Unit 5 写作课件2024-2025学年沪教版（2024）七年级英语上册

Unit 5 Writing What would a trip to the Moon be like? Have you ever dreamed of a trip to space? 审题 01 列大纲 02 检查 04 遣词造句 03 d c b a 开头 引入主题,介绍太空旅行的背景或原因 中间 详细描述太空旅行的过程,包括出发、在太空中的经历看到的景色、进行的活动 结尾 总结太空旅行的感受和收获 对未来太空探索的展望 你可能用得上的单词 spaceship (宇宙飞船) astronaut (宇航员) space station (空间站) zero gravity (零重力) launch (发射) orbit (轨道) galaxy (星系) asteroid (小行星) 翻译:这是我梦想中的旅行 基础表达 句式升级 This is my dream trip. This is what my dream trip looks like. look like看起来像...,与...相似 翻译:我们要在睡袋里睡觉 基础表达 句式升级 We will sleep in the sleeping bag. There is much less gravity,so we will have to tie our sleeping bags to the wall when we sleep.. 扩句小技巧:加原因+时间 翻译:我将欣赏一下外面的景色 基础表达 句式升级 I will enjoy the view outside . When we arrive at the space station,I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. 扩句小技巧:加时间+详细的动作 翻译:我希望将来有朝一日能在太空旅游 基础表达 句式升级 I hope to travel into space someday . I really look forward to travelling into space someday-it will be an amazing experience. 扩句小技巧:短语升级+总结 I hope l can travel into space with my family one day. This is what my dream trip looks like. First, my family and I will fly out into space on a spaceship. When we into orbit, we will visit a space station. It will take us about six hours to get there. Things are very different in space.There is much less gravity, so we will have to tie our sleeping bags to the wall when we sleep. We will also have to wash our hands and brush our teeth in a different way. When we arrive at the space station, I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. After that, I would like to do some experiments. I really want to study how plants grow in space. Next, I'm going to put on a spacesuit and go on a spacewalk. I really look forward to travelling into space someday-it will be an amazing experience! 与话题相关的范文 In the future, space tourism will become a popular choice for many people. I believe that one day I will also have the opportunity to take a space trip. I will board a high-tech spaceship and wear a special space suit. When the spaceship takes off, I will feel the powerful push. Once in space, I will float freely and look at the beautiful earth and the vast universe. I will explore the mysteries of space and experience the amazing zero-gravity environment. This trip will be an unforgettable adventure for me. 高分亮点句型积累 记重点啦! become a popular choice变得受欢迎 have the opportunity to do sth有计划做某事 explore the mysteries of space探索太空奥秘 experience the amazing zero-gravity environment. 体验神奇的零重力环境 an unforgettable adventure一场难忘的探险之旅 Let’s write ! 假设你叫李华,请根据所学的知识,写一篇关于月球之旅的短文,提出一些好的旅行建议。 要求: 1. 80个词左右; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名; 3. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。 There is some advice for us to travel to the Moon. Firstly, we must take oxygen tanks with us. Because there is no air on the Moon. Secondly, we must prepare a spacesuit and a pair of sunglasses to protect our skin. Thirdly, we need to bring Space Food so that we can eat more easily. Because the gravity of the Moon is not as strong as the Earth's, the food will float away. Finally, we'd better prepare a rope to tie us to the spaceship. It can stop us flying off the Moon's surface and into space. If we follow the advice above,we will have a wonderful trip to the Moon in the future. 参考范文 高分亮点句型积累 记重点啦! There is some advice for us to travel to the Moon我们有一些去月球旅游的建议 as strong as和...一样强 We’d better do sth.我们最好做某事 float away飘走 If we follow the advice above,we will have a wonderful trip to the Moon in the future 如果我们采纳上面的建议,我们将会有一次美妙的月球之旅。 与话题相关的范文 I am a middle school student. I am interested in space. My dream is to travel into space. I am so glad because I will travel into space by spaceship next week. First of all, I will set up to go into space at 8:30 next Monday morning, and I will have to wear a heavy spacesuit. When I get to the space, I will take a walk on the Moon and take as many photos as I can. What’s more, I will watch a film about space in the Space Cinema. In the end, I will come back to the Earth at 5:00 p.m. next Friday. I think it will be an exciting experience. 高分亮点句型积累 记重点啦! am interested in对...感兴趣,可以替换like My dream is to do sth我的梦想是做... first of all首先=to begin with/first and foremost what’s more其次=in addition/additionally/besides in the end最后=at last/finally/last but not least 高难度范文! Have you ever dreamed of traveling to space? Well, I had the opportunity to take a trip to space last month and it was an experience I will never forget. When the day of the trip arrived, I was both excited and nervous. I put on my spacesuit and boarded the spaceship. The force of the takeoff pushed me back into my seat andsoon, we were leaving the earth's atmosphere. Once in space, I looked out of the window and was stunned by the beauty of it all. The earth was a magnificent sight from space. It was a blue and white sphere with clouds and the continents and oceans clearly visible. I could also see the moon, which looked so close that I felt like I could reach out and touch it. We spent several days in space, conducting experiments and observing the universe. We saw asteroids passing by and distant galaxies shining in the distance. The trip to space was not only an adventure but also a learning experience. When it was time to return to earth, I felt a bit sad to leave this magical place. But I know that this trip has inspired me to work harder and strive to make more contributions to space exploration in the future. 高分亮点句型积累 记重点啦! it was an experience I will never forget.这是我永远不会忘记的体验 I was stunned by the beauty of it all. 我被这一切的美所震撼了 a magnificent sight壮丽的景色 The trip to space was not only an adventure but also a learning experience. 太空之旅不仅是一次冒险,也是一次学习的经历 make more contributions to...对...做更多贡献. 高难度范文! Last summer vacation, I had an amazing trip to space. Early in the morning, I got on the spaceship with other astronauts. As the spaceship lifted off, I felt a strong force pushing me back into my seat. The view outside the window was breathtaking. The earth looked like a blue and green marble, and the thin layer of atmosphere surrounded it like a veil. As we moved further into space, I saw countless stars shining brightly in the darkness. They were like diamonds .We passed by the moon. During the trip, we conducted various scientific experiments and collected data. We also floated around in the zero-gravity environment, which was so much fun. I tried to eat and drink in that condition, and it was a hilarious experience as everything seemed to float away from me. After a few days of exploration, it was time to return to earth. Finally, the spaceship landed safely and I stepped out, feeling both exhausted and excited. This trip to space has broadened my horizons and inspired me to learn more about the universe. I hope one day, I can go on another space adventure. 高分亮点句型积累 记重点啦! breathtaking.激动人心的,令人惊叹的; countless.无数的,数不清的 hilarious.可笑的,滑稽的 broaden one’s horizons.扩大视野 inspire sb. to do sth.激励某人做某事 Thank you ! $$