Unit2 Family ties 单元话题（家庭关系）写作满分范文15篇-2024-2025学年六年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（牛津上海版2024）

Unit 2 Family ties 单元话题（家庭关系）写作满分范文15篇 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 一、书面表达 1．每个人都应该熟知自己的妈妈。你的妈妈每天都在忙什么呢?请以“My Mother’s Busy Day”为题，向我们描述一下你妈妈一天的活动吧！ 要求：条理清晰，时态准确。词数60词以上。 My Mother’s Busy Day ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．根据以下要点介绍你的姐姐Cathy。 1. 她是一位老师，有健康的饮食习惯，非常喜欢锻炼， 2. 家在学校附近，走路或骑自行车上班，上班从不迟到， 3. 擅长弹钢琴，加入了音乐俱乐部， 4. 喜欢动物，认为猫很可爱， 5. 补充一至两点个人想法。 提示词：eating habit饮食习惯   near在附近   enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事 注意：1、文中不得透露个人姓名和班级； 2、不得逐条翻译，内容要连贯得体； 3、文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 4、60-80字。     My sister is Cathy. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “My family” (以“我的家”为题写一篇短文不少于50字的短文。) Suggested questions: 1. How is your family? 2. What jobs do your family members do? 2. What do you usually do with your family members? 3. Do you like your family? Why or why not? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是李华，你和你的美国朋友Helen正在网上聊天，她想知道你的家人正在做什么，请你根据表格中的提示写一段话向她介绍相关情况。 要求： 1.内容须包含表格内所有信息，可适当发挥。 2.60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3.不得出现真实校名、班名及姓名。 4.有卷面分。 爷爷 在公园散步 奶奶 在客厅浇花 爸爸 在客厅读报纸 妈妈 在厨房洗碗 妹妹 在卧室做作业 提示词组：water the flowers Hi, Helen, good evening. Now, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．书面表达 假如下面是你父母为你制定的一些规矩。请你以“My family rules”为题，用英语写一篇短文来介绍一下。 1.每天六点必须起床，起点去上学； 2.下午六点前必须回家； 3.不能在外面吃饭； 4.在上学日，不能看电视和玩电脑游戏； 5.九点半之前必须上床睡觉。 要求：字迹工整，条理清晰，表达准确，可适当发挥，60词左右。 My family rules I have many rules in my family. _________________________________________________ 6．昨天是你奶奶72岁的生日，你和你的家人给她过了个开心、快乐的生日。早晨，你的妈妈为她煮了一碗面和两个鸡蛋。下午，你们去购物，为她买了一件漂亮的大衣。晚上，你们还为她准备了一顿丰盛的晚餐。你们唱生日歌，享受美食，过得很开心。 请根据以上信息写一篇50词左右的短文。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．你的父母很严厉吗？他们会给你制定很多规则吗？假如你有权利给你父母定规则，你会给他们制定哪些规则呢？请结合下列提示，以“Rules for my parents”为题，写一篇英语短文。 提示： 规则 原因 *不要一直玩手机、看电视 *多和我交谈 *早睡早起 补充一点… *拥有好习惯 *建立幸福的家庭 … 要求：1.不得出现真实的人名、校名； 2.词数：50-60词左右； Rules for my parents My parents are very strict with me and they make so many rules for me. I think they need some rules, too._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李华，你收到你的英国朋友Cathy的邮件，她最近在与父母的相处中遇到了一些问题。请你根据下列提示给她回一封电子邮件，并给出建议帮助她更好地与父母相处。 要点提示： 1.表达对她的想念之情并希望她有机会来中国做客； 2.给出建议，帮助她更好地与父母相处； 3.介绍一下你现在的生活状况：期末考试即将到来，正在努力学习，很忙但很开心； 4.希望了解她最近的生活情况。 注意： 1.参考词汇：尊敬(respect)、普遍的(common)； 2.词数：70词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 To: Cathy From: Li Hua Dear Cathy, How are you doing? I’m so glad to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes to you! Yours, Li Hua 9．和睦的家庭关系能让每个家庭成员都健康快乐成长，激发每个人的潜能，让整个家庭越来越幸福。你校校刊英语专栏以“幸福家庭”为话题发起征文，请你讲述你平时是如何与父母和睦相处的点滴，分享你觉得有用的建议，以供他人借鉴和学习。 要求： 1. 80-120词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Be good with parents Share Care Activity … help with housework share … with… school life communicate… with… … care for... keep healthy should … shouldn’t… exercise eat vegetables and fruit … hold family activities get together go fishing have a trip have a big dinner climb mountains … … _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假如你是林涛，你和你的美国朋友Lucy正在网上聊天，她想知道你的家人正在做什么。请你根据表格中的提示写一段话向她介绍相关情况。 要求：60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Grandfather take a walk in the park Grandmother water the flowers in the living room Father read a newspaper in the living room Mother wash the dishes in the kitchen Sister do her homework in her bedroom Hi, Lucy, good evening. Now, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．假如你是露西(Lucy)，请你根据下面的图片信息，以“My family”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你的家人。 要求：1. 须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 词数：60词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：like喜欢；ball球 My family Hello, I’m Lucy. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．假如你是李平，你的英国朋友Mark来信询问你和家人的周末计划，请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。 写作要点： 1. 表达对他的思念（miss）； 2. 介绍你和家人本周末的计划： （1）爸爸：打扫房间；和朋友打篮球； （2）妈妈：洗衣服；做晚餐； （3）你：做作业；去书店看书。 3. 认为你和家人的周末过得有意义（meaningful），并询问Mark如何度过（spend）周末。 （此要点只需翻译所给两句信息，无需扩展） 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少50词。 Dear Mark, Happy to hear from you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping 13．假设你是李华，你所在的阳光校区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据所给图表的内容，给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。 注意事项： 1.词数：100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥。 Dear Sir, Dear Sir, I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. In my family...________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．