必修第一册Unit 3 Family matters(读后续写之心理情感3)-同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(外研版2019)

Unit 3 Family matters 单元写作深度指导 读后续写（心理情感描写3） (2018·浙江高考改编)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm, ” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper, ” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost! ”“OK! ”my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意: 续写词数应为150左右 　　Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.  __________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　We had no idea where we were and it got dark. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 Step 1: 审题布局 文体 记叙文 时态 一般过去时 原文分析 第一段: 交代故事的背景。介绍了度假的原因和地点 第二段: 简单地介绍了旅途 第三段: 对在农场的日常活动的简单介绍 第四段和续写故事的展开有很大的关系。这一段讲到了如何发生了我和爸爸去骑马的故事。而续写的内容就是在此基础上展开 写作思路 　　根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 这一句是故事发展的转折点, 可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开, 可以写马的反应, 也可以写人的反应, 但要注意与第二段首句相呼应 　　第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it got dark. 这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——不要误了吃晚饭, 可从如何寻路返回农场去写 Step 2: 词句激活 (1)美词: previous; in vain; at the point of desperation; a faint voice (2)佳句: ①Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off . ②Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. ③What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. Step 3: 要点梳理 要点1: 这个出其不意的出场让我的马疯狂地跑起来。 一般表达: This unexpected appearance made my horse run wildly. 句式升级(定语从句) This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly.   要点2: 尽管我很害怕, 我努力不(让自己)掉下马来。 一般表达: Although I was frightened, I tried not to fall off the horse. 　　句式升级(倒装句) Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off.   要点3: 我们只能沿着之前的路慢慢走回去。 一般表达: We could only go back along the previous track slowly. 句式升级(主语从句) 我们所能做的只有沿着之前的路慢慢走回去。 What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly.   Step 4: 衔接成篇 　　Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that we got lost. 　　We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We didn’t know where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation. Just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. “It must be Uncle Paul, ” I said. So we cried back with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride! 读后续写心理情感描写方式（三） ▲常用情感描写“喜悦、快乐”、“激动、感动”、“淡定、勇敢”、“悲伤、绝望”、“生气、愤怒” “焦虑、紧张” .“喜悦、快乐” 1. When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. 妈妈吻着他的脸,宝宝似乎非常开心. 2. She was walking on air after she found out she'd won the teaching award. 当发现自己获得了教学奖后,她有些得意忘形. 3.She shed tears of happiness/joy at the thought of being taken good care of. 想到受到细心照顾,她流下幸福的热泪. 4.He marched out of the classroom, whistling a merry tune. 他走出教室,吹着轻快的口哨. 5.As he listened, his mouth split into a big smile. 他边听边咧嘴笑. 6.When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin. 当我沐浴在阳光下,那感觉就像是琥珀色的阳光亲吻着我每一寸肌肤. 7.A sharp pleasure came over him. 他突然感到一阵愉悦. 8. Her imagination was busy, her reflections were pleasant and the pain of a sprained ankle was disregarded. 她浮想联翩,心里觉得喜滋滋的,早把脚踝的伤痛抛到九霄云外. 9.Her eyes gleamed and her fragile face broke into a smile. 她的眼睛闪烁着光芒,精致的脸庞展现出微笑. 10. She couldn't disguise her glee at their embarrassment. 看到他们难堪的样子她不禁喜形于色. 11.He rubbed his hands in glee as he thought of all the money he would make. 他想到自己将赚到那么多钱就高兴得直搓手. 12. The surface of the calm lake stirred the waves, and my mood was as cheerful as a wave. 平静的湖面激起了浪花,我的心情也像浪花一样欢腾. 13.He was tickled pink at the idea of taking a month's holiday at the expense of his company. 由公司出钱度假一个月,这个主意使他非常高兴. 14.The children were tickled pink with their new dress. 孩子们穿上新衣服很高兴. 15.I'm tickled pink to hear that Bob's asked Susan to marry him. 我听说鲍勃向苏珊求婚非常高兴. “激动、感动” 1. Seeing such extraordinary beauty, I think every cell in my body woke up. It was like discovering a whole new dimension of life .... My heart was beating wildly-I felt very exposed in such deep clear water. What a wonderful, limitless world it was down there! And what a tiny spot l was in this enormous world! 看到如此美丽的景色,我想我身体里的每一个细胞都醒了,就像发现了一个全新的生命维度.我的心在狂跳.我完全沉浸在这清澈见底的深水之中.那是一个多么美妙无限的世界！我在这个巨大的世界里是多么的渺小！ 2. Our excitement rose to fever pitch as the great day approached. 当伟大的日子即将到来之时,我们的激动达到了无以复加的地步. 3.A resounding cheer was heard throughout the gym, and I felt I couldn't contain myself. 体育馆里传来震耳欲聋的欢呼声,我觉得无法控制自己. 4. She swallowed a swelling lump in her throat and in tears hugged Jim tightly for a few minutes. As an old saying goes, there's no gift better than appreciation and gratitude. 喉咙似乎被什么东西堵住,她满眼泪水,紧紧地抱住吉姆.正如一句老话所说,没有什么东西比赞赏和谢意更好了. 5.When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. 当主持人宣布她获奖时她的激动之情溢于言表. 6.Hearing this, he split his sides with laughter. 听到这儿,他高兴得捧腹大笑. 7.Although Grandfather was old and gray-haired, his heart leaped with joy. 尽管大爷年老头发花白,他的心欢喜得砰砰直跳. 8. She read it over and a faint smile crossed her face. 她仔细读了一遍,脸上浮出淡淡的微笑. 9.Amused by his silly mistake, we almost laughed our head off. 我们被他愚蠢的错误逗乐了,几乎笑得前俯后仰. “淡定、勇敢” 1. He didn't even bat an eyelid when I told him about the robbery. 我告诉他抢劫事件时,他连眼皮都没眨一下. 2. She didn't bat an eyelid when they told her she'd lost her job. She just calmly walked out. 当他们告诉她她的工作丢了的时候,她连眼皮都没动一下,只是平静地走了出去. 3.No matter how agitated and upset other people get, Gill just plays it cool and gets on with her work. 不管其他人怎样焦虑不安、心烦意乱,吉尔只是若无其事地干自己的工作. 4. My back felt a little straighter, and my steps came a little quicker. 我的背挺直了些,步伐也加快了些. 5. Her exam results were disappointing but she tried to put a brave face on it. 她的考试成绩令人失望,但却装出若无其事的样子. 6.He seems happy, even though his wife left him and he lost his job. I think he's just trying to put on a brave face. 他看起来很高兴,即使他的妻子离开了他,他失去了工作.我觉得他只是想装得勇敢些. 7.Each clenched his fists and set his jaw when the order came to arrest the secret agents. 听说去抓特务,一个个都摩拳擦掌. 8.He failed again and again(with his head) bloody but unbowed. 他失败了一次又一次,但每次都虽败犹荣. 9. My young daughter is as brave as a lion and will tackle any of the boys in rough-and-tumble games. 我的小女儿非常勇敢,在做乱打游戏时敢与任何男孩较量. 10.To his surprise, the girl didn't turn a hair at the sight of the snake. 令他惊讶的是,那姑娘看到蛇以后一点也不惊慌. 