Unit1 Trying new things 单元话题满分写作范文15篇-2024-2025学年七年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（牛津上海版2024）

Unit 1 Trying new things 单元话题满分写作范文15篇 一、书面表达 1．人生有很多个第一次组成，在每一个第一次的尝试中，我们也在慢慢成长。你还记得你有哪些印象深刻的第一次吗? 请根据要点和要求，以“I ________ for the first time”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的经历。 要点： 1.第一次做什么； 2.做这件事的过程； 3.感受。 要求： 1. 补全标题：如did housework, cooked, swam, went shopping等等； 2.不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息； 3.内容完整、思维连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐，可适当发挥； 4. 词数：不少于80。 I________for the first time _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．不登高山，不知天之高也；不临深溪，不知地之厚也。旅行可以让我们看到不同景物、了解不同文化、探索未知事物。 某英文网站正在开展以“难忘的旅行”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最难忘的一次旅行经历。主要内容包括：你去了哪里，什么时候去的，做了什么以及为什么是一次难忘的旅行。 根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语：famous places, take photos, present, wonderful 提示问题： ●When and where did you go? ● What did you do there? ●Why was the trip unforgettable? I still remember the trip.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．你尝试过网上购物吗？现如今，网购已经成为了许多人生活的一部分，对此你有何想法？请根据下表中的信息，写一篇英语短文分析网购的利弊，并说说你喜欢哪种购物方式及原因。 opinion (观点) 支持者 save  time  and  money;  almost  anything;  easy and  convenient… 反对者 can’t see real product; not always safe… 你 online shopping/traditional shopping… ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你叫Li Ming，在英国游学时不小心把朋友送给你的文具盒落在了图书馆自习室，你用邮件联系图书馆尝试找回你的文具盒，下面是对方回复你的邮件，阅读后请回复。 注意：词数60左右。开头和结尾已写好（不计入词数），只需接着写。 Dear Li Ming. I'm really sorry that you lost your pencil bag. We have several pencil bags in our Lost and Found. What color is your pencil bag? Is it big or small? What's in it? If we find it, we will mail it to you. Please write soon. Yours, Smith Dear Smith, Thanks for your e-mail. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________ 5．你所居住的街道新开了一家名为“Happy Dessert”的甜点屋。请根据下面要点提示，为店主写一个英语小广告，介绍一下它的相关产品及特点。 要点提示：1. 产品种类及规格；2. 特色产品及优点。 要求：1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；2. 词数：60左右；结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 写作方法指导 开头：欢迎光临Happy Dessert； Welcome to 主体：要点1-2：介绍甜品屋的产品规格及种类、特色产品及优点； There are We have 结尾：再次尝试邀请大家来甜品屋。 Come and see _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Come and see for yourself at Happy Dessert! 6．人人都钟爱的假期除了能使我们彻底放松身心外，还有什么有意义的事情值得尝试？除了玩乐，我们还能从假期中获益什么呢？请根据以下图片提示，写一篇题为“How to spend our vacation?”的作文。下列词汇可供参考：              Sports            Museum          City Clean-up Day    Animal Protection 1. do some sports 2. take a trip; visit the…museum 3. be a volunteer 4. protect the animals 5. it helps to…; not only...but also... 要求： 1．表达清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，上下文连贯，书写工整； 2．必须包括要点提示所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3．词数：80词左右； 4．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 How to Spend Our Vacation? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．一年的初中生活，我们会遇到一些志同道合的朋友，与他们相识、相知，我们的言谈举止、兴趣爱好甚至性格品行等都或多或少都受到他们的影响。朋友做的事，我们会去关注：朋友觉得有趣的事，我们会去尝试。假如你是Daniel，请根据表格内容提示，以“My best friend”为题，向大家介绍你的好朋友Andy，并谈谈你对他的了解。 简介 个人基本情况介绍 兴趣爱好 喜欢小动物，……(举例说明) 喜欢户外活动，……(举例说明) 个人能力 思维敏捷，……擅长体育运动，…… 品行事迹 ……(典型事例说明) 感想 …… 要求: 1. 所写内容必须包括表格提示的所有要点，可适当发挥。 2. 词数: 80词左右。 3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My best friend _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．你是阳光中学七年级学生李华。暑假即将到来，你校准备组织英语夏令营活动，现在正在招聘志愿者，你非常感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封自荐信，要点如下： 1. 英语好，喜欢交友； 2. 爱好户外活动，喜欢尝试新事物； 3. 做事有条理，乐于助人（请举例说明）。 注意： 1. 词数70左右。自荐信已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。 2. 自荐信中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 Dear Sir/Madam, I am very interested in working as a volunteer for the English summer camp. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope I can be a volunteer of the camp. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours truly, Li Hua 9．成功的第一步永远是付诸行动，如果不勇于尝试，再多的想法也无济于事。在你的学习和生活成长历程中，哪一次尝试令你印象深刻？请你以“An Unforgettable Try”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊英语专栏投稿。 1.要点：1)介绍一次令你难忘的尝试； 2)这次尝试给你的感受； 3)它给你带来的改变。 2.要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2) 词数 100 左右。 An Unforgettable Try _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．尝试是一种积极的生活态度，它让我们在面对困难时不退缩，不逃避，而是积极地去寻找解决问题的方法。只有敢于尝试，我们才能突破自我，实现更大的成就。请你结合自身体验描述一次挑战自我的经历。内容包括： 1. 你曾经尝试过做什么？ 2. 你是如何突破自我的？ 