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Main purpose for the trip
Other plans
Final thoughts
How to write: purpose, to whom
Transport
Present state
Plan
Reason
Scenic spots
Reason
How to go
Arrival/leaving time
Feelings
wishes
Clear
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Read for language
□Emotional □Emotionless
□Logical □Illogical
Choose the correct language styles, and find out some evidence from the email.
Evidence:
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1. I’ ve heard that it is an amazing sight, and I can’ t wait to go.
2. To me, the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable.
3. It’ s amazing that there are more than 8,000 statues, and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s.
More expressions:
I have been longing for / to do...
I’m dying/eager to see...
I’ve dreamed of traveling there for a long time.
We’ re also planning to visit several other places in Xi’ an.
Use linking words
Use pronouns
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I was determined to visit Shaoguan from Hangzhou on October 25th by plane- now I've researched more ...What can we do in Shaoguan for 3 nights/2 days.
I love nature, history and culture.
I would like to buy some souvenirs.
Could you help me make a travel plan?
Paul
A short flight from Cusco takes you from the Andes into the Amazon rainforest. From there, you’ll spend one day travelling by boat to your accommodation in the middle of the forest. You can then spend three days exploring the rainforest with a local guide and enjoying the plants and animals unique to the rainforest.
What can you know about Amazon Rainforest Tour?
Mind-map
Amazon Forest Tour
unique nature
transport: flight, boat
numbers of day: 4 days
accomodation: in the middle of forest
activity: boating, hiking, explore nature
1. Use key words
2. Summaroize or paraphrase
Read the other 3 passages and draw a mind map
Introduce these tours according to your mind maps
What is a good writing?
Writing Criteria
Content A clear purpose
A clear main idea in each paragraph
Different aspects of a travel plan
Language Use present continuous tense to express future plan.
Use sentences to express emotion.
Coherent Use linking words or pronoun.
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Write an e-mail to invite Bill to visit Xiamen!
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