻拍了拍他的肩膀。 ②She didn't say a word, but smiled a watery smile and held my hand tightly. 她一言不发，只是淡然一笑，紧紧地握住我的手。 【即时演练】　翻译句子 1．“我恨你！”她尖叫起来，抓起桌上的画，把它撕成两半。 “I hate you！” she screamed, grabbed the painting on the table and tore it in half. 2．他忽然抓住我的手，把我拉到他怀里。 He caught my hand suddenly and pulled me into his arms. (二)2类常见的心理和情绪之正面描写 读后续写弘扬积极向上的主旋律，往往都是正能量满满的文章，因此对于正面情绪描写要多加重视和积累。 第1类　喜悦、快乐、兴奋和激动 【词汇积累】 ①dance/jump for/with joy 雀跃/高兴地跳起来 ②light up 喜形于色 ③brighten sb's heart 使某人心情愉快 ④be wild with joy/delight/happiness 欣喜若狂 ⑤in a good mood 心情好 ⑥in high/cheerful spirits 兴高采烈 ⑦to one's delight/joy 让某人开心的是 ⑧on top of the world 高兴坏了 ⑨feel a mixture of excitement and happiness 感觉既兴奋又开心 can hardly conceal one's excitement 几乎无法掩饰兴奋的心情 ⑪quite flushed with excitement 激动得满脸通红 ⑫to one's excitement/thrill 令某人激动的是 ⑬contain one's excitement 抑制内心的激动 ⑭a ripple/shiver/wave/surge of excitement 一阵兴奋 【典例背诵】 ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)The moment a bright smile worked its way across his face, our glances met briefly. 当他脸上掠过灿烂的笑容时，我们的目光立刻相遇了。 ②(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷) After a split second of pause, David nodded slightly, tears giving way to the usual big toothy smile. 停顿了片刻后，大卫微微点了点头，泪水被惯常地咧嘴笑所取代。 ③The boy stopped short, his heart thumping with excitement and anticipation. 男孩忽然停住了脚步，他的心因兴奋和期待而怦怦直跳。 【即时演练】　翻译句子 1．(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)虽然我认为写作的乐趣比获奖更重要，但激动的泪水仍然充满了我的眼睛。 Although I weighed the enjoyment of writing over winning the prize, tears of excitement still filled my eyes. 2．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)但我们都为他感到骄傲，每个人脸上的笑容照亮了整个世界！ But all of us were proud of him and the smile on everyone's face lit up the whole world! 3．她激动得满脸通红，心里像有只小鹿在欢乐地蹦跳。 Her face is red, excitement in the heart, as a deer jumping with joy. 4．他抑制不住自己的喜悦和激动，扑进了我的怀里。 Unable to contain his joy and excitement, he threw himself into my arms. 第2类　感激、感动、温暖、宽慰和满足 【词汇积累】 ①shed tears of gratitude 流下感激的泪水 ②with a lump in one's throat 哽咽地 ③have deep gratitude towards 对……深怀感激 ④breathe a sigh of relief 轻松地舒口气，松一口气 ⑤sigh/gasp with relief 松了一口气 ⑥to one's relief 使人欣慰的/放心的是 【典例背诵】 ①George was dumbfounded and I could see tears in his eyes as he choked out a shaky thank you. 乔治目瞪口呆，当他哽咽着说了一句颤抖的谢谢时，我可以看到他眼中的泪水。 ②Face lighting up, the homeless man was so grateful, thanked Robby and ate heartily in the sunshine. 流浪汉的脸亮了起来，他非常感激，感谢罗比，然后在阳光下尽情地吃了起来。 ③I finally sat down and cried, a mixture of warmth and relief flooded over me. 我终于坐下来哭了起来，一种温暖和宽慰的感觉涌上心头。 ④Alice stepped into the tall building where she worked and breathed a sigh of relief. 爱丽丝走进她工作的大楼，松了口气。 【即时演练】　翻译句子 1．她松了口气，回家了，心头重担卸了下来。 Relieved, she went home with a weight lifted off her heart. 2．我被深深地感动了，喉咙哽咽，更大声地鼓掌。 Touched deeply and feeling a lump in my throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly. 3．他慢慢地点了点头，露出了感激的微笑。 He nodded slowly and smiled with a look of gratitude. 4．当她接过鲜花时，感激的泪水涌上了她的眼睛。 Tears of gratitude welled up in her eyes as she accepted the flowers. 5．她在寒冷的天气里感到了温暖，相信处处都有善良。 