2025届高考英语读后续写专题之助人类 节日里的红裙与给予之心 讲义

读后续写（满分25分）        阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 The Wilsons were having dinner. The food was left from their Thanksgiving dinner two days before：turkey soup and turkey meat mixed with potatoes . Eleven-year-old Angelina asked，”Are we having turkey ice cream, too?” Her father replied, “Angelina, have you forgotten that I had no job for a whole year? Now I have work again. You should be very thankful.” “I'm sorry I said that about the turkey! But unless I get a new dress，I will not look good for the Christmas Festival.” Angelina murmured.         The Festival was the winter holiday celebration of a group she belonged to: the Avalon Girls' Service Club. They wrote cheerful cards for hospital patients. They cooked meals for the homeless .But the Christmas Festival was different . The girls wore party clothes and many people came to see them perform. Angelina had only a plain gray dress that she had worn to the event last year .And now it was a little too short. Angelina appealed to her parents to buy one for her, a beautiful red dress in Forbes' Store. Her mother sighed, “Well, we can not buy it. We have to be careful. You never know when I might lose my job.”    All hope was not gone.There was a sign in the Forbes’ store window that said”layaway(分期付款)”. Angelina pulled ten worn dollar bills from her coat pocket .She ran to the store and begged the salesperson, Mrs.Harding, to hold ’her’ dress for her. ”Ok. But you must come back in two weeks to pay the rest” Angelina felt like jumping into the air. She was so happy that she told Mrs. Harding about the Avalon Service Club's work and its Christmas party .        Then, Angelina shook and suffered in the cold wind looking for work. Finally, Angelina got a job making new clothing for dolls. Angelina was excellent at sewing. Sure enough, the dolls' dresses turned out beautiful. She got twenty dollars. Still，she was far from having enough money for her dress . She felt helpless as the final payment date arrived .        She returned sadly to Forbes' Store, “I don't have enough money for the dress.” Then she saw Mrs.Harding's eyes were red. She looked like she had been crying .She said the store was closing and she was losing her job.注意：    1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好； Paragraph1:Suddenly, Mrs Harding said that she would pay the rest of the money so Angelia could have it.                                               Paragraph2:Outside, Angelina saw a man who looked like Santa Claus was asking people for money to help poor people.                                   文章大意： 这个故事讲述了11岁的Angelina Wilson在家庭经济紧张的情况下，渴望拥有一件新裙子参加Avalon Girls' Service Club的圣诞节日庆典。尽管她的父亲已经一年没有工作，现在重新就业，她的母亲也担心可能会失业，Angelina还是向父母请求买一件她在Forbes' Store看到的漂亮红裙子。店里的分期付款计划让Angelina看到了希望，她开始找工作赚钱。她通过为玩偶制作衣服的兼职赚取了一些钱，但仍然不足以支付裙子的全款。在最终付款日到来时，她悲伤地回到商店，却发现因为商店要关闭，店员Mrs. Harding即将失业。Mrs. Harding感动于Angelina的坚韧和Avalon Service Club的精神，决定帮助她支付余款。故事最后，Angelina在街头看到一个装扮成圣诞老人的人为穷人募集捐款，深受启发，决定用自己的方式回馈社区，将她的缝纫技能用于为他人制作衣物，筹集资金。这个故事强调了给予比接受更有福，以及社区支持和个人努力的重要性。 原文中有几处伏笔，它们在续写中得到了回应： Angelina对新裙子的渴望：她对新裙子的向往为故事奠定了基础，并推动了她之后寻找工作和赚钱的行为。 家庭的经济状况：提到了Angelina的父亲一年没有工作，现在重新就业，而母亲担心可能失业，这为Angelina的内疚和对金钱的担忧埋下了伏笔。 Forbes' Store的分期付款计划：这个计划为Angelina提供了一线希望，也为她后来的行动设定了目标。 Angelina的缝纫技能：她擅长缝纫，这为她找工作和赚钱提供了可能。 Mrs. Harding的同情：Mrs. Harding对Angelina的同情和愿意为她保留裙子，预示了她可能会在故事中扮演重要角色。 在续写中，这些伏笔得到了回应： Angelina找工作的努力：她通过自己的缝纫技能找到了为玩偶制作衣服的工作，这直接回应了她对新裙子的渴望和她需要赚钱的处境。 Mrs. Harding的慷慨：在Angelina无法支付余款时，Mrs. Harding决定为她支付余款，这回应了之前她对Angelina的同情和支持。 商店关闭的消息：这个意外的消息为Angelina带来了新的情感冲击，同时也强化了Mrs. Harding决定帮助她的动机。 Angelina的回馈：在故事结尾，Angelina看到一个像圣诞老人的人为穷人募集捐款，她决定用自己的方式回馈社区，这回应了她通过努力工作和社区支持学到的给予的重要性。 续写要点： 第一段要点： · 描述Angelina如何接受Mrs. Harding的帮助，她的情感反应，以及这一行为对她意味着什么。 · 展现Mrs. Harding的慷慨决定对Angelina产生的深远影响，以及她如何感受到社区的支持和节日的真正精神。 第二段要点： · 叙述Angelina看到街头的“圣诞老人”和她的内心感受，以及这一情景如何激发她想要回馈社区的愿望。 · 描述Angelina决定如何使用自己的技能来帮助他人，以及她如何将个人的渴望转化为对更大社区目标的贡献。 