专题13 读后续写如何表达激动背默与仿写（词-句-文）讲义-2025年新高考英语读后续写提分宝典

《2025年新高考英语读后续写提分宝典》 专题13 读后续写如何表达激动背默与仿写（词-句-文）讲义 原卷版 晨读背诵区：背诵迁移 举一反三 一、晨读素材-必背单词 1.激动类形容词和副词： 初阶 excited感到激动的; exciting令人激动的 高阶 thrilled感到激动的; thrilling令人激动的; excitedly 2. 激动类名词和动词： 初阶 excitement激动, excite使激动 高阶 thrill激动，兴奋, exaltation得意洋洋，欣喜 二、高频语块 1. cheer up 振奋起来 2. with/in excitement 激动地 3. flush with excitement 激动得满脸通红 4. conceal/hide one’s excitement 难掩激动 5. contain one’s excitement 抑制内心的激动　 6. to one’s excitement/thrill 令某人激动的是　 7. a scream of thrill/excitement 激动的尖叫声 8. a ripple/ shiver/wave /surge of excitement 一阵兴奋 9. tears of happiness flowing down 流下幸福的泪水 10. feel a mixture of excitement and happiness 感觉既兴奋又开心 三、佳句赏析 1. His voice was choked with emotion.他情绪激动,难以成声。 2. His face was lit up with excitement.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。 3. Her face was glowing with excitement.她因兴奋而显得容光焕发。 4. A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵兴奋的涟漪掠过他们。 5. Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她红红的脸因激动而发亮。 6. My heart is in my mouth whenever I hear the national anthem.每当我听到国歌就激动不已。 7. Her heart was fluttering with anxiety as well as excitement.她的心又兴奋又不安，怦怦乱跳。 8. Tears of excitement welled up in her eyes as she accepted the flowers.当她接过献花时，激动的泪水充满了她的眼睛。 9. The teacher's encouragement warmed his heart. He felt a surge of excitement.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心,他感到一阵兴奋。 10. A shiver of excitement passed through her stomach when she heard the news.听到这个消息,一阵激动的战栗传到她的胃里。 11. Hearing the exciting news, she bounced up and down with excitement. 一听到这个激动人心的消息，她高兴得上蹦下跳。 12. When the host announced that she won the prize, a wild excitement took hold of her.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋得不能自已。 13. Dad said we would go camping next week, his eyes twinkling with excitement.  爸爸说下星期去露营，他的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 14. Unable to contain his joy and excitement, he threw himself into my arms, murmuring, “Thank you, dear mum.” 不能抑制住他的高兴和激动，他一下子扑到我的怀里，喃喃道：妈妈，辛苦了。 15. Sighing with relief, the twins hugged each other and shed tears of excitement and joy. 这对双胞胎松了一口气，互相拥抱，留下来激动和高兴的眼泪。 测试反馈区：分级测试 步步为赢 一、晚练-高频语块汉译英 1.振奋起来 2.激动地 3.激动得满脸通红 4.难掩激动 5.抑制内心的激动　 6.令某人激动的是　 7.激动的尖叫声 8.一阵兴奋 9.流下幸福的泪水 10.感觉既兴奋又开心 二、晚练-佳句赏析汉译英 1.他情绪激动,难以成声。(choke) 2.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。(light) 3.一阵兴奋的涟漪掠过他们。(ripple) 4.她红红的脸因激动而发亮。(shine) 5.每当我听到国歌就激动不已。(heart) 6.她的心又兴奋又不安，怦怦乱跳。(flutter) 7.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心,他感到一阵兴奋。(surge) 8.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋得不能自已。(hold) 9.这对双胞胎松了一口气，互相拥抱，留下来激动和高兴的眼泪。() 10.爸爸说下星期去露营，他的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。(twinkle) 仿写实战区：模仿借鉴 学以致用 一、读后续写情景运用—单句 阅读所给首句，在了解首句所设定的情境后，用一句话进行与感动之情相关的主题续写。 1. On the journey to the lake, Mom. 2. Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village, her eyes . 3. When we arrived at the camping place, Mom couldn't wait to storm out and urged us to put up the tent. 4. Then, Mom walked towards the lake, and then came . 5. Enjoying the beautiful view, Mom could hardly . 6. Certainly, as it was the first time that we had helped father cook food outdoors, my brother and I also . 7. Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we jumped up and down . 二、读后续写情景运用—段落 请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views on the journey were surprisingly beautiful, 1 (妈妈激动不已). Every time we got to a new place，Mom could hardly 2 (抑制兴奋), and would 3 (振奋起来) like a child. She would get off the car, laughing and dancing around 4 (兴奋地).The moment we arrived at the camping place, 5 (激动得尖叫起来), Mom located a clearing and immediately guided us to pitch the tent 6 (眼里闪着激动的光芒)，we sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. 四、情感表达语篇运用 1.