内容正文:
Unit 3 Family life
单元话题满分范文必背
1.近期,关于家庭父母与孩子间冲突的新闻频现媒体。针对这一现象,某英文报社就“如何处理父母与孩子之间的矛盾”发起了一个专题征文活动。假设你是李华,请根据下表中的内容提示,结合你自己的观点,用英语写一篇小短文,发表在学校“英语角”上。
原因
解决办法
1. 父母与孩子之间缺少交流与沟通;
2. 父母对孩子期待过高,过分严格;
3. 父母的一些坏习惯严重影响了孩子;
4. ……
1. 加强交流与沟通,消除误解;
2. 建立友好、亲密的亲子关系;
3. 树立榜样,培养良好习惯;
4. ……
写作要求:
1. 包含所有提示内容,并可做适当发挥。
2. 条理清楚,语句通顺,语法正确,意思连贯,书写规范。
3. 字数:80字左右,短文的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:misunderstanding n. 误解 develop v. 培养 badly influence 严重影响
be lack of 缺少 build up建立 set good examples 树立榜样 expect too much期待过高
Recently, news about the conflicts between parents and children frequently appear on the media. Why are the relationship between parents and children becoming so serious?
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【答案】
例文
Recently, news about the conflicts between parents and children frequently appear on the media. Why are the relationship between parents and children becoming so serious? It’s my pleasure to share my opinions with you.
For one thing, they are lack of communication, so it’s of great importance for parents to create more chances to talk with their children so that they can understand each other better. For another, because parents are always strict with their children and expect too much from them, it will cause misunderstanding between them.Therefore, it’s necessary for parents to build up friendly and close relationship with their kids before expressing their expectations. Besides, parents’ bad habits will influence their children badly. Thus, setting good examples for children is helpful to gradually develop their good habits. Last but not least, many parents are so busy at work that they don’t have time to spend with their children. So it’s vital for parents to spare more time for their children to build up close relationship.
In short, to solve the problems, love and communication are of great significance.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中省略处需要补充相关内容,注意行文逻辑要通顺,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。表达出“父母与孩子之间矛盾的现状”以及引出“如何处理父母与孩子之间的矛盾”这个话题。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从信息提示中“原因和解决办法等”几个重点方面提出你的建议,注意行为逻辑要通顺,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
第三步,书写结语。再次表达“爱和交流很重要”。
[亮点词汇]
①badly influence 严重影响
②build up建立
③set good examples树立榜样
[高分句型]
①It’s my pleasure to share my opinions with you.(it作形式主语)
②To solve the problems, love and communication are of great significance.(不定式作目的状语)
③Because parents are always strict with their children and expect too much from them, it will cause misunderstanding between them.(because引导原因状语从句)
2.现在,很多中学生在家不做家务,针对此现象,你们学校就“中学生是否应该做家务”对部分家长和老师进行了调查,如表是调查的结果。请你根据以下内容写一篇短文并阐述你的观点和理由。
内容如下:
观点
理由
部分家长的观点:不必做家务
(1)只要学习好,不做家务也没关系;
(2)年纪小,不会做家务。
老师的观点:应该做家务
(1)培养独立生活能力;
(2)更好地了解父母。
你的观点和理由……
注意:
(1)词数80词左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数;
(2)内容必须包括上表中的要点,可适当发挥;
(3)文中不得出现真实的地点、校名和人名等信息。
Nowadays, many middle school students hardly do any housework. Some parents and teachers have different opinions about it.
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【答案】例文:
Nowadays, many middle school students hardly do any housework. Some parents and teachers have different opinions about it.
Some parents think their children are too young to do housework. Besides, they are too busy with their studies. So what parents could do is to spare their children more time for their lessons. Whether they can do housework or not makes no difference only if they can get good scores in their exams.
However, teachers don’t think so. In their opinion, middle school students should share some housework with their parents, because doing housework can not only develop their love for labor, help them gain the ability to live independently but also help them to understand their parents better.
