读后续写专题之人与动物 沙漠中的温情救援:迪拜骆驼救助记 讲义 2025届高考英语一轮复习

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I’m from the fishing town of Kinsale, in Ireland. Life is pretty good there, but Dubai caught my attention when I was 18. I moved there myself 10 years ago as a 30-year-old film-maker. It’s been a wild ride, full of chaos and wonder. My wife, Christine, lives here with me; when her sister Angela came to visit in April this year, the three of us set off in my pickup truck. It was a cloudless day, touching 40 ℃. The heat and humidity were violent, so we had to sightsee from the car. We took the scenic route between Dubai and Ras al-Khaimah, a charming city in the north. A year earlier, while off-roading with a friend, I got stuck at a water crossing there, at the only inlet on the coast, where the sea flows into a swampy lagoon (咸水湖). I had to be rescued, and learned how quickly the tide (潮水) could come in. Christine spotted what looked like the Loch Ness monster stuck in the sand. We decided to investigate and drove up to where the sand met the lagoon. It was a camel, not moving. Since relocating here, I have always kept a shovel, rope, torches and knives in my car—getting stuck in the desert can be debilitating (耗费体力). I got out my shovel and approached the camel. It was a female; we nicknamed her Stucky. It looked as if she had been trapped for hours—she was in quite deep. I’ve been around camels a lot in Dubai; they are massive. They can be friendly, but they can also be fierce. I approached Stucky slowly and started to gently dig away the sand around her. I kept patting her. I knew if she swung her head around quickly, she could injure herself, or me. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Christine filmed my rescue attempt and posted photos on social media. Paragraph 2: Luckily, at that point, a pickup arrived carrying 7 guys with all sorts of apparatus(装备). 话题:救助动物 主要内容: 这篇文章讲述了一位来自爱尔兰金赛尔的男子,在迪拜生活了十年后,与妻子克里斯汀和克里斯汀的妹妹安吉拉一起,在迪拜和拉斯海马之间的风景路线上驾车游览时,意外地救助了一只陷入沙中的骆驼。男子曾在迪拜经历过车辆陷入沙漠的困境,因此他的车里总是备有铲子、绳子、手电筒和刀具。当他们发现这只名叫“Stucky”的母骆驼时,男子便开始了救援行动。他的妻子克里斯汀记录了救援过程,并在社交媒体上分享了照片。随后,一个由七人组成的当地救援团队看到了帖子并赶到现场,带来了各种救援装备。在他们的帮助下,男子和救援团队一起努力,成功地将骆驼从沙漠中解救出来。这个故事展现了人类对动物的同情和在困难面前的团结协作精神。 在这篇短文中,有几处伏笔以及它们在续写中的回应: 伏笔: 男子在迪拜有过车辆陷入沙漠的经历。 回应: 他车里备有救援工具,这为救助陷入沙中的骆驼做好了准备。 伏笔: 男子对骆驼的了解,知道它们可能既友好也可能凶猛。 回应: 在救助过程中,他小心地接近并安抚骆驼,以防骆驼突然动作造成伤害。 伏笔: 克里斯汀发现骆驼的情景。 回应: 他们决定调查并最终确认了这是一只需要帮助的骆驼。 伏笔: 男子开始用铲子挖掘救助骆驼。 回应: 克里斯汀记录了这一救援尝试,并在社交媒体上分享,引起了人们的关注和支持。 伏笔: 男子在救助过程中的艰难和缓慢进展。 回应: 当地的救援团队看到社交媒体上的帖子后,带着专业设备赶到现场,提供了必要的帮助。 这些伏笔和回应共同构建了一个关于意外救援、社交媒体影响力和社区团结的故事,展示了在面对挑战时人们的善良和合作精神。 续写要点 第一段:社交媒体的传播力量 · 描述克里斯汀如何记录并分享救援行动到社交媒体,引起广泛关注。 · 强调男子的救援行动得到了网友的鼓励和支持,以及社交媒体在传播感人故事中的作用。 第二段:救援团队的到来和救援行动的完成 · 叙述当地救援团队看到社交媒体上的帖子后迅速响应并赶到现场。 · 描述救援团队带来的专业设备和经验,以及他们与男子和克里斯汀的协作,共同完成了对骆驼的救援。 参考范文 Christine filmed my rescue attempt and posted photos on social media. Angela gave Stucky water. I focused on digging out her back legs. When I tried to wipe the sweat from my eyes, I would get sand in them. An hour later, we still weren't making much progress—whenever we nearly freed a leg, which took about 20 minutes, she would get sucked back into the sand. And the more she struggled to get free, the more stuck she became. We were worried it would get dark and the tide would come in. Luckily, at that point, a pickup arrived carrying 7 guys with all sorts of apparatus (装备). Someone saw posted photos of the camel rescue on social media. Word then quickly spread to the small farms a few kilometres away. They joined in and worked super-hard. Everyone was working on all four of the camel's legs at the same time, using different techniques. When we finally got her out, Stucky's legs were effectively dead. The the guys massaged her legs to get the blood flowing. It took about 20 minutes for her to stand. Then she turned, stretched and gave us a wink goodbye. 下水文1 Paragraph 1: Christine filmed my rescue attempt and posted photos on social media. As I carefully dug around Stucky, I could hear the distant clicking of Christine's camera capturing the moment. The sun bore down on us, reflecting off the sand and intensifying the heat. Each shovelful of sand I removed revealed more of the camel's massive body, stuck fast in the unforgiving desert. The images and story of our unexpected rescue mission quickly gained traction online, with people from around the world cheering us on and sharing their support for our efforts to free Stucky. Paragraph 2: Luckily, at that point, a pickup arrived carrying 7 guys with all sorts of apparatus. They were a local rescue team, having seen the posts on social media and rushed to the scene. Their arrival was a welcome sight, as they brought with them not only the necessary tools but also the experience to handle such situations. Together, we formed a chain of human effort, working in tandem to dig and pull Stucky from her sandy prison. The combined strength of our team and the mechanical power of the equipment began to make a noticeable difference, and hope surged through us all as we saw the camel slowly being freed from the grip of the desert. 下水文2 Paragraph 1: Christine filmed my rescue attempt and posted photos on social media. The video clips showed the arduous task of unearthing Stucky, the camel, grain by grain. Sweat dripped from my brow as I worked, and the sun continued its relentless climb towards the zenith. Our story quickly spread, garnering attention and well-wishers from the online community. The comments section filled with encouragement and advice from those who had witnessed similar incidents, and the shared humanity of our mission to save Stucky resonated with people across the globe. Paragraph 2: Luckily, at that point, a pickup arrived carrying 7 guys with all sorts of apparatus. They were part of a local wildlife rescue group that had been alerted to our plight through the social media posts. Their vehicle was equipped with specialized gear for such rescues, and their faces showed a determination that matched our own. With their expertise and equipment, we were able to devise a plan to extricate Stucky safely. As we coordinated our efforts, the camaraderie among us was palpable, and the desert, which had initially been an adversary, became the backdrop for a collective act of compassion and intervention. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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