（24-25高三上·广东广州·开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Holding Mom’s Hand Technically speaking, my Mom is old－she is in her 70s now. She once used to be a woman full of life and laughter. All of that changed after my Dad passed away about ten years ago. Although they were not what you would call a “lovey dovey” couple, Mom did take his sudden death quite badly. To make matters worse, my brother decided to relocate to another city, while Mom decided to stay behind with her sister. Whenever my Mom comes over to stay with me for some time (I live with my husband and his parents), she always demands constant attention from me. She generally gets nostalgic (怀旧的) of the good old times we used to spend together discussing pets, books, cooking, or life in general. Sometimes it turned into a complaining session－“You never spare time for me anymore” or “I have become useless to everyone”. I always used to retort (反驳) with “Oh, Mom, please don’t start all over again” or sometimes rudely remark, “How can you expect me to do the things we used to do together years ago? There is no time for such things anymore!” Mom would become silent, probably because she had resigned herself to the way things are now. I could sense I had hurt her but there was little I could do, or so I thought at the time. Then it struck me－I always try to be nice to people at work. I do random acts of kindness for strangers. I sometimes surprise an old friend with a phone call. But what have I done for my Mom? Why is it that I am so reluctant to hold her hands in front of others? Is it because I am embarrassed to be labeled as “mama’s girl” at my age? Well, I am no longer young myself. Is it because I have taken my Mom for granted because her days are done? Today was yet another chaotic day. I was occupied in dealing with my own things, getting ready for work, leaving my Mom to have her breakfast all alone at the table. I had so many things on my mind－the deadline at work, an appointment with my dentist, what to cook for dinner... 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Mom stared at me silently, with a wronged (委屈的) look. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then, all of sudden, I stopped myself. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.（23-24·河北石家庄·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I entered my first rodeo (牛仔竞技比赛), I was 12 years old. It was more like a play day than a rodeo, but to a 12-year-old girl like me, I felt like I was at the National Finals Rodeo! As to barrel racing (绕桶赛), I didn’t know much about it, only what my dad had told me. But I had been determined to enter the play and win the play ever since I was told that my not so much older competitive cousin Courtney would be there. This was my night to finally show her that I could ride a horse just as good or better, and do anything else she could do. She was in for a surprise! Courtney always thought she was better than me. She always said her horse was better than mine, too. Courtney had a Palomino horse named Buck. He was fast, and beautiful. My horse was a big Appaloosa named Zipper. He wasn’t beautiful or flashy like Buck but he was kind and willing to please the skinny little girl that fed him sugars every day after a day of riding. That was the reason I knew we could beat Courtney, because we had something she didn’t — a partnership, one we both respected. Courtney and I were in the 12-14 age group. As I watched the men in the arena (竞技场) set the three barrels up in their places, I felt nervous and a little scared for the first time that night. Though I had previously practiced a lot with Zipper, and Zipper raced fast and made turns stably, I still got upset when thinking about racing against Courtney! I closed my eyes, taking a deep breath. Suddenly, I felt a warm familiar hand on my shoulder. It was Dad. He smiled at me, saying, “Are you scared or nervous? Or both?” “Both, but I’m more scared that I’m going to mess up,” I replied, truthfully. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 “You won’t. Just have faith in yourself, and Zipper,” Dad said. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Game over, I took Zipper to rest, giving him sugars for a job well done. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.