In my opinion, we should share some housework with our parents. It’s our responsibility.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中部分家长和老师以及自己针对“中学生在家是否应该做家务”发表的观点和理由的介绍。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍部分家长和老师针对“中学生在家是否应该做家务”有不同的观点。
第二步,具体阐述部分家长和老师针对“中学生在家是否应该做家务”发表的不同观点和理由。
第三步,介绍自己针对“中学生在家是否应该做家务”发表的观点和理由。
[亮点词汇]
①spare their children more time for their lessons腾出更多的时间给孩子上课
②makes no difference没什么区别
③share some housework with their parents与父母分担一些家务
④ gain the ability to live independently获得独立生活的能力
[高分句型]
①Some parents think their children are too young to do housework.(think后面跟宾语从句以及too…to…结构)
②In their opinion, middle school students should share some housework with their parents, because doing housework can not only develop their love for labor, help them gain the ability to live independently but also help them to understand their parents better.(because引导原因状语从句和not only…but also…句型)
③In my opinion, we should share some housework with our parents.(should+动词原形用于提建议)
3.Betty在生活中遇到了问题,父母都忙于工作,没有时间陪她。Betty认为父母根本不爱她。她很伤心,所以她给某青少年杂志的专栏Linda’s Advice Column写信,向Linda寻求帮助。假如你是Linda,请你根据以下内容提示,给她写一封回信,提出一些建议。
1. 试着理解父母:并非不爱你,只是忙着挣钱养家。
2. 帮着做些家务活,能体验共处的乐趣,关系更密切。
3. 遇到困难多和父母聊聊,学会跟父母分享你的感受。
4. 其他建议(至少两点)。
要求:
1. 词数:80左右(信件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
2. 适当发挥,内容充实,结构完整。
Dear Betty,
I’m glad to receive your letter. In fact, you’re facing a common problem, and there are some things you can do to solve it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Linda
【答案】例文:
Dear Betty,
I’m glad to receive your letter. In fact, you’re facing a common problem, and there are some things you can do to solve it.
To begin with, try to understand your parents. Instead of not loving you, they’re just busy earning money to support the family. What’s more, helping with the housework not only can bring you lots of fun for being together but also makes your relationship even closer. In addition, you’d better talk to your parents and share your feelings with them when you get into trouble. Most importantly, you have to keep in mind that your parents will always love you. Last but not least, you must learn to be independent enough not to rely on your parents to do everything for you.
Hope my advice will help you out and make you feel better.
Best wishes,
Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:明确主题,围绕主题给出合理的解决问题的建议,不要遗漏要点内容,并且在列举建议时注意衔接词语的使用,使前后过渡自然,行文流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,提到上封邮件所了解到的问题,进而引出话题和写作意图,即提出应该如何做。
第二步:具体陈述解决问题的建议。根据要点内容从不同的角度或方面提出具体的做法,并且补充自己的建议。
第三步:进行总结,表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①to begin with首先
②get into trouble陷入麻烦
③rely on依靠
[亮点句型]
①What’s more, helping with the housework not only can bring you lots of fun for being together but also makes your relationship even closer.(动名词作主语及not only...but also的应用)
②Most importantly, you have to keep in mind that your parents will always love you.(that引导的宾语从句)
4.假如你是李华,常因手机使用问题和父母持有不同的观点而感到烦恼。请你向心理老师Lily写一封信,讲述此事,并希望得到她的帮助。
要点:
1.写信目的
2.你和父母的不同观点(各2个观点,请补充)
你的观点
父母的观点
玩手机游戏可以放松
玩手机浪费时间
——
……
3.父母的要求和你的困扰
Dear Teacher Lily,
I read your advice page every week. It’s very useful. Now I have a problem with my parents.
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Thanks for reading my email. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【答案】例文
Dear Teacher Lily,
I read your advice page every week. It’s very useful. Now I have a problem with my parents. I hope you can help me.
My parents and I have afferent opinions about using mobile phones. I think playing phone games can help me relax. I can also use my phones to keep in touch with my friends. We can share our feelings and learn from each other. However, my parents think it is a waste of time to play with the mobile phones. What’s more, using phones for a long time is harmful to the eyesight.
Now, my parents don’t allow me to use mobile phones. They believe it is bad for my study. But no one can live without mobile phones, right? What can I do?
Thanks for reading my email. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,点名自己面临的问题;
第二步,讲述自己和父母之前存在哪些问题;
第三步,期待收到对方的回信。
[亮点词汇]
①keep in touch with与……保持联系
②each other彼此,互相
③a waste of time浪费时间
④for a long time很久
[高分句型]
①I think playing phone games can help me relax.(动名词作主语)
②Now, my parents don’t allow me to use mobile phones. (动词不定式作宾补)
5.最近,初三学生 Tom 写信给学校的心理咨询老师,说他和父母关系相处得不够融洽,觉得父母不理解自己而产生消极情绪,这些在一定程度上对健康和学习都产生了影响。假如你是学校的心理咨询老师 Anna,请根据以下提示,给他提些建议。
1. 把和父母意见不一致的内容列个清单,寻找最佳解决办法。
2. 帮做家务,让父母开心。
3. 彼此倾听交流,不要争吵。
4. 请你补充……
注意:
1. 词数:80 左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to learn that you can’t get on well with your parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Anna
【答案】例文:
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to learn that you can’t get on well with your parents. I suggest you make a list of the contents that are inconsistent with your parents’ opinions and find the best solution.
