选择性必修第二册Unit 4 Journey Across a Vast Land (旅游报告）【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高二英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019）

Unit 4 Journey Across a Vast Land (旅游报告）（人教版2019） Write an email about a journey （旅游报告） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 旅游报告 2024年全国高考卷 该部分的活动主题是“写一写乘坐火车横跨加拿大的旅行”( Write about a rail journey across Canada ),要求学生利用地图，以Li Daiyu和Liu Qian的旅行路线为线索，梳理、 概括两姐妹的旅行经历和见闻，并以此为主要内容，以Li Daiyu的口吻给其父母写一封家信 (电子邮件)。 Imagine that you are Li Daiyu. Using the map and your note to write an email to your parents telling them about your trip. text type; tense; person; Structures Contents connector; language) How do you write an email to your parents? What impressed you most during the journey? What did you see,hear do and how did you feel? What order would you follow when describing the journey? 1．（2024·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： （1）你完成的作品； （2）你的感想。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 本单元的写作任务是写一封旅游电子邮件，也就是以书信的形式写一篇旅游报告。旅游报告主要描写游览中的所见所闻以及所感。对于此类话题的文章可以按照以下几个步骤来写： 1．点明主题。简要介绍所游览的地方。 2．具体描述旅行的经历和见闻。描述时，应按照一定的时间、空间或逻辑顺序，这样可以使内容层次清晰。同时还应分清主次，详略得当，要突出最有特色、最感兴趣的事物。 3．描述自己的感受。既可以是旅游过程中对眼前景物的所思所想，也可以是所经历的人或事对自己的影响，但要与主题相呼应。 段落 内容 句子设计 开头 点明旅游的地方 visit/pay a visit/go to…for a visit/organize a visit to…/go to Dunhuang to explore the Silk Road. gather/get together at the school gate set out for…/head for…/set off for…by school bus/ by subway After one hour’s ride, we arrived at the gate of the museum. Upon arriving, we were shocked by how brilliant the palace was. The instant we arrived, we were attracted by the ancient building/an exhibition. 主体 具体叙述旅游经历和见闻 The guide gave us a brief introduction of … The guide greeted us at the gate of the… We entered in line, following the tour guide. We were led into … by the guide/ we followed the guide into… We took some notes while visiting. We were attracted by… What impressed me most was… With curiosity, we listened attentively. 结尾 对旅游的感悟 After this visit, we learned that… Through this trip, I realized the importance of respecting local customs and culture. The experience of hiking around the world broadened my horizon and enriched my life. As the Chinese saying goes: "It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books." 【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇; 1．be located in/at/between ...　　 位于…… 2．make a trip to ... 去……旅行 3．a feast for eyes 视觉盛宴 4．the good weather and breathtaking scenery 宜人的天气和令人惊叹的景色 5．an attractive place 一个吸引人的地方 6．from the view of ... 从……的观点来看 7．be open to the public 对公众开放 8．catch sight of 看到 9. get close to nature  接近大自然 10．make a journey  旅行 11．have a good time  玩得愉快 12．a dream trip  梦想之旅 13．traffic congestion  交通拥挤 14．places of interest   名胜 15．be known as   作为……而出名 16．be famous/well known for ...  以……著名 17．be the home of/be home to ...   是……之乡/乐土 18．enjoy the reputation of ...  有……美誉 【句式积累】: 1．常用开头句 ①Thank you so much for allowing me to go on this journey! 非常感谢您允许我踏上这段旅程！ ②After a tiring day, we finally arrived in the old country. 经过一天的劳累，我们终于到达了这个古老的国家。 ③I’d like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you. 我想和你分享一个最有趣的经历。 ④ I’m glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you. 我很高兴和大家分享我在上一个暑假里很难忘的旅行经历。 2．常用中间句 ①The university is located in the eastern suburbs of the city. 这座大学坐落在城市的东郊。 ②The village covers an area of 300 hectares, of which 30 are for tea production. 这个村庄占地300公顷，其中30公顷为茶园。 ③Standing on the top of the mountain, the temple has witnessed many changes in this area. 坐落在山顶的寺庙见证了这个地区的许多变化。 ④It's very convenient to get there by taking buses No. 17, 59 or 69 besides Subway Line 2. 乘车到达那里很方便，可乘坐公共汽车17路、59路或69路以及地铁2号线。 ⑤Hangzhou has some top tourist attractions, which attract millions of visitors every year. 杭州有一些顶级的旅游景点，每年吸引数百万游客。 ⑥As is known to all, Mount Hua is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and its unique characteristics. 