Unit 3 Trouble 单元话题满分范文15篇-2024-2025学年八年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（牛津上海版）

Unit 3 Trouble! 单元话题满分范文15篇 一、书面表达 1．假如你是玲玲，你的好朋友梅梅在英语学习中遇到了一些麻烦，她写信向你寻求帮助。请根据下面要点提示，给梅梅写一封回信，给她介绍一些学好英语的方法。 内容提示： 1. speak English as much as possible; 2. listen to English songs; 3. read English stories; 4. write to English pen friends; ... 注意：（1）短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；       （2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；       （3）词数：不得少于80（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Meimei, I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you ask me for advice about learning English. Now, let me give you some advice. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice can help you. Yours, Lingling 2．近几年来，校园欺凌(school bullying)事件时有发生，学会自我保护是我们中学生需要具备的一种意识和能力，我们应该珍惜生命，注意自己的人身安全，做好自我保护。请以“How Can We Protect Ourselves” 为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈在生活中我们应该怎样自我保护(self-protection)。 提示：1. 不单独游泳； 2. 谨慎交友； 3. 遇到危险报警或向老师求助； 4. 饮食及交通安全等。 要求：1. 词数 80~100。 2. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．下面是一位中学生Li Ming在网上发出的贴子，假如你是Li Lei，请你根据贴中他所遇到的麻烦，给他回帖，帮助走出困境。 Dear friend, I have a serious problem now. I am a bit shy. I have few friends. I really don’t know what I should do when I am in trouble. What should I do? Can you give me some advice? Li Ming 注意： 1.词数100左右，邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.内容须包含以上所有提示，可适当发挥； 3.语言表达要准确，语句通顺、连贯； 4.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear friend, I’m sorry to hear that ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Lei 4．每个人在生活中都会遇到困难和压力。作为初二的学生，Tom在网上发出一封求助帖。他最近学习压力很大，每天睡眠不足；在学校里朋友很少，遇到困难不知道向谁倾诉。假如你是李华，给Tom写一封回帖，帮助他走出困境。 注意： 1. 内容必须包含所有信息； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 90词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I have learned that you are facing some problems. I am writing to help you. It’s really brave of you to ask for help. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I really hope this advice helps you out. Remember, you’re not alone, and things will get better! Yours, Li Hua 5．假如你是英语小报编辑李华，校报收到新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的三个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。 Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons 朋友少，感到孤独 参加学校社团，结识更多朋友；朋友越多，越快乐。 英语单词难记 多阅读英语故事、新闻，从而学习更多单词。 父母吵架 承担家务，如……，给父母留出交流的时间。 注意： 1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.短文必须包括所有要点，可以适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等。 Dear Ben, I am sorry to hear that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．假如你是李平，参加了学校的“有烦恼向谁倾诉”的调查活动，调查结果如表格所示，请你给校报编辑写一封信，内容包括： 调查结果、理由及自己的想法。词数不少于 80 词。 57% 向同学、朋友说（理由：朋友与我们年龄相仿，容易交流与理解） 28% 向老师、家长说（理由：家长有爱心、有经验，可以信任） 15% 自己独立解决（理由：自己不愿意与人交流，难以与人相处） Dear Editor, I’m a student in Grade Eight. We have made a survey “To whom you go when in trouble”. Here are the results._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．换位思考是 非常重要的思维方式，站在别人的角度思考问题，才能进行有效沟通。请你根据以下提示及要求，并以“We should put ourselves in others’ shoes”为题写一篇英语短文，讲述自己换位思考的故事和体会。 提示： 1. What’s the importance of thinking for others?   2. What should we pay attention to when we get on well with others?   要求： 1. 习作包含以上要点提示，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，语意连贯，条理清晰； 3. 词数：100 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 We should put ourselves in others’ shoes In our everyday lives, we sometimes feel that someone’s words or behaviors hurt us.__________________ 8．当我们在生活中遇到烦恼的时候，首先应该试着控制自己的情绪，因为情绪可以影响我们生活的方方面面。心情不好时，我们要多与父母、朋友沟通，学会笑对人生。 请根据以上提示，以How to Deal with our Problems 为题写一篇短文，阐述一下我们应该怎样面对生活中的烦恼。100个单词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Deal with our Problems It is very common for us to get into trouble. And it often makes us feel bad.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假如你是李华，你的好友李明向你倾诉了他的烦恼，担心自己与同学们相处不好，担心新学期学习成绩不理想等等。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封邮件，帮助解决他的烦恼。 提示：(1)保持好心情。 (2)待人友善，互帮互助，多与同学们沟通交流。 (3)努力学习，对自己充满信心。 (4)遇到困难，主动向老师和同学们寻求帮助。 注意：(1)回复邮件须包括以上的内容，可适当发挥。 (2)回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 (3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Li Ming, How are you?Thank you for your letter. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．假如你是李欣，你的笔友Mark在学习中遇到一点困难，写信向你求助，请你阅读信件内容，并给他提出有效建议。 Dear Li Xin, Have you ever met such a problem? I want to focus on (集中精力) my homework, but my best friend sends a lot of messages to me. And I don’t want to make him feel neglected (被忽视的), either. What should I do? Can you give me some suggestions? Mark 要求： 1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Dear Mark, I know how you feel and it’s normal to have these feelings. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．你的好朋友李伟刚转到了一所新学校，昨天他给你写了封信，信中提到，他面对陌生的环境，没有亲密的朋友，感到孤独并且不知道怎样和新同学相处。假设你是玲玲，请用英语给他写封回信，帮助他解决这些困惑。 提示： 1. 