Unit 3 Food 单元话题（食物类）写作满分范文15篇-2024-2025学年六年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（牛津上海版2024）

Unit 3 Food 单元话题（食物类）写作满分范文15篇 一、书面表达 1．假如你是康康。你的英国朋友迈克(Mike)非常喜欢中国美食，他写信给你，想要你介绍一下中国的一些饮食习惯和一些特色菜。请根据要求给他写一封回信。 要求：1.字迹工整，语句通顺； 2. 80 词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：Chinese food; different from; breakfast; lunch; dinner Dear Mike, I am very glad to get your letter.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Kangkang 2．假设你是Kate，请根据下面的图画写出你和你的朋友所喜欢和不喜欢的食物。 要求：1. 须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 词数：40词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：薯条：French fries My name is Kate. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假设你是 Jack，现在中国，你想给你的好朋友 Lucy 写一封信，向她介绍一下自己的日常生活时间表和中国的特色美食，请根据以下要点和要求用英语完成这封信。 要点： 1.日常生活时间表(至少描述五个日常活动)； 2.中国的特色美食。 要求： 1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2.文章内容需包括以上要点, 可适当发挥； 3.不少于80词； 4.注意书信的书写格式。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．你的好友 Paul新开了一家餐厅，美食种类繁多。他想写一则英语广告向外国游客介绍他家的特色菜，但他不擅长英语。请你根据下面表格提示内容和要求，写一篇英语短文帮助他。 特色菜1 Beef and tomato noodles 12 yuan 特色菜2 dumplings 15 yuan 特色菜3 Tomato and egg rice 16 yuan 特色菜4 Mapo tofu 10 yuan 要求: 1. 参考提示内容, 可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整； 3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数: 不少于60词。（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数。） Welcome to our restaurant. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．Write at least 50 words on the topic "My Favourite Drink ". （以“最喜欢的饮料”为题，写一篇至少50个单词的短文，要求语句正确通，内容连贯，标点符号不占格） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．Write at least 60 words about the topic "How to make pizza".（以“如何制作比萨”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） Suggested questions： 1.What do we need to make pizza?   2. How can we make pizza?   3.How long do we bake pizza? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．Write at least 60 words titled “My Sunday menu” (以“我的周日菜单”为标题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。) Suggested questions: 1. What do you have for meals on Sunday? 2. What’s your favourite food? Is your diet healthy? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．著名医生张文宏认为科学的饮食对疫情防控也很重要。不好的饮食习惯也会影响我们的身体健康，所以我们应该养成健康的饮食习惯。假如你是Tom，请根下面表格内容，以“Healthy food and drink”为题目，写一篇英语作文。 牛奶、鱼肉、奶酪 对牙齿好 记住这些很重要： 1 每天早上吃一顿好的早饭 2 喝果汁、水和牛奶，不喝可乐 3 多吃一些水果和蔬菜 4 吃得好，保持健康，不发胖 胡萝卜、鸡蛋和 红薯 对你的眼睛有好处 肉 肉是健康的，但是 太多的肉对我们不好 备注： cheese奶酪  be good for对……有好处  teeth牙齿  carrots胡萝卜  juice果汁 sweet potatoes红薯  don’t get fat不发胖  stay healthy保持健康   remember记住    important重要的 要求： 1. 包含所有提示信息，也可适当发挥。 2. 条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整。 3. 不少于 60 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Healthy food and drink Is your food and drink healthy?  ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．学校食堂准备做下学期的采购计划并拟定三餐食谱，提前向全体学生征集意见。请根据以下要点提示，结合自己的实际情况，写一篇意见征集稿交给班级生活委员，供学校统计和采购。 写作要点： （1）说明自己最喜欢的食物和水果（一种或多种），并简要说明原因。 （2）介绍自己三餐最喜欢的食物和水果及理由。 （3）简要介绍自己不喜欢的食物和水果。 写作要求： （1）写作要素齐全，结构完整，层次分明，语句通顺。 （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 （3）70词左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．Bill和Jack是你的朋友，他们有着不同的饮食习惯。请你根据表格内容，写一篇60词左右的短文，不计入总词数。 Name Breakfast Lunch Dinner Bill milk, two eggs and an apple chicken, salad fish Jack bread, strawberries hamburgers rice (ice-cream after dinner) Bill and Jack are my friends. They have different eating habits. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．假如你是王凯，你的笔友Eric来信说对中国美食文化很感兴趣，请给他回邮件介绍你最喜欢的一道菜以及做法，并欢迎对方来中国品尝美食。 要求：(1)语言准确，语句通顺，表达连贯； (2)书写认真规范，不少于80词。