正如大家所知道的，华山以它险峻的悬崖和它独一无二的特征而出名。 ⑦It is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave. 这是一个你必须参观的地方，非凡的景色会让你不愿离开。 3．常用结束句 ①We were astonished by its beauty.It is well worth visiting. 我们震撼于它的美丽。它很值得参观。 ②It has been a great trip, filling us with so many happy memories. 这是一次很棒的旅行，给我们留下了很多美好的回忆。 ③It has been a wonderful trip so far, and I am loving the city! 到目前为止，这是一次美妙的旅行，我爱这个城市！ ④ We were all tired, but our trip to...was really unforgettable. 我们都很累, 但是我们的旅程真的很难忘。 【万能写作模板】给出写作模板,便于识记。 Dear________, I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that .(寒暄句加主题句) (扩展句一) (扩展句二) (扩展句三) I will greatly appreciate a response from your earliest convenience./I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.(结束主体段落) Best regards.(结束语) Sincerely yours,________ 假定你是李华，你校外教Smith准备利用即将到来的中秋节假期去北京游玩，想征询你们的建议。请你给他写一封英文邮件，内容包括：1. 旅行建议（景点、美食、交通等）；2. 表达祝愿。                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             第一步：审题 这是一篇建议性的英文邮件写作。需要根据题目要求，为外教Smith提供北京旅行的实用建议，包括去哪里玩、吃什么特色美食以及如何便捷地在北京出行。同时，邮件还需要包含对Smith旅行的美好祝愿。 第二步：写作提纲 开头：简短问候并表明写信目的。 主体：推荐几个北京著名的旅游景点，如故宫、颐和园、长城。介绍北京特色美食，如北京烤鸭、炸酱面。提供出行建议，如乘坐地铁或使用共享单车。希望Smith在北京度过一个愉快的中秋节假期。 结尾：期待Smith的旅行反馈，并再次表达祝愿。 第三步：选词组句 可能用到的词语及中文解释： attraction (n.):景点 cuisine (n.): 菜肴 subway (n.): 地铁 shared bike (n.): 共享单车 enjoy oneself (phrase): 玩得开心 第四步：连词成句 Dear Mr. Smith, I'm glad to hear you're planning a trip to Beijing during the Mid-Autumn Festival. Here are some travel suggestions for you. First, don't miss the famous attractions like the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace, and the Great Wall. These places are full of history and culture. As for food, you must try Beijing roast duck and noodles with soybean paste. They are delicious and typical of Beijing cuisine.Getting around Beijing is easy. You can take the subway or use shared bikes, which are convenient and environmentally friendly. I hope you enjoy yourself in Beijing during the holiday. Looking forward to hearing about your travel experiences! Best wishes, Li Hua 一、语篇写作 一．（24-25高二上·全国·课后作业）使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇 1．上个星期天，我们学生和老师愉快地徒步去了森林公园。 2．我们起得很早，7点就出发了。 3．直到一个小时后，我们才到达目的地。 4．沿着小路走，周围独特的风景让我们惊讶不已。 5．在森林公园里，让我们叹为观止的是远处迷雾缭绕的山脉。 6．在拍了一堆很棒的照片后，我们坐上一辆开往家的公共汽车。 7．由于这次徒步旅行，我们不仅亲近了大自然，而且缓解了压力。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Last Sunday，we students and our teachers took a pleasant hike to the Forest Park. We arose early and started out at 7 a.m. It was not until an hour later that we reached our destination. Walking alongside the path, we were astonished at the exceptional surrounding scenery. In the Forest Park, what took our breath away was the misty mountains in the distance. After taking a bunch of awesome photographs, we took a bus bound home. Owing to the hike, not only did we get close to nature but also have our stress relieved. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放型作文。要求考生叙述一次徒步旅行的经历。 【详解】1.词汇积累 惊讶的：astonished→surprised 由于：owing to→due to 到达：reach→get to 令人愉快的：pleasant→entertaining 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：Walking alongside the path, we were astonished at the exceptional surrounding scenery. 拓展句：When we were walking alongside the path, we were astonished at the exceptional surrounding scenery.. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In the Forest Park, what took our breath away was the misty mountains in the distance.(运用了what引导的主语从句) 【高分句型2】It was not until an hour later that we reached our destination. (运用了强调句) 2．（23-24高一下·上海闵行·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高一学生李华，你的笔友David 要来中国旅游，因为对中国文化很感兴趣，他发邮件请你推荐一个旅游景点。在老街古镇和博物馆之间你会推荐哪一个？理由是什么？ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear David, I’m thrilled to hear that you’re planning a trip to China! Given your keen interest in Chinese culture, I would highly recommend visiting an ancient town like Laojie. Laojie offers a unique glimpse into traditional Chinese life. Walking through its narrow lanes, you’ll be surrounded by ancient buildings, traditional crafts, and local delicacies. The atmosphere is rich in history and culture, allowing you to immerse yourself in the authentic essence of China. In contrast, museums, though informative, lack the lived-in feel and authentic charm of a place like Laojie. I’m confident that a visit to Laojie will leave you with unforgettable memories and a deeper understanding of Chinese culture. I look forward to hearing about your adventures! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生写信给David，推荐一个中国的旅游景点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 围绕：surround→enclose 本质：essence→nature 激动：thrilled→excited 难忘：unforgettable→memorable 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The atmosphere is rich in history and culture, allowing you to immerse yourself in the authentic essence of China. 拓展句：The atmosphere is rich in history and culture, which allows you to immerse yourself in the authentic essence of China. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Walking through its narrow lanes, you’ll be surrounded by ancient buildings, traditional crafts, and local delicacies. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] I’m confident that a visit to Laojie will leave you with unforgettable memories and a deeper understanding of Chinese culture. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 2． 书面表达 1．（23-24高二下·河南开封·期末）为了迎接即将到来的“世界旅游日”，你校计划举办一场英语写作比赛。请你自拟题目，用英语介绍一处你喜欢的历史名胜参赛。内容包括： 1．介绍该历史名胜； 2．简要总结并发出邀请。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Cangxiang Street Can you visit Nanluoguxiang in Anyang, Henan Province? Well, you can! You can find sights in the Cangxiang Street to rival anything you can see in Beijing. The buildings that lie on the Cangxiang Street have a history dating back to the Ming and Qing Dynasties. Stepping on to the street, you feel like being transported back in time. Deep in the street, you will be surrounded by the scent of traditional snacks. When night falls, the old street lamps cast a warm glow on your shoulders, quieting the whole street. The Cangxiang Street is a place where your senses come alive. What are you waiting for? 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生自拟题目，用英语介绍一处喜欢的历史名胜参赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 传统的：traditional→conventional 围绕：surround→embrace 地方：place→spot 踏上：step on to→set foot on 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Stepping on to the street, you feel like being transported back in time. 拓展句：When you step on to the street, you feel like being transported back in time. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Stepping on to the street, you feel like being transported back in time. (运用了现在分词短语Stepping on to 作状语) [高分句型2] The Cangxiang Street is a place where your senses come alive. (运用了where引导定语从句) 2．（23-24高一下·广东清远·期末）假定你是李华，你校英语公众号将发布以“The Place I Want to Visit Most”为主题的系列文章。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍一个你最想去的地方，内容包括： 1. 该地方名称； 2. 你的理由；     注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Place I Want to Visit Most ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Place I Want to Visit Most The place I most want to visit is the Great Wall of China. This magnificent structure stretches over 13,000 miles and is one of the most iconic landmarks in the world. I am eager to visit the Great Wall because of its historical significance and breathtaking views. Built to protect ancient China from invasions, the wall stands as a symbol of the wisdom and determination of the Chinese people. Walking along its ancient stones, I would feel a deep connection to the past. Moreover, the Great Wall offers impressive scenery, with parts of it winding through mountains and forests. Exploring this wonder of human engineering would be an unforgettable adventure, allowing me to appreciate both its history and natural beauty. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿，介绍一个你最想去的地方，内容包括：1.该地方名称；2.你的理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想要做某事：want to do sth.→would like to do sth. 渴望做某事：be eager to do sth.→long for doing sth. 难忘的：unforgettable→memorable 允许某人做某事：allow sb to do sth→permit sb to do sth 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Walking along its ancient stones, I would feel a deep connection to the past. 拓展句：When I am walking along its ancient stones, I would feel a deep connection to the past. 【点睛】[高分句型1] The place I most want to visit is the Great Wall of China.（运用了省略了that的定语从句） [高分句型2] Walking along its ancient stones, I would feel a deep connection to the past.（运用了现在分词作状语） 3．（23-24高一下·江西九江·期中）五一快到了，为了愉快并有意义地度过这个假期，请你做一个旅行计划。 内容要求： 1.旅行目的地，原因； 2.具体的细节； 3.词数80-100。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】May Day Plan The May Day holiday is approaching, and it is the best part of the school year for me. The place I most want to visit is Lijiang in Yunnan Province. The reason why I want to go there is that it is a very beautiful place with many ancient buildings. It’s said that the Lijiang old town has a history of more than 800 years and was once a confluence for trade along the old tea horse road. The Lijiang old town is also famous for its orderly system of waterways and bridges. It has been called the “Venice of the East.” I plan to stay there for 3 days and visit all those scenic spots, and hope I can have a better understanding of its history and culture. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生写一写关于五一假期的旅行计划。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想要：want→would like 美丽的：beautiful→pretty 著名的：famous→known 理解：understanding→comprehension 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：The May Day holiday is approaching, and it is the best part of the school year for me. 拓展句：The May Day holiday, which is the best part of the school year for me, is approaching. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason why I want to go there is that it is a very beautiful place with many ancient buildings.（运用了why引导的限制性定语从句和that引导的表语从句） 【高分句型2】It’s said that the Lijiang old town has a history of more than 800 years and was once a confluence for trade along the old tea horse road.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句构成的固定句型） 1．（2024·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： （1）你完成的作品； （2）你的感想。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted. In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 决定：decide→determine 整个的：entire→whole 提供：offer→provide 总之：in a word→in short 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. 拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers. 【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句) 2．（2023年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1.活动形式； 2.活动内容。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Jim, I was thrilled to receive your email about the club activity themed “Green Beijing”. I’m more than delighted to provide you with some suggestions for the event. Personally, I would recommend organizing an environmentally friendly exhibition. This can be held either at our school or within the community. It would be a great opportunity to raise awareness about environmental issues and engage more people in the cause. As for the content of the activity, you could consider setting up booths to promote environmental knowledge and encourage sustainable practices. Besides, organizing a community cleanup event would be a hands-on way to make a positive impact. I hope these suggestions are helpful to you. Wish you all the best for a successful“Green Beijing” club activity. Yyours, LLi Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封回信，就他正在策划的以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提出一些建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 兴奋的：thrilled→excited 高兴地：delighted→glad 建议：suggestion→tip 机会：opportunity→chance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I was thrilled to receive your email about the club activity themed “Green Beijing”. 