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Unit 1 Back to school
单元话题满分范文必背
1.(23-24高一上·江苏南京·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jenny询问你进入高中后的学习和生活情况。请用英语给他回一封信,主要内容包括:
1. 学校印象;2. 校园活动;3. 学习情况。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jenny,
I’ve been meaning to update you on my life in high school. The school, with its modern facilities and a faculty that is both knowledgeable and approachable, has left a lasting impression on me.
The campus, which is always bustling with activity, offers a variety of clubs and societies that cater to diverse interests. I have decided to join the photography club to learn to capture moments that speak volumes, and the science club where I can delve deeper into the mysteries of the universe.
Academically, the workload is heavier than before, but I am coping well. The subjects, particularly mathematics and literature, require a deeper level of understanding. Luckily, my teachers are always ready to assist and my classmates are supportive, making the learning process enjoyable and enriching.
I am eager to hear about your experiences as well. Write soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给英国笔友Jenny回一封信,告知她自己进入高中后对学校的印象、校园活动和学习情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
各种各样的:a variety of→various, a wide range of
捕捉:capture→catch, seize
钻研:delve into→go into, probe into
愿意做:be ready to do→be willing to do, be glad to do
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Luckily, my teachers are always ready to assist and my classmates are supportive, making the learning process enjoyable and enriching.
拓展句:It is lucky that my teachers are always ready to assist and my classmates are supportive, making the learning process enjoyable and enriching.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The school, with its modern facilities and a faculty that is both knowledgeable and approachable, has left a lasting impression on me. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The campus, which is always bustling with activity, offers a variety of clubs and societies that cater to diverse interests. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句、that引导限制性定语从句)
2.(23-24高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)假设你是中外合作学校的学生李华,近期发现学校餐厅存在着一些浪费现象,请你给校长写一封信反映一下情况,要点如下:
1.剩饭菜(leftover)多;
2.对饭菜的处理;
3.呼吁及建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Headmaster,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you that the waste in our school dining hall is very serious.
If you go to the dining hall, you will find the leftovers lying everywhere and some of them are thrown into the dustbins. Faced with these phenomena, I feel worried. Although our country is becoming richer and richer now, we still need to save everything because saving is one of the virtues of the Chinese nation.
Therefore, we should ban this behavior and take measures to ask all the students to promote saving and fight against waste.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校长写一封信,反映学校餐厅存在的一些浪费现象,提出呼吁以及建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
担忧的:worried→concerned
应该:should→be supposed to
禁止:ban→forbid
促进、提倡:promote→advocate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Faced with these phenomena, I feel worried.
拓展句:When I am faced with these phenomena, I feel worried.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If you go to the dining hall, you will find the leftovers lying everywhere and some of them are thrown into the dustbins. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】Although our country is becoming richer and richer now, we still need to save everything because saving is one of the virtues of the Chinese nation. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句,because引导的原因状语从句)
3.(23-24高一上·江苏南京·阶段练习)假如你是李华,是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Jack的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰:进入高中后经常感到压力大,晚上睡不好,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容包括:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2提出建议并说明理由。(至少两条建议)
注意
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having difficulty falling asleep. What’s worse, this kind of symptom has affected your normal study and life after the mid-term exam this semester.
The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. Here are three useful tips: First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your stress out without hurting yourself. Second, go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to have good sleep. And third, remain optimistic about your future.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。作为学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑,你收到一封署名为Jack的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰:进入高中后经常感到压力大,晚上睡不好,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。要求考生用英文给该同学写一封建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
更糟糕的是:what’s worse→worse still
影响:affect→influence/impact
担心:worry→concern
建议:tip→suggestion/advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This is a good way of letting your stress out without hurting yourself.
拓展句:This is a good way of letting your stress out, which will not hurt yourself.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to know that you’re having difficulty falling asleep.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. (运用了that引导表语从句,when引导的限制性定语从句)
4.(23-24高一上·江苏南京·期末)假如你叫李明,刚进入29中高中,你发现很多同学对未来还比较迷茫,请你给29中高一的学生写一封建议信,建议他们为了三年后进入理想大学,尽早设定奋斗目标。
内容要点:1.设定目标的重要性:2.设定目标的建议(不少于两点):3.期盼。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear classmates,
After entering No.29 High School,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear classmates,
After entering No.29 High School, I find large numbers of students puzzled about their future. If you are eager to solve the problem, please set your own goals.
Setting goals is of great significance in many ways. Not only does setting goals offer you a focus, enabling you to decide what to achieve, but also help you make plans in advance, manage your time well and become more confident.