漫漫人生路，只要有父爱、母爱陪伴，不管走到哪，都是一场温暖的旅程。第30个国际家庭日(International Day of Families)来临之际，李平作为班长，给全班同学写了一封倡议书，让同学们了解国际家庭日，并鼓励同学们和父母融洽相处。写作要点： 1. 介绍国际家庭日：每年的5月15日；其目的是使家庭幸福。 2. 介绍有时和父母产生问题的原因： （1）父母规矩太多 （2）过于关注成绩 3. 说说中学生应如何与父母融洽相处。 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实姓名、地名、学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear classmates, It’s a great pleasure that the International Day of Families is coming. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Li Ping 15．假如你是Gina Green，下面是你的全家福照片。请以“My family”为题向同学们介绍你和你的家庭成员。 内容提示：名字，年龄，电话号码，喜欢的颜色，职业…… 要求： 1. 认真审题，把握要点，条理清楚，书写规范。 2. 文章中不能出现你的真实姓名、班级及学校。 3. 字数：60 词左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 9 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．例文： My Mother’s Busy Day My mother is busy every day. She gets up at six o’clock and then she takes a quick shower. She eats breakfast at half past six and then she goes to work. She gets back home at six thirty. Then she cooks dinner for me. After dinner, she sometimes watches TV. But usually she helps me with my homework. She goes to bed at about twenty to eleven. I love my mother! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”讲述妈妈日常忙碌的一天。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引言，导入正文； 第二步，依照时间顺序讲述妈妈一天的活动； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①get up 起床 ②go to work 去上班 ③help sb with sth 帮助某人某事 [高分句型] ①She eats breakfast at half past six and then she goes to work.（使用并列连词） ②After dinner, she sometimes watches TV.（使用频度副词） 2．范文： My sister is Cathy. She is a teacher. She has healthy eating habits and likes exercise very much. Her home is near the school. She walks or rides a bike to work. She’s never late for work. She is good at playing the piano and joined the music club. She likes animals and thinks cats are cute. I think she is very friendly and helpful. 【详解】[整体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：采用一般现在时； ③提示：要求包含所有要点，并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍Cathy的职业信息、家庭信息以及个人爱好； 第二步：介绍自己对Cathy的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①be near the school靠近学校 ②be good at擅长 ③be late for迟到 [高分句型] ①I think she is very friendly and helpful.（宾语从句） 3．例文： There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents, and I. My father is an English teacher,and he teaches in a high school. My mother works as a doctor in a hospital. On weekends, we always go to a park for a walk. We sometimes go to the movies with my grandparents on Saturdays. I like my family because we love each other. We are very happy. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍家人情况、职业、周末与家人的活动，并谈谈与家人的情感。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家人的情况； 第二步，介绍家人的职业、周末与家人的活动； 第三步，谈谈与家人的情感。 [亮点词汇] ① work as 担任……工作 ② go to a park for a walk 去公园散步 ③ love each other 相亲相爱 [高分句型] ① There are five people in my family.（使用There be句型） ② I like my family because we love each other.（使用because引导的原因状语从句） 4．例文 Hi, Helen, good evening. Now, my grandfather isn’t at home. He is taking a walk in the park. My grandmother likes flowers very much, and she is watering the flowers in the living room. My father is in the living room, too. He is reading a newspaper. My mother is washing the dishes in the kitchen. My sister is doing her homework in our bedroom. She always studies hard. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“现在进行时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍家人现在正在做什么； 第二步，具体介绍家人现在正在做什么； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①at home在家 ②very much非常 ③read a newspaper读报纸 ④study hard努力学习 [高分句型] ①He is taking a walk in the park. (运用现在进行时) ②My mother is washing the dishes in the kitchen. (介词短语作地点状语) 5．My family rules I have many rules in my family. Every morning I have to get up at six o’clock and go to school at seven o’clock. After school I must get home before six o’clock in the afternoon. And I can’t eat out. I can’t watch TV or play computer games on school days. And I must go to bed before nine thirty in the evening. I don’t like these rules. 【详解】本题要求是假如下面是你父母为你制定的一些规矩。请你以“My family rules”为题，用英语写一篇短文来介绍一下。这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇关于行为礼貌方面的短文。要点中给出的材料比较全面，动笔前一定要认真阅读内容要点，根据内容要点组织材料，确定句子人称，时态等问题。可以先把各要点用句子表达出来，然后再组合成文，注意应用给出的参考词汇。写作中注意语意通顺，符合逻辑关系，为了使短文更显得有逻辑性，补充的个人看法注意采用一些习惯的句式，固定短语，以使自己的征文显得更有文采。写完后多读几遍，适当修改。 【点睛】这是一篇不错的文中，文中运用到了一些好的句型: After school I must get home before six o’clock in the afternoon.; I can’t watch TV or play computer games on school days.给文章增色不少。 6．