You should try your best to help your parents do housework and make them happy. You should also listen to each other and not quarrel. If you think what your parents said is wrong, please listen carefully to their ideas and then express your ideas.
Everything your parents do is for you, so don’t make them sad.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Anna
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明要就亲子关系提出建议;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了建议内容,注意不要遗漏要点;
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①make a list of列清单
②solution解决方案
③quarrel吵架
[高分句型]
①I suggest you make a list of the contents that are inconsistent with your parents’ opinions and find the best solution. (宾语从句;定语从句)
②If you think what your parents said is wrong, please listen carefully to their ideas and then express your ideas. (if引导的条件状语从句)
6.步入初三,学生与家长们都倍感压力,在学习与生活方面都容易发生争吵。假设你是李华,你的好朋友Jack就有这方面的烦恼,他给你写信说他跟父母关系不好,并向你寻求帮助。请你根据以下要点给Jack回信,给他一些关于如何与父母沟通的建议。
一、分析可能出现问题的诱因
1.彼此都很忙碌,没有沟通
2.父母制定很多规矩
3.请自行发挥一点
二、提出与各诱因相对应的解决措施
1.在父母方便的时候和他们谈谈
2.请自行发挥至少一点
要求:100 词左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数内,可适当增加细节。
Dear Jack,
Don’t worry! It is common for teenagers to have trouble getting on well with their parents.
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【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
Don’t worry! It is common for teenagers to have trouble getting on well with their parents. The reason for these problems may be that you are both busy and not communicating with each other. It may also be because parents set many rules. Finally, it may be a generation gap caused by age issues.
I suggest you first talk to your parents at their convenience. Secondly, if the rules set by your parents are unreasonable, you should also share your thoughts. Finally, everything has two sides, and it is correct for everyone to have different opinions. As long as it is right, we should accept it seriously.
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容给Jack回信,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,分析可能出现问题的诱因;
第二步,提出与各诱因相对应的解决措施;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with each other相互交流
②a generation gap代沟
③talk to与……交谈
④be helpful to对……有帮助
[高分句型]
①Secondly, if the rules set by your parents are unreasonable, you should also share your thoughts.(条件状语从句)
②I hope my suggestions are helpful to you.(宾语从句)
7.父母是我们最亲的人,但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。你们学校将举办英语征文展示活动,请你根据所给思维导图的提示,以“How to Communicate with Our Parents”为题用英语写一篇短文, 谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。
要求:
1. 词数不少于80 (标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4.条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. However, sometimes we may encounter difficulties when communicating with them. Here are some tips and approaches on how to communicate effectively with our parents.
My parents and I always have different opinions from our daily routines to our future plans. By identifying these areas, we can be more aware of the potential conflicts and find ways to address them. Firstly, it’s important not to get too angry or upset when our opinions differ from our parents’. We should try to stay calm and express our thoughts in a respectful manner. Moreover, we should make an effort to engage in more conversations with our parents. By initiating conversations, we can not only express ourselves but also show that we value their opinions. Last but not least, we need to learn to truly listen to our parents. By actively listening to their thoughts and concerns, we can better understand their point of view and find common ground.
In conclusion, communicating with our parents can sometimes be challenging, but by following these tips, we can improve the quality of our conversations and strengthen our relationships with them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态: 时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示: 写作要点已给出,考生应注意避免“信息遗漏”,根据思维导图写出如何和父母交流。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。认真阅读文章的首句,引出下文;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从和父母之间意见不合的事情以及相应解决方法展开写作;
第三步,书写结语。表达期待和父母能有更好的沟通。
[亮点词汇]
①be aware of 意识到
②Last but not least最后也是最重要的
③In conclusion最后
[高分句型]
①Firstly, it’s important not to get too angry or upset when our opinions differ from our parents’. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②By initiating conversations, we can not only express ourselves but also show that we value their opinions. (not only...but also...句式)
8.随着年龄的增长,不少青少年发现越来越难与父母沟通和交流,各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张。请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你和父母的相处情况,不计入总词数。
要点提示:
(1)你与父母相处存在的2个问题;
(2)提出你解决问题的办法;
(3)你的想法。
要求:
(1)文中必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯;
(2)条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于80字;
(3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
In daily life, I sometimes have problems with my parents.
