Unit2 Strong mind 单元话题写作满分范文15篇-2024-2025学年七年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（牛津上海版2024）

Unit 2 Strong mind 单元话题写作满分范文15篇 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 一、书面表达 1．端正学习态度、培养顽强的意志力、激发学习兴趣、养成良好的学习习惯或找到最适合自己的学习方法等，这些因素都会或多或少影响着一个学生的学习。为引导学生学会学习，九年级以“什么最影响我学习”开展了主题活动，对九年级1000名学生展开了有关影响学习因素的调查，下图是统计结果。假设你是该校学生请你根据图表信息结合亲身经历，用两段话来谈谈你的认识。 要求： 1.词数不少于80词，开头已经给出，不计入总数； 2.提示词仅供参考； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 WORD BANK: effective adj. 高效的 form a habit of 养成一个习惯 keep focused 保持专注 Last week, we did a survey about factors that have an influence on learning among 1000 students. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．锲而不舍，金石可镂。面对生活中的困难，我们缺少的往往不是办法，而是坚持。某英文网站正在开展以“Grow Through Difficulties”为主题的征文活动。请根据英文提示写一篇80词左右的小短文投稿，谈谈你克服困难的一次经历。 内容包括: 1. Tell us a story about how you got over (克服) the difficulty. 2. What can you learn from it? 参考词汇：smile (微笑); take part in (参加) Grow Through Difficulties ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3． 图中的孩子常年需要坐索道(go on a ropeway)过河上学却不畏艰难，因为爱学校、爱知识；与之对比，我们拥有什么，欠缺什么，有何启示？ 假定你是李华，你校近期将开展以“惜少年时，立鸿鹄志”为主题的中、英文演讲比赛。请你准备一篇英文稿参加英语演讲比赛。要点包含如下： 1.图中孩子的上学方式、坚持原因； 2.联系对比自身(或同学)的上学条件、原有认识(或做法)； 3.你的倡议(或做法、打算) 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2.文中不要出现真实校名和姓名。3.词数90左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．人的进步需要精神的支撑，人的成长需要责任的担当，“不忘初心，牢记使命”主题教育在全国如火如荼地展开。作为一名中学生，初心和使命是做一名文明 (civilized) 学子、生活强者、命运主宰者⋯⋯根据以下要点提示，谈谈你的做法和想法，写一篇值日报告，在英语课上汇报给大家。 要点提示： 1.学习：勤奋努力，认真听讲和完成作业，要进步。 2.生活：丰富多彩，有爱好特长，分担家务，能独立。 3.言行举止：礼貌待人，与人为善，讲诚信。 要求： 1.内容必须包括所有要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.条理清晰，行文连贯，段落分明，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.词数80-100词，文章的开头已写好，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I’d like to give you my report. As a middle school student, I want to be a civilized student, a strong-minded person and a master of my fate. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．每个人都有自己心中的学习榜样。钟南山院士是我学习的榜样。下面是关于他的一些简要信息。根据这些信息，写一篇80字左右的英语短文。 1.钟南山出生于1936年10月20日。他85岁了，每天坚持锻炼身体。 2.他是个医生，勇敢，有爱心，知识渊博…… 3他的主要事迹： A．新冠Covid-19开始传播的时候，他奔赴最危险的地方。 B．对抗疫情。不放弃病人。 4. 我从他的身上学到了许多东西…… _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．健康源于生活，在于习惯，成于坚持 假如你是红星中学七年级一班学生李华，你们学校正在开展以“健康生活”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一份演讲稿，介绍你在饮食、运动等方面的做法，以及健康生活带给你的好处 (benefits)。 提示词语：eat well, sports, habits, healthy, happy 提示问题：1. What do you do to keep healthy? 2. How do your good living habits benefit you? It’s important to have a healthy lifestyle. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．Write at least 60 words on the topic “A model student in my school”, using the following questions for reference.（请根据提示问题，以“我学校的模范生”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。） Suggested questions: (1) Who is a model student in your schoool? (2) Why do you vote for him/ her as a model student? (3) What can you learn from him her? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是七年级学生李华，你刚读了一篇关于在国际空间站（ISS）工作的宇航员Jeanette日常生活的文章，请你根据以下表格信息写一篇80词左右的短文，在英语读书会上分享她的日常生活和你的感想。 作息 收到叫醒电话后，起床开始工作，每天工作12小时 饮食 一日吃三餐(配有饮料和零食) 工作 做科学实验、用相机拍照、与地球上的科学家对话、清洁机器 锻炼 健身约两小时 感想 你对Jeanette在国际空间站日常生活的看法 要求: 1.词数80左右；开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数 2.可围绕要点适当发挥，使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。 参考词汇： 叫醒电话 wake-up call         做科学实验 do scientific experiment Hi, everyone! I just read an article about Jeanette, an astronaut on the ISS and I’d like to introduce her daily life in space. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 9．随着2024年春节档电影《热辣滚烫》的爆火，我们看到了主演贾玲减肥100斤的励志故事。科学减肥、健康生活的话题再次引起人们热议。在接受采访时，贾玲结合自身经历，给我们提出了几条建议。假如你是学校的小记者，请你将主要内容进行梳理。 1. 学会控制日常饮食，吃低脂的食物，像鱼肉，水果和蔬菜； 2. 多喝水，每天至少八杯水，不容易感到饥饿； 3. 选择适合自己的锻炼方式，比如跑步、游泳和瑜伽； 4. 合理计划时间，养成良好的生活习惯； 5. 要有坚强的意志； 6. 你的观点……。 参考词汇： diet 日常饮食 low-fat 低脂的 yoga 瑜伽 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数。) With the success of YOLO (You Only Live Once)《热辣滚烫》, the topic of losing weight in a healthy way becomes hot again. During the interview, Jia Ling, the main role, gives us some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．古人说过：“不积小流，无以成江海。”生活中，一些细小的习惯看似不起眼，实则力量无穷。改掉坏毛病，养成良好的习惯并长期坚持，足以获益一生。请你根据以下写作提示和要求，以“Good habits make me…”为题写一篇英语短文。 写作要点：1. 介绍你过去有什么坏习惯； 2. 