对他人诚实、友好，对他人微笑也能收获他人的微笑； 2. 同学有困难时，乐于帮助他人； 3. 积极参加班级活动，让他人了解你； 4. 多和同学交流，了解他们的兴趣爱好，这样可以交到好朋友。 Dear Li Wei, Glad to get your letter. In your letter, you said that ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lingling 12．安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中学生，我们可能遇到哪些安全问题？该怎么处理呢？学校决定组织一次安全教育主题班会，请根据以下要点提示，以“How to Keep Safe”为题写一篇英文短文。 中学生安全问题及对策 交通安全：遵守交通规则 食品安全：注意饮食安全 活动安全：做运动要小心；不要下河游泳 交友安全：最好别在网上交友，远离危险人物 遇险建议 遇到麻烦要保持冷静，确保自身安全，然后报警或向家长、老师求助 写作要求：1. 结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 表达通顺，语言规范，书写工整； 3. 文中不能出现任何真实的人名，校名等信息； 4. 词数80词左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：遵守交通规则 follow the traffic rules；饮食安全 food safety；在网上 online；遇到麻烦 get into trouble；打电话向某人寻求帮助call sb. for help How to Keep Safe     Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves.Here is some advice about how to keep safe.   ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________      In a word, we must always keep safety all the time. 13．假如你是玲玲，你的好朋友玫玫在英语学习中遇到了一些麻烦，她写信向你寻求帮助。请根据下面要点提示，给玫玫写一封回信建议她应该如何学好英语，所给要点都要求用上，可以适当发挥，70词左右，开头和结尾不记入总词数。   内容提示： 1）每天早晨起来大声朗读英语。 ⒉）尽量每天记住20个单词。 3）在英语课堂上尽可能多地讲英语。 4）听英文歌曲，看英文电影，读英文报纸，写英文日记。 参考词汇：朗读英语read English; 记单词remember words; 尽可能多地as much as possible; 写日记keep diaries Dear Meimei, I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter you ask me for advice about learning English. Now, let me give you some ideas. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my ideas can help you. Best wishes. Lingling 14．假如你是李华，你的同学给你发邮件说她最近在学习和生活上遇到一些麻烦，上周数学考试不及格，情绪不好，在课堂上没法集中注意力，头痛失眠，作为她的好朋友，你想给她发一封邮件劝说她，帮助她解决问题，摆脱不良情绪，重获快乐。 注意事项： 1. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名，字数80词左右。 Dear Li Hong, I am glad to receive your email.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes to you!   Yours, Li Hua 15．假设你是李辉，你的英国笔友Tom在来信中告诉你，他因转入新学校后还没有交到新朋友而感到很苦恼。请你用英语给他写一封回信。 内容包括： 1. 表达安慰； 2. 提出建议； 3. 给予鼓励。 注意： 1. 词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Tom, I’m so sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends at your new school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hui 10 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 11 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．例文 Dear Meimei, I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you ask me for advice about learning English. Now, let me give you some advice. First, try to speak English as much as possible. Don’t be shy. You should always speak English in class. And then, listening to English songs and watching English movies are good ways to improve your English. Also, it’s a good idea to read some English stories. Try to guess the meanings of the new words. If you still don’t know the meanings, you can look them up in a dictionary. Then write downs these new words in your notebook. As for writing, I think you can find some English pen friends and write to them. Do you forget new words quickly? If so, I suggest that you should read the new words every day and try to use them. I hope my advice can help you. Yours, Lingling 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：结合要点提示来给梅梅介绍英语学习方法。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开头已给出，引出主题，准备给梅梅一些英语学习方法； 第二步：根据提示内容具体介绍英语学习方法； 第三步：表达心愿，希望这些方法能帮到梅梅。 [亮点词汇] ①look up 查阅 ②write down 写下 ③as for 置于 [高分句型] ①And then, listening to English songs and watching English movies are good ways to improve your English.   (动名词作主语) ②If you still don’t know the meanings, you can look them up in a dictionary.   (if引导条件状语从句) 2．例文： How Can We Protect Ourselves Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some suggestions. First, in summer we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone. Second, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Third, if we are in danger, we must call the police or ask teachers for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. What’s more, don’t crowd each other when going upstairs or downstairs at school. In short, we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示： 请以“How Can We Protect Ourselves”为题，根据要点提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈生活中我们应该怎样自我保护。 [写作步骤] 第一步， 主题引入：文章开始于对自我保护重要性的强调，指出这是青少年必备的技能。通过问句“How can we protect ourselves?”引发读者思考，为接下来的建议做铺垫。 第二步， 提出建议：文章列举了几项具体的自我保护建议。 第三步， 总结，文章简洁地总结了上述建议，强调我们需要学习如何保护自己并远离危险。 [亮点词汇] ① it’s dangerous to do sth做某事很危险 ② make friends交朋友 ③ be in danger处于危险之中 ④ so that以便于 [高分句型] ① First, in summer we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.(It作形式主语) ②if we are in danger, we must call the police or ask teachers for help in time.(If引导的条件状语从句) 3．例文 Dear friend, I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble now. I’d like to give you some advice. First, you should learn to get on well with others and make friends with them. When you are in trouble, you can ask them for help. Because they are the same age as you, you can understand each other easily. What’s more, you can tell your trouble to your teachers or parents. They love you very much and they have rich experience. I’m sure they can help you a lot. I hope you can get out of your trouble soon.     