11. Liu Hulan unflinchingly faced death under the butcher's knife of the enemy. 刘胡兰在敌人的屠刀面前大义凛然,视死如归. “悲伤、绝望” 1.My heart seemed to be torn. 我的心似乎被撕裂了. 2. The last word went like a bullet to my heart. 最后一句话像子弹一样射穿我的心脏. 3. I felt like I was floating in an ocean of sadness. 我觉得自己在悲伤的海里沉沉浮浮. 4.The gloom deepened as the election results came in. 选举结果出来后,他的忧郁越发深重了. 5.She threw herself onto bed and cried into her pillow. 她扑到床上抱着枕头痛哭. 6. Mother's death made her cry her heart out. 母亲的去世使得她悲痛欲绝. 7.My heart broke in about a million pieces, not for myself, but for Tom. 我的心成了碎片,不是为我自己而是为了汤姆. 8. Gone was his bright smile. Those sparkling eyes of his turned troubled. 灿烂的笑容消失了,他那闪闪发光的眼睛变得不安. 9.I was completely physically and emotionally broken. 我的身体和情感完全崩溃了. 10.We were on the verge of tears when he broke the bad news. 他告诉我们这个坏消息时,我们快要哭了. 11.It felt a lump in my throat when Sarah said that she would not be thankful to me for what I had done. She drove me crazy. 当萨莎对我说她不会对我所做的一切表示感谢时,我心里非常难过.她快让我发疯了. 12. During her husband's funeral, Aunt May had a lump in her throat. 梅姨在她丈夫的葬礼上伤心得哽咽不止. 13. There was an air of gloom and despair hanging over us. 一种忧郁和绝望的气氛笼罩着我们. 14. Her nose twitched and she began to weep. 她鼻子一酸,流下泪来. “生气、愤怒” 1. My father always hits the roof when I come home with an “F”. 每当我得了“F”回家,父亲总是暴跳如雷. 2. He hits the ceiling at the mere mention of his unsuccessful love affair with Emily. 一提到他与艾米莉不成功的恋情,他就大发雷霆. 3. The way they treat their children makes my blood boil. 他们对待孩子的方式让我勃然大怒. 4. My mind, however, was working angrily as I struggled not to cry. 然而,当我努力忍住不哭的时候,我的心却充满了愤怒. 5.She stood there shaking/trembling/speechless with rage. 她站在那儿气得发抖／哆嗦／无语. 6.He held back his anger without uttering a single word. 他忍住怒火没说一句话. 7.In a fit of anger, Mike burst out of the house. 一时气愤,迈克冲出房子. 8.Sue stormed out of the room in a rage. 苏怒气冲冲地冲出房间. 9. Her reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a volcano. 她的回答火上浇油,于是他的愤怒像火山一样爆发了. 10.She could feel the anger growing, bubbling up inside her. 她能感到她内心的愤怒就像气泡一样慢慢变大. 11. I told the kid a hundred times to be careful with the car, so when I saw him come back with the front all bashed in, I tell you I was mad enough to tear my hair. 我不下一百次地告诫孩子要小心开车,所以当看到他开着车头全撞坏了的车回来时,我气得要发疯. 12. He blackened and scowled like a thundercloud, and kept his fists resolutely clenched, and his gaze fixed on the ground. 他脸色阴沉,像块带着雷电的云,握紧着拳头,眼盯着地面. 13. She is keeping very calm-anyone else would be tearing their hair out. 她依然泰然自若,换做别人早急坏了. 比较:tear one's hair(out)(因生气、焦急)撕扯自己的头发(tear-tore-torn) tear one's heart out使······心如刀绞;使······愁肠断寸 The story of the dead baby tore my heart out.那死去的婴儿的故事使我十分悲伤. 14.Her experiences left her bitter and twisted. 她的经历使她变得愤愤不平. 15.He felt that no-one had supported him and he became bitter and twisted. 他觉得没人支持过他,因此而变得愤怒苦恼. “焦虑、紧张” 1. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. 一看到凶猛的狼我嗓子发紧,膝盖发软. 2. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 一看到凶猛的狼我吓呆了,不敢动弹. 3. A burst of horror held me totally in its power, and I was unable to move an inch. 恐惧喷薄而出,将我紧紧包围,我已经寸步难行了. 4. The hair on the back of my neck rose when I heard the scream. 听到尖叫声,我脖子后面的汗毛竖了起来. 5.Just the thought of losing the title as the best salesman makes my hair stand on end. 光想到我会输掉最佳销售员头衔就让我吓到汗毛直竖. 6.The fear was like an electric shock, pumping shivering waves tearing through his body and making his hair stand on end. 恐惧就像是电击一样,电波撕扯着他的身体,全身的毛发都竖立起来了. 7.All his instincts screamed at him to slip away before he was spotted. He felt uneasy. The hairs on the back of his neck prickled with dread and he was drenched in sweat. 他所有的本能都尖叫着要他在被发现之前溜走.他感到不安,脖子后的毛发林立,浑身是汗. 8. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. 一看到凶猛的狼我被深深的恐惧感所控制,手心出汗. 9.They really made me sweat during the interview. 面试时他们真让我汗流浃背. 10. The whole family was on pins and needles. 全家人如坐针毡. 11. I've been on tenterhooks all week waiting for the results. 整个星期我如坐针毡,等待结果出来. 12. The sound of footsteps in the dark made his blood run cold. 黑暗中的脚步声使他毛骨悚然. 13.Just thinking about the way he had touched her made her skin crawl. 仅想起他触摸她的方式就使她毛骨悚然／起鸡皮疙瘩. 14.The thought of the horrible scene made my flesh creep. 想起那可怕的情景,我浑身都起鸡皮疙瘩. 15.That car accident seems to have frightened the life out of Janet-she's still shaken by it. 那场车祸似乎把珍妮特吓得魂不附体／魂飞魄散－－到现在她还心有余悸. 16.Her stomach was gripped with anxiety, like a volcano erupting inside her. 她的胃里充满焦虑,就像火山在她体内喷发一样. 17.The sound of his voice sent shivers down her spine. 一听到他的说话声,她的背上一阵阵发冷. 18. He felt a cold shiver of fear run through him. 他吓得打了一个寒战. 19.A chill went up his back as he turned around in fear. 当他转过身来,背后袭来阵阵寒意. 20.Panic spread quickly among the travellers when another earthquake hit the area. 当地震再一次袭击该地区时,恐慌在游客中迅速蔓延. 21. The boy stood there, with fear written all over his face. 那男孩站在那儿,满脸恐惧. 22. Her brain quickened and all her senses were alert. 她的大脑快速运转,所有的器官都处于戒备状态. 23. I tried to work it out before she got to me, but I had brain freeze and couldn't function ....I answered, and my face felt warm. 在她抽到我回答之前我企图思考出答案,但我的大脑被冻结了,不能工作了......我回答了,但脸上感到一阵热. 24.We stood silently under the stars, just metres from our tent, hardly daring to breathe. 我们静静地站在群星之下,离帐篷只有几米远,几乎大气不敢喘一下. 25. After a few minutes, I walked over to Terry on shaky legs. “Good luck, Terry,” I said in a whisper that barely masked my urge to cry. 几分钟后我抖抖索索地走到特里跟前.“祝你好运,特里.”我低声说,难以掩饰想哭的冲动. 26.He held his breath while the results were read out.(Soon he ran out of the room to catch his breath.) 在宣读结果时,他屏住呼吸.(很快他就跑出去喘了口气.) 27.Every nerve in his body warned him not to go any further. 他身体上的每一根神经都警告他不要走太远. 28. She spoke hurriedly as if her heart had leaped into her throat. 她讲话急促,急得就好像她的心跳到了嗓子眼一样. 29. I always have butterflies in my stomach when I see the people from the personnel department, 每当见到人事部的人员时,我总是感到很紧张. 30. I have no butterflies in my stomach after I prepared my lessons carefully. 我认真地准备了功课后,就感到不紧张了. 31. So I never tear my hair before exams and I'm never as nervous as a eat on the hot roof or have a lot of butterflies in my stomach or sit on pins and needles. 所以考试前我从不临时抱佛脚,或紧张得如热锅上的蚂蚁,忐忑不安,如坐针毡. 