你是怎样改掉那些坏习惯的； 3. 你对养成好习惯有什么建议。 写作要求：1. 请将题目补充完整； 2. 文中不要出现所在班级和师生姓名； 3. 100词左右。 Good habits make me… ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．一个人的成功离不开勤奋和努力，也离不开良好的习惯。有的人每晚睡觉前都要读一刻钟的书；有的人坚持每天早上起来锻炼身体；有的人有很严格的饮食习惯；还有的人每天一定要睡够8个小时……好的生活与学习习惯对我们的成长是非常重要的。请从以下的习惯中选择一个你以前没有，但现在已具备的好习惯。谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程及收获。 要点提示：sleeping habits; learning habits; eating habits; exercising habits 写作要求：（1）语言流畅，逻辑清晰，不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息；（2）内容完整，书写整齐，词数90-100。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．“时代楷模”张桂梅老师的事迹感动了无数人，请根据下面表格中的内容，用英语写一篇文章，介绍一下这位平凡而又伟大的好老师。 20年前 现在 外貌 直发，大眼睛，中等身材。 比以前瘦了很多。 日常活动 每天五点钟起床， 与学生们同吃同住，陪学生们学习。虽然很累，但是仍然坚持工作到晚上12点半才睡觉。生活艰苦，经常是一碗面条作为午饭和晚饭，把钱都花在帮助学生上。 仍然坚持早起，更加努力工作，帮助学生取得更好的成绩，使她们的梦想成为现实。 评价 张桂梅老师的故事触碰到了我们的内心。我们应该向她学习。 要求： 1. 必须包含以上所给要点，可适当发挥，但不能出现真实姓名和校名； 2. 注意人称、时态，要求条理清晰，语意连贯，字迹工整； 3. 不少于80 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Have you heard of Zhang Guimei? Now let me tell you something about the great teacher. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．二十大代表们的感人发言，总是深深地触动着我们。其中“大山深处的守梦人”刘秀祥自立自强，坚守梦想的精神更是让我们动容，根据下面的思维导图内容提示，请以“How should we learn from Liu Xiuxiang?”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下他的故事，并谈谈自己的做法和感悟。 要求: 1.书写认真规范， 词数不少于80词， 开头已给出不计入总词数； 2.短文必须包括所有要点提示， 语句通顺， 意思连贯， 可适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 How should we learn from Liu Xiuxiang? Liu Xiuxiang is a common man but does a great job. We should learn from him. Now, let me tell you something about him. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．学校即将举行一次英语演讲比赛，你决定介绍美国著名作家海伦·凯勒的生平。请根据下列提示写一篇80字左右的演讲稿。 1. 海伦·凯勒( Helen Keller)出生于1880年。她小时候因患病导致失明和失聪(deaf  adj.)； 2. 在她七岁的时候，她遇见了一位耐心善良的老师Ann Sullivan。在莎莉文老师(Ann Sullivan) 的帮助下，她学会了阅读、写作，还学会了说话，并进入哈佛大学(Harvard University) 学习； 3. 她最终成为了世界著名的作家。她的成功鼓励了全世界成千上万的人。 4. 谈谈你的看法或感悟 (坚持/永不放弃/……) Ladies and Gentlemen, I would like to tell you something about a famous American writer Helen Keller. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening. 15．水滴穿石，绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事，成就更好的自己。你校英语社将举办以“One Thing I Keep Doing”为题的演讲比赛，请根据下面的内容要求写一篇文章参赛。 内容： 1. 你坚持做的事情； 2. 你的理由； 3. 它带给你的影响或改变。 要求： 1. 内容须涵盖所有要点； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯；语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4. 100词左右。 (开头已给出，不计入总词数。) One Thing I Keep Doing Good morning, everyone! It’s my great honor to be here to make a speech today. My topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 9 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．例文 Last week, we did a survey about factors that have an influence on learning among 1000 students. Here are the results. 30% of the students think methods are the most important while 28% choose habits. There are 14% of the students who believe interest. 10% of the students choose attitude. Only 10% prefer willpower and 7% like others better. As far as I’m concerned, there is no denying that nothing is more important than interest. Three years ago, I entered the new school and I couldn’t remember lots of English words. At that moment, I felt upset and didn’t know what I could do. Later, thanks to my teacher, she encouraged me to connect what I should do with something interesting. After hearing her words, I began to put more efforts into listening to English songs and watch sports programs that I prefer in English. Finally, I made much progress and a strong sense of satisfaction rose from the bottom of my heart. From this experience, I have realized that not only does interest improve my study, but also makes me form a good habit of life. Just as the saying goes, “Interest is the first step to knowledge.” 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏有关影响学习因素的调查结果的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“对九年级1000名学生展开了有关影响学习因素的调查，下图是统计结果”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“调查结果、亲身经历、自己的认识等”几个方面重点介绍有关影响学习因素的调查结果的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①as far as I’m concerned就我而言 ②thanks to幸亏 ③make progress取得进步 ④not only…but also…不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①As far as I’m concerned, there is no denying that nothing is more important than interest. (“There be”句型) ②Later, thanks to my teacher, she encouraged me to connect what I should do with something interesting. (what引导的宾语从句) 2．