Li Lei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容给他一些建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据他的问题给他一些相应的建议； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①get on well with和某人和谐相处 ②ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 ③get out of摆脱 [高分句型] ①When you are in trouble, you can ask them for help. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②Because they are the same age as you, you can understand each other easily. (because引导的原因状语从句) 4．范文： Dear Tom, I have learned that you are facing some problems. I am writing to help you. It’s really brave of you to ask for help. Here are some of my suggestions. First, having a good study plan could really help you make better use of your time. This way, you can make sure you’ve got time to relax and sleep enough. It’s important for staying healthy. Feeling like you don’t have many friends at school can be hard. Why not try joining some clubs or groups? It’s a good way to meet people who share your interests. And remember, a smile can help you a lot. People will think you’re a friendly person and they would like to make friends with you. They would also like to get to know you better. I really hope this advice helps you out. Remember, you’re not alone, and things will get better! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出写作目的是给出对方一些建议来帮助对方摆脱当前的困境； 第二步，根据他的问题给他一些相应的建议； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①make use of利用 ②make sure确保 ③stay healthy保持健康 [高分句型] ①It’s a good way to meet people who share your interests. (who引导的限制性定语从句) ②I really hope this advice helps you out. (宾语从句) 5．例文 Dear Ben, I am sorry to hear that you are having some problems. Here is some advice that can help you. First, you said that you often felt lonely because of having few friends. I think you’d better join the school clubs so that you can make more friends. The more friends you have, the happier you will be. Second, you may find it hard to remember English words. In my opinion, you can learn new words by reading more English stories and news. Last, it’s normal that parents sometimes fight. You can help your parents do some chores, such as cleaning the room and cooking, so that they will have more time to better communicate with each other. In a word, I hope I can help you out. Good luck with everything! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作方向已给出，写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容，注意表述清晰，逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山写出愿意给Ben提供一些建议； 第二步，分别写出Ben存在的问题，并根据问题提出相应的建议； 第三步，表达希望能帮助Ben的美好愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①because of因为 ②In one’s opinion在某人看来 ③communicate with sb与某人沟通 [高分句型] ①I think you’d better join the school clubs so that you can make more friends.（省略that的宾语从句） ②The more friends you have, the happier you will be.（比较级句型） ③You can help your parents do some chores, such as cleaning the room and cooking, so that they will have more time to better communicate with each other.（目的状语从句） 6．One possible version: Dear Editor, I’m a student in Grade Eight. We have made a survey “To whom you go when in trouble”. Here are the results. Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble, because they are almost the same age and they can communicate with and understand each other easily. Some students will tell their teachers and parents about their troubles, as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted. Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others, and can’t get on well with others. They have few friends. In my opinion, when we‘re in trouble, we’d better ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help. They can give us useful suggestions. Yours Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：题目要求根据提示向校报编辑写封信，介绍“有烦恼向谁倾诉”的调查结果、原因以及自己的想法。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步聚] 第一步，开篇点题（已给出）； 第二步，根据所给要点，依次调查的结果和原因； 第三步，最后表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate with 和……交流 ②each other 互相 ③get on well with 和……融洽相处 [高分句型] ① Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble, because they are almost the same age and they can communicate with and understand each other easily.（because引导的原因状语从句） ② They can be trusted.（含情态动词的被动语态） 7．