（24-25·江苏射阳·8月月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In my childhood, under the influence of my elder brother and my peers in the neighborhood, I tried a number of outdoor activities. Of course, I was not so taken by all of them. whether I was doing them for the first time or continuously. However, fate had its own plans in store. You never know when an outdoor activity will change my life. The name of this activity is “fishing”. About ten years ago, I didn't really like the idea of sitting on the bank of a lake or river, spending long hours under the sun's ultraviolet rays, which can cause sunburns and skin damage, and anxiously anticipating some fish to be kind to take my bait(诱饵). In fact, I used to think of this outdoor activity as some kind of “hide-and-seek-game” that is popular with most young kids, except that it was much harder because I could see my “prey (猎物)” only after catching it. However, all that changed when I paid a visit to my aunt in the countryside during a summer holiday. I was finally convinced by one of my cousins to accompany him to a nearby lake in order to do some fishing practice with him. In fact, he even assured me that fish would eat my baits. So I agreed and went to the lake expecting to catch some fish. Before throwing my fishing line into the water, my cousin did some tricks attaching some sort of food to my fishing pole. Learning to fish in a river or lake can be challenging for the beginners like me. The act of dropping a line is easy, but being a successful fisher is hard. That's why they call it fishing but not catching But with practice and patience, it can become easier over time. Patience is essential in lake fishing. It may take some time to find the right spot or lure (鱼饵) that will attract fish. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My cousin had to repeatedly remind me to keep patient. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When we finally left the lake, I had caught three fish! _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 网（北京）股份有限公司 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 《2025年新高考英语读后续写提分宝典》 专题13 读后续写如何表达激动背默与仿写（词-句-文）讲义 解析版 晨读背诵区：背诵迁移 举一反三 一、晨读素材-必背单词 1.激动类形容词和副词： 初阶 excited感到激动的; exciting令人激动的 高阶 thrilled感到激动的; thrilling令人激动的; excitedly 2. 激动类名词和动词： 初阶 excitement激动, excite使激动 高阶 thrill激动，兴奋, exaltation得意洋洋，欣喜 二、高频语块 1. cheer up 振奋起来 2. with/in excitement 激动地 3. flush with excitement 激动得满脸通红 4. conceal/hide one’s excitement 难掩激动 5. contain one’s excitement 抑制内心的激动　 6. to one’s excitement/thrill 令某人激动的是　 7. a scream of thrill/excitement 激动的尖叫声 8. a ripple/ shiver/wave /surge of excitement 一阵兴奋 9. tears of happiness flowing down 流下幸福的泪水 10. feel a mixture of excitement and happiness 感觉既兴奋又开心 三、佳句赏析 1. His voice was choked with emotion.他情绪激动,难以成声。 2. His face was lit up with excitement.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。 3. Her face was glowing with excitement.她因兴奋而显得容光焕发。 4. A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵兴奋的涟漪掠过他们。 5. Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她红红的脸因激动而发亮。 6. My heart is in my mouth whenever I hear the national anthem.每当我听到国歌就激动不已。 7. Her heart was fluttering with anxiety as well as excitement.她的心又兴奋又不安，怦怦乱跳。 8. Tears of excitement welled up in her eyes as she accepted the flowers.当她接过献花时，激动的泪水充满了她的眼睛。 9. The teacher's encouragement warmed his heart. He felt a surge of excitement.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心,他感到一阵兴奋。 10. A shiver of excitement passed through her stomach when she heard the news.听到这个消息,一阵激动的战栗传到她的胃里。 11. Hearing the exciting news, she bounced up and down with excitement. 一听到这个激动人心的消息，她高兴得上蹦下跳。 12. When the host announced that she won the prize, a wild excitement took hold of her.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋得不能自已。 13. Dad said we would go camping next week, his eyes twinkling with excitement.  爸爸说下星期去露营，他的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 14. Unable to contain his joy and excitement, he threw himself into my arms, murmuring, “Thank you, dear mum.” 不能抑制住他的高兴和激动，他一下子扑到我的怀里，喃喃道：妈妈，辛苦了。 15. Sighing with relief, the twins hugged each other and shed tears of excitement and joy. 