拓展句：I was thrilled to receive your email about the club activity which is themed “Green Beijing”. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, organizing a community cleanup event would be a hands-on way to make a positive impact.（运用了动名词作主语） 【高分句型2】I hope these suggestions are helpful to you.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，that被省略） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 4 Journey Across a Vast Land (旅游报告）（人教版2019） Write an email about a journey （旅游报告） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 旅游报告 2024年全国高考卷 该部分的活动主题是“写一写乘坐火车横跨加拿大的旅行”( Write about a rail journey across Canada ),要求学生利用地图，以Li Daiyu和Liu Qian的旅行路线为线索，梳理、 概括两姐妹的旅行经历和见闻，并以此为主要内容，以Li Daiyu的口吻给其父母写一封家信 (电子邮件)。 Imagine that you are Li Daiyu. Using the map and your note to write an email to your parents telling them about your trip. text type; tense; person; Structures Contents connector; language) How do you write an email to your parents? What impressed you most during the journey? What did you see,hear do and how did you feel? What order would you follow when describing the journey? 1．（2024·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： （1）你完成的作品； （2）你的感想。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 本单元的写作任务是写一封旅游电子邮件，也就是以书信的形式写一篇旅游报告。旅游报告主要描写游览中的所见所闻以及所感。对于此类话题的文章可以按照以下几个步骤来写： 1．点明主题。简要介绍所游览的地方。 2．具体描述旅行的经历和见闻。描述时，应按照一定的时间、空间或逻辑顺序，这样可以使内容层次清晰。同时还应分清主次，详略得当，要突出最有特色、最感兴趣的事物。 3．描述自己的感受。既可以是旅游过程中对眼前景物的所思所想，也可以是所经历的人或事对自己的影响，但要与主题相呼应。 段落 内容 句子设计 开头 点明旅游的地方 visit/pay a visit/go to…for a visit/organize a visit to…/go to Dunhuang to explore the Silk Road. gather/get together at the school gate set out for…/head for…/set off for…by school bus/ by subway After one hour’s ride, we arrived at the gate of the museum. Upon arriving, we were shocked by how brilliant the palace was. The instant we arrived, we were attracted by the ancient building/an exhibition. 主体 具体叙述旅游经历和见闻 The guide gave us a brief introduction of … The guide greeted us at the gate of the… We entered in line, following the tour guide. We were led into … by the guide/ we followed the guide into… We took some notes while visiting. We were attracted by… What impressed me most was… With curiosity, we listened attentively. 结尾 对旅游的感悟 After this visit, we learned that… Through this trip, I realized the importance of respecting local customs and culture. The experience of hiking around the world broadened my horizon and enriched my life. As the Chinese saying goes: "It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books." 【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇; 1．                                   　 位于…… 2．                                    去……旅行 3．                                    视觉盛宴 4．                                     宜人的天气和令人惊叹的景色 5．                                    一个吸引人的地方 6．                                    从……的观点来看 7．                                    对公众开放 8．                                    看到 9.                                     接近大自然 10．                                    旅行 11．                                    玩得愉快 12．                                    梦想之旅 13．                                    交通拥挤 14．                                    名胜 15．                                    作为……而出名 16．                                    以……著名 17．                                    是……之乡/乐土 18．                                    有……美誉 【句式积累】: 1．常用开头句 ①Thank you so much for allowing me to go on this journey! 非常感谢您允许我踏上这段旅程！ ②After a tiring day, we finally arrived in the old country. 