3. 这次尝试给你的启示是什么？ 注意： 1. 词数：100左右(已给出的短文开头，不计入总词数)； 2. 内容完整 (照抄阅读语篇不得分)； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Trying is a positive attitude towards life. You would never know what you can get until you have a try. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英文写作。文中已给的内容不计入总词数。所给的提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的班级和姓名。 勇于尝试是一种乐于探索，敢于面对失败的表现。只有勇于尝试，才能不断突破自我，取得进步。某英文网站正在开展以“勇于尝试”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你曾经勇于尝试做过的一件事，以及你的收获。 提示词语：afraid, encouragement, prepare, practice, confident 提示问题： 1.What have you ever tried doing? 2.What did you do? 3.What have you learned from the experience? There are many chances for us to try new things in our life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．作为中学生，我们在学习和生活中常常会遇到各种困难和挑战。只有保持不放弃的精神，我们最终才能取得成功。这种精神是我们成长过程中至关重要的一部分，有助于培养我们的毅力和韧性。 某校英语报正举办主题为“困难面前，不轻言放弃”的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文参赛。内容包括： ●The spirit of never giving up easily you have ●An experience you had ●Your opinions about the spirit __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．假如你是李华，经常收听English Songs这个音乐节目，请你用英语给节目主持人写一封信，信的要点如下： 1. 很喜欢这个节目，听这个节目已经两年了，到目前为止学会了好几首英文歌曲。 2. 当学习疲劳或心情低落时，听音乐可以让你放松。最喜欢You Raise Me Up这首歌，它鼓励你勇敢面对挑战，决不放弃。 3. 听英语歌曲对学习英语也很有帮助。 4. 建议主持人花更多的时间和听众用英语交流，你会把这个节目介绍给更多的朋友。 要求如下： 1. 认真审题，把握要点；行文连贯，条理清晰；适当拓展； 2. 文中不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息； 3. 不少于 80词。 Dear Sir or Madam, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 14．近年来，国家提出了“绿水青山就是金山银山”的理念，人们越来越关注环保。为了向全世界展示绿色中国，学生会倡议每位同学围绕“如何进行低碳生活”写一篇英语文章，介绍自己如何从身边小事做起，尝试进行低碳生活。 “低碳生活”的意义 (1) 可以节约能源。 (2) 有利于减少污染，改善环境。 “低碳生活”的措施 (1) 节约资源：外出时及时关掉电脑和电器；关水笼头，循环利用水； (2) 减少污染，步行、骑自行车上学； (3) 自行补充。 个人观点和希望 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.短文必须包括表格中提示的所有要点，并作适当发挥； 3.词数：70 左右（文章开头已给，不计入总词数）； 4.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇：resource 资源    electrical applications 电器 How to Live a Low-Carbon Life(低碳生活) As we all know, having a low-carbon life is very important to us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．成功需要尝试。个人的成长和进步离不开尝试。 同学们一定有很多印象深刻的经历比如第一次做饭、第一次演讲、第一次参加运动会等。某英文网站正在开展以“Trying”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华请用英语写一篇短文投稿谈谈你在某个方面的首次尝试以及你的感受。 提示词语：cooking, speech, glad, excited, important 提示问题：●What was your first experience of doing something? ●How did you feel? Trying   I would like to introduce one of my first tries. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 9 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．例文 I swam for the first time As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time when I learned to swim. Last summer holiday, I wanted to learn how to swim. I asked my father to teach me. He agreed. So I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of staying in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water. But my father always encouraged me. He said he would protect me. Then I began to swim, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then my father told me how to move and how to stretch out my hands and legs. Slowly I could move a little. It took me about four hours to learn how to swim. I felt quite happy. What an unforgettable experience it was! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明难忘的事件； 第二步，具体阐述如何完成这事件； 第三步，总结感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be afraid of害怕 ②stretch out伸出 [高分句型] ①I still remember the first time when I learned to swim.（when引导的定语从句） ②It took me about four hours to learn how to swim.（不定式作主语） 2．例文 I still remember the trip. Last summer vacation I traveled to Beijing with my parents. We visited many famous places, such as the Forbidden City, the Great Wall and so on. We also took a lot of photos. Before coming back, I also bought some presents for my good friends. It was a wonderful trip. If I have the chance, I will travel here again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己仍然记得一次旅行； 第二步，具体介绍这次旅行，主要围绕“时间、地点 、做的事情和感悟”展开； 第三步，书写结语，表达“有机会，希望再去”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②and so on等等 ③take photos照相 ④a lot of许多 [高分句型] ①If I have the chance, I will travel here again.（if引导条件状语从句） 3．