比较:have butterflies in one's stomach(作谓语)／with butterflies in one's stomach(作状语) 32.My stomach was turning over and over as I waited my turn on the stage. 我等着轮到自己上台,心窝里揪得好紧张. 33.You can imagine how terribly shy l was with so many eyes fixed upon me .... The real moment began when I stood on the platform with my legs trembling and my mind blank. Actually with my confidence building up, I now turned out to be a great speaker. Looking back, I know the greatest difficulty on our way to success is our fear. Overcome it and we will be able to achieve our goals. 你可以想象那么多眼睛盯着我,我有多害羞·..当我站在讲台上,两腿颤抖着,脑袋一片空白,真正的时刻开始了.事实上,随着我的自信心的增强,我终于变成了一个伟大的演讲者.回顾过去,我知道我们走向成功的最大困难是我们的害怕心理.克服它,我们就能实现我们的目标. 34. She was always on edge before an interview. =Her nerves were always on edge before an interview. 她在面试前总是紧张不安. 35.With his heart beating wildly and palms sweating, Alan was quite at a loss coping with the situation on his own. Alan was quite at a loss coping with the situation on his own, his heart beating wildly and palms sweating. 艾伦的心在狂跳,手掌在出汗,他完全不知道该怎么处理这个情况. 36.A burst of horror, like a devil's sharp hands, held him entirely in its power and he was unable to move an inch/he was rooted to the ground. 恐惧就像恶魔的手,完全控制了他,使他动弹不得. 37.So frightened was Alan that he stood still uttering no word. 艾伦吓得一句话也说不出来了. 38. Wondering which kind of animal the large bird was, Alan gathered all his strength to step forward. 艾伦想知道那只大鸟是哪种动物,于是鼓足勇气向前走. 39.Pale-faced and out of breath, she couldn't stop her legs trembling. 她脸色苍白,呼吸急促,两腿不停地发抖. 一、技巧总结 在对话中刻画人物情感 1. 注重语言简洁 　　在对人物冲突进行具体的对话描写时, 要注意语言简洁, 切忌“长舌妇式”的语言重复, 如: 　　①“What is the matter now? What’s wrong with you? Is it OK with you? What has happened to you? ” asked the wife. “Maybe I have made some mistakes. I just can’t remember why I come back, and I just think where I am supposed to be going on such a hot summer day, ”replied the professor. 　　②“What’s wrong with you? ” asked the wife. “I just can’t remember why I come back and where I am supposed to be going on such a hot summer day, ”replied the professor. 　　分析: ①句中多次重复同一意思“你怎么了”, 而②句中则简化了妻子的表达, 对教授的回答也进行了缩减。 2. 体现真实情感 　　在对人物进行对话描写时, 真情实感是贴切人物的最好表达, 尽量避免过于“高大上”或“假大空”, 脱离人物的真实身份。如: 　　①“You have had a sound sleep! ” the old lady shouted. “It’s time to open your eyes! We’re in a risky situation and we will have a big deal to make! ” 　　②“What a rich lie! ” Nancy thought after Jerry left. “Rich man always tells rich lies. He never took you to any places. And don’t let him charm you. He betrayed us, your beloved father. He cast us out. He cast us out of his big fancy house like we were nothing to him. He did it happily! ” 　　分析: 从句①中, 我们不难发现作者对老妇人的真情实感的描写, 体现了老妇人急迫的个性和对生活的不顺心而大发脾气的妇女形象。同时, 结合三个感叹句, 更好地体现了老妇人的急躁的心理。由此, 读者也能够通过该对话, 体会到语言的美感。 　　从句②中, 我们可以发现Nancy的痛苦之处, 深深地体会到了当时社会对底层老百姓的漠视和不公, 同时我们也能够通过Nancy的话语, 感受到她当时的愤怒之情, 这就是对话语言的魅力所在。 3. 注意描写比重 　　在对人物冲突进行具体的对话描写时, 要注意其在文章段落中的比重问题, 切忌以全对话或大部分对话代替其他细节描写, 如: 　　“In the garden? ”Sam asked nervously. “I actually have given all I have to you! So, please do not hurt me or kill me. I beg you! ” Jessica also told the thief, “Do you want all our belongings? They are all in our bedroom. I will lead you to get them. Of course, we are rich and we have a lot of money. All will be given to you if you do not hurt or kill us, please, please! ” The thief said, “Of course. I will not kill you too! OK. You are so good. I will not kill you if I get this. Give all to me now! ” Just at that time, there was a knock at the door and the police came to the door. 　　分析: 从本段的描写中我们不难发现, 几乎全段都是对话语言描写, 而且话语多次重复和啰嗦, 难以很好地表达主人公的内心情感, 也难以让读者体会到英语语言的美。所以, 在续写过程中, 一定要读透文本, 理解文本中的语言特色, 然后相应地遵循原文续写, 保持语言的一致性。 二、写作示例 1.按要求用“激动、兴奋”的表达补全下面各句 ①在去往湖边的途中，妈妈兴奋得不能自已。 On the journey to the lake, a_wide_excitement_took_hold_of_Mom. (表激动的名词作主语) ②妈妈坚决要求我们在下一个村庄露营，她的眼中闪着兴奋的光芒。 Mom_insisted_that_we_go_camping_in_the_next_village,_and her_eyes_glittered/twinkled_with_excitement. (动词＋介词短语) Mom_insisted_that_we_go_camping_in_the_next_village,_her_eyes_glittering/twinkling_with_excitement. (独立主格 ③一到露营地，妈妈就迫不及待地冲了出去，兴奋地催促我们搭帐篷。 When we arrived at the camping place, Mom_couldn't_wait_to_storm_out_and_excitedly_urged_us_to_put_up_the_tent. (动作描写＋副词) ④妈妈朝湖边走去，然后传来一阵兴奋的尖叫声。 Mom walked towards the lake, and then_came_an_excited_scream/then_came_a_scream_of_excitement. (名词短语作主语＋倒装句) ⑤欣赏着美景，妈妈兴奋得难以自抑。 Enjoying the beautiful view, Mom_could_hardly_contain_her_excitement. (名词) ⑥因为这是第一次帮爸爸在户外做饭，我和哥哥也感到很兴奋。 As it was the first time that we had helped father cook food outdoors, my_brother_and_I_also_felt_thrilled. (形容词) ⑦呼吸着新鲜的空气、闻着饭菜的香味，我们兴奋地上蹦下跳。 Breathing in the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we_jumped_up_and_down_with_excitement.(动作＋介词 2.将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】　　 On the journey to the lake, a wide excitement took hold of Mom. Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village, her eyes glittering/twinkling with excitement. When we arrived at the camping place, Mom couldn't wait to storm out and excitedly urged us to put up the tent. Then, Mom walked towards the lake, and then came an excited scream/and then came a scream of excitement. Enjoying the beautiful view, Mom could hardly contain her excitement. Certainly, as it was the first time that we had helped father cook food outdoors, my brother and I also felt thrilled. Breathing in the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we jumped up and down with excitement. 一、短文填空 阅读下面短文, 在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式 Harry’s parents love him very much and expect he can become 1. _______ (success). So they often tell him just to study hard while they do everything else for their eighteen-year-old son.   Once Harry’s father 2. __________(send) to London on business. He would stay there for half a year. Before 3. (leave), he told his wife to take good care of their son. The woman had to get up even 4. __________(early) and did all that her husband did before. Then two months later the 5. (exhaust) woman was ill in bed. Now Harry was 6. helpless that he had to do as his mother told him.   Yesterday Harry’s mother told him to buy a new pair of shoes and suggested a shoe pattern. 