经过一天的劳累，我们终于到达了这个古老的国家。 ③I’d like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you. 我想和你分享一个最有趣的经历。 ④ I’m glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you. 我很高兴和大家分享我在上一个暑假里很难忘的旅行经历。 2．常用中间句 ①The university is located in the eastern suburbs of the city. 这座大学坐落在城市的东郊。 ②The village covers an area of 300 hectares, of which 30 are for tea production. 这个村庄占地300公顷，其中30公顷为茶园。 ③Standing on the top of the mountain, the temple has witnessed many changes in this area. 坐落在山顶的寺庙见证了这个地区的许多变化。 ④It's very convenient to get there by taking buses No. 17, 59 or 69 besides Subway Line 2. 乘车到达那里很方便，可乘坐公共汽车17路、59路或69路以及地铁2号线。 ⑤Hangzhou has some top tourist attractions, which attract millions of visitors every year. 杭州有一些顶级的旅游景点，每年吸引数百万游客。 ⑥As is known to all, Mount Hua is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and its unique characteristics. 正如大家所知道的，华山以它险峻的悬崖和它独一无二的特征而出名。 ⑦It is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave. 这是一个你必须参观的地方，非凡的景色会让你不愿离开。 3．常用结束句 ①We were astonished by its beauty.It is well worth visiting. 我们震撼于它的美丽。它很值得参观。 ②It has been a great trip, filling us with so many happy memories. 这是一次很棒的旅行，给我们留下了很多美好的回忆。 ③It has been a wonderful trip so far, and I am loving the city! 到目前为止，这是一次美妙的旅行，我爱这个城市！ ④ We were all tired, but our trip to...was really unforgettable. 我们都很累, 但是我们的旅程真的很难忘。 【万能写作模板】给出写作模板,便于识记。 Dear________, I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that .(寒暄句加主题句) (扩展句一) (扩展句二) (扩展句三) I will greatly appreciate a response from your earliest convenience./I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.(结束主体段落) Best regards.(结束语) Sincerely yours,________                                                                       假定你是李华，你校外教Smith准备利用即将到来的中秋节假期去北京游玩，想征询你们的建议。请你给他写一封英文邮件，内容包括：1. 旅行建议（景点、美食、交通等）；2. 表达祝愿。                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                第一步：审题 这是一篇建议性的英文邮件写作。需要根据题目要求，为外教Smith提供北京旅行的实用建议，包括去哪里玩、吃什么特色美食以及如何便捷地在北京出行。同时，邮件还需要包含对Smith旅行的美好祝愿。 第二步：写作提纲 开头：                                   。 主体：推荐几个北京著名的旅游景点，如故宫、颐和园、长城。介绍北京特色美食，如北京烤鸭、炸酱面。提供出行建议，如乘坐地铁或使用共享单车。希望Smith在北京度过一个愉快的中秋节假期。 结尾：                                   。 第三步：选词组句 可能用到的词语及中文解释：                                    (n.):景点                                     (n.): 菜肴                                     (n.): 地铁                                     (n.): 共享单车                                     (phrase): 玩得开心 第四步：连词成句                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Best wishes, Li Hua 一、语篇写作 一．（24-25高二上·全国·课后作业）使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇 1．上个星期天，我们学生和老师愉快地徒步去了森林公园。 2．我们起得很早，7点就出发了。 3．直到一个小时后，我们才到达目的地。 4．沿着小路走，周围独特的风景让我们惊讶不已。 5．在森林公园里，让我们叹为观止的是远处迷雾缭绕的山脉。 6．在拍了一堆很棒的照片后，我们坐上一辆开往家的公共汽车。 7．由于这次徒步旅行，我们不仅亲近了大自然，而且缓解了压力。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24高一下·上海闵行·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高一学生李华，你的笔友David 要来中国旅游，因为对中国文化很感兴趣，他发邮件请你推荐一个旅游景点。在老街古镇和博物馆之间你会推荐哪一个？理由是什么？ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2． 书面表达 1．（23-24高二下·河南开封·期末）为了迎接即将到来的“世界旅游日”，你校计划举办一场英语写作比赛。请你自拟题目，用英语介绍一处你喜欢的历史名胜参赛。内容包括： 1．介绍该历史名胜； 2．简要总结并发出邀请。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24高一下·广东清远·期末）假定你是李华，你校英语公众号将发布以“The Place I Want to Visit Most”为主题的系列文章。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍一个你最想去的地方，内容包括： 1. 该地方名称； 2. 你的理由；     注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Place I Want to Visit Most ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24高一下·江西九江·期中）五一快到了，为了愉快并有意义地度过这个假期，请你做一个旅行计划。 内容要求： 1.旅行目的地，原因； 2.具体的细节； 3.词数80-100。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．（2024·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： （1）你完成的作品； （2）你的感想。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．（2023年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1.活动形式； 2.活动内容。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$