参考答案   Suddenly, Mrs Harding said that she would pay the rest of the money so Angelia could have it. This commitment made Angelia ecstatic , her heart thumping wildly. The fantastic scene of her peers in the club surrounding her and casting envious and worshiping look over at the Christmas party flashed across her mind. Her face flushed and eyes sparkled. Giggles and chuckles were to sound when a depressed face with red eyes reflected into her eyes. She shivered with a gust of chill instantly running down her spine. She felt a little ashamed for her momentary selfish thought of beautifying herself regardless of the hard situation of Mrs Harding. Her accepting heart withdrew. “Thank you very much indeed for your kindness! Mrs Harding!” said Angelia, “Merry Christmas to you and good luck for your job hunting!” She strode out.      Outside, Angelina saw a man who looked like Santa Claus was asking people for money to help poor people. Standing in the hard blowing wind and fluttering dense snowflakes, he was seen busy warmly greeting and saying “Thank you! Merry Christmas!” to the pedestrians dropping money in the charity box, a face brimming with happiness. “Donate it or keep it for myself？”she pondered, with a conflicting heart, holding tightly the twenty- dollar bill she had earned by sewing hard doll clothing, “The former will go to the needy people for life necessities and the latter, the long-expected dress , maybe, is just to show off.” The haunting red-eyed Mrs Harding as well as the amazingly similar-seeming life scene where her father had been laid off determined her choice. She stepped up and gave him her money in the admiring look of the Santa Claus and other donators. Snowflakes were still dancing along with her dream of children all wearing beautiful dresses. Melodious Christmas songs were on and on! 下水文1 Paragraph 1: Suddenly, Mrs. Harding said that she would pay the rest of the money so Angelina could have it. "I've been watching you work hard, Angelina," she said, her eyes glistening with kindness. "Your determination and the spirit of the Avalon Girls' Service Club touched my heart." She reached into her purse and pulled out the necessary amount to cover the dress, handing it to a stunned Angelina. "Consider it a gift for your dedication to helping others." Angelina was overwhelmed with gratitude. "Thank you so much, Mrs. Harding," she whispered, hugging the red dress close to her chest. The warmth of human compassion in the face of adversity was a gift more precious than any fabric. Paragraph 2: Outside, Angelina saw a man who looked like Santa Claus was asking people for money to help poor people. The festive spirit of giving was in the air, and it inspired Angelina to take action. She remembered the ten dollars she had earned from her doll-dressing job. With a heart full of hope and the spirit of Christmas, she approached the man and donated her hard-earned money. "Every little bit helps," the man said, his eyes crinkling in a smile that reminded her of the joy she had brought to Mrs. Harding. Angelina left the scene with a lighter wallet but a fuller heart, knowing that she had contributed to spreading joy during the Christmas Festival. The red dress she held was not just a beautiful garment but a symbol of the kindness and generosity that filled her heart. 下水文2 Paragraph 1: Suddenly, Mrs. Harding said that she would pay the rest of the money so Angelina could have it. "I've seen how hard you've been trying, Angelina," she said, her voice thick with emotion. "Your spirit is a reminder of the true meaning of Christmas." With a gentle smile, Mrs. Harding completed the purchase, handing over the beautiful red dress as a symbol of her support. Angelina stood there, speechless, her eyes brimming with tears of joy and gratitude. The dress was now hers, a gift not just from Mrs. Harding, but from the community that had come together in this special season. Paragraph 2: Outside, Angelina saw a man who looked like Santa Claus was asking people for money to help poor people. The sight of him, with his jolly demeanor and generous heart, reinforced the lesson Angelina had learned that day. She thought of the Avalon Girls' Service Club and how they too worked tirelessly to bring happiness to others. Inspired, Angelina decided to take action. She decided to use her sewing skills to make and sell more doll dresses, hoping to raise funds for the man's cause. It was a small step, but it was a way for her to give back to the community that had given her so much. The Christmas Festival was no longer just about receiving; it was about giving, and Angelina was proud to be a part of it. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$