例文： Nowadays, shopping online has been more and more popular. It is convenient and easy because people can buy things at any time. It can save time and money. You can buy almost anything you want online. People don’t have to waste time to go from one shop to another to choose the things they like. Online goods are usually cheaper than the goods in shops because online shops don’t have to pay taxes. However, shopping online also has its disadvantages. The consumers can’t see real product. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. They are not always safe because some shops on the Internet are not registered. Online shopping is more convenient and cheaper, but I prefer traditional shopping because it is safer. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据下表中的信息，写一篇英语短文分析网购的利弊，并说说自己喜欢哪种购物方式及原因。 2.写作指导：本文一般现在时写作。书写时要紧扣主题，分层阐述网购利弊，短文结尾陈述自己的观点；书写时要注意正确使用短语，适当使用并列句和复合句以丰富文章句式。 4．例文 Dear Smith, Thanks for your e-mail. I’m happy you’ve found some pencil bags, and I’m sure my pencil bag is right among them. My pencil bag is blue, because blue is my favorite color. And it is a big one. There are three pens, two pencils and one eraser that looks like a cat in my pencil bag. Actually, it’s a present from my best friend, so it means a lot to me. Looking forward to your reply, thank you so much. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求你以Li Ming的身份给图书馆回复邮件，针对对方帮你找遗落在图书馆自习室的文具盒一事，作出细节回复，以便对方能够帮你顺利找到文具盒。注意先阅读对方的邮件内容，明确回复要点。 例文点评：文章主要采用第三人称展开描述，时态以一般现在时为主。文章详细描述了文具盒的颜色、外观以及里面的物品详情，并且表示了该文具盒的重要性。文章层次分明，逻辑清晰，语言质朴。 高分亮点： 短语：thanks for；be sure；look like；a present from；mean a lot to sb.；look forward to。 句型：省略引导词that的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；there be句型。 5．      Welcome to Happy Dessert! There are many kinds of ice-creams. They are very delicious and cheap. Now we have three great new specials: apple and banana ice-cream, orange and pear ice-cream, watermelon and strawberry ice-cream. And what size cup of ice-cream would you like? We have large, medium and small cups of ice-cream. We also have juice, cola and green tea. Come and see for yourself at Happy Dessert! 【解析】略 6．例文 How to Spend Our Vacation? It’s time for us to experience more, think more and learn more during our vacation. To make us know more about the world, we can travel away from home to outdoors. We can visit farms, factories and museums. In the holiday, we can do more sports. It helps us not only practice exercising but also keep healthy. We can also be the volunteers on the City Clean-up Day. Animals are our best friends, and we can give out some posters in the street to show how to protect the animals. The amazing activities there will let us get what we can’t learn from school. These can help us grow into a more useful person. In short, holidays can be impressive and fruitful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“How to Spend Our Vacation?”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，在假期中多体验、多思考、多学习； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，在不同的地方可以做什么从假期中获益； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①know more about了解更多关于 ②keep healthy保持健康 ③grow into成长为 [高分句型] ①It’s time for us to experience more, think more and learn more during our vacation.（It固定句型） ②The amazing activities there will let us get what we can’t learn from school.（what引导的的宾语从句） 7．例文 My best friend Hi, my name is Daniel. I have a good friend. His name is Andy. He is 12 years old. He is a student of Class 4, Grade 7. He is tall and fat. He has short black hair. He enjoys camping very much. He also likes cats. He has a quick mind and is good at various sports, such as swimming and playing basketball. He is kind and polite. He is willing to listen to our problems and offer his help. I like to play with Andy because he always helps me a lot. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍安迪的基本情况。 第二步，介绍安迪的兴趣爱好。 第三步，介绍安迪的个人能力。 第四步，介绍安迪的品行事迹及自己的感想。 [亮点词汇] ①a student of……的学生 ②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 ③be good at擅长 ④listen to听 ⑤play with玩 [高分句型] ①He is willing to listen to our problems and offer his help.（and并列连词） ②I like to play with Andy because he always helps me a lot.（because引导的原因状语从句） 8．例文 Dear Sir/Madam, I am very interested in working as a volunteer for the English summer camp. I’m good at English and I like making friends. I love outdoor activities, such as swimming, cycling and playing ball games. I always think carefully when I work and I plan everything well. I also like to try new things. I’m always ready to help others. For example, my neighbours know I do well in using computers. Whenever they have problems with their computer work, I will give them a hand. I hope I can be a volunteer of the camp. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours truly, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，要求写一篇自荐信； ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作时应围绕所给提示信息写作，并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：文章开头已经给出，应承接文章开头，接着写出想成为志愿者的原因及你擅长做的事情； 第二步：对自荐信进行总结，写出你的期待和愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②make friends做朋友 ③such as比如 ④be ready to愿意做某事 [高分句型] ①Whenever they have problems with their computer work, I will give them a hand.（whenever引导时间状语从句） 9．例文： An Unforgettable Try As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable try, I still remember the first time I learn to play basketball. I had never played basketball before, but I decided to give it a try. The first practice was challenging. The ball kept slipping from my hands, and the ball was often out of control. However, my teammates were supportive and encouraging. They taught me the basics and helped me improve. Over time, I got better. The most memorable moment was when I scored my first point in a game. It was an unforgettable experience that taught me the importance of teamwork and perseverance. I learned that with practice and effort, anything is possible. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中一次难忘的尝试的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。介绍第一次学习打篮球让自己很难忘； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍学习打篮球的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。团队合作和坚持不懈很重要。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth决定做某事 ②keep doing sth一直做某事 ③out of control失控 ④help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①I had never played basketball before, but I decided to give it a try. (动词不定式作宾语) ②The most memorable moment was when I scored my first point in a game.(when引导表语从句) 10．例文     Trying is a positive attitude towards life. You would never know what you can get until you have a try.     Last term, there was a speech competition in our school. I never entered a speech competition because I was afraid to speak in public. With encouragement from my parents, I decided to give it a try. To prepare for the competition, I studied some speech videos carefully. Then I wrote my speech, and practiced delivering it again and again. Finally, I gave an excellent performance and won the third place. From this experience, I’ve learned that it’s meaningful to try something new. It can help us find and develop our hidden talents and become more confident as well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“尝试是一种积极的人生态度。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——尝试的事、如何突破以及启示等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“尝试新事物可以帮助我们发现和发展我们隐藏的才能，同时也让我们变得更加自信。”的美好。 [亮点词汇] ①have a try试一试 ②prepare for为……做准备 ③more confident更自信 [高分句型] ①I never entered a speech competition because I was afraid to speak in public. (because引导的原因状语从句） ②From this experience, I’ve learned that it’s meaningful to try something new. (现在完成时的用法) 11．例文： There are many chances for us to try new things in our life. Last term, there was a speech competition in our school. I never entered a speech competition because I was afraid to speak in public. With encouragement from my parents, I decided to give it a try. To prepare for the competition, I studied some speech videos carefully. Then I wrote my speech, and practiced delivering it again and again. Finally, I gave an excellent performance and won the third place. From this experience, I’ve learned that it’s meaningful to try something new. It can help us find and develop our hidden talents and become more confident as well. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你曾经尝试做了什么； 第二步，具体描述其中的过程； 第三步，最后介绍你从中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ① be afraid to do害怕做 ② decide to do决定做 ③ as well也 [高分句型] I never entered a speech competition because I was afraid to speak in public.（原因状语从句） 12．