One possible version: Grow Through Difficulties I still remember that experience. When I came to my middle school, I was too quiet to talk to anyone. So I had no friends. I was very sad. I knew I had to find some ways to make some friends. First, I tried to smile to my classmates when I saw them. To my surprise, they smiled back to me. What’s more, I took an active part in the after-school activities in our class. One month later, I felt it easy to talk to others and had many friends. If you take the difficulties seriously, you can grow through difficulties. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：本文以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：题目要求根据提示谈谈自己克服困难的一次经历，并分享一下自己学到了什么。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步聚] 第一步，开篇点题； 第二步，具体介绍自己克服困难的一次经历； 第三步，最后表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① have to 不得不 ② try to do 努力做 ③ to one’s surprise 让某人吃惊的是 [高分句型] ①When I came to my middle school, I was too quiet to talk to anyone.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②One month later, I felt it easy to talk to others and had many friends.(it作形式宾语) 3．例文 In some far away mountainous areas of China, students have to go on a ropeway to school. Although it is very dangerous, children never want to give up their dreams. We can take a car or our parents drive us to school every day, but sometimes we don’t want to go to school. We don’t listen carefully in class and don’t finish our homework carefully. Compared with them, why don’t we study hard? Sometimes we don’t have to worry about food and clothes. We think everyone is like this. So we must cherish the good time now and study hard to realize our dreams. An inch of time is an inch of gold. Time is money. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求根据提示内容写一篇演讲稿，参加以“惜少年时，立鸿鹄志”为主题的演讲。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一、三人称为主。作文先介绍图中孩子的上学方式及坚持原因，然后联系对比现在同学的上学条件和认知，最后提出自己的倡议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 4．例文 Hello, everyone! I’d like to give you my report. As a middle school student, I want to be a civilized student, a strong-minded person and a master of my fate. First, it’s our duty to study well. We should try our best to listen carefully, finish our homework and make progress step by step. Secondly, we should also take up some hobbies to have a colorful life, such as playing basketball, joining a music club and so on instead of playing mobile games. I think it’s necessary to share some housework with our parents. It can develop our independence. Besides, we should be polite, kind and honest to others. Then we can have more friends and our road will be wider. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当发挥，语意要通顺，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己在学习方面的建议； 第二步，介绍自己在生活方面的建议； 第三步，介绍自己在言行举止方面的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①try one’s best to do sth 尽某人最大的努力做某事 ②take up开始从事 ③instead of而非，而不是 [高分句型] I think it’s necessary to share some housework with our parents. (宾语从句) 5．例文 Everyone has his own role model. Dr. Zhong Nanshan is my role model. Zhong Nanshan was born on October 20, 1936. Although he is 85 years old, he still keeps exercising every day. He is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century. He is brave, warm-hearted and knowledgeable. When Covid-19 began to spread, he went to lots of dangerous places to help others. He defeated the epidemic bravely and did not give up rescuing patients. I learned a lot from him. First of all, we should keep doing exercise to keep ourselves healthy. Secondly, we should be always ready to help others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体介绍钟南山的基本信息； 第二步，阐述在疫情期间，钟南山的事迹； 第三步，最后说明从钟南山身上学到的优点。 [亮点词汇] ①Although尽管 ②keep doing sth一直做某事 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①He is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century.（one of+最高级+名词复数“……中最……之一”） ②First of all, we should keep doing exercise to keep ourselves healthy.（动词不定式作目的状语） 6．