7. __________ the help of a policeman, Harry wouldn’t have found the shop. The shopkeeper was friendly and offered various shoes to him. When he was trying on a pair, he 8. __________(sudden) remembered something and took them off. The man was surprised and asked, “What’s 9. matter, young man? ” “I’m sorry. I 10. __________(leave) the shoe pattern at home. ”  本文是一篇记叙文。讲述了一个因为父母过度溺爱, 而生活中不能够很好地照顾自己的孩子的故事。 1. 【解析】successful。考查形容词作表语的用法。设空处作表语且意为“成功的”, 故填successful。 2. 【解析】was sent。根据语境可知, send所表示的动作发生在过去, 且father与send之间是被动关系, 故填was sent。 3. 【解析】leaving。根据介词后需跟动词-ing形式作宾语, 且he与leave之间是逻辑上的主谓关系, 故填leaving。 4. 【解析】earlier。根据前面的even可知此处用比较级earlier。“甚至起得更早。” 5. 【解析】exhausted。根据设空处作定语修饰名词woman, 且意为“疲惫不堪的”, 故填exhausted。 6. 【解析】so。根据so. . . that. . . 是固定句型, 意为“如此……以至于……”。 7. 【解析】Without。根据由wouldn’t have found可知, 本句是含蓄条件句, 故填Without。 8. 【解析】suddenly。根据设空处作状语修饰动词remembered, 故填suddenly。 9. 【解析】the。根据what’s the matter是固定表达, 意为“出了什么事”。 10. 【解析】have left。根据设空处是对已经发生的情况的描述, 强调对现在造成的影响, 故填have left。 二、读后续写 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　A few years ago, I had taken a part-time holiday season job in a video store at the local shopping mall. From inside the store, I’d begun to see the people rushing by outside. Then an elderly woman caught my eye. Although slow and unsure of step, she moved with deliberation (从容), and there was no hesitation in her gestures. The elderly woman had come into the store along with a younger woman who I guessed was her daughter. The daughter was clearly impatient, rolling her eyes, huffing (怒气冲冲)and sighing, checking her watch every few seconds. 　　The older woman then separated from the younger one and began to look at the DVDs on the nearest shelf, obviously expecting someone else to help. After the slightest hesitation, I walked over and asked if I could help her find something. The woman smiled up at me and showed me a title on a piece of paper. It was a bit unclear to make out. Clearly a person looking for it knew a little about movies and quality. Rather than rushing off to locate the DVD for the woman, I asked her to walk with me so I could show her where she could find it. 　　Looking back, I think I wanted to enjoy her company for a moment. Something about her deliberate movements reminded me of my own mother, who’d passed away the previous Christmas. As we walked along the back of the store, I introduced her to the different sections: old television shows, action movies, cartoons, science fiction films. The woman seemed glad of the unrushed company and casual conversation. 　　We found the movie, and I complimented her on her choice. She smiled and told me it was one she’d enjoyed when she was her daughter’s age and that she hoped she would enjoy it as much as she had. Maybe, she said with a hint of wistfulness (一丝伤感), her daughter could enjoy it with her own young children. Then, when the older woman’s turn in line came, she paid in cash, counting out the dollars and coins with the same sureness she’d displayed earlier. 注意: 续写词数应为150左右。 　　As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag, I walked over to the younger woman.  ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　The elderly woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter.   ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 　　As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag, I walked over to the younger woman. “Is that your mom? ” I asked, halfway expecting her to tell me it was none of my business. But she rolled her eyes and said, “Yeah. ” I smiled to show her I wasn’t criticizing. “Cherish her, ” I said. And then I answered her curious expression by saying, “When she’s gone, it’s the little moments like this that will come back to you. ” It was true. I missed my mother still and remembered the moments when I was so impatient as to make her life miserable. 　　The elderly woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter. Together they made their way toward the exit of the video store. They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother. And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother’s shoulders and gently guided her back into the crowds. （23-24高二下·山东德州·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。 Surprise (times two)! My friend Ollie has lived with his grandmother, Abuela, since he was a baby. Abuela is the kindest, smartest, funniest person imaginable! On the morning of Mother's Day, I invited them to my house for a party. “I love any kind of party if there's a cake!” Ollie said. “Of course.” I chuckled, “I made a card for my mom, but I still want to find some present to go with it”. Ollie also wanted to buy roses for Abuela, but everything is so expensive at the flower store that he can barely afford a leaf! Just then, our neighbor, Mrs. Nishikawa who was watering her garden, waved and called, “Good morning, kiddos!” Ollie waved back. “Good morning, Mrs. Nishikawa! Your garden is always so pretty.” “Oy! It's a mess.” She groaned. “My back has been acting up, and I haven't weeded for days.” Ollie and I were eager to offer help. Half an hour later, both of us had a big pile of weeds. Mrs. Nishikawa smiled and said we could choose whatever flowers we liked for Mother's day bouquets (花束). We clipped, arranged, and wrapped everything in big sheets of sparkly paper and string. Ollie and I both said that these look just as good as the ones at the store and even better. As we headed back with flowers in arms, we came up with a plan. Nobody would think to look in my bedroom closet, a perfect place to hide these, except my two cats. It was a good idea that at the exact right time, we would shout “Surprise!” and amaze everybody. But you know perfect plans don't always work out perfectly. Everybody elegantly sipped tea and not-so-elegantly gobbled cake. Then we took turns saying things we loved and appreciated about Abuela and my mom. Right when they were chatting, Ollie and I snuck (溜走) off to get our surprise. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “NO!” I yelled as soon as our cats dashed out of the bedroom. