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满分练9　应用文写作(节约粮食)+读后续写(险境求生) 限时40分钟 应用文写作　 　　你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知,内容包括:1.介绍活动目的;2.说明参赛要求。 注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition 范文借鉴　 Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition 　　In a bid to (为了) enhance awareness of saving food and reducing food waste, an English writing competition themed “Join Hands, Save Food” is organized by our school’s English newspaper. (活动目的+主题) To begin with, originality, by all means, is a must. (原创要求) Moreover, your writing should be inspiring, thought-provoking (发人深省的), and convincing, clearly illustrating the severity of food waste and the significance of cherishing food resources. You can write stories, essays, or poems, but remember to compose it in English and limit it to 400 words. (内容和字数要求) Anyone interested is welcome to submit their entries to English @163.com no later than January 30th. (截止期限) The winning works will be announced on February 2nd in this newspaper. (说明参赛要求) Your active participation is highly anticipated. (期待参与) Editorial Office of the English Newspaper 读后续写　 　　阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was backpacking and planned to climb a volcano called Baru Volcano. At 3,474 meters, it is the only place on Earth from where you can see the Atlantic and the Pacific Oceans at the same time. I set off before sunrise. It was a little cold, so I had pulled on tights under my trousers. I intended to reach the top by midday, and then return before dark to get a lift to my hotel. I always felt safe travelling as a woman on my own, which I’d done since my 20s. I love the freedom. When I got to the base of the volcano at 7 in the morning, the ranger (护林员) disagreed to let me go alone, but said OK because an American couple were behind me. The first part of the climb was beautiful. It was not dry as you might imagine a volcano might be—there were trees and flowers all around, and a dirt road for the farmers who worked around there. I walked for an hour and reached a fair height. The views were impressive, so I stopped to take a photograph. Suddenly I heard violent barking behind me. I turned and saw two dogs running aggressively towards me. I expected them to stop, but they didn’t. As they got closer, I could see their teeth looked sharp, and that they looked angry. There was nowhere for me to run. I tried to keep calm, but my heart raced. I’d never been bitten by a dog, and I couldn’t help but fear what would happen. They stopped a dozen feet from where I stood and kept barking. I knew they could move fast, so I didn’t want to try to outrun them. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 　　Terrified, I slowly kept walking, saying,“Come on, good dogs!” 　　Just at this critical moment, a pickup appeared, driven by the ranger. 原文情节线:“我”独自一人爬火山→护林员劝阻→美国夫妇在后面,因而可行→欣赏美景、拍照→突然遇到两只凶猛的狗→“我”尝试自救未果→护林员及时出现并施救。 第一段细节刻画:衔接1:首句衔接所给句中的“Come on, good dogs!”:狗不会因为“我”的一句话离开,那么狗是什么行动?(靠近,吠叫)。过渡句:“我”的紧张害怕→“我”的应对措施(用背包当盾牌进行自卫)→狗的攻击(狗的动作描写,人的害怕紧张)。尾句:衔接第二段首句中的“在这一危急时刻”:狗冲向“我”,塑造紧张危险的场面。 　　Terrified, I slowly kept walking, saying, “Come on, good dogs!” (衔接1) The dogs continued to bark and growl as if they wanted to swallow me. (过渡句) My heart pounded violently in my chest . Afraid of being attacked at any moment, I struggled to remain calm and tried to think of a way to defend myself if necessary. Suddenly, my backpack came to my mind, which could be used as a barrier. (衔接2) However, as I reached for it, one of the dogs aggressively rushed to me. 第二段细节刻画:衔接3:首句衔接所给句中的“护林员开着卡车过来”:护林人员如何把狗吓跑?过渡句:护林员的援助→“我”被解救→“我”如释重负,对护林员的感激。尾句:感悟:生命最珍贵。 　　Just at this critical moment, a pickup appeared, driven by the ranger. (衔接3) Seeing the state I was in, he immediately honked his horn, scaring the dogs away. (过渡句) I breathed a deep sigh of relief as I watched the dogs disappear into the distance. Without the ranger’s rescue, things could have turned out much worse. I extended my sincere gratitude to him, as he earnestly reminded me that safety comes first while travelling. (尾句感悟) I was much more cautious as I continued my climb up the volcano. After all, nothing is more precious than life. 精解深析 教师独具 　　原文I was backpacking① and planned to climb a volcano② called Baru Volcano. At 3,474 meters, it is the only place on Earth from where you can see the Atlantic and the Pacific Oceans at the same time. I set off before sunrise. It was a little cold, so I had pulled on tights under my trousers. I intended to reach the top by midday, and then return before dark to get a lift to my hotel. I always felt safe travelling as a woman on my own, which I’d done since my 20s. I love the freedom③. When I got to the base of the volcano at 7 in the morning, the ranger (护林员) disagreed to let me go alone④, but said OK because an American couple④ were behind me. 协同点 ①“我”背着包, 在和狗的对抗中能起到的作用:自卫的盾牌:Suddenly, my backpack came to my mind, which could be used as a barrier.   ②a volcano: “我”在爬火山, 结合下文提到的“达到一定高度”,“我”在获救后应该会继续攀爬: I was much more cautious as I continued my climb up the volcano.   ③I love the freedom: 崇尚自由,但是生命/安全更珍贵: 此处可作为感悟: Though freedom is significant, life/safety counts more. ④the ranger & an American couple: 护林员不同意“我”独自爬火山,那么也许会担心“我”的安全, 或因为跟在“我”后面的美国夫妻的求救电话等在危机时刻会出来救援: He turned up just in time as the American couple called him to tell him my urgent situation.或写护林员再次提醒“我”注意安全,不要单独行动: He earnestly reminded me not to travel alone and that safety comes first while travelling.  原文The first part of the climb was beautiful. It was not dry as you might imagine a volcano might be—there were trees and flowers all around, and a dirt road for the farmers who worked around there. I walked for an hour and reached a fair height. The views were impressive, so I stopped to take a photograph. 提示“我”还没爬完火山, 再得到救援后应该是继续攀爬。 Suddenly I heard violent barking behind me. I turned and saw two dogs running aggressively towards me. I expected them to stop, but they didn’t. As they got closer, I could see their teeth looked sharp⑤, and that they looked angry. There was nowhere for me to run. I tried to keep calm, but my heart raced⑥. I’d never been bitten by a dog, and I couldn’t help but fear what would happen. They stopped a dozen feet from where I stood and kept barking. I knew they could move fast, so I didn’t want to try to outrun them. 协同点 ⑤对狗的描写: 凶猛的攻击、锋利的牙齿: They charged at me aggressively towards me, sharp teeth glinting cold in the sunlight.  ⑥my heart raced:在和狗的对峙中.“我”的心怦怦跳: My heart pounded violently in my chest .  学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$