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Unit 2 Travel Around
Reading for writing
- How to write a travel plan
- Write an outline
- Express emotion
Travel Plan
When to go
Where to go
How to go
Why to go
What to do (see, eat, buy)
How long to stay
What elements should be included in a travel plan.
I was determined to visit Shaoguan from Hangzhou on October 25th by plane- now I’ve researched more ...What can we do in Shaoguan for 3 nights/2 days.
I love nature, history and culture.
I would like to buy some souvenirs.
Could you help me make a travel plan?
Paul
What can we recommend?
Talk to your partner about the two-day travel plan
A: Let’s discuss the two-day travel plan for the foreign guests.
B: OK. We should introduce our city by sharing some basic information with them.
...
where what why ...
Mount Danxia
Fengcai Building Climb
Go hiking
Eat Outstanding scenery ...
Mount Danxia
Where to see
climb mountains
enjoy the sunrise
get close to nature
take the cableway
Mount Danxia is a scenic spot which is characterized by Danxia landscape and places emphasis on both nature and culture.
Meiguan Historical Trail
wander along the trail
enjoy the plum blossom
Fengcai Building
admire unique calligraphy
appreciate distinctive architecture
explore local culture
Luokeng Grassland
Go camping
Have a barbecue
Enjoy stars
Get back to nature
Ride a horse
Take a picnic
Nanhua Temple
Worship the gods and pray
Pay respect for Huineng
Shaoguan Forest Park
visit south china tigers
go hiking
breathe fresh air
What to buy (souvenirs)
新韶九章
Chaotianzi Chili Sauce Longsheng Soy sauce Longsheng Vinegar Shaoyang Baijiu
Youfeng Camellia Oil
What are they?
spicy but not overly so, crunchy, smell good, strong aroma/aromatic
showcase the characteristics of Shaoguan and the spirit of craftsmanship.
simple, elegant, enduring, refreshing, mellow, fragrant, fresh and aromatic, sweet after taste, plain and thin, mellow and thick
In China, tea is believed to be a drink that connects and bonds people together.
Enblem
Decorations
Key chains
Bookmarks
Toys
Mouse pad/mat
Postcards
Canvas bag
What to eat
Qinghua rice noodles
delicious
tasty
pork with preserved vegetable
soft and mellow
pressed salted duck
peanut cake
smooth
chewy
delicious, tasty, finger-licking
Cantonese sausage
the more chewed the more fragrant
Hakka stuffed tofu
mellow, rich, soft
appetizing, mouthwatering
What to do
The architecture of Fengdu Study varies from place to place
The History East Street
typical places; unique things
convenient
meet the needs
Attention
I was determined to visit Shaoguan from Hangzhou on October 25th by plane - now I've researched more ...What can we do in Shaoguan for 3 nights/2 days.
I love nature, history and culture.
I would like to buy some souvenirs. Could you help me make a travel plan?
Paul
Learn to express
Tourist attractions often raise prices during holidays. The prices of many tours provided by travel agencies shoot up. Hotel rates in some popular tourism destinations skyrocket.
Tip 1: Variety
Use different vocabulary
In the Chinatown section of San Francisco, rice and snow peas are a part of many holiday meals. In New Mexico, one might encounter chili peppers on the Fourth of July. In Hawaii, one popular way to celebrate a holiday is with a feast.
Use different sentence patterns
Tip 2: Emphasis
I’m dying/eager to visit Shaoguan, a perfect place to experience Hakka culture.
No other attraction in Shaoguan has received more praise than Mount Danxia.
Use expressive adjectives, adverbs and comparative degree.
Not only does Danxia Mountain boast unique natural scenery, but also it has a long history and brilliant culture.
Use inversion
More expressions
I have been longing for / to do...
I’m dying/eager to see...
I’ve dreamed of traveling there for a long time.
It is a perfect place to...
Especially amazing is...
What amazes/interests me most is...
I am amazed/ shocked/ impressed/ thrilled by
Tip 3: Conciseness
A. “I’ll tell you where you should get off,” answered the conductor.
B. “I’ll tell you where to get off,” answered the conductor.
A. On the other occasion, he landed in the car park that was deserted.
B. On the other occasion, he landed in the deserted car park.
A. Brad Pitt is a good, handsome and kind person.
B. Brad Pitt is a good, Apollo-like person who always shows consideration for others.
Tip 4: Details
Description
A. Mr. Robinson reached over and grabbed the boy’s arm.
B. Mr. Robinson lurched over and grabbed the boy’s thin forearm with his rough hands.
Explanation
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike寒假想来韶关旅行,请给他出行建议。
内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 建议及理由;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数 120 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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