这对双胞胎松了一口气，互相拥抱，留下来激动和高兴的眼泪。 测试反馈区：分级测试 步步为赢 一、晚练-高频语块汉译英 1.振奋起来 2.激动地 3.激动得满脸通红 4.难掩激动 5.抑制内心的激动　 6.令某人激动的是　 7.激动的尖叫声 8.一阵兴奋 9.流下幸福的泪水 10.感觉既兴奋又开心 【参考答案】 1. cheer up 振奋起来 2. with/in excitement 激动地 3. flush with excitement 激动得满脸通红 4. conceal/hide one’s excitement 难掩激动 5. contain one’s excitement 抑制内心的激动　 6. to one’s excitement/thrill 令某人激动的是　 7. a scream of thrill/excitement 激动的尖叫声 8. a ripple/ shiver/wave /surge of excitement 一阵兴奋 9. tears of happiness flowing down 流下幸福的泪水 10. feel a mixture of excitement and happiness 感觉既兴奋又开心 二、晚练-佳句赏析汉译英 1.他情绪激动,难以成声。(choke) 2.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。(light) 3.一阵兴奋的涟漪掠过他们。(ripple) 4.她红红的脸因激动而发亮。(shine) 5.每当我听到国歌就激动不已。(heart) 6.她的心又兴奋又不安，怦怦乱跳。(flutter) 7.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心,他感到一阵兴奋。(surge) 8.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋得不能自已。(hold) 9.这对双胞胎松了一口气，互相拥抱，留下来激动和高兴的眼泪。() 10.爸爸说下星期去露营，他的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。(twinkle) 【参考答案】 1. His voice was choked with emotion.他情绪激动,难以成声。 2. His face was lit up with excitement.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。 3. A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵兴奋的涟漪掠过他们。 4. Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她红红的脸因激动而发亮。 5. My heart is in my mouth whenever I hear the national anthem.每当我听到国歌就激动不已。 6. Her heart was fluttering with anxiety as well as excitement.她的心又兴奋又不安，怦怦乱跳。 7. The teacher's encouragement warmed his heart. He felt a surge of excitement.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心,他感到一阵兴奋。 8. When the host announced that she won the prize, a wild excitement took hold of her.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋得不能自已。 9. Sighing with relief, the twins hugged each other and shed tears of excitement and joy. 这对双胞胎松了一口气，互相拥抱，留下来激动和高兴的眼泪。 10. Dad said we would go camping next week, his eyes twinkling with excitement.  爸爸说下星期去露营，他的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 仿写实战区：模仿借鉴 学以致用 一、读后续写情景运用—单句 阅读所给首句，在了解首句所设定的情境后，用一句话进行与感动之情相关的主题续写。 1. On the journey to the lake, Mom. 2. Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village, her eyes . 3. When we arrived at the camping place, Mom couldn't wait to storm out and urged us to put up the tent. 4. Then, Mom walked towards the lake, and then came . 5. Enjoying the beautiful view, Mom could hardly . 6. Certainly, as it was the first time that we had helped father cook food outdoors, my brother and I also . 7. Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we jumped up and down . 【参考答案】 1. On the journey to the lake, a wide excitement took hold of Mom. 2. Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village, her eyes twinkling with excitement. 3. When we arrived at the camping place, Mom couldn't wait to storm out and excitedly urged us to put up the tent. 4. Then, Mom walked towards the lake, and then came a scream of excitement. 5. Enjoying the beautiful view, Mom could hardly contain her excitement. 6. Certainly, as it was the first time that we had helped father cook food outdoors, my brother and I also felt thrilled. 7. Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we jumped up and down with excitement. 二、读后续写情景运用—段落 请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views on the journey were surprisingly beautiful, 1 (妈妈激动不已). Every time we got to a new place，Mom could hardly 2 (抑制兴奋), and would 3 (振奋起来) like a child. She would get off the car, laughing and dancing around 4 (兴奋地).The moment we arrived at the camping place, 5 (激动得尖叫起来), Mom located a clearing and immediately guided us to pitch the tent 6 (眼里闪着激动的光芒)，we sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. 【参考答案】 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views on the journey were surprisingly beautiful, a wave of excitement taking hold of Mom. Every time we got to a new place，Mom could hardly contain her excitement, and would cheer up like a child. She would get off the car, laughing and dancing around with excitement. The moment we arrived at the camping place, letting out a scream of thrill, Mom located a clearing and immediately guided us to pitch the tent. With eyes glittering/twinkling with excitement, we sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. 