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．假如你是来自英国的交换生Sally，请你为学校附近的蓝月亮餐厅写一则广告，介绍它的特色菜。 Blue Moon Restaurant Specials Tomato and egg soup Beef and potatoes Vegetable salad Prices ¥10 ¥22 ¥15 写作要求： （1）短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）词数：60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 Welcome to Blue Moon Restaurant. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re waiting for you! 13．假如你是李华，你们学校英语广播站正在举行以“健康饮食快乐生活”为主题的英语演讲活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文参赛。 基本信息 姓名 李华 年龄 13 电话 0531-765836 饮食习惯 喜欢的食物及理由 …… 不喜欢的食物及理由 …… 爱好特长 打网球…… 其他方面 …… 注意： （1）用第一人称； （2）60词左右； （3）文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息； （4）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．Write at least 60 words about the topic "My favourite Food".（以“我最喜欢的食物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） Suggested questions： 1.What would you like to eat every day?  2. Is it your favourite food? 3.Why do you love it? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．Write a passage of at least 40 words on the topic “My delicious dinner tonight”（以“我今晚美味的晚饭”为题写一篇短文, 词数不少于40个） The following questions are for reference（以下问题仅供参考） 1. What would you like for dinner tonight? 2. Would you like…or…? 3. What kind of soup would you like? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 9 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．例文： Dear Mike, I am very glad to get your letter. You ask me about Chinese food. Now, I will tell you something about it. Of course, Chinese food is different from English food. We think breakfast is very important. For breakfast, we have porridge and eggs. Sometimes we have some noodles. For lunch, we usually have a bowl of rice, and some good dishes such as mapo tofu, gongbao chicken and so on. After lunch, we may drink some water or tea. For dinner, besides rice, we often eat some dumplings. Sometimes we have noodles, too. I like dumplings with mutton best. Would you like to have a try? Welcome to China. Best wishes to you! Yours, Kangkang 【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书面表达是一篇书信作文。要求我们作为康康，给英国朋友迈克(Mike)写一封回信，来介绍一下中国的一些饮食习惯和一些特色菜。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；要求包含题干中的要点，需要提到中国的一些饮食习惯和一些特色菜；写作时需要用到题干所给出的参考词汇，适当扩充句子；注意符合英语语法规范，逻辑清晰，条理清楚。 2．范文： My name is Kate. I’m a girl. I have two good friends. We like different kinds of foods. I like eggs, but I don’t like pears. My friend Li Lei likes hamburgers and bananas. He doesn’t like French fries. My friend Liu Yu likes apples. She doesn’t like chicken or vegetables. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据图示介绍自己及朋友喜欢和不喜欢的食物，注意适当补充，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己，以及自己和朋友喜欢不同种类的食物； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢和不喜欢的食物； 第三步，介绍朋友Li Lei和Liu Yu的饮食喜好。 [亮点词汇] different kinds of 不同种类的 [高分句型] I like eggs, but I don’t like pears.（but连接的并列句） 3．例文 Dear Lucy,     I’m writing to you to tell you about my daily life and Chinese specialty food.     In the morning I get up at 5:40. Then I have breakfast at 6:30. After breakfast, I go to school at 7:30. I have four classes in the morning and I have lunch at twelve. I have two classes in the afternoon. I play sports at four o’clock. I often play basketball and soccer with my friends. I get home at 5:30. Then I do my homework first. I have dinner with my parents at 6:30. I go to bed at about nine o’clock.     Dumpling is a Chinese cuisine. Dumpling is a traditional Chinese food. For Spring Festival, dumpling is a must. Dumpling tastes really good. My favorite food is dumpling.     