She felt warmth in the cold weather, and believed there was kindness in every corner. (三)3类常见的心理和情绪之负面描写 第1类　难过、伤心和沮丧 【词汇积累】 ①sob/weep with one's face hidden in one's hands 掩面啜泣 ②cry one's heart/eyes out 悲痛欲绝 ③be down/low in spirits 情绪低落 ④in a sorrowful tone/voice 语调悲伤 ⑤be overcome with sorrow 悲伤不已 ⑥to one's sadness/sorrow 让某人难过的是 ⑦with a heavy/sinking/sorrowful/broken heart 怀着沉重/沮丧/难过的心情 ⑧fight back tears 抑制住泪水 ⑨great sorrow clouds sb's eyes 某人满眼忧伤 ⑩make one's heart bleed 使某人悲痛 ⑪a flash of grief comes upon sb 某人感到一阵悲伤 ⑫hang/drop/lower/bend/bow one's head in sadness 伤心地低下头 ⑬tears roll/run/stream/flow down sb's cheeks或tears well up 泪流满面 ⑭burst into laughter/tears, burst out laughing/crying 突然大笑/痛哭 【典例背诵】 ①Tears formed in my eyes as I saw the empty hall and realized that I would miss my plane. 当我看到空荡荡的大厅，意识到我会赶不上飞机时，泪水涌上了我的眼睛。 ②Thinking he would let her sister down, Ali couldn't help sobbing. 阿里想到他会让她妹妹失望，就忍不住抽泣起来。 【即时演练】　翻译句子 1．他停顿了一下，用手捂住脸，难过得说不出话来。 He paused, and covered his face with his hands/buried/hid his face in his hands, too upset to speak. 2．她的心很痛，她感到一阵悲伤，禁不住痛哭起来。 Her heart ached. She felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying/sobbing bitterly. 3．当他听说他朋友出事的消息时，他皱起眉头，面色凝重。(无灵主语句) When he heard the news of his friend's accident, a frown stood on his face and his face clouded over. 第2类　焦虑、担忧和紧张不安 【词汇积累】 ①have/with butterflies in one's stomach/one's stomach is full of butterflies心里发慌 ② hide one's nervousness/anxiety 掩饰紧张/焦虑 ③give sb a worried/concerned look 忧虑地看某人一眼 ④sb's heart is in/flies into one's mouth 心提到嗓子眼儿 ⑤with one's heart in one's mouth 提心吊胆地 ⑥shiver with nerves 紧张得发抖 【典例背诵】 ①Standing in front of the line, Emily felt her throat tight and her palms sweating. 站在队伍的前面，爱米丽感到喉咙发紧，手心冒汗。 ②My heart pounded as Miss O' Keefe put her hand into the box and drew one folded piece of paper out. 奥基夫小姐把手伸进盒子里，抽出一张折好的纸，我的心怦怦直跳。 【即时演练】　翻译句子 1．他满怀焦虑地伸手去拿手机，却发现手机没电了。 Full of anxiety, he reached for his cellphone, only to find it out of power. 2．他很紧张。他的心狂跳，双腿颤抖。 He was tense/nervous. His heart beat wildly and his legs trembled. 3．一想到要发表演讲，我就浑身发抖，双手冒汗。 I trembled and my hands were sweaty at the thought of having to make a speech. 第3类　失望、绝望、羞愧和尴尬 【词汇积累】 ①sink into hopelessness/desperation 陷入绝望 ②be overcome/overwhelmed/seized by disappointment/desperation/despair/hopelessness 非常失望/绝望 ③fall into despair/abandon oneself to despair 陷入绝望 ④to one's great disappointment 令某人非常失望的是 ⑤in despair/desperation/shame 绝望地/羞愧地 ⑥hide/disguise/mask one's disappointment/embarrassment 掩饰失望/尴尬 【典例背诵】 ①Hearing this, he lowered his eyes, obviously disappointed. 听到这话，他垂下眼睛，显然很失望。 ②We stood there hopelessly，wondering what to do next. 我们绝望地站在那里，不知道下一步该怎么办。 ③Feeling as if the whole world was watching me, I was struck dead with embarrassment. 我感觉好像全世界都在看着我，我尴尬得要死。 【即时演练】　翻译句子 1．男孩羞愧地低下头，脸变得通红。 The boy hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame，with the color flooding his cheeks. 2．我一边说着这真是糟糕的一天，一边弯腰把书捡起来，为自己感到羞愧。 Saying what a bad day, I bent down to pick the books up, feeling ashamed of myself. 3．他凝视着周围一片混乱，一种绝望的感觉攫住了他。(无灵主语句) He gazed at the confusion around him and a feeling of despair seized/overwhelmed/swallowed him. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$