四、情感表达语篇运用 1.（24-25高三上·广东广州·开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Holding Mom’s Hand Technically speaking, my Mom is old－she is in her 70s now. She once used to be a woman full of life and laughter. All of that changed after my Dad passed away about ten years ago. Although they were not what you would call a “lovey dovey” couple, Mom did take his sudden death quite badly. To make matters worse, my brother decided to relocate to another city, while Mom decided to stay behind with her sister. Whenever my Mom comes over to stay with me for some time (I live with my husband and his parents), she always demands constant attention from me. She generally gets nostalgic (怀旧的) of the good old times we used to spend together discussing pets, books, cooking, or life in general. Sometimes it turned into a complaining session－“You never spare time for me anymore” or “I have become useless to everyone”. I always used to retort (反驳) with “Oh, Mom, please don’t start all over again” or sometimes rudely remark, “How can you expect me to do the things we used to do together years ago? There is no time for such things anymore!” Mom would become silent, probably because she had resigned herself to the way things are now. I could sense I had hurt her but there was little I could do, or so I thought at the time. Then it struck me－I always try to be nice to people at work. I do random acts of kindness for strangers. I sometimes surprise an old friend with a phone call. But what have I done for my Mom? Why is it that I am so reluctant to hold her hands in front of others? Is it because I am embarrassed to be labeled as “mama’s girl” at my age? Well, I am no longer young myself. Is it because I have taken my Mom for granted because her days are done? Today was yet another chaotic day. I was occupied in dealing with my own things, getting ready for work, leaving my Mom to have her breakfast all alone at the table. I had so many things on my mind－the deadline at work, an appointment with my dentist, what to cook for dinner... 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Mom stared at me silently, with a wronged (委屈的) look. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then, all of sudden, I stopped myself. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Mom stared at me silently, with a wronged look. Her eyes, once filled with laughter and life, now held a hint of sadness and disappointment. It was as if she was silently accusing me of neglecting her, of forgetting the bond we once shared. The sight of her like that pierced my heart, reminding me of all the times I had been too busy or too preoccupied to give her the attention she deserved. I realized then that my actions had caused her pain, and I felt a deep sense of regret. Then, all of sudden, I stopped myself. I halted in my tracks, mid-stride, as if a switch had flipped inside me. So, I turned around and walked back to the table where Mom sat, I sat down next to her, took her hand in mine, and apologized sincerely for my neglect. “Mom, I’m sorry. I know I’ve been too busy lately and haven’t been giving you the time and attention you deserve.” Mom’s face lit up with a smile, and I could see the sadness in her eyes begin to fade away. From that moment on, I made a conscious effort to spend more quality time with her, to listen to her stories and share in her joys and sorrows. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的父亲去世，剩下母亲照顾家庭，独自老去。母亲总是怀念过去，作者对此感到不耐烦。某天作者忙碌时突然意识到自己忽视了母亲，于是向母亲道歉，并用行动弥补了过去的亏欠。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“妈妈默默地盯着我，一副委屈的样子”可知，第一段可描写母亲的神情带给作者的感受。 ②由第二段首句内容“然后，突然间，我停住了”可知，第二段可描写作者向母亲道歉，并用行动弥补了过去的亏欠。 2.续写线索：母亲委屈——作者伤心——作者道歉——作者弥补——作者陪伴母亲 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①充满：be filled with/be full of ②意识到：realize/be aware of ③造成：cause/contribute to 情绪类 ①悲伤：sadness/sorrow ②真诚：sincerely/heartily 【点睛】[高分句型1] I realized then that my actions had caused her pain, and I felt a deep sense of regret. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I halted in my tracks, mid-stride, as if a switch had flipped inside me. (运用了as if引导方式状语从句) 2.（23-24·河北石家庄·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I entered my first rodeo (牛仔竞技比赛), I was 12 years old. It was more like a play day than a rodeo, but to a 12-year-old girl like me, I felt like I was at the National Finals Rodeo! As to barrel racing (绕桶赛), I didn’t know much about it, only what my dad had told me. But I had been determined to enter the play and win the play ever since I was told that my not so much older competitive cousin Courtney would be there. This was my night to finally show her that I could ride a horse just as good or better, and do anything else she could do. She was in for a surprise! Courtney always thought she was better than me. She always said her horse was better than mine, too. Courtney had a Palomino horse named Buck. He was fast, and beautiful. My horse was a big Appaloosa named Zipper. He wasn’t beautiful or flashy like Buck but he was kind and willing to please the skinny little girl that fed him sugars every day after a day of riding. That was the reason I knew we could beat Courtney, because we had something she didn’t — a partnership, one we both respected. Courtney and I were in the 12-14 age group. As I watched the men in the arena (竞技场) set the three barrels up in their places, I felt nervous and a little scared for the first time that night. Though I had previously practiced a lot with Zipper, and Zipper raced fast and made turns stably, I still got upset when thinking about racing against Courtney! I closed my eyes, taking a deep breath. Suddenly, I felt a warm familiar hand on my shoulder. It was Dad. He smiled at me, saying, “Are you scared or nervous? Or both?” “Both, but I’m more scared that I’m going to mess up,” I replied, truthfully. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 “You won’t. Just have faith in yourself, and Zipper,” Dad said. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Game over, I took Zipper to rest, giving him sugars for a job well done. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 “You won’t. Just have faith in yourself, and Zipper,” Dad said. That’s when I realized I was not going into that arena alone, but with my partner! Zipper had been practicing just as hard as me. So I thought, if I messed up, he would be right there to correct me. “I know what to do, Dad. Thank you.” Dad just smiled, “Now go warm up and win a trophy!” Soon, it was my turn. Zipper and I did together smoothly all the way. And to my great surprise and excitement, I beat Courtney and won, though it was just a narrow victory. Game over, I took Zipper to rest, giving him sugar s for a job well done. While Zipper was enjoying the sugars, I went to Dad. He was sitting in his lawn chair to the side of the arena, watching the riders from other age groups. When he saw me, he couldn’t hide his excitement. “I knew you would make it,” he said. I nodded and hugged him tightly. That night I took home a trophy bigger than I was. Both Dad and I were proud. I knew after that night I would never be able to go to sit in the stands and watch. I was hooked and wanted to be the best. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者第一次参加牛仔竞技比赛时，既紧张又害怕，害怕自己会搞砸。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容““你不会的。只要对自己和Zipper有信心，”爸爸说。”可知，第一段可描写作者在爸爸的鼓舞下，赢得了比赛。 ②由第二段首句内容“比赛结束了，我带 Zipper去休息了，因为他表现好我给了他糖。”可知，第二段可描写作者找到爸爸，爸爸看到作者后很高兴，并以作者为骄傲，作者从此喜欢上了比赛。 2.续写线索：爸爸鼓励——意识到有Zipper的陪伴——赢得比赛——带Zipper去休息——找到爸爸——爸爸为作者而感到自豪——喜欢上了比赛 3.词汇激活行为类 ①打败：beat/defeat ②成功做到：make it/succeed ③拥抱某人：hug sb./give sb. a hug 情绪类 ①感谢某人：thank sb./show one’s gratitude to sb./be grateful to sb. ②兴奋：excitement/agitation 【点睛】[高分句型1] That’s when I realized I was not going into that arena alone, but with my partner!（运用了when引导的表语从句） [高分句型2]So I thought, if I messed up, he would be right there to correct me.（运用了省略that引导的宾语从句和if引导的状语从句） [高分句型3]And to my great surprise and excitement, I beat Courtney and won, though it was just a narrow victory.