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “How can you get so beautiful flowers?” Abuela and my mom asked. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 “NO!” I yelled as soon as our cats dashed out of the bedroom. The sight that met my eyes was both amusing and a little heartbreaking. While our carefully crafted bouquets were now a chaotic blend of petals and stems scattered all over the floor, the cats were completely unaware of the mess they had caused. Ollie and I stood there, momentarily stunned, as our surprise was unveiled in the most unexpected way. The guests, including Abuela and my mom, quickly rose from their seats, trying to contain the playful cats and also attempting to rescue what was left of the bouquets. “How can you get so beautiful flowers?” Abuela and my mom asked. Ollie and I exchanged a knowing look before bursting into laughter. “Well, it's a funny surprise actually,” I began, recounting our story with Mrs. Nishikawa. Abuela and my mom couldn't help but join in our laughter, their eyes sparkling with amusement. “Tomorrow, I will tell Mrs. Nishikawa what happened to her flowers,” Ollie joked. As we all sat together, talking about the surprises, we knew that the true gift of Mother's Day was the love and laughter we shared as a family. 【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者邀请朋友Ollie和她的祖母来自己家里参加聚会，她们准备给妈妈和祖母一份礼物。她们于是帮助邻居的花园除草，邻居让她们在花园里选择喜欢的鲜花作为母亲节花束。作者和Ollie回到家后想到一个好主意，把花束藏在壁橱里，准备在适当的时候给出惊喜，派对过程中，作者和Ollie溜出去去取她们的惊喜。 【要点详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容““不!”我们的猫一冲出卧室，我就大叫起来。”可知，第一段可描写作者和Ollie精心准备的花束被猫给破坏了，惊喜以意想不到的方式揭开了。 ②由第二段首句内容““你们怎么能得到这么漂亮的花?”祖母和妈妈问。”可知，第二段可描写作者和Ollie讲述获得花束的过程，并且感慨母亲节最好的礼物就是作为家庭一起分享爱和笑声。 2.续写线索：花束被猫给破坏——作者和Ollie惊讶——惊喜暴露——讲述获得花束的过程——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①没意识到，不知道：be unaware of/ be ignorant of ②交换：exchange/ change for ③参加：join in / participate in 情绪类 ①突然大笑：burst into laughter /burst out laughing ②小心地：carefully / with caution [高分句型1]. While our carefully crafted bouquets were now a chaotic blend of petals and stems scattered all over the floor, the cats were completely unaware of the mess they had caused.（由连接词while连接的时间状语从句和省略关系代词的定语从句修饰先行词the mess） [高分句型2]. Ollie and I stood there, momentarily stunned, as our surprise was unveiled in the most unexpected way.（由as连接的原因状语从句） [高分句型3]. As we all sat together, talking about the surprises, we knew that the true gift of Mother's Day was the love and laughter we shared as a family.（as引导的时间状语从句和that连接的宾语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 Family matters 单元写作深度指导 读后续写（心理情感描写3） (2018·浙江高考改编)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm, ” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper, ” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost! ”“OK! ”my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意: 续写词数应为150左右 　　Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.  __________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　We had no idea where we were and it got dark. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 Step 1: 审题布局 文体 记叙文 时态 一般过去时 原文分析 第一段: 交代故事的背景。介绍了度假的原因和地点 第二段: 简单地介绍了旅途 第三段: 对在农场的日常活动的简单介绍 第四段和续写故事的展开有很大的关系。这一段讲到了如何发生了我和爸爸去骑马的故事。而续写的内容就是在此基础上展开 写作思路 　　根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 这一句是故事发展的转折点, 可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开, 可以写马的反应, 也可以写人的反应, 但要注意与第二段首句相呼应 　　第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it got dark. 这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——不要误了吃晚饭, 可从如何寻路返回农场去写 Step 2: 词句激活 (1)美词: previous; in vain; at the point of desperation; a faint voice (2)佳句: ①Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off . ②Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. ③What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. Step 3: 要点梳理 要点1: 这个出其不意的出场让我的马疯狂地跑起来。 一般表达: This unexpected appearance made my horse run wildly. 句式升级(定语从句) This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly.   要点2: 尽管我很害怕, 我努力不(让自己)掉下马来。 一般表达: Although I was frightened, I tried not to fall off the horse. 　　句式升级(倒装句) Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off.   要点3: 我们只能沿着之前的路慢慢走回去。 一般表达: We could only go back along the previous track slowly. 句式升级(主语从句) 我们所能做的只有沿着之前的路慢慢走回去。 What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly.   Step 4: 衔接成篇 　　Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that we got lost. 　　We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We didn’t know where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation. Just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. “It must be Uncle Paul, ” I said. So we cried back with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride! 读后续写心理情感描写方式（三） ▲常用情感描写“喜悦、快乐”、“激动、感动”、“淡定、勇敢”、“悲伤、绝望”、“生气、愤怒” “焦虑、紧张” .“喜悦、快乐” 1. When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. 妈妈吻着他的脸,宝宝似乎非常开心. 2. She was walking on air after she found out she'd won the teaching award. 当发现自己获得了教学奖后,她有些得意忘形. 3.She shed tears of happiness/joy at the thought of being taken good care of. 想到受到细心照顾,她流下幸福的热泪. 4.He marched out of the classroom, whistling a merry tune. 他走出教室,吹着轻快的口哨. 5.As he listened, his mouth split into a big smile. 他边听边咧嘴笑. 6.When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin. 当我沐浴在阳光下,那感觉就像是琥珀色的阳光亲吻着我每一寸肌肤. 7.A sharp pleasure came over him. 他突然感到一阵愉悦. 8. Her imagination was busy, her reflections were pleasant and the pain of a sprained ankle was disregarded. 她浮想联翩,心里觉得喜滋滋的,早把脚踝的伤痛抛到九霄云外. 9.Her eyes gleamed and her fragile face broke into a smile. 她的眼睛闪烁着光芒,精致的脸庞展现出微笑. 10. She couldn't disguise her glee at their embarrassment. 看到他们难堪的样子她不禁喜形于色. 11.He rubbed his hands in glee as he thought of all the money he would make. 他想到自己将赚到那么多钱就高兴得直搓手. 12. The surface of the calm lake stirred the waves, and my mood was as cheerful as a wave. 平静的湖面激起了浪花,我的心情也像浪花一样欢腾. 13.He was tickled pink at the idea of taking a month's holiday at the expense of his company. 由公司出钱度假一个月,这个主意使他非常高兴. 14.The children were tickled pink with their new dress. 孩子们穿上新衣服很高兴. 