What about you? Please write to me and tell me. Yours, Jack 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给要求和要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，介绍一下自己的日常生活时间表和中国的特色美食； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] daily life日常生活 play sports进行体育运动 go to bed上床睡觉 cuisine饭菜 traditional传统的 [高分句型] Please write to me and tell me.(祈使句) 4．例文 Welcome to our restaurant. At our restaurant, we have four specials. Would you like beef and tomato noodles? They are only 12 yuan for a bowl. Dumplings are delicious, too. They are 15 yuan. You can also try our tomato and egg rice. It is 16 yuan for a bowl. Mapo tofu is very popular. It is the cheapest of all and only for 10 yuan. Come on, and you must love the food here. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为启事类写作； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从菜品种类，价格入手，重点介绍餐馆； 第三步，书写结语，让大家来餐馆吃饭。 [亮点词汇] the cheapest of all所有菜品中最便宜的 [高分句型] It is the cheapest of all and only for 10 yuan.（and并列句） 5．There are many kinds of drinks in the world, like juice, coke, milk, coffee tea and so on. And my favorite drink is tea. Tea is good for health. I drink tea every day. When I feel tired, I always drink a cup of tea, and I feel good immediately. When I drink tea, I would like to have some sweet or biscuits. That’s so nice. I like drinking tea. 【分析】本篇为话题作文，以“我最喜欢的饮料”为题，题材贴近生活，书写时要语句通顺，内容连贯。 【详解】题干解读：根据所给题目“My favorite drink”，确定文章用第一人称、时态一般现在时，书写时要注意人称时态统一，紧扣话题，适当增加合理的内容。 例文点评：.本例文结构严谨，布局合理。开篇用There be 句型介绍各种饮料，用and连接转入主题“My favorite drink is …”，上下文之间衔接流畅；正文部分讲述“什么时候喝茶、喝茶的好处” ；结尾用“I like drinking tea”点题，突出主题。 高分亮点：本例文衔接流畅，行文通顺，用很多地道的短语many kinds of…，and so on，feel tired，so nice，like doing sth和句式There be…，be good for…，when引导的从句，紧扣话题展开， 做到中心突出，内容完整。 6．例文 How to make pizza Would you like to know how to make a delicious fruit pizza? Let me tell you. To make pizza, we need a lot of ingredients. We need a thick piece of bread, some green peppers, tomatoes, cherries, some slices of pineapples, a few slices of ham, some cheese and a small tin of tomato sauce. Firstly, use the bread as the base. Put some tomato sauce on it. Secondly, put some slices of ham on the bread. Next put some slices of tomatoes, pineapples and several cherries around the ham. Finally, put the pizza in a hot oven and bake it for 5 minutes. Soon we will enjoy the delicious pizza. 【详解】题干解读：本文属于材料作文，主要讲述如何制作比萨。全文使用一般现在时，语句通顺，切记不要遗漏要点。特别要注意制作食品的顺序。 例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 高分亮点： 单词短语：a few, a thick piece of bread中“数词+量词+of+不可数名词”, to do表目的，for+时间段，firstly, secondly, next以及finally等。 高分句型：Would you like to know how to make a delicious fruit pizza?中“疑问词+to do”作宾语；Put some tomato sauce on it中运用了祈使句。 【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如a few，to do表目的，for+时间段，“疑问词+to do”以及祈使句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如firstly, secondly, next以及finally；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 7．例文 My Sunday menu I like to eat vegetables, eggs and fish on Sunday. I like eating all the delicious food. But my favourite food is fish, because I think it is healthy. I like fish soup. It is the most delicious soup in the world. I also love steamed fish. It always tasted nice. Besides, I like baked fish. My mother always says I can become cleverer if I eat more fish. The above is my menu on Sunday. I think my diet is healthy. 【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生以“My Sunday menu”为题，根据提示的内容要点，写一篇短文介绍自己的周日菜单，属于话题作文。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般现在时为主，以第三人称为辅展开叙述。