40分写作通关周周赢 专题1 第5讲 读后续写之心理和情绪描写提升3策略(word教参)-【正禾一本通】2025年高考英语高三一轮总复习高效讲义

　　　第五讲　读后续写之心理和情绪描写提升3策略 在描写心理和情绪时，不要干巴巴地描述某人的心理和情绪，而是要借助动作、比喻等写作手法，让心理和情绪描写鲜活起来。 一、运用“动作/语言描写十情感词汇” ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)Excitedly, I dashed back to the dorm, put on my best suit, and headed to the ceremony. 我欣喜若狂地冲回宿舍，穿上我最好的西装，准备去参加典礼。 ②I could hardly contain my joy/happiness/delight and danced into the house. 我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。 二、运用“神态描写十情感词汇” ①Seeing my friend overcome with grief, I was so anxious that I was like a cat on hot bricks. 看到朋友悲痛欲绝，我焦急得像热锅上的蚂蚁。 ②Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive with expectation and joy. Meghan激动地尖叫了起来，眼睛里满是期待和兴奋。 三、运用修辞手法或无灵主语 ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)The message reached me like a gentle whisper carried by the wind.I had won one of the top three spots in the writing contest.(比喻) 这消息传到了我的耳朵里，就像一阵风吹来的细语。我在写作比赛中赢得了前三名之一。 ②(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)I was on the winning list, which I doubted for a second with my mouth wide open.Soon a sense of pride seized me.(无灵主语) 我在获奖名单上，我张大嘴巴怀疑了一秒钟。很快，一种自豪感攫住了我。 【即时演练】　用以上方法翻译句子 1．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)沮丧像一团沉重的乌云笼罩着他，泪水在他的眼睛里涌起。 Depression hung over him like a heavy dark cloud and tears welled up in his eyes. 2．(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)冲过终点线，他一如既往的灿烂笑容就像那个阳光明媚的日子一样。 Crossing the finishing line, his usual big smile was there as that sunny day. 3．儿子感到羞愧，跪在父亲面前。 Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father. 4．当艾米丽走上舞台时，她的眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 Emily's eyes sparkled with excitement as she stepped on to the stage. 5．我垂着头低声说：“对不起，爸爸，我辜负了您的期望。” Head hanging, I murmured, “sorry, Dad, I fail your expectations.” 6．弗雷迪听到这个主意很高兴，兴奋地跑回了自己的房间。 Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house. 7．我开始如释重负地哭了起来，伸出双臂紧紧地抱住他。 I began to cry in relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$