话题09 情感与情绪 -- 2025年中考英语话题作文写作大全（通用版）

2025年中考英语话题作文写作大全（通用版） 话题09 情感与情绪 话题解读 本话题通常来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受，常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。这是一个记叙和议论相结合的话题，此类话题写作常常会给出特定的提示信息。写作时，观点要明确，要充分利用这些提示信息。 话题词汇 cheer 欢呼 excited 激动的 laugh 笑 smile微笑 positive / optimistic 乐观的 mad 生气的 shame 羞耻;羞愧 disappointed 失望的 pity 遗憾 话题句式 1. I'm so thankful to you for your kind help that I' ll work harder and try to …我非常感谢你的帮助,我会更加努力地工作,并努力⋯⋯。(提分点: so ⋯ that⋯ 如此⋯⋯以至于⋯⋯) 2. Although you were very strict with me, I understood what you ... 虽然你对我很严格,但我最终还是懂了你……。(提分点：although引导的让步状语从句) 经典范例 假如你是李华，初中生活即将结束，你思绪万千。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一封信表达你对父母的由衷感激及今后的点滴回报。 要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；2. 词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mom/ Dad, My junior school life is coming to an end.__________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours love, Li Hua 写作方法指导 开头：要点1：表达自己对父母的感激之情。 Now, I'd like to show my thanks to you for_______________________________________________ 主体：要点2：举例说明父母为我的付出，如照顾我、陪伴我、鼓励我等。 Since I was born, you have been_______________________________________________________ Every day, you were the first to get up and_______________________________________________ On my way to and from school, you____________________________________________________ When I failed an exam and felt stressed, you_____________________________________________ When I didn't get along with my friends, you ___________________________________________ 结尾：要点3：举例说明我对父母的回报，如陪伴、沟通、理解。 Now, I have grown up. I' ll_________________________________________________________ 范文： Dear Mom/ Dad, My junior school life is coming to an end. Now, I'd like to show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years. Since I was born, you have been taking good care of me. Every day, you were the first to get up and prepare breakfast for me. On my way to and from school, you were always with me. When I failed an exam and felt stressed, you were the one to encourage me. When I didn't get along with my friends, you told me to learn to be caring. Now, I have grown up. I' ll spend more time staying and communicating with you. And I' ll try my best to understand you and do what I can for you. Yours love, Li Hua 实战演练 （1） （2023·四川凉山·中考真题）在成长的过程中，你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人。比如对你嘘寒问暖的亲人，带你遨游知识海洋的老师，伴你嬉戏畅玩的伙伴……为了表达对他（她）的感谢，请你以“Thanks, ________”为标题，根据下面思维导图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，向校园广播站投稿。 要求： 1. 语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺； 2. 文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 4. 词数：80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Thanks, ________ Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life, your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend__________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） （2022·内蒙古·中考真题）正能量偶像宛如指路明灯，可以引导我们成为更好的人。近期，你们学校的英语报刊以“My guiding star”为题正在征稿，请你积极投稿。 要点：1. Who is your guiding star? 2. What did he/she do? 3. What have you learned from him/her? 4. What are you going to do in the future? 要求：1. 文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥； 2. 文章应句式多样、语句流畅、意思连贯； 3. 词数 80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 注意：1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息； 2. 不许抄袭、套改。 My guiding star The people we admire are like guiding stars that guide us to be better. My guiding star is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） （2024·贵州黔东南·二模）我们都收到过礼物，每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。那么，你最喜爱的礼物是什么呢？对你来说，它有什么特殊的意义？请以“A/An ________ Gift”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 要求： 1. 请将标题补充完整，合理即可； 2. 文中必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展； 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） （2024·贵州黔东南·二模）近年来，我们的生活里涌现了许多可歌可泣的英雄。你心中的英雄是谁呢？是耀眼的明星，是见义勇为的市民，是恪守职责的公民，还是身边默默无闻的普通人？你校将开展以“The Hero in My Heart—________”为题的征文活动，请你写一篇不少于80词的征文投稿。 写作要求： 1. 补全标题； 2. 征文须包含思维导图中所有信息； 3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） （2024·吉林长春·二模）无论我们人在哪里，无论我们去向何方，家乡从来是一个令人魂牵梦绕的地方。某英文网站正在进行关于“My hometown”的征文活动，请你准备一篇英语短文参加此活动。 要点： 1. 描述与家乡有关的经历或故事； 2. 谈谈你对于家乡的理解与感悟。 要求： 1. 不少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） （2024·河南鹤壁·一模）若成长是一本著作，那么烦恼便是藏在段落深处的错字；如果成长是一张白纸，那么烦恼便是附在背面的一个瑕疵。请以“How I work out problems”为题，根据写作要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你是如何解决生活中遇到的烦恼的。 1. 写作要点： 1）你是如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼的？ 2）你又是用什么方法解决的？ 3）你的感想是什么？ 2. 写作要求： 1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数80左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： （1） Thanks, Mom Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life, your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend. The person that I want to thank most is my mother. She is 40 years old. She works in a hospital, and she works very hard. She is tall and thin. She is friendly, but strict with me. She always gives me the warmest love and takes care of me all the time. She is willing to do everything for me. To express my love, I can buy presents for her, study hard and help her do something useful. I will remember her love and be thankful to her. I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“Thanks, ________”为标题，结合思维导图进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明想感谢的是谁； 第二步，感谢的人的个人信息，想感谢他/她的原因； 第三步，介绍如何感谢以及美好的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①works very hard工作很努力 ②takes care of照顾 ③all the time一直 ④be thankful to对……表示感激 [高分句型] ①The person that I want to thank most is my mother.（that引导的定语从句） ②I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy.（that引导的宾语从句） （2） My guiding star The people we admire are like guiding stars that guide us to be better. My guiding star is Doctor Zhong Nanshan. He is one of the greatest doctors that I respect. He devoted all of his energy and time to the medical research. For example, during the COVID-19 outbreak, he was so brave that he rushed to the front line and came up with valuable advice of fighting against the virus.   I have learned his spirit, his bravery and his patience. Besides, I have learned that I should value my time and read more books to get more knowledge. From now on, I’m going to study harder and go to my dream university to make my dream come true. Only in this way can I make contributions to our great country. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我的引路之星”为题写一篇短文。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍相关事迹；最后一段描述自己从中学到了什么，以及打算将来如何做。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无标点和语法错误。 （3） A Valuable Gift I’ve received lots of presents, but the most valuable gift I’ve received is the book The Old Man and the Sea from my mother. It was my 13th birthday. I failed to pass the exam some days ago and felt really upset those days. My mother wanted to cheer me up and encourage me to be strong, so she gave the book to me. I was so surprised and happy to get it. After I finished reading the book, I have learned that when we meet with difficulties, we should never give up. From then on, I keep trying my best to study hard. I think I’ll grow up with it because it is not only a book but also my mother’s love. So I consider it the most valuable gift. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作； ② 时态：时态主要为一般过去时； ③ 提示：写作时注意先补全标题，然后根据图示内容展开写作，可适当发挥使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明礼物是什么，引出主题； 第二步，讲述礼物背后的故事； 第三步，表达礼物的意义和自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① cheer sb. up让某人振作起来 ② give up放弃 ③ try one’s best尽某人最大的努力 ④ not only…but also…不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ① After I finished reading the book, I have learned that when we meet with difficulties, we should never give up.（时间状语从句+宾语从句） ② I think I’ll grow up with it because it is not only a book but also my mother’s love.（宾语从句+原因状语从句） （4） The Hero in My Heart—My Mother Recently, many heroes like Zhang Guimei have appeared around us. Who is the hero in my heart? My mother. She is a nice doctor with long hair, a pretty face and a soft voice. Now she has become my hero because she helps me a lot and sets a good example to me. As my mother, she always listens to me patiently, encourages me and gives me helpful suggestions when I am in trouble. As a doctor, she works hard, tries her best to help patients and wins their high praise. I hope I will be a person like her. I also hope she will care for her own health. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点名自己心目中的英雄； 第二步，具体阐述他/她的职业、外貌以及为什么他/她会成为你心目中的英雄，你在他/她身上学到了什么精神； 第三步，最后表达向他/她学习，成为像他/她那样的人 [亮点词汇] ①in one’s heart在某人心目中 ②in trouble处于麻烦之中 ③try one’s best to尽最大努力做某事 [高分句型] ①Now she has become my hero because she helps me a lot and sets a good example to me.（原因状语从句） ②I also hope she will care for her own health.（宾语从句） （5）     Hometown is the place where a person belongs. Chinese people have special feelings about their hometown. No matter where they go, they will not abandon it and always make some time to visit. My hometown brings me so many happy memories and I wish its original face forever. Two years ago, I lived in my hometown. It is a small village, so people there got familiar with each other. When we walked on the country road, everyone smiled when we saw each other. There was no distance for us. In the daytime, I liked to go boating in the small river with my friends, or sometimes I could hear the birds singing all the time. It was a paradise for me.      I think we should remember the past, live in the present and dream about the future. I hope our hometown will become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文时态是一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：注意要描述一段与家乡有关的经历或故事。 [写作步骤] 第一步，谈谈对家乡的理解与感悟； 第二步，描述与家乡有关的经历； 第三步，结束语，希望家乡越来越好。 [亮点词汇] ①No matter不管 ②get familiar with熟悉 ③all the time总是 [高分句型] ①Hometown is the place where a person belongs.（定语从句） ②I think we should remember the past, live in the present and dream about the future.（宾语从句） （6） How I work out problems Problems and worries are normal in our life. But don’t worry. I would like to share you how I work out problems. First, I often tell my friends about my worries. Because I know they’re always there for me and their advice always helps me a lot. Then, I amused to doing some exercise like running. You know doing exercise can make me feel so tired that I can get a good sleep. And when the next day comes, I’ll feel better. I’m fond of listening to music in a quiet place by myself. What’s more, reading books and watching news are sometimes useful for me, too. When I read, I forget my problems and worries. I think we should learn to control our feelings. And if you have some problems and worries, you can try what I share with you. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“一般将来时”和“一般过来时”。 ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中自己如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼、解决烦恼的方法和自己的感想的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼； 第二步，介绍自己如何解决生活中遇到的烦恼； 第三步，介绍自己的感想。 [亮点词汇] ① work out problems解决问题 ② the next day第二天 ③ What’s more而且，更重要的是 ④ learn to control our feelings学会控制我们的感情 [高分句型] ① You know doing exercise can make me feel so tired that I can get a good sleep. (so…that引导结果状语从句) ② When I read, I forget my problems and worries. (When引导时间状语从句) ③ And if you have some problems and worries, you can try what I share with you. (if引导条件状语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$