写作中要紧扣提示的要点，首先明确星期天一般吃些什么，然后重点介绍自己最喜欢的食物以及为什么喜欢吃，最后总结照应开头。行文时注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 8．例文         Healthy food and drink Is your food and drink healthy? Eat the right food and be healthy. Carrots, eggs and sweet potatoes are good for your eyes. Milk, cheese and fish are good for your teeth. Meat is healthy but too much meat is not good for us. It is important to remember: Have a good breakfast every morning. Drink juice, water and milk, not cola. Eat lots of fruit and vegetables. Eat well, stay healthy, and don’t get fat! 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格内容写一篇作文关于健康的饮食习惯。 2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。写作时力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误，可适当发挥使行文连贯，逻辑清晰。 9．例文 Dear Class Committee Member, I’d like to share my thoughts for the upcoming semester’s cafeteria procurement plan. My favorite food is pasta, which is not only delicious but also gives me energy for my studies. As for fruits, I adore apples for their refreshing taste and nutritional value. For breakfast, I suggest including options like oatmeal and yogurt, which are hearty and healthy. For lunch and dinner, pasta dishes with a side of apple slices would be fantastic. These meals are well-rounded and appealing. However, I’m not a fan of spicy food, such as chili peppers. I don’t like oranges, either. Thank you for considering my suggestions. Yours, xxx 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇应用文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的食物和水果并说明理由； 第二步，介绍自己三餐最喜欢的食物和水果及理由； 第三步，简要介绍自己不喜欢的食物和水果； 第四步，希望学校可以采纳自己的建议。 [亮点词汇] ① not only...but also不但……而且 ② for breakfast就早餐而言 ③ such as例如 [高分句型] My favorite food is pasta, which is not only delicious but also gives me energy for my studies.（which引导的非限定性定语从句） 10．参考例文： Bill and Jack are my friends. They have different eating habits. Bill often has milk, two eggs and an apple for breakfast. But Jack likes eating bread and strawberries. At lunchtime, Bill has chicken and salad while Jack has hamburgers. During dinner, Bill only has fish as his main dish. However, Jack’s main dish is rice and he enjoys ice-cream after dinner. I think Bill has a healthier eating habit. Jack should eat more vegetables. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：方向已给出，写作时注意表述清晰、逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，点明主题； 第二步，分别列出两人的吃饭习惯； 第三步，总结。 [亮点词汇] ①while而 [高分句型] I think Bill has a healthier eating habit.（宾语从句，that省略） 11．例文 Dear Eric, I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese food culture. Scrambled Egg with Tomato is one of the traditional dishes in China. We’re going to prepare the ingredients, wash the tomatoes, cut them into small pieces, and the others are going to mix the eggs in a bowl. When everything is ready, it’s time to cook! First, we pour the oil into the pan. Then when you put the eggs in, flip the eggs, add the tomatoes, and you’re done. I hope you come to China to taste the food. Your, Wang Kai 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信作文； ②时态：“一般现在时”； ③提示：具体阐述写作内容，丰富细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己对听到笔友对中国美食文化感兴趣的消息的喜悦之情。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“介绍你最喜欢的一道菜以及做法，并欢迎对方来中国品尝美食”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，写希望对方来中国品尝美食。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in…对……感兴趣 ②one of………的其中之一 ③be going to do sth打算做某事 ④cut sth into small pieces把某物切成小块 ⑤pour sth into…把某物倒入…… ⑥come to来 [高分句型] ①When everything is ready, it’s time to cook!