读后续写专题之助人类 感恩节的守候：岁月流转中的温情与变迁 讲义 2025届高考英语一轮复习

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On a snowy day Steve sat down on the usual seat in the Union Square. Every Thanksgiving for nine years he had sat down there at one in the afternoon. Every time, a wonderful thing happened to him, which made his heart feel full of joy. On those other Thanksgiving Days, Steve usually had been hungry. But today Steve was not hungry. He had come from a dinner so big that he had almost no power to move. His body had suddenly become too big for his clothes; it seemed ready to break out of them. They were torn. You could see his skin through a hole in the front of his shirt. But the cold wind, with snow in it, felt pleasantly cool to him. The dinner had not been expected.  He had been passing a large house near the beginning of that great broad street called Fifth Avenue, where lived two ladies of an old family who had a deep love of tradition that on Thanksgiving Day food will be offered to the first hungry person to walk by. Today Steve happened to be the one to pass by on his way to the park. Steve sat in the park, appearing to be waiting for somebody, but appearing not to expect something to happen. Suddenly his eyes grew wider and his breath stopped. For the old gentleman was coming across Fourth Avenue toward Steve's seat. Every Thanksgiving Day for nine years the old gentleman had come there to find Steve on his seat. Then he had led Steve to a restaurant and watched him eat a big dinner, which had been a part of Thanksgiving Day. The old gentleman was thin and tall and sixty. His hair was whiter and thinner than it had been last year. His legs shook, seeming not as strong as they were the year before. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: As this kind old gentleman came toward him, Steve began to shake and his breath was shorter. Paragraph 2: With these words, the old man looked into Steve's eyes, expecting Steve to accept the dinner. 话题：助人篇 主要内容：今年的感恩节，Steve在第五大道的一所大宅里饱餐了一顿美食。九年以来的每个感恩节，一位老先生都会请他吃大餐。今年老先生如约又来请他吃饭，可是Steve已经吃得很饱了，他会拒绝还是接受老先生的邀请以便给他施恩的机会呢？ 在这篇短文中，有几处伏笔以及它们在续写中的回应： 伏笔： 史蒂夫（Steve）每年感恩节都会坐在联合广场（Union Square）的同一个座位上，并且每次都会发生一件让他心满意足的美妙事情。 回应： 续写中描述了这位老绅士每年都会在感恩节找到史蒂夫，并带他去餐厅吃一顿大餐，这成为了他们之间的一种传统。 伏笔： 今天的史蒂夫并不饿，他刚从一个几乎让他动弹不得的大餐中走出来。 回应： 续写中提到老绅士带来了一个装满感恩节食物的篮子，但今年由于老绅士的身体状况，他们无法像往常一样去餐厅。 伏笔： 史蒂夫的衣服破烂，身体似乎要从衣服中挣脱出来。 回应： 续写中没有直接提到衣服的情况，但通过描述老绅士的健康状况和他们之间的情感交流，间接强调了史蒂夫的生活状况可能有所改善，但老绅士的健康却在衰退。 伏笔： 老绅士的外貌描述，包括他的瘦高身材、苍白和稀疏的头发，以及颤抖的双腿。 回应： 续写中提到老绅士的声音颤抖，身体不再像以前那样强壮，这与原文中对他外貌的描述相呼应，强调了他年老体衰的现实。 伏笔： 史蒂夫坐在公园里，看起来像是在等待某人，但似乎并不期望会发生什么。 回应： 续写中史蒂夫对老绅士的到来感到惊讶和感动，这与他之前不抱期望的态度形成了对比。 这些伏笔和回应共同构建了一个关于传统、慷慨和人际关系变迁的温馨故事。通过这些细节，故事传达了即使在生活变迁和岁月流逝中，人与人之间的情感联系和相互支持的重要性。 续写要点： 第一段：老绅士的到来与史蒂夫的反应 · 描述老绅士的出现以及史蒂夫对此的紧张和期待。 · 史蒂夫内心的挣扎，感受到老朋友身体状况的变化，以及对这份多年情谊的珍视。 · 老绅士的外貌和行动细节，反映出他的年岁和健康状况。 第二段：老绅士的提议与史蒂夫的感动 · 老绅士提出今年的感恩节不同以往的提议，解释自己无法带史蒂夫去餐厅的原因。 · 史蒂夫对老绅士带来的感恩节食物篮子的感动，以及这份礼物所代表的情感价值。 · 史蒂夫对老绅士多年来慷慨和友谊的感激之情，以及他们之间关系的深化和转变。 参考范文 As this kind old gentleman came toward him, Steve began to shake and his breath was shorter.  He wished he could fly away. But he could not move from his seat. “Good afternoon,” said the old gentleman. “Glad to see you again. Come with me, my man, and I will give you a dinner that will surely make your body feel as thankful as your mind.” Those are what the old gentleman said every time. The words themselves were almost a tradition. Always before, they had been music in Steve’s ear. But now he looked up at the old gentleman’s face, totally at a loss what to say. With these words, the old man looked into Steve’s eyes, expecting Steve to accept the dinner.  Steve hesitated for half a minute, helpless and very sorry for himself. And then Steve made a strange noise, and said: “Thank you. I’m very hungry.” which the old gentleman had heard nine times before, he understood it. Steve was very full, but he understood that he was a part of a tradition. His desire for food on Thanksgiving Day was not his own. It belonged to this kind old gentleman. Then he struggled to stand up and followed the gentleman in the snow. 下水文1 Paragraph 1: As this kind old gentleman came toward him, Steve began to shake and his breath was shorter. He could hardly believe his eyes; the familiar figure approaching him brought back a flood of memories and gratitude. This was the man who had shared the warmth of Thanksgiving with him year after year, even when life had been harsh to Steve. Today, however, Steve felt a surge of emotion as he realized that the old man's health seemed to be failing, and yet here he was, still honoring a tradition that had become as dear to Steve as it was to him. Paragraph 2: With these words, the old man looked into Steve's eyes, expecting Steve to accept the dinner. "Steve, my boy," he said, his voice quivering with a mix of age and emotion, "I'm afraid I can't take you to a restaurant today as I used to. But I've brought you a basket filled with all the Thanksgiving trimmings." He held out a wicker basket laden with food, his hands trembling slightly. "I hope you'll enjoy it as much as I enjoyed preparing it for you." Steve was overwhelmed with a deep sense of affection and respect for this man who had been a constant presence in his life, a beacon of kindness in a world that often seemed cold and indifferent. 下水文2 Paragraph 1: As the familiar figure of the old gentleman approached, Steve's heart pounded in his chest, his breaths coming in short gasps. The sight of the man who had been a beacon of hope and charity during the Thanksgivings of his past filled him with a mix of joy and concern. The old man's once robust stride was now a hesitant shuffle, a testament to the relentless passage of time. Yet, his eyes sparkled with the same warmth and kindness that Steve had come to cherish. Paragraph 2: With a gentle smile, the old man spoke, his voice carrying the weight of tradition and the depth of his commitment to their annual encounter. "Steve, my friend," he began, "today might be different, but the spirit of Thanksgiving remains. I'm not as strong as I once was, but I've brought you something special." He extended a wrapped package, its contents promising the flavors of a Thanksgiving feast. "I hope it brings you the same joy and fullness that you've brought to my life." Steve's eyes welled up with tears, touched by the old man's unwavering generosity and the realization that their roles had subtly shifted—from benefactor and recipient to equals sharing a bond deeper than any material gift. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$