例文： It was my grandmother’s birthday yesterday. She is 72 years old. She was very happy yesterday. In the morning, my mother cooked two eggs and a bowl of noodles for her. In the afternoon, we went shopping and bought a beautiful coat for her. She likes it very much. In the evening, we cooked a big dinner. We sang the song Happy Birthday to You and enjoyed the delicious food. Each of us had a good time. 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，记叙全家人给奶奶过生日的一天，所给的要点提示必须全部包括，该短文为50词左右。 2.写作指导：写作时应用第一人称，时态应用过去时。写作时全部要点都要包含在内，条理要清晰，不要出现单词、语法使用错误。 7．例文 Rules for my parents My parents are very strict with me and they make so many rules for me. I think they need some rules, too. First, don’t keep playing on the phone or watching TV at home. Second, talk to me often about my happiness and sadness. And then, go to bed early and get up early. It’s good for health. Lastly, don’t drink too much wine and eat more fruit and vegetables. I think these rules are important. They can help my parents have good habits. We can get on well and help us have a happy family. So they must follow these rules. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给提示，以“给我父母的规则”为题写一篇短文。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，人称采用第一人称和第三人称相结合。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段列出父母应该遵循哪些规则；最后一段表达这些规则会带来的好处。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 8． 例文 Dear Cathy, How are you doing? I’m so glad to hear from you. I miss you very much. And I hope you can have the opportunity to visit China. In our daily life, it is normal for us to have some problems with our parents. If you have a problem, first you should respect your parents, don’t quarrel with them. Next, you should have a good talk with your parents about your problems so that they can understand you. Recently I am busy with the final exam and study every day. Although I am busy, I am also happy. Can you tell me what’s going on with you? Best wishes to you!                                                                                                                                                                        Yours,                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给要点提示，给Cathy回一封邮件，给出建议帮助她更好地与父母相处。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己对她的思念以及邀请她来中国； 第二步，具体阐述你的建议； 第三步，介绍自己的生活状况。 [亮点词汇] ①daily life日常生活 ②quarrel with sb和某人争吵 ③be busy with忙于 [高分句型] ①If you have a problem, first you should respect your parents, don’t quarrel with them.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②you should have a good talk with your parents about your problems so that they can understand you.（so that引导的目的状语从句） 9．例文 Being good with parents is important for students. It can make everyone grow up happily. But how can we be good with parents? Here is my advice. First, we should help with housework. I usually sweep the floor, and do some washing at the weekend. Second, we had better communicate with them as much as possible. For example, I often share some interesting school life with them. Third, we should care for them. Health should come first. I think parents should eat more vegetables and fruit and do more exercise in order to keep healthy. They shouldn’t stay up late. Last but not least, we can hold family activities. I sometimes go fishing with my father. At the weekend, my family have a big dinner together. In a word, we should spend more time with parents and pay more attention to them. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头引出本文；   第二步，分享如何和父母相处的建议； 第三步，总结概括。   [亮点词汇]   ①communicate with与……沟通   ②share sth with sb与某人分享某物   ③care for关心   [高分句型]   ①I think parents should eat more vegetables and fruit and do more exercise in order to keep healthy.（宾语从句） 10．例文 Hi, Lucy, good evening. Now, my grandfather isn’t at home. He is taking a walk in the park. My grandmother likes flowers very much, and she is watering the flowers in the living room. My father is in the living room, too. He is reading a newspaper. My mother is washing the dishes in the kitchen. My sister is doing her homework in our bedroom. She always studies hard. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“现在进行时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 承接开头，依次介绍各个家庭成员正在做的事情。 [亮点词汇] ①at home在家 ②take a walk散步 ③study hard努力学习 [高分句型] My grandmother likes flowers very much, and she is watering the flowers in the living room.（and连接的并列句） 11．One possible version: My family Hello, I’m Lucy. This is a photo of my family. There are four people in my family. This is my father. His name is Dale. His telephone number is 356-7858. He likes brown. His jacket is brown. This is my mother. Her name is Helen. Her bike is red and blue. Her telephone number is 356-7689. The little boy is my brother Mike. He is five. His ball is white. I’m eleven. I like purple. My bag is purple. I love my family! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“My family”为题，根据图片信息进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出对家人的介绍； 第二步，具体介绍家人信息； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①a photo of一张……的照片 ②telephone number电话号码 [高分句型] There are four people in my family.（There be句型） 12．例文 Dear Mark, Happy to hear from you. How are you doing these days? I really miss you very much! As you think, the weekend of my family will be busy but happy. My father is going to clean our rooms on Saturday. On Sunday, he is going to play basketball with his friends. Different from my father, my mother is going to wash clothes on the weekend and she will cook a big dinner for us. As for me, I’m going to do my homework. After finishing it, I will go to the bookstore and read books there. I think our weekend is very meaningful. How do you usually spend your weekends? Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封回信，属于书信作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接信件开头，表达对Mark的思念； 第二步，根据提示介绍你和家人本周末的计划，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，评价并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①as sb think正如某人所想的那样 ②as for sb至于某人 [高分句型] ①I think our weekend is very meaningful.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句） 13．例文 Dear Sir, I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress. In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family. What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood. It’s really beautiful. Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations. I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer. Yours Faithfully Jack 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于书信作文，根据所给图表的内容写一封推荐信，推荐自己的家庭参加“模范家庭”的评选，要适当发挥。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，用第一人称进行写作。第一段紧接开头，从家庭成员、邻里关系、绿色生活和慈善活动等方面详细说明了参加评选的理由；第二段表达殷切的希望。检查时注意是否遗漏要点，语言表达是否符英文习惯。 14．例文： Dear classmates, It’s a great pleasure that the International Day of Families is coming. The International Day of Families is on May 15, which aims to make families happy. Keeping a harmonious family relationship is very important for our study and life. We often quarrel with our parents. In my opinion, there are too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me. So how to keep a good relationship with parents? In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future. That’s all! Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示给出的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“对国际家庭日的介绍”来引出下文中与父母产生问题的原因； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“规矩太多和过分关注成绩”两方面入手，重点介绍和父母产生问题的原因； ③第三步，书写结语。介绍与父母相处融洽的具体方式。 [亮点词汇] ①aim to 目的是 ②quarrel with sb 与某人争吵 ③in one’s opinion 在某人看来 ④pay attention to 关注 ⑤in order to 为了 [高分句型] ①The International Day of Families is on May 15, which aims to make families happy.（which引导的定语从句） ②Keeping a harmonious family relationship is very important for our study and life.（动名词作主语） ③Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.（although引导的让步状语从句+that引导的宾语从句） 15．例文                                                                                               My big family      Hello, my name is Gina Green. I have a big family. In the middle of the picture is me, and dad and mom are on each side of me. They love me very much, My father is a designer, and he works in Foshan. My mother is an Enlish teacher in a middle school. She likes pink best. And on the left side is cat-kitty, it is cute with white hair. It is 2 years old. And then is my grandma, she is 68 years old now, she is very kind and red is her favorite color. On the right side is our dog-Betty! It is black and I like it very much. Between my mom and Betty is my grandpa, he is 68 years old, too. My grandpa likes brown best and he also loves me. Our telephone number is 35678898. We are a big family! And I love my family! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时时； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“职业”这一点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。介绍我的一家； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“名字、年龄、电话号码、喜欢的颜色、职业”几个方面重点介绍我的一家； 第三步，书写结语。表达我对我家庭的热爱。 [亮点词汇] ① in the middle of 在……的中间 ② like...best 最喜欢…… [高分句型] ① My father is a designer, and he works in Foshan. （and连接的并列句） ② And on the left side is cat-kitty, it is cute with white hair.（with作伴随状语） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 11 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$