范文 Everyone meets difficulties on the way to success. But we can’t give up easily when facing difficulties. I got a big one three years ago. I had trouble with English speaking. My pronunciation was poor. It made me nervous to speak in front of others because I worried about making mistakes. After noticing that, my English teacher Mr. Zhang advised me to listen to recordings and try to repeat after them every day. I followed his suggestions and my pronunciation improved a lot. I even gave a short speech in front of my classmates with his encouragement and help! After that, I became more confident and I realized that overcoming difficulties helped me grow up. And now, I’m willing to face it bravely whenever I meet something difficult. Never give up and we can make it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入永不放弃的话题； 第二步，介绍战胜困难的经历； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①on the way to在……的路上 ②be worried about担心…… ③make mistakes犯错误 [高分句型] ①It made me nervous to speak in front of others because I worried about making mistakes.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②And now, I’m willing to face it bravely whenever I meet something difficult. （whenever引导的时间状语从句） 13．A possible version： Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua, a regular listener of your program. I have been listening to your program for two years and have learned several English songs from it. Listening to music helps me relax when I feel tired or down. My favorite song is “You Raise Me Up,” which encourages me to face challenges bravely and never give up. Moreover, listening to English songs is also beneficial for learning English. I suggest that you spend more time communicating with us in English. I will definitely introduce this program to my friends who are interested in learning English through music. Best regards, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。首先表达自己很喜欢这个节目； 第二步，解释自己喜欢这个节目的原因； 第三步，书写结语，提出一些建议。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb do sth.帮助某人做某事 ②encourage sb to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 ③give up放弃 ④be beneficial for对……有益 [高分句型] ①Listening to music helps me relax when I feel tired or down.(动名词作主语；when引导的时间状语从句) ②I will definitely introduce this program to my friends who are interested in learning English through music.(定语从句) 14．例文 How to Live a Low-Carbon Life As we all know, having a low-carbon life is very important to us. First, I think having a low-carbon life can help us save a lot of energy. What’s more, it can help us reduce pollution and improve our environment. To live a low-carbon life, what should we do? First, we should pay attention to our daily life. We can turn off the computers and other electrical applications when we leave the room. And it is also important for us to turn off the tap after it is used. As for saving paper, we can do it by writing on both sides of paper. We can walk or ride a bike to school instead of driving a car. When we go shopping, we had better bring our own bags instead of plastic bags. If everyone can do a little, the future will be brighter and more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍“低碳生活”的意义”的意义； 第二步，介绍“低碳生活”的意义”的措施。 [亮点词汇] ①what’s more 并且 ②pay attention to 注意 ③turn off 关闭 [高分句型] ①First, I think having a low-carbon life can help us save a lot of energy（动名词作主语） ②To live a low-carbon life, what should we do?（动词不定式作目的状语） 15．例文 Trying I would like to introduce one of my first tries. I was born in a village. I had never left my village until last Sunday. Last Sunday, I had a trip to Shandong with my parents. We went there by train. We got up on the early morning. It was not very bright when we came to the station. Ten windows were selling tickets, so we didn’t wait for a long time. We bought three tickets to Qingdao. About twenty minutes later, the train came and we got on it. Woo! How long the train was! It could take a lot of people. Trains were so fun. I was very excited. I told my parents to take a train again when we came back. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要是一般过去时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你的感受，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍你在某个方面的首次尝试； 第二步，具体阐述这次尝试的经过； 第三步，谈谈你的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①by train乘火车 ②bright明亮的 ③excited激动的 [高分句型] ①It was not very bright when we came to the station. （when引导的时间状语从句） ②How long the train was!（how引导的感叹句） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 11 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$