Unit1 写作课件2024-2025学年沪教版（2024）七年级英语上册

Unit 1 Writing 作文还是要写的，毕竟拉开差距靠它 Basic information appearance Hobbies Personal qualities 1. What kind of people will you show respect for? 2. Who is your most respected person? DISCUSSION 假如你叫Susan, Aunt Molly是你最尊敬的(respected)人。请根据下面表格中有关她的介绍，以 “My Most Respected Person” 为题，写一篇80词以上的文章，可以适当发挥。(文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数) Read the writing requirements Aunt Molly Age & Career 35, teacher Hobbies writing poems, traveling Characters clever, beautiful, kind Hopes to visit China and write poems about it 审题 列大纲 遣词造句 检查 1 2 3 写作步骤 Writing steps 4 1. 题目：____________________________ 2. 字数：____________________________ 3. 人称：____________________________ 4. 时态：____________________________ 5. 内容：____________________________ 审题 My Most Respected Person 第一和第三人称 一般现在时 80 字以上 表格要点、适当发挥 假如你叫Susan, Aunt Molly是你最尊敬的(respected)人。请根据下面表格中有关她的介绍，以 “My Most Respected Person” 为题，写一篇80词以上的文章，可以适当发挥。(文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数) 审题 列大纲 遣词造句 检查 1 2 3 写作步骤 Writing steps 4 假如你叫Susan, Aunt Molly是你最尊敬的(respected)人。请根据下面表格中有关她的介绍，以 “My Most Respected Person” 为题，写一篇80词以上的文章，可以适当发挥。(文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数) Read the writing requirements Aunt Molly Age & Career 35, teacher Hobbies writing poems, traveling Characters clever, beautiful, kind Hopes to visit China and write poems about it 1. 引出最尊敬的人 2. 详细人物介绍 3. 表达情感 审题 列大纲 遣词造句 检查 1 2 3 写作步骤 Writing steps 4 遣词造句就如化妆，有起死回生之效 作文“换头术”你值得拥有！ Let’s learn some words and phrases of describing people. （1）年龄、职业 她今年35岁。 She is 35 years old. 她是一名老师。 She is a teacher. 素颜版 How to describe a person ? How to describe a person ? sb. + be动词 + a/an + x-year-old + 职业. sb. + work/works as + 职业 + who + be动词 + x years old. She is a 35-year-old teacher. She works as a teacher who is 35 years old. 相当于形容词 化妆版 （1）年龄、职业 引导定语从句 记笔记 Mary是一个34岁的老师。 Mary is an 34-year-old teacher. Yi works as a singer who is 24 years old. How to describe a person ? 易洋千玺是一个24岁的歌手。 sb. + be动词 + a/an + x-year-old + 职业. sb. + work/works as + 职业 + who + be动词 + x years old. 造句练习 She likes/enjoys writing poems and traveling. 她喜欢写诗和旅行。 （2）兴趣爱好 素颜版 How to describe a person ? How to describe a person ? 化妆版 sb. + not only + like/likes doing A + but also + like/likes doing B. She not only likes writing poems but also likes traveling. She is fond of / is interested in writing poems and traveling. sb. + be fond of / be interested in + doing. She likes spending time writing poems and traveling. sb. like/likes + spending time doing. （2）兴趣爱好 （注意not only…but also…用在实义动词前） 记笔记 （3）外貌和性格 How to describe a person ? beautiful; ugly good; kind; bad （3）外貌和性格 How to describe a person ? 匀称的；胖乎乎的；苗条的 白皙的；黝黑的 卷曲的；直的；浓密的；秃顶的 明亮的；呆滞的 shapely chubby slim fair tanned curly straight bushy bald bright dull 形容身材： 形容皮肤： 形容头发： 形容眼睛： How to describe a person ? 她身材很匀称，有着一头黄色卷发。 表示戴眼镜、帽子、头发使用with She is shapely with curly yellow hair. 造句练习 美小圆旧黄 （3）外貌和性格 How to describe a person ? 诚实的；不诚实的 勇敢的；胆小的 礼貌的；无礼的 大方的；小气的 细心的；粗心的 honest dishonest brave timid polite impolite generous mean careful careless How to describe a person ? （3）外貌和性格 She is clever and kind. 她聪明且善良。 素颜版 sb. is a/an … person. + 体现性格细节的句子 化妆版 She is a clever and kind person. She knows a lot of things and she often helps others in need. 她聪明且善良。她了解很多东西，而且她经常帮助别人。 How to describe a person ? （3）外貌和性格 How to describe a person ? She hopes to visit China one day and write some poems about it. 她希望有一天能去游览中国，写一些关于中国的诗。 （4）心愿、期盼 素颜版 sb. + look/looks forward to + doing ... She looks forward to visiting China one day and writing some poems about it. 化妆版 How to describe a person ? （4）心愿、期盼 记笔记 聪明人都知道看看别人怎么写的! 范文呈现 My Most Respected Person Hi, my name is Susan. Aunt Molly is my most respected person. The reasons are as follows. She works as a teacher who is 35 years old. In her free time, she likes spending time writing poems and traveling. She can write excellent poems and she often teaches me how to write poems. She is shapely with curly black hair. She is a clever and kind woman, and she always helps others in need. She looks forward to visiting China and writing some poems about it one day. I love to stay with her forever! 95 words 范文 Example 入门测 1. 她是一名35岁的教师。 2. 她喜欢写诗和旅行。 3. 她身材很匀称，有着一头黑色卷发。 4. 她希望有一天能去游览中国，写一些关于中国的诗。 入门测 1. 她是一名35岁的教师。 2. 她喜欢写诗和旅行。 3. 她身材很匀称，有着一头黑色卷发。 4. 她希望有一天能去游览中国，写一些关于中国的诗。 She works as a teacher who is 35 years old. She not only likes writing poems but also likes traveling. She is shapely with curly black hair. She looks forward to visiting China and writing some poems about it one day. THANK YOU！ e7d195523061f1c0f0ec610a92cff745ee13794c7b8d98f8E73673273C9E8BE17CC3D63B9B1D6426C348A354AD505654C28F453CD7C8F90EADD06C08281DAED7140E5AAAED5880ECE414DFB6A93B82BE019406867034C3A8500A4827DCF3FBF74A471B736410707E336A01C9ADC9BE02ACCB8DF2121D81636A067B8AE80C6AB6F014154F4E7B7247 29 $$