15.I'm tickled pink to hear that Bob's asked Susan to marry him. 我听说鲍勃向苏珊求婚非常高兴. “激动、感动” 1. Seeing such extraordinary beauty, I think every cell in my body woke up. It was like discovering a whole new dimension of life .... My heart was beating wildly-I felt very exposed in such deep clear water. What a wonderful, limitless world it was down there! And what a tiny spot l was in this enormous world! 看到如此美丽的景色,我想我身体里的每一个细胞都醒了,就像发现了一个全新的生命维度.我的心在狂跳.我完全沉浸在这清澈见底的深水之中.那是一个多么美妙无限的世界！我在这个巨大的世界里是多么的渺小！ 2. Our excitement rose to fever pitch as the great day approached. 当伟大的日子即将到来之时,我们的激动达到了无以复加的地步. 3.A resounding cheer was heard throughout the gym, and I felt I couldn't contain myself. 体育馆里传来震耳欲聋的欢呼声,我觉得无法控制自己. 4. She swallowed a swelling lump in her throat and in tears hugged Jim tightly for a few minutes. As an old saying goes, there's no gift better than appreciation and gratitude. 喉咙似乎被什么东西堵住,她满眼泪水,紧紧地抱住吉姆.正如一句老话所说,没有什么东西比赞赏和谢意更好了. 5.When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. 当主持人宣布她获奖时她的激动之情溢于言表. 6.Hearing this, he split his sides with laughter. 听到这儿,他高兴得捧腹大笑. 7.Although Grandfather was old and gray-haired, his heart leaped with joy. 尽管大爷年老头发花白,他的心欢喜得砰砰直跳. 8. She read it over and a faint smile crossed her face. 她仔细读了一遍,脸上浮出淡淡的微笑. 9.Amused by his silly mistake, we almost laughed our head off. 我们被他愚蠢的错误逗乐了,几乎笑得前俯后仰. “淡定、勇敢” 1. He didn't even bat an eyelid when I told him about the robbery. 我告诉他抢劫事件时,他连眼皮都没眨一下. 2. She didn't bat an eyelid when they told her she'd lost her job. She just calmly walked out. 当他们告诉她她的工作丢了的时候,她连眼皮都没动一下,只是平静地走了出去. 3.No matter how agitated and upset other people get, Gill just plays it cool and gets on with her work. 不管其他人怎样焦虑不安、心烦意乱,吉尔只是若无其事地干自己的工作. 4. My back felt a little straighter, and my steps came a little quicker. 我的背挺直了些,步伐也加快了些. 5. Her exam results were disappointing but she tried to put a brave face on it. 她的考试成绩令人失望,但却装出若无其事的样子. 6.He seems happy, even though his wife left him and he lost his job. I think he's just trying to put on a brave face. 他看起来很高兴,即使他的妻子离开了他,他失去了工作.我觉得他只是想装得勇敢些. 7.Each clenched his fists and set his jaw when the order came to arrest the secret agents. 听说去抓特务,一个个都摩拳擦掌. 8.He failed again and again(with his head) bloody but unbowed. 他失败了一次又一次,但每次都虽败犹荣. 9. My young daughter is as brave as a lion and will tackle any of the boys in rough-and-tumble games. 我的小女儿非常勇敢,在做乱打游戏时敢与任何男孩较量. 10.To his surprise, the girl didn't turn a hair at the sight of the snake. 令他惊讶的是,那姑娘看到蛇以后一点也不惊慌. 11. Liu Hulan unflinchingly faced death under the butcher's knife of the enemy. 刘胡兰在敌人的屠刀面前大义凛然,视死如归. “悲伤、绝望” 1.My heart seemed to be torn. 我的心似乎被撕裂了. 2. The last word went like a bullet to my heart. 最后一句话像子弹一样射穿我的心脏. 3. I felt like I was floating in an ocean of sadness. 我觉得自己在悲伤的海里沉沉浮浮. 4.The gloom deepened as the election results came in. 选举结果出来后,他的忧郁越发深重了. 5.She threw herself onto bed and cried into her pillow. 她扑到床上抱着枕头痛哭. 6. Mother's death made her cry her heart out. 母亲的去世使得她悲痛欲绝. 7.My heart broke in about a million pieces, not for myself, but for Tom. 我的心成了碎片,不是为我自己而是为了汤姆. 8. Gone was his bright smile. Those sparkling eyes of his turned troubled. 灿烂的笑容消失了,他那闪闪发光的眼睛变得不安. 9.I was completely physically and emotionally broken. 我的身体和情感完全崩溃了. 10.We were on the verge of tears when he broke the bad news. 他告诉我们这个坏消息时,我们快要哭了. 11.It felt a lump in my throat when Sarah said that she would not be thankful to me for what I had done. She drove me crazy. 当萨莎对我说她不会对我所做的一切表示感谢时,我心里非常难过.她快让我发疯了. 12. During her husband's funeral, Aunt May had a lump in her throat. 梅姨在她丈夫的葬礼上伤心得哽咽不止. 13. There was an air of gloom and despair hanging over us. 一种忧郁和绝望的气氛笼罩着我们. 14. Her nose twitched and she began to weep. 她鼻子一酸,流下泪来. “生气、愤怒” 1. My father always hits the roof when I come home with an “F”. 每当我得了“F”回家,父亲总是暴跳如雷. 2. He hits the ceiling at the mere mention of his unsuccessful love affair with Emily. 一提到他与艾米莉不成功的恋情,他就大发雷霆. 3. The way they treat their children makes my blood boil. 他们对待孩子的方式让我勃然大怒. 4. My mind, however, was working angrily as I struggled not to cry. 然而,当我努力忍住不哭的时候,我的心却充满了愤怒. 5.She stood there shaking/trembling/speechless with rage. 她站在那儿气得发抖／哆嗦／无语. 6.He held back his anger without uttering a single word. 他忍住怒火没说一句话. 7.In a fit of anger, Mike burst out of the house. 一时气愤,迈克冲出房子. 8.Sue stormed out of the room in a rage. 苏怒气冲冲地冲出房间. 9. Her reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a volcano. 她的回答火上浇油,于是他的愤怒像火山一样爆发了. 10.She could feel the anger growing, bubbling up inside her. 她能感到她内心的愤怒就像气泡一样慢慢变大. 11. I told the kid a hundred times to be careful with the car, so when I saw him come back with the front all bashed in, I tell you I was mad enough to tear my hair. 我不下一百次地告诫孩子要小心开车,所以当看到他开着车头全撞坏了的车回来时,我气得要发疯. 12. He blackened and scowled like a thundercloud, and kept his fists resolutely clenched, and his gaze fixed on the ground. 他脸色阴沉,像块带着雷电的云,握紧着拳头,眼盯着地面. 13. She is keeping very calm-anyone else would be tearing their hair out. 她依然泰然自若,换做别人早急坏了. 比较:tear one's hair(out)(因生气、焦急)撕扯自己的头发(tear-tore-torn) tear one's heart out使······心如刀绞;使······愁肠断寸 The story of the dead baby tore my heart out.那死去的婴儿的故事使我十分悲伤. 14.Her experiences left her bitter and twisted. 她的经历使她变得愤愤不平. 15.He felt that no-one had supported him and he became bitter and twisted. 他觉得没人支持过他,因此而变得愤怒苦恼. “焦虑、紧张” 1. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. 一看到凶猛的狼我嗓子发紧,膝盖发软. 2. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 一看到凶猛的狼我吓呆了,不敢动弹. 3. A burst of horror held me totally in its power, and I was unable to move an inch. 恐惧喷薄而出,将我紧紧包围,我已经寸步难行了. 4. The hair on the back of my neck rose when I heard the scream. 听到尖叫声,我脖子后面的汗毛竖了起来. 5.Just the thought of losing the title as the best salesman makes my hair stand on end. 光想到我会输掉最佳销售员头衔就让我吓到汗毛直竖. 6.The fear was like an electric shock, pumping shivering waves tearing through his body and making his hair stand on end. 恐惧就像是电击一样,电波撕扯着他的身体,全身的毛发都竖立起来了. 7.All his instincts screamed at him to slip away before he was spotted. He felt uneasy. The hairs on the back of his neck prickled with dread and he was drenched in sweat. 他所有的本能都尖叫着要他在被发现之前溜走.他感到不安,脖子后的毛发林立,浑身是汗. 8. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. 一看到凶猛的狼我被深深的恐惧感所控制,手心出汗. 9.They really made me sweat during the interview. 面试时他们真让我汗流浃背. 10. The whole family was on pins and needles. 全家人如坐针毡. 11. I've been on tenterhooks all week waiting for the results. 整个星期我如坐针毡,等待结果出来. 12. The sound of footsteps in the dark made his blood run cold. 黑暗中的脚步声使他毛骨悚然. 13.Just thinking about the way he had touched her made her skin crawl. 仅想起他触摸她的方式就使她毛骨悚然／起鸡皮疙瘩. 14.The thought of the horrible scene made my flesh creep. 想起那可怕的情景,我浑身都起鸡皮疙瘩. 15.That car accident seems to have frightened the life out of Janet-she's still shaken by it. 那场车祸似乎把珍妮特吓得魂不附体／魂飞魄散－－到现在她还心有余悸. 16.Her stomach was gripped with anxiety, like a volcano erupting inside her. 她的胃里充满焦虑,就像火山在她体内喷发一样. 17.The sound of his voice sent shivers down her spine. 一听到他的说话声,她的背上一阵阵发冷. 18. He felt a cold shiver of fear run through him. 他吓得打了一个寒战. 19.A chill went up his back as he turned around in fear. 当他转过身来,背后袭来阵阵寒意. 20.Panic spread quickly among the travellers when another earthquake hit the area. 当地震再一次袭击该地区时,恐慌在游客中迅速蔓延. 21. The boy stood there, with fear written all over his face. 那男孩站在那儿,满脸恐惧. 22. Her brain quickened and all her senses were alert. 她的大脑快速运转,所有的器官都处于戒备状态. 23. I tried to work it out before she got to me, but I had brain freeze and couldn't function ....I answered, and my face felt warm. 在她抽到我回答之前我企图思考出答案,但我的大脑被冻结了,不能工作了......我回答了,但脸上感到一阵热. 24.We stood silently under the stars, just metres from our tent, hardly daring to breathe. 我们静静地站在群星之下,离帐篷只有几米远,几乎大气不敢喘一下. 25. After a few minutes, I walked over to Terry on shaky legs. “Good luck, Terry,” I said in a whisper that barely masked my urge to cry. 几分钟后我抖抖索索地走到特里跟前.“祝你好运,特里.”我低声说,难以掩饰想哭的冲动. 26.He held his breath while the results were read out.(Soon he ran out of the room to catch his breath.) 在宣读结果时,他屏住呼吸.(很快他就跑出去喘了口气.) 27.Every nerve in his body warned him not to go any further. 他身体上的每一根神经都警告他不要走太远. 28. She spoke hurriedly as if her heart had leaped into her throat. 她讲话急促,急得就好像她的心跳到了嗓子眼一样. 29. I always have butterflies in my stomach when I see the people from the personnel department, 每当见到人事部的人员时,我总是感到很紧张. 30. I have no butterflies in my stomach after I prepared my lessons carefully. 我认真地准备了功课后,就感到不紧张了. 31. So I never tear my hair before exams and I'm never as nervous as a eat on the hot roof or have a lot of butterflies in my stomach or sit on pins and needles. 所以考试前我从不临时抱佛脚,或紧张得如热锅上的蚂蚁,忐忑不安,如坐针毡. 比较:have butterflies in one's stomach(作谓语)／with butterflies in one's stomach(作状语) 32.My stomach was turning over and over as I waited my turn on the stage. 我等着轮到自己上台,心窝里揪得好紧张. 33.You can imagine how terribly shy l was with so many eyes fixed upon me .... The real moment began when I stood on the platform with my legs trembling and my mind blank. Actually with my confidence building up, I now turned out to be a great speaker. Looking back, I know the greatest difficulty on our way to success is our fear. Overcome it and we will be able to achieve our goals. 你可以想象那么多眼睛盯着我,我有多害羞·..当我站在讲台上,两腿颤抖着,脑袋一片空白,真正的时刻开始了.事实上,随着我的自信心的增强,我终于变成了一个伟大的演讲者.回顾过去,我知道我们走向成功的最大困难是我们的害怕心理.克服它,我们就能实现我们的目标. 34. She was always on edge before an interview. =Her nerves were always on edge before an interview. 她在面试前总是紧张不安. 35.With his heart beating wildly and palms sweating, Alan was quite at a loss coping with the situation on his own. Alan was quite at a loss coping with the situation on his own, his heart beating wildly and palms sweating. 艾伦的心在狂跳,手掌在出汗,他完全不知道该怎么处理这个情况. 36.A burst of horror, like a devil's sharp hands, held him entirely in its power and he was unable to move an inch/he was rooted to the ground. 恐惧就像恶魔的手,完全控制了他,使他动弹不得. 37.So frightened was Alan that he stood still uttering no word. 艾伦吓得一句话也说不出来了. 38. Wondering which kind of animal the large bird was, Alan gathered all his strength to step forward. 艾伦想知道那只大鸟是哪种动物,于是鼓足勇气向前走. 39.Pale-faced and out of breath, she couldn't stop her legs trembling. 她脸色苍白,呼吸急促,两腿不停地发抖. 一、技巧总结 在对话中刻画人物情感 1. 注重语言简洁 　　在对人物冲突进行具体的对话描写时, 要注意语言简洁, 切忌“长舌妇式”的语言重复, 如: 　　①“What is the matter now? What’s wrong with you? Is it OK with you? What has happened to you? ” asked the wife. “Maybe I have made some mistakes. I just can’t remember why I come back, and I just think where I am supposed to be going on such a hot summer day, ”replied the professor. 　　②“What’s wrong with you? ” asked the wife. “I just can’t remember why I come back and where I am supposed to be going on such a hot summer day, ”replied the professor. 　　分析: ①句中多次重复同一意思“你怎么了”, 而②句中则简化了妻子的表达, 对教授的回答也进行了缩减。 2. 体现真实情感 　　在对人物进行对话描写时, 真情实感是贴切人物的最好表达, 尽量避免过于“高大上”或“假大空”, 脱离人物的真实身份。如: 　　①“You have had a sound sleep! ” the old lady shouted. “It’s time to open your eyes! We’re in a risky situation and we will have a big deal to make! ” 　　②“What a rich lie! ” Nancy thought after Jerry left. “Rich man always tells rich lies. He never took you to any places. And don’t let him charm you. He betrayed us, your beloved father. He cast us out. He cast us out of his big fancy house like we were nothing to him. He did it happily! ” 　　分析: 从句①中, 我们不难发现作者对老妇人的真情实感的描写, 体现了老妇人急迫的个性和对生活的不顺心而大发脾气的妇女形象。同时, 结合三个感叹句, 更好地体现了老妇人的急躁的心理。由此, 读者也能够通过该对话, 体会到语言的美感。 　　从句②中, 我们可以发现Nancy的痛苦之处, 深深地体会到了当时社会对底层老百姓的漠视和不公, 同时我们也能够通过Nancy的话语, 感受到她当时的愤怒之情, 这就是对话语言的魅力所在。 3. 注意描写比重 　　在对人物冲突进行具体的对话描写时, 要注意其在文章段落中的比重问题, 切忌以全对话或大部分对话代替其他细节描写, 如: 　　“In the garden? ”Sam asked nervously. “I actually have given all I have to you! So, please do not hurt me or kill me. I beg you! ” Jessica also told the thief, “Do you want all our belongings? They are all in our bedroom. I will lead you to get them. Of course, we are rich and we have a lot of money. All will be given to you if you do not hurt or kill us, please, please! ” The thief said, “Of course. I will not kill you too! OK. You are so good. I will not kill you if I get this. Give all to me now! ” Just at that time, there was a knock at the door and the police came to the door. 　　分析: 从本段的描写中我们不难发现, 几乎全段都是对话语言描写, 而且话语多次重复和啰嗦, 难以很好地表达主人公的内心情感, 也难以让读者体会到英语语言的美。所以, 在续写过程中, 一定要读透文本, 理解文本中的语言特色, 然后相应地遵循原文续写, 保持语言的一致性。 二、写作示例 1.