例文 We should put ourselves in others’ shoes In our everyday lives, we sometimes feel that someone’s words or behaviors hurt us. As a result, we feel angry or upset. At that time, however, we should consider whether or not our words or behaviors probably hurt others in the same way. We may find that they don’t mean to harm us. Instead, they may come to help us. Last Sunday, Li Yue failed to perform his duty to clean the bedroom.I was very angry with him because I was in charge of the bedroom. Later I tried to put myself in his shoes. I found that he had been delayed by the traffic jam on the way back to school. With the truth coming to light, we all bare our hearts to each other now. When we get on well with others, we should pay attention to putting ourselves in others’shoes, and learn to listen to others, heart. Only in this way, can we have a happy life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏细节，注意要写出换位思考的重要性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，表达自己对“换位思考”的认同。 第二步，举例说明换位思考重要性； 第三步，书写结语。表达学会换位思考的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①as a result结果 ②get on well with others和他人相处 ③mean to do故意做 ④pay attention to注意 [高分句型] ①At that time, however, we should consider whether or not our words or behaviour probably hurts others in the same way.（宾语从句） 8．例文 How to Deal with our Problems    It is very common for us to get into trouble. And it often makes us feel bad. Do you know what to do at this time? First of all, try to control your feelings because bad feelings can bring you other bad effects. Then believe in yourself. You can speak to yourself,“ I’m the best in the world. I can deal with anything.” You can also do something for others to help you forget your problems. Last, when you have some problems, you’d better talk about them with your parents or friends. They may help you get out of trouble. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我们遇到麻烦是很常见的。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——控制情绪、多沟通、学会笑对人生等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“父母或朋友可能会帮助你走出困境”的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①believe in相信 ②you’d better你最好 ③get out of trouble摆脱困境 [高分句型] ①First of all, try to control your feelings because bad feelings can bring you other bad effects. （because引导的原因状语从句） ②Last, when you have some problems, you’d better talk about them with your parents or friends. (when引导的时间状语从句） 9． 例文： Dear Li Ming, How are you? Thank you for your letter. I’m sorry to hear that you have a lot of worries.You’re worried that you can’t get along well with your classmate. You’re worried about not getting good grades in the new term. In fact, you don’t have to feel nervous. I have some suggestions that may help you. First of all, keeping a good mood can help you do things better. And people like to be with happy persons. Secondly, be friendly to others. Help each other and communicate with classmates more. Thirdly, you should study hard and be confident in yourself. When you’re in trouble, you should ask teachers and students for help actively. If you do this, I think you’ll feel better soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[整体介绍] ①体裁：本文是写一封邮件，属于应用文； ②时态：采用“一般现在时” ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表达问候和关心； 第二步：提供建议； 第三步：表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①get along well with与……相处得好 ②be friendly to 对……友好 ③be confident in 对……有信心 [高分句型] ①I have some suggestions that may help you. （that引导的定语从句） ②If you do this, I think you’ll feel better soon.（if引导的条件状语从句） 10．例文 Dear Mark, I know how you feel and it’s normal to have these feelings. Here are my suggestions for you. To begin with, it’s good for you to hold the belief that study must come first. You can suggest a time that you are available to send him back. Besides, you’d better have a talk with your best friend, showing him your feelings. What’s more, why don’t you invite him to do homework with you? So you can keep focusing on homework at the same time and no one will feel neglected. Hope my advice is helpful. Please feel free to write to me if you have further problems. Yours, Li Xin 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意参考给出的信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。根据已给出的开头“I know how you feel and it’s normal to have these feelings.”进行写作； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，根据提示内容介绍自己的建议； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望我的建议对你有帮助”。 [亮点词汇] ①To begin with首先 ②hold the belief坚持信念 ③study must come first学习是第一位的 ④What’s more此外 ⑤feel free to do sth.随意做某事 [高分句型] ①You can suggest a time that you are available to send him back.（that引导的定语从句） ②Please feel free to write to me if you have further problems.（if引导条件状语从句） 11．例文 Dear Li Wei, Glad to get your letter. In your letter, you said that you felt lonely and worried. Don’t worry about it. I’ll give you some advice about making new friends. First, you should be friendly to others and be honest. Try to smile at your classmates and they will smile back too. Second, you should be ready to help others when they are in trouble. Third, try to take an active part in class activities and they will learn more about you. Finally, communicate more with your classmates and you will know more about their hobbies. If you do that, you will get more good friends. I hope my advice will help you. I’m sure everything will be OK. With best wishes! Yours, Lingling 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括4个方面提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，知晓对方的问题，引出话题：就交新朋友提供一些建议； 第二步，根据要点提示，逐一陈述建议，适当拓展； 第三步，书写总结，表达祝愿。 ［亮点词汇］ ① worry about 担心 ② take an active part in 积极参加 ［高分句型］ ① Second, you should be ready to help others when they are in trouble. (when引导时间状语从句) ② If you do that, you will get more good friends. (if引导条件状语从句) 12．One possible version: How to Keep Safe Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here is some advice about how to keep safe. Firstly, we must follow the traffic rules. Secondly, we should pay attention to the food safety. Don’t eat too much junk food. Thirdly, be careful while you are doing sports. Remember not to swim in the river alone. What’s more, we’d better not make friends online. We must stay away from dangerous people around us. If we get into trouble, we must keep calm and make sure that we are safe first, and then call the police, the teachers or parents for help. In a word, we must always keep safety all the time. 【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，写作时应承接短文开头，然后根据表格介绍安全问题及对策，最后介绍遇到危险时的建议，可适当发挥。 2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍怎样保持安全时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。 13．例文 Dear Meimei,   I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter you ask me for advice about learning English. Now, let me give you some ideas. You should read English loudly every morning. It can improve your pronunciation and speaking. And I think vocabulary is very important in learning English, so try to remember 20 words a day. You can write them down on pieces of paper and put them in your pocket. Read them at any time. And don’t forget to listen to your teacher carefully in class and try to speak English as much as possible. It’s a good way to listen to English songs. It’s more interesting to learn English by doing that. How about watching films, reading newspapers and keeping diaries in English? They are good for you, too. I hope my ideas can help you. Best wishes. Lingling 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，给朋友回信写出几条如何学好英语的建议，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第二人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 14．例文 Dear Li Hong, I am glad to receive your email. It is common that everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. It’s all right to tell others your bother when you are anxious. I think communicating with your classmates, teachers or parents is a good choice. Then you’ll find that you can solve the problems from study or life easily. What’s more, we are supposed to have a heart-to-heart communication with our parents or friends around us. In this way, we can get their more understanding and support. Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed. Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems. No matter how many difficulties we have, believe all of them can be overcome in the end. Best wishes to you! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文为应用文，是一封电子邮件。 ②时态：本文要用一般现在时。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明焦虑是常见的，发生时与人交流是正确的。 ②第二步，提出了一些解决办法：和人交流，听音乐，保持微笑和不保持沉默等。 ③第三步，总结全文，告诉对方无论有多少困难，也要相信最后一定能克服。 [亮点词汇] ①bother麻烦，困难 ②be supposed to do应该做某事 ③heart-to-heart率直的；诚实的 [高分句型] ①Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed. (动名词短语作主语，谓语动词用单三) ②No matter how many difficulties we have, believe all of them can be overcome in the end. (no matter how引导的让步状语从句) 15．例文 Dear Tom, I’m so sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends at your new school. You don’t have to worry too much about this, because it’s very common. I hope the following advice can help you. First of all, we should know how to share. We can share delicious food, books and interesting things with others. Sharing can give us pleasure. Second, we should be helpful. When we are in trouble, we should help each other. We should be willing to help others and seek help from others in case of difficulties. Finally, we can’t say bad words about others so that we can get on well with each other. We should keep secrets. I hope these suggestions can help you. At the same time you have to believe in yourself, you will make a lot of new friends. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容给出自己的建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，听说没有交到新朋友给出建议； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，具体描述给出的建议； 第三步，书写结语，希望能够帮助到对方。 [亮点词汇] ①have trouble making friends 交朋友有困难 ②be willing to help others 乐意帮助其他人 ③in case of 万一 ④get on well with 和……相处好 [高分句型] ①Finally, we can’t say bad words about others so that we can get well on with each other.(so that引导的目的状语从句) 14 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 13 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$