（运用了though引导的状语从句） 3.（24-25·江苏射阳·8月月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In my childhood, under the influence of my elder brother and my peers in the neighborhood, I tried a number of outdoor activities. Of course, I was not so taken by all of them. whether I was doing them for the first time or continuously. However, fate had its own plans in store. You never know when an outdoor activity will change my life. The name of this activity is “fishing”. About ten years ago, I didn't really like the idea of sitting on the bank of a lake or river, spending long hours under the sun's ultraviolet rays, which can cause sunburns and skin damage, and anxiously anticipating some fish to be kind to take my bait(诱饵). In fact, I used to think of this outdoor activity as some kind of “hide-and-seek-game” that is popular with most young kids, except that it was much harder because I could see my “prey (猎物)” only after catching it. However, all that changed when I paid a visit to my aunt in the countryside during a summer holiday. I was finally convinced by one of my cousins to accompany him to a nearby lake in order to do some fishing practice with him. In fact, he even assured me that fish would eat my baits. So I agreed and went to the lake expecting to catch some fish. Before throwing my fishing line into the water, my cousin did some tricks attaching some sort of food to my fishing pole. Learning to fish in a river or lake can be challenging for the beginners like me. The act of dropping a line is easy, but being a successful fisher is hard. That's why they call it fishing but not catching But with practice and patience, it can become easier over time. Patience is essential in lake fishing. It may take some time to find the right spot or lure (鱼饵) that will attract fish. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My cousin had to repeatedly remind me to keep patient. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When we finally left the lake, I had caught three fish! _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One possible version: My cousin had to repeatedly remind me to keep patient. He taught me how to adjust my pole based on the movements of the fish and how to determine the best time to lift the pole when a fish was on the hook. Under his guidance, I calmed down gradually, staying focused to wait patiently. Then suddenly, I felt a jerk of my pole. A surge of thrill sweeping over me, I pulled the fishing pole out of water and I caught my first fish! So excited was I that I even gave a jump in the air. It was a small one, but it was a milestone for me! When we finally left the lake, I had caught three fish! Thrilled and fulfilled, I skipped all the way home with my cousin, telling him it was a pity that I had been missing out on so much by avoiding this simple outdoor activity before. Since then, I have become a passionate fisherman and love spending time outdoors, appreciating the simple pleasure of life. Fishing has taught me to be patient and persistent and most importantly, it has also taught me a lesson that we should not miss out on these opportunities just because they are simple or just we do not know how to do them well. 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者童年，在哥哥和邻居的影响下，我尝试了一些户外活动。在某一次尝试了钓鱼之后，作者喜爱上了这项活动，变成了一个充满激情的渔夫，喜欢花时间在户外，欣赏生活的简单乐趣。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我表姐不得不一再提醒我要有耐心”可知，第一段可描写作者钓上鱼的经过。 ②由第二段首句内容“当我们最后离开湖时，我已经钓到了三条鱼！”可知，第二段可描写作者喜爱钓鱼以及对钓鱼的感悟。 2.续写线索：提醒有耐心——指导作者——鱼上钩——喜爱钓鱼——对钓鱼感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①确定：determine/confirm ②告诉：tell/inform ③捕捉：catch/capture 情绪类 ①专注：focused/concentrated ②激动：excited/thrilled ③满足：fulfilled/content 【点睛】[高分句型1] So excited was I that I even gave a jump in the air. (运用了倒装句) [高分句型2] Fishing has taught me to be patient and persistent and most importantly, it has also taught me a lesson that we should not miss out on these opportunities just because they are simple or just we do not know how to do them well. 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