（when引导时间状语从句） ②I hope you come to China to taste the food.（hope后接省略that的宾语从句） 12．例文 Welcome to Blue Moon Restaurant. We have great specials for you. Special 1 is tomato and egg soup. It’s kind of salty and it’s only 10 yuan. Special 2 is beef and potatoes and it’s hot. It’s just 22 yuan. Special 3 is vegetable salad. It’s crispy and tasty. It’s just 15 yuan. We also have many other specials. Please come and enjoy the delicious food. We’re waiting for you! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为启事类写作； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表示欢迎（已给出）； 第二步，从特色菜的种类和价格来介绍； 第三步，让大家来餐馆吃饭。 [亮点词汇] ① kind of有点 ② many other许多其他的 [高分句型] Please come and enjoy the delicious food.（祈使句） 13．例文：     Hello! My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old. My phone number is 0531-765836.     Good habits are necessary. I eat different kinds of fruit and vegetables. I think they are healthy. I don’t like eating meat because it’s not good for my health and it makes me gain weight. I am good at playing tennis. Doing sports makes me happy and strong. I read books every day because reading gives me a lot of pleasure. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：表格所给内容需完整表达，未提示内容自行补充请勿遗漏。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的基本信息； 第二步，写出自己的饮食喜好及原由； 第三步，介绍自己的爱好特长等内容。 [亮点词汇] ①different kinds of不同种类的 ②be good for...对……有利 ③be good at擅长做某事 [高分句型] ①I think they are healthy.（宾语从句） ②Doing sports makes me happy and strong.（动名词短语作主语） ③I read books every day because reading gives me a lot of pleasure.（原因状语从句） 14．例文 My favourite food I eat fruit every day. And fruit is my favourite food. It is delicious and it is good for our health. And it has many kinds, such as apples, pears, oranges, lemons and so on. I can eat what I'd like every day. When I eat fruit, I feel very happy. Just as a saying goes. "An apple a day keeps a doctor away. " Of all the fruit, I like apples best. Fruit is so pretty and cute. I like fruit best. 【详解】1.题干解读：题文要求以“我最喜欢的食物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，依据提示，应写出每天最想吃什么食物；它是你最喜欢的食物吗；你为什么喜欢它。 2.例文点评：动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。。 3.高分亮点： 短语：my favourite food；be good for；keeps … away；like…best。 句型：I can eat what I'd like every day.；When I eat fruit, I feel very happy.when引导的时间状语从句；I like fruit best. 15．范文： Our family always has a delicious dinner. Tonight I would like rice for dinner. I would like steamed prawns with garlic. I would also like some soup. I would like tomato and egg soup. After we have dinner, I would like to have some fruit. I'd like to have some strawberries because eating some strawberries is good for my health. I'm sure my dinner tonight will be so wonderful! 【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求写美味的晚饭，属于记叙文写作。短文开篇先点明每天都有美味的晚餐Our family always has a delicious dinner；然后描述对今晚晚餐的设想；最后表达期待I'm sure my dinner tonight will be so wonderful。 2.例文点评：这篇习作是“总分总”结构，用第一人称叙述，时态是一般将来时；内容充实，描述细致，想象合理，结构完整，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。 3.高分亮点： 高分短语：a delicious dinner, would like, for dinner, steamed prawns, have dinner, would like to do, be good for, be sure. 高分句型： 1). After we have dinner, I would like to have some fruit.（时间状语从句） 2). I'd like to have some strawberries because eating some strawberries is good for my health.（原因状语从句） 3). I'm sure my dinner tonight will be so wonderful!（宾语从句） 【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。范文中使用了After we have dinner, I would like to have some fruit.时间状语从句等多种从句结构。 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$