Unit 4 Section 9 Writing a personal profile(课件PPT)-【赢在微点·轻松课堂】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第二册（北师大版）

赢在微点 轻松课堂 英语 UNIT 4 INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY Section 9　Writing a personal profile UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 题型解读 谋篇思路 个人简介主要内容为简单介绍人物的性格、爱好和经历等重要信息。同时也要根据写作题目的具体要求突出表达要点 首段:介绍姓名、年龄、年级和学校等基本信息 主体段落:描述外貌、性格特征、喜欢的科目、学习方法和爱好等 尾段:介绍将来的计划、梦想或对人物的评价 UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 ◆夺人眼球开头句 1.I’m Li Hua, a student of senior high school. 我是李华, 一名高中学生。 2.My name is Li Hua, a senior high school student from Shanghai. 我叫李华,一名来自上海的高中生。 3.I’m a Senior One student of Xinhua Middle School, and I’m 15 years old. 我是新华中学的高一学生,今年15岁。 UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 5 ◆亮点出彩篇中句 1.I’m outgoing and confident, so I’m easy to get along with. 我外向、自信,因此很容易相处。 2.Swimming and playing chess are my hobbies. 我爱好游泳和下象棋。 3.My favorite subject is physics. 物理是我最喜欢的科目。 4.I am always ready to help others in trouble, and am popular among my classmates. 我总是乐于帮助处于困境中的人,并且很受同学们的欢迎。 UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 5.I really cared about others and was good at listening to others. 我很关心他人,善于倾听他人。 6.I’ve helped my teacher organise several English parties successfully. 我帮助我的老师成功地组织了几次英语派对。 7.Although I study hard to improve my studies, I still find time to take part in various activities. 尽管我努力学习提高成绩,但我仍然找时间参加各种各样的活动。 UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 ◆韵味无穷结尾句 1.I’m looking forward to making progress in English with the help of my teacher. 我盼望着在我的老师的帮助下,在英语方面取得进步。 2.I hope my dream of going to a top university can come true. 我希望我上一流大学的梦想能成为现实。 3.Students spoke highly of him and all respected him. 学生们对他评价很高,而且都很尊重他。 UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 　　假定你是高中学生李华,在班会上用英语介绍自己,请按以下写作要点,写一篇发言稿:1.你的姓名和性格;2.你的爱好、兴趣等;3.你的梦想。 注意:写作词数应为80左右。 UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 第一步:认真审题　谋篇布局 体裁 人称 时态   要点结构图 首段(自我介绍) 介绍自己的姓名和性格 记叙文 第一人称 一般现在时 主体段落(陈述爱好、兴趣) 叙述自己的爱好和兴趣 尾段(简练到位) 说明自己的梦想并总结 UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 第二步:斟词酌句　靓化表达 1.我对世界的一切感到好奇。 。 2.我勤奋而且能全神贯注地上课。 。 。 I’m curious about everything around the world.  I am hard-working and can always concentrate on my lessons.  UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 3.我英语很好,并且帮助我的老师成功地组织了几次英语派对,它们给我的老师和同学们留下了深刻的印象。 I’m good at English and . , which . .  → 。 . 。 (利用so ... that ... 句式升级)  I have helped my teacher successfully organise several English parties have left a deep impression on my teacher and classmates I’m so good at English that I have helped my teacher successfully organise several English parties, which have left a deep impression on my teacher and classmates. UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 4.我不仅对阅读、游泳感兴趣而且痴迷绘画。(主+系+表) 。 . 5.我的目标是将来成为一名设计师并盼望着为学生们设计美丽的校园。 , and . .  6.这就是我,一个勤奋而自信的学生。 Such is me, .  I am not only interested in reading and swimming but also crazy about drawing.  My goal is to become a designer in the future I’m looking forward to designing beautiful campuses for students a hard-working and confident student UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 第三步:合理过渡　完美卷面 (用恰当的衔接过渡词汇,如besides, in addition等) UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 　 I’m Li Hua, a senior high school student, who is curious about everything around the world. To be honest, I am hard-working and can always concentrate on my lessons. Besides, I’m so good at English that I have helped my teacher successfully organise several English parties, which have left a deep impression on my teacher and classmates. In addition, I am not only interested in reading and swimming but also crazy about drawing. 范文 UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 My goal is to become a designer in the future, and I’m looking forward to designing beautiful campuses for students. Such is me, a hard-working and confident student. 范文 UNIT 4　Section 9　Writing a personal profile 轻松课堂 高中英语 必修 第二册 第 ‹#› 页 赢在字里行间 $$