But how can you set practical goals? First of all, based on your ability, set goals that can be achieved. Secondly, break big goals down into small ones, which are easier to reach. Most importantly, after setting a goal, stick to it and work hard towards it with a positive mind.
By following the tips above, I do believe you won’t be confused any more and will succeed in time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你叫李明,刚进入29中高中,你发现很多同学对未来还比较迷茫,要求考生给29中高一的学生写一封建议信,建议他们为了三年后进入理想大学,尽早设定奋斗目标。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感到迷茫的:puzzled about→ confused about
提前:in advance →ahead of time
首先:First of all→ Firstly
建议:tips→ suggestions
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Most importantly, after setting a goal, stick to it and work hard towards it with a positive mind.
拓展句:Most importantly, after we set a goal, stick to it and work hard towards it with a positive mind.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only does setting goals offer you a focus, enabling you to decide what to achieve, but also help you make plans in advance, manage your time well and become more confident.(运用了not only…but also…的固定句型和现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Secondly, break big goals down into small ones, which are easier to reach.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.(23-24高一上·江苏·期末)假定你是高一学生李华,你的美国笔友Mike来信说进入高中后,学习压力大,没有时间运动,渐渐不喜欢运动,请你写一封信鼓励他参加运动,要点如下:
1. 运动的意义;
2. 推荐一项运动项目。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I was overwhelmed with worry and concerned when I heard your present situation. It is a wonderful thing to have regular exercise in our daily schedule. Not only does it relax our body and soothe our emotions, but also doing exercise stretches our muscles to better physical conditions. Besides, it can help make friends who have the common interest.
Playing table tennis is a good way to relieve your stress. You can do it after class with your classmate. It can build up your body, keep you healthy and train your brain. What’ more, it can help you learn to cooperate with others.
Hopefully my advice will be of some help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Mike写信,鼓励他参加体育运动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提高:better→improve
此外:besides→in addition
减轻:relieve→reduce
增强体质:build up one’s body→improve one’s fitness
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Playing table tennis is a good way to relieve your stress.
拓展句:Playing table tennis is a good way that can relieve your stress.
【点睛】【高分句式1】I was overwhelmed with worry and concerned when I heard your present situation. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句式2】Not only does it relax our body and soothe our emotions, but also doing exercise stretches our muscles to better physical conditions. (运用了not only...but also...连接两个句子,第一个句子用部分倒装)
6.(23-24高一上·湖北十堰·期中)假定你是李华,你的初中同学Monkey来信告诉你升入高中后他很不习惯,时常感到孤单,希望你能给他一些建议。请你用英语给他回信,内容包括:
1.对他的遭遇表示理解;2.具体建议:向老师和家长求助;对学校生活做合理的安排(arrangement);结交新朋友等等;3.期盼与祝福。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Monkey,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Monkey,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble adapting to the senior high school life, which is normal among us freshmen and I actually understand your feelings. Perhaps the following suggestions are of some benefit to you.
To start with, I strongly recommend that you should ask your teachers or parents for help if possible, who can help you with your problem. Moreover, I feel it is significant to make proper arrangements for your school life so that you can keep a balance between schoolwork and exercises. Last but not least, making some new friends can make you confident and feel less lonely.
I do hope you will find the advice useful and adapt yourself to the new school life soon. Looking forward to your good news and early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就初中同学Monkey升入高中所面临的问题给他回信。内容包括:对他的遭遇表示理解、具体建议和期盼与祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困难: trouble→difficulty
建议: suggestion→advice
帮助:help→ assistance
而且:moreover→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Last but not least, making some new friends can make you confident and feel less lonely.
拓展句: Last but not least, it is advisable to make some new friends, which can make you confident and feel less lonely.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am sorry to hear that you have trouble adapting to the senior high school life, which is normal among us freshmen and I actually understand your feelings. (运用that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Moreover, I feel it is significant to make proper arrangements for your school life so that you can keep a balance between schoolwork and exercises. (运用了省略that的宾语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句)
7.(23-24高一上·甘肃兰州·期中)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Paul 想参加绘画社团,而他父母希望他选择学习类的社团,为此他很苦恼,请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:1.表示理解;2.提出建议(至少两条)。
注意:1. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Paul,
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Yours,
LiHua
【答案】Dear Paul,
I understand your dilemma regarding joining the art club while your parents prefer you to choose an academic club. Here are a couple of suggestions to help you reach a compromise.
Firstly, emphasize the educational benefits of art. Highlight how it enhances creativity and critical thinking. Secondly, propose a time management plan to balance study and art.