按要求用“激动、兴奋”的表达补全下面各句 ①在去往湖边的途中，妈妈兴奋得不能自已。 On the journey to the lake, . (表激动的名词作主语) ②妈妈坚决要求我们在下一个村庄露营，她的眼中闪着兴奋的光芒。 . (动词＋介词短语) . (独立主格 ③一到露营地，妈妈就迫不及待地冲了出去，兴奋地催促我们搭帐篷。 When we arrived at the camping place, (动作描写＋副词) ④妈妈朝湖边走去，然后传来一阵兴奋的尖叫声。 Mom walked towards the lake, . (名词短语作主语＋倒装句) ⑤欣赏着美景，妈妈兴奋得难以自抑。 Enjoying the beautiful view, . (名词) ⑥因为这是第一次帮爸爸在户外做饭，我和哥哥也感到很兴奋。 As it was the first time that we had helped father cook food outdoors, . (形容词) ⑦呼吸着新鲜的空气、闻着饭菜的香味，我们兴奋地上蹦下跳。 Breathing in the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, .(动作＋介词 2.将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、短文填空 阅读下面短文, 在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式 Harry’s parents love him very much and expect he can become 1. _______ (success). So they often tell him just to study hard while they do everything else for their eighteen-year-old son.   Once Harry’s father 2. __________(send) to London on business. He would stay there for half a year. Before 3. (leave), he told his wife to take good care of their son. The woman had to get up even 4. __________(early) and did all that her husband did before. Then two months later the 5. (exhaust) woman was ill in bed. Now Harry was 6. helpless that he had to do as his mother told him.   Yesterday Harry’s mother told him to buy a new pair of shoes and suggested a shoe pattern. 7. __________ the help of a policeman, Harry wouldn’t have found the shop. The shopkeeper was friendly and offered various shoes to him. When he was trying on a pair, he 8. __________(sudden) remembered something and took them off. The man was surprised and asked, “What’s 9. matter, young man? ” “I’m sorry. I 10. __________(leave) the shoe pattern at home. ”  二、读后续写 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　A few years ago, I had taken a part-time holiday season job in a video store at the local shopping mall. From inside the store, I’d begun to see the people rushing by outside. Then an elderly woman caught my eye. Although slow and unsure of step, she moved with deliberation (从容), and there was no hesitation in her gestures. The elderly woman had come into the store along with a younger woman who I guessed was her daughter. The daughter was clearly impatient, rolling her eyes, huffing (怒气冲冲)and sighing, checking her watch every few seconds. 　　The older woman then separated from the younger one and began to look at the DVDs on the nearest shelf, obviously expecting someone else to help. After the slightest hesitation, I walked over and asked if I could help her find something. The woman smiled up at me and showed me a title on a piece of paper. It was a bit unclear to make out. Clearly a person looking for it knew a little about movies and quality. Rather than rushing off to locate the DVD for the woman, I asked her to walk with me so I could show her where she could find it. 　　Looking back, I think I wanted to enjoy her company for a moment. Something about her deliberate movements reminded me of my own mother, who’d passed away the previous Christmas. As we walked along the back of the store, I introduced her to the different sections: old television shows, action movies, cartoons, science fiction films. The woman seemed glad of the unrushed company and casual conversation. 　　We found the movie, and I complimented her on her choice. She smiled and told me it was one she’d enjoyed when she was her daughter’s age and that she hoped she would enjoy it as much as she had. Maybe, she said with a hint of wistfulness (一丝伤感), her daughter could enjoy it with her own young children. Then, when the older woman’s turn in line came, she paid in cash, counting out the dollars and coins with the same sureness she’d displayed earlier. 注意: 续写词数应为150左右。 　　As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag, I walked over to the younger woman.  ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　The elderly woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter.   ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （23-24高二下·山东德州·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。 Surprise (times two)! My friend Ollie has lived with his grandmother, Abuela, since he was a baby. Abuela is the kindest, smartest, funniest person imaginable! On the morning of Mother's Day, I invited them to my house for a party. “I love any kind of party if there's a cake!” Ollie said. “Of course.” I chuckled, “I made a card for my mom, but I still want to find some present to go with it”. Ollie also wanted to buy roses for Abuela, but everything is so expensive at the flower store that he can barely afford a leaf! Just then, our neighbor, Mrs. Nishikawa who was watering her garden, waved and called, “Good morning, kiddos!” Ollie waved back. “Good morning, Mrs. Nishikawa! Your garden is always so pretty.” “Oy! It's a mess.” She groaned. “My back has been acting up, and I haven't weeded for days.” Ollie and I were eager to offer help. Half an hour later, both of us had a big pile of weeds. Mrs. Nishikawa smiled and said we could choose whatever flowers we liked for Mother's day bouquets (花束). We clipped, arranged, and wrapped everything in big sheets of sparkly paper and string. Ollie and I both said that these look just as good as the ones at the store and even better. As we headed back with flowers in arms, we came up with a plan. Nobody would think to look in my bedroom closet, a perfect place to hide these, except my two cats. It was a good idea that at the exact right time, we would shout “Surprise!” and amaze everybody. But you know perfect plans don't always work out perfectly. Everybody elegantly sipped tea and not-so-elegantly gobbled cake. Then we took turns saying things we loved and appreciated about Abuela and my mom. Right when they were chatting, Ollie and I snuck (溜走) off to get our surprise. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “NO!” I yelled as soon as our cats dashed out of the bedroom. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “How can you get so beautiful flowers?” Abuela and my mom asked. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$