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【答案】例文
In daily life, I sometimes have problems with my parents. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my marks and give me too much pressure. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Because I know they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to get on well with parents, I think we should study hard and try to talk with them more. Here are my suggestions. First, we and our parents should spend time with each other. Second, try to talk to our parents politely, or they will not feel like talking to us. Third, try to think about our parents more, therefore we will find that we can understand them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥、突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己与父母存在的问题;
第二步,介绍该如何处理与父母之间的问题。
[亮点词汇]
① allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
② pay attention to 注意
③ too much 太多
④ try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
⑤ get on well with sb. 与某人相处融洽
[高分句型]
① I think my parents don’t quite understand me.(宾语从句)
② Second, try to talk to our parents politely, or they will not feel like talking to us.(祈使句+or+陈述句)
9.为了帮助同学们更好地减轻学习压力、释放心理负担,我们学校把本月确定为“心情放飞月”。假如你是学校的心理老师Miss Fang,收到了一个名字叫做Julia的同学的来信,信中述说她父母亲经常不理解她,所以她写信希望得到你的帮助。请你根据以下内容提示给Julia回复一封信。可以适当地拓展,字数80词左右,不超过120词。
1.Julia的问题和给她写信的目的;
2.你的建议:
a.列举与父母亲不能达成一致的事情的清单并找到可接受的答案
b.告诉父母你的真实想法和原因
c.多倾听父母亲,了解他们的建议和想法
d.……(自己补充)
3.你的希望和祝愿
参考词汇:acceptable可接受的 result结果 reason原因 satisfactory满意 disagree不赞同 require要求
Dear Julia,
I’m very glad to receive your letter and thank you for trusting me. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes for you.
Yours,
Miss Fang
【答案】例文
Dear Julia,
I’m very glad to receive your letter and thank you for trusting me. From your letter, I’m sorry to know that you have the problem with your parents and you think they don’t always understand you. Here are my suggestions for you to help solve your problem.
First of all, you can make a list of the things that you and your parents disagree about most and try to find an acceptable answer to both you and your parents. Besides, you should tell your parents what you are truly thinking about and the reasons for it so that they can understand you easily. What’s more, you are supposed to listen more to your parents so that you can know about what are their thoughts and opinions. Last but not least, you’d better learn to understand another person’s way of looking at things.
I hope my suggestions above can help you to deal with your problem effectively. And I also expect you to have a good relationship with your parents.
Best wishes for you.
Yours,
Miss Fang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为信件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,需适当补充细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍Julia的问题,并表明写作目的;
第二步,根据要点给出帮助Julia的建议,注意需要补充一点建议;
第三步,表达你的希望和祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②disagree about对……意见不一
③what’s more而且
④be supposed to do应该做
⑤last but not least最后但同样重要的
⑥deal with处理
[高分句型]
①you can make a list of the things that you and your parents disagree about most…(that引导的定语从句)
②you should tell your parents what you are truly thinking about and the reasons for it so that they can understand you easily.(what引导的宾语从句;so that引导的目的状语从句)
10.假如你是李华,你升上初三以来遇到了一些问题不知道如何解决,想给电台主持人Betty写封邮件寻求帮助,请她给你一些建议。
你的问题
你的感受
1.缺少与父母沟通,甚至有时会吵架
……
2.喜欢打篮球,但是作业增多
3.学习压力很大,晚上经常睡不着
要求:1. 文中不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息;否则不予评分。
2. 词数80个左右,文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数内。
Dear Betty,
I’m very glad to write to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Betty,
I’m very glad to write to you. I have had some problems since I was in the ninth grade. I seldom communicate with my parents. It seems that they never want to understand me. So we even have an argument sometimes. I feel nervous and unhappy. I am a boy who likes playing basketball very much, but my homework is getting more and more. I don’t have time to play and relax any longer. Now I have a lot of pressure from my schoolwork so that I can’t often fall asleep at night. I am really tired and stressed out.
What should I do? Could you please give me some advice? Thanks a lot.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“感受”一项,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,提出自己遇到了问题;
第二步,具体阐述遇到了哪些问题;
第三步,书写结语,请求对方给自己一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with sb.和某人交流
②have an argument争吵
③be stressed out压力过大的
④not...any longer不再
[高分句型]
①I am a boy who likes playing basketball very much (who引导定语从句)
②Now I have a lot of pressure from my schoolwork so that I can’t often fall asleep at night. (so that引导结果状语从句)
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