范文： 简单版： It’s important to have a healthy lifestyle. To keep healthy, I keep a balanced diet. I try to have a glass of milk every day and eat less junk food. I eat food from different groups to get different nutrients that my body needs. Besides, taking exercise is another way for me to keep healthy. On school days, I actively take part in sports activities at school. On weekends, I usually go to parks with my family or play basketball with my friends. I benefit a lot from these healthy living habits. I become fit and strong. It really helps me have enough energy for the whole-day study and enjoy my happy life! Thank you for listening! 丰富版： It’s important to have a healthy lifestyle. First of all, good eating habits play an important role in living a healthy life. I try to eat a variety of healthy food for each meal. For breakfast, I like to have some bread, an egg and a glass of milk, which are rich in proteins. For lunch, I usually have some meat and vegetables. They provide me with the energy to focus on the afternoon lessons. For dinner, my mother always prepares different kinds of food to help me take in balanced nutrients. Besides eating, I do sports regularly. I run for half an hour three times a week to keep up my strength. On weekends, I always spend about 2 hours playing basketball with my friends. After doing sports, I feel refreshed and full of energy. My healthy living habits benefit me a lot. I become healthy both in body and mind, which helps me to enjoy a happy life. In addition, the process of developing healthy habits enables me to have a better control of my own life. I’m proud of my healthy lifestyle. Hearing my speech, do you want to live a healthy life? Join me now! Thanks for listening! 【详解】（简单版） [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍健康的生活习惯很重要，引出话题（题目已给出）； 第二步，具体介绍自己的饮食习惯以及运动习惯等； 第三步，介绍健康的生活习惯给自己带来的好处，并结束文章。 [亮点词汇] ① a glass of一杯 ② keep healthy保持健康 ③ on weekends在周末 [高分句型] ① Besides, taking exercise is another way for me to keep healthy.（动名词作主语） ② To keep healthy, I keep a balanced diet.（不定式作目的状语） 7． A model student in my school Everyone wants to be a model student. I think Liu Ping is the model student in my school. Liu Ping is a nice girl. Although she lives far away from school, she is never late for class. She is clever and hard-working. She always gets good marks. Although math is not easy for her, she never gives it up. She is a very kind and helpful girl. Although she isn’t strong, she often helps teachers. Although she has a lot of things to do, she always helps us. She often helps me with my English. I think I can learn a lot from Liu Ping, for example being always ready to help others. I can also learn how to study from her. That’s why I think Liu Ping is a model student. I like her very much! I think she will always be the model student in my school. Do you think so? 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中对学校模范生的介绍以及从中学到了什么。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山直接介绍谁是学校的模范生。 第二步，具体阐述喜欢这个模范生的原因。 第三步，具体阐述从模范生身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ① gives it up放弃它 ② being always ready to help others总是乐于助人 ③ a very kind and helpful girl一个非常善良和乐于助人的女孩 ④ learn a lot from Liu Ping从刘萍身上学到很多 [高分句型] ① Although she lives far away from school, she is never late for class.（although引导让步状语从句） ② She often helps me with my English. （help sb. with sth.表示在某方面帮助某人） ③ I think I can learn a lot from Liu Ping, for example being always ready to help others.（for example用于举例子） 8．例文：      Hi, everyone! I just read an article about Jeanette, an astronaut on the International Space Station (ISS) and I’d like to introduce her daily life in space.      Jeanette’s day starts with a wake-up call, and then she works for 12 hours. She does various tasks, such as doing scientific experiments, taking pictures with cameras, having conversations with scientists on the earth, and cleaning equipment.      For meals, Jeanette has three daily meals with beverages and snacks. In addition, she also spends about two hours on exercise to stay fit.      I am amazed by Jeanette’s daily life on the ISS. Her dedication to scientific research and her ability to adapt to life in space is truly inspiring.      Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作方向已给出，写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容，注意表述清晰，逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山说明写这篇文章的目的； 第二步，介绍Jeanette的日常生活； 第三步，写出对Jeanette在国际空间站日常生活的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①start with…以……开头 ②such as例如 ③In addition除此之外 [高分句型] ①She does various tasks, such as doing scientific experiments, taking pictures with cameras, having conversations with scientists on the earth and cleaning equipment.（such as例如） ②In addition, she also spends about two hours on exercise to stay fit.（spend+时间+on sth.在某事上花费时间） 9．例文 With the success of YOLO (You Only Live Once)《热辣滚烫》, the topic of losing weight in a healthy way becomes hot again. During the interview, Jia Ling, the main role, gives us some advice. First of all, we should learn to control our diet and it’s a good idea to eat some low-fat food, like fish, fruit and vegetables. Besides, we had better drink more water. She advises us to drink at least eight cups of water so that we won’t feel hungry easily. And remember the ways of exercise we choose must be fit for us, such as running, swimming and doing yoga. Also, don’t forget to plan our time properly, so we can get into good living habits. Above all, it’s necessary that we have a strong will to keep doing it. As far as I’m concerned, we can achieve success as long as we stick to the end. Losing weight is certainly good for our health, but remember to do it in a scientific way. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据所给主要内容提示具体介绍科学减肥、健康生活的建议； 第二步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ① first of all首先 ② advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事 ③ such as比如 ④ above all最重要的 ⑤ as far as I’m concerned就我而言 [高分句型] ①She advises us to drink at least eight cups of water so that we won’t feel hungry easily. （目的状语从句） ②Above all, it’s necessary that we have a strong will to keep doing it.（it作形式主语） 10．例文： Good habits make me healthy Good habits can make a great difference to our lives. As for me, good habits make me healthy. I used to eat junk food after school. I didn’t do much exercise and often stayed up late at night. Because of those bad habits, I always felt tired and sleepy in class. To change the condition, my mom decided to push me to have good eating and exercising habits. She asked me to eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food. With her help, I took up sports like running and swimming. These habits have changed my life and made me much healthier. So, let’s develop good habits as early as possible. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己过去有什么坏习惯。 第二步，介绍自己是怎样改掉那些坏习惯的。 第三步，对养成好习惯提出一些建议。 [亮点词汇] ①make a great difference产生很大的不同 ②used to do过去常常做某事 ③stayed up late熬夜 [高分句型] ①She asked me to eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food. (动词不定式作宾语补足语) ②So, let’s develop good habits as early as possible. (祈使句) 11．例文      My good habit is early to bed and early to rise. Years ago, when I was a primary pupil, I liked reading books in bed. Every day after I finished my homework, I lay in bed until midnight. The next day I couldn’t get up on time. I used to be late for school, and I felt tired in class. It was too bad. With the help of my teacher and my parents, I gave up the bad habit. Ever since then, I go to bed early and get up early. I never go to school late again. As a result, I’m much stronger and doing better at school now. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；   ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，描述自己养成这个好习惯的过程以及这个习惯给自己带来的收获。不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤]   第一步，点明主题，介绍自己的好习惯是什么；   第二步，具体阐述养成这个好习惯的过程；   第三步，最后书写结尾，好习惯带来的好处。   [亮点词汇]   ①get up起床 ②on time准时 ③used to do sth.过去常常 ④With the help of在……帮助下 ⑤give up放弃 ⑥early to bed and early to rise早睡早起 ⑦As a result因此 [高分句型]   ①Years ago, when I was a primary pupil, I liked reading books in bed.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I used to be late for school, and I felt tired in class.（and并列句） 12．例文 Have you heard of Zhang Guimei? Now let me tell you something about the great teacher. 20 years ago, she had long straight hair and big eyes. She was of medium build. She got up at 5 in the morning every day. She ate, lived and studied with her students. Though she was tired, she still went to sleep at about 12：30 at night. She lived a poor life. She often ate one bowl of noodles for lunch and dinner. However, she spent all her money helping her students. Now she is getting older. She wears glasses. She is much thinner than before. But she still keeps getting up early and works harder than before. She will keep helping her students to get better grades and make their dreams come true. Her story really touches our hearts. She is the most beautiful teacher in China. We should learn from her. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍20年前张老师的形象及日常活动； 第二步，介绍现在张老师的情况； 第三步，对张老师进行评价。 [亮点词汇] ①through通过 ②however然而 [高分句型] ①Though she was tired, she still went to sleep at about 12:30 at night. （Though引导的让步状语从句。） ②She will keep helping her students to get better grades and make their dreams come true. （and表并列。） 13．例文 How should we learn from Liu Xiuxiang? Liu Xiuxiang is a common man but does a great job. We should learn from him. Now, let me tell you something about him. At the age of 4, his father died and his mother got ill. He looked after his mother and cooked after school. He was more hard-working than his classmates. In 2012, he gave up a good job in the city and chose to go back to his hometown. He became a teacher there. He helped more than 1800 students to go back to school. Although I have to take classes online, I also need to listen carefully in class and finish homework on time after class. When I are free, I can help my parents do housework. Sometimes I can read books. In my opinion, the harder I study in class, the better life I will have. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：介绍刘秀祥自立自强，坚守梦想的故事，时态为“一般过去时”；谈自己的做法和感悟，时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生需要注意不要遗漏思维导图内容提示中的介绍要点。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍刘秀祥个人家庭情况和他的经历； 第二步，介绍自己从刘秀祥身上学到了什么以及自己的做法； 第三步，介绍自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①at the age of 在……岁的时候 ②more hard-working than 比……更努力 ③take classes online 上网课 [高分句型] ①Although I have to take classes online, I also need to listen carefully in class and finish homework on time after class. （Although引导的让步状语从句） ②In my opinion, the harder I study in class, the better life I will have.（“the+比较级，the+比较级”句型） 14．例文： Ladies and Gentlemen, I would like to tell you something about a famous American writer Helen Keller. Helen Keller was born in 1880. When she was a child, she was seriously ill. So she became blind and deaf. She couldn’t see anything or hear anything. Her parents are very sad. At the age of seven, she met a kind and patient teacher, Ann Sullivan. With the help of the teacher, she learnt how to read and write. And she learnt to speak. Later, she was admitted to Harvard University. Finally, she became a famous writer. Her success encourage so thousands of people. She sets a good example to all of us. We should not give up when facing with difficulty. We have set ourselves a difficult task, but we will succeed if we persevere; and we will find joy in overcoming obstacles. That’s all. Thank you for your listening. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求介绍凯勒的生平和个人经历，并讲述自己对她的看法。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主，讲述凯勒的人生经历和自己的评价和感悟，要叙述完整，条理清晰。 15．例文 One Thing I Keep Doing Good morning, everyone! It’s my great honor to be here to make a speech today. My topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”. I love running and I have kept running for three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports and running was always my weakness. I often failed in my running test. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school. Sometimes, I was so tired that I really wanted to give up. But I kept telling myself that I could make it. No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to keep running. Now I do much better in running. I’m very proud of myself and I’m ready for any challenge in the future. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所列三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍自己演讲的主题，引出自己坚持做的事情； 第二步，陈述理由； 第三步，坚持做的事带给你的影响或改变； 第四步，书写总结并感谢大家。 ［亮点词汇］ ① be proud of 以……为自豪 ② catch up with 赶上 ［高分句型］ ① No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to keep running. (no matter what引导让步状语从句) ② Sometimes, I was so tired that I really wanted to give up. (so that引导结果状语从句) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 13 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$