Remember, communication is key. Talk openly with your parents about your passion for art and how it can positively impact your overall growth.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国笔友Paul想参加绘画社团,而他父母希望他选择学习类的社团,为此他很苦恼,要求考生按照要求给他写一封回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
理解:understand→ comprehend
关于:regarding→ concerning
建议:suggestion→ proposal
达到:reach→ achieve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, emphasize the educational benefits of art.
拓展句:Firstly, emphasize the educational benefits of art, which is the priority.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, propose a time management plan to balance study and art.(运用了不定式作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Highlight how it enhances creativity and critical thinking.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
8.(23-24高一上·广东东莞·期中)假如你是李华,最近收到了你的朋友Jane的来信。她在信中说,她刚进入高中,不能适应新的环境,因而情绪低落。请你给她写一封回信,回信内容应包括如下要点:
1.向Jane表示问候和安慰;
2.针对她的问题提出建议;
3.希望她高中生活愉快。
注意:词数80左右,可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Jane,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jane,
I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering high school. I’d like to give you some suggestions about it.
In fact, your classmates are also new students and facing the same problem, so you needn’t worry too much about it. You can help your classmates when they are in trouble. Then, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some after class activities together, which will help you understand each other sooner and better. Finally, often communicating with your teachers and parents is of great benefit.
I believe you will have a happy school life there.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给朋友Jane写一封关于如何适应新的高中生活的信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:suggestion→tip
实际上:in fact→as a matter of fact
面对:face→be faced with
帮助某人:help sb→do sb a favor
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Finally, often communicating with your teachers and parents is of great benefit.
拓展句:Finally, it is of great benefit if you often communicate with your teachers and parents.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering high school.(由that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Then, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some after class activities together, which will help you understand each other sooner and better.(由which引导的非限制性定语从句)
9.(23-24高一上·江西抚州·期末)假定你是李华,你校英文报正在进行题为“How to Face Challenges”的征文比赛,请你写一篇短文参赛。内容包括:
1. 挑战带来的好处;
2. 战胜挑战的方法(走出舒适区、保持积极的心态等);
3. 呼吁勇敢面对挑战。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Face Challenges
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【答案】范文
How to Face Challenges
There is no doubt that we can’t avoid challenges in our daily life. In fact, challenges can benefit us a lot if we deal with them properly.
There are many ways to help us overcome challenges. Firstly, if we want to face challenges bravely and find new opportunities, we have to step out of our comfort zone. After all, we never know what we can do until we try. Only by challenging ourselves frequently can we achieve personal growth and development constantly. Secondly, whatever challenges we are faced with, we should always keep a positive attitude to our life.
Let’s face challenges bravely and work hard for a better life!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“How to Face Challenges”为题,给校英文报写一篇短文投稿参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
事实上:In fact→As a matter of fact
妥善地:properly→correctly
克服:overcome→conquer
不断地:constantly→continuously
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Firstly, if we want to face challenges bravely and find new opportunities, we have to step out of our comfort zone.
同义句:Initially, if we would like to confront challenges courageously and uncover new possibilities, we need to push ourselves beyond our comfort zone.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There is no doubt that we can’t avoid challenges in our daily life. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】Only by challenging ourselves frequently can we achieve personal growth and development constantly. (运用了Only引导的部分的倒装)
10.(23-24高一上·山西吕梁·期末)假定你是高一学生李华,你校英文报正在举办以“My Senior Life”为主题的征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 简要描述;
2. 收获与感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】范文
My Senior Life
How time flies! One semester has passed since I came to Senior High. With my teachers and classmates’ help, I have gradually adapted myself to life in senior high and made great progress in every aspect.
Every day I am occupied with interesting classes. During my spare time, I take part in various activities, including playing football and dancing, which makes my school life rich and cheerful. I have also made friends with many classmates. Whenever I meet difficulties, they are ready to give me a hand.
Well begun, half done! I’m sure my senior life will be amazing.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“My Senior Life”为题目写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
取得进步:make progress→make advances
参加:take part in→participate in
各种各样的:various→a variety of
遇到:meet→encounter
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:With my teachers and classmates’ help, I have gradually adapted myself to life in senior high and made great progress in every aspect.
拓展句:With my teachers and classmates’ help, not only have I gradually adapted myself to life in senior high, but also I made great progress in every aspect.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] During my spare time, I take part in various activities, including playing football and dancing, which makes my school life rich and cheerful. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Whenever I meet difficulties, they are ready to give me a hand. (运用了whenever引导让步状语从句)
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