读后续写---梦想与荣耀：小艾伦的警察生日派对 讲义-山东省青岛中学2023～2024学年高一下学期期末学情检测英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When we are little kids, birthday parties are big occasions. They are our time to shine, and we love everything about them: the balloons, the games, the cake, the gifts, and so on. After reading cool stories about police officers (警察) solving cases, Allen Miller thought the police were great, hoping to become one of them! So, when he had to choose a theme for his seventh birthday party—he went with his favorite: the police! And all he wanted for his birthday party was a model police car. He excitedly invited some of his friends and anxiously awaited the day. Unfortunately, none of them could make it to the party due to various reasons. Allen’s mom Rachel wrestled (纠结) with the challenging decision: should she cancel (取消) the party? Officer Frank Smith, who had already planned with Rachel and agreed to show up at the party, heard from Rachel that it might be canceled due to low attendance (出席率). That’s when he decided to save the day. After all, his duty is to serve and protect, and he decided to serve him the most amazing seventh birthday party! Officer Smith got the whole local police to join in. On the day of Allen’s party, Officer Smith picked up Rachel and Allen in his police car. They stopped at Town Hall, and officer Smith led them into the meeting room where a group of policemen were waiting to wish Allen a happy birthday. There, a party was waiting for him. The room was filled with warmth and he was greeted by the smiling faces of officers who had stepped away from their duties to celebrate with him. A large cake stood at the center of the room, drawing Allen’s eyes. As they gathered around the cake, Allen felt a rush of joy. With each officer’s cheer, he blew out the candles (蜡烛), making a wish that sparkled in his eyes as brightly as the candles had. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【导语】本文以小男孩Allen Miller的生日派对为线索，讲述了他因为崇拜警察而选择警察主题的生日派对，但因为朋友们无法参加而面临取消派对的困境。幸运的是，当地的警察局得知情况后，决定帮助他举办一个难忘的生日派对，展现了警察的职责感和社会的温暖。 在这篇短文中，有几处伏笔及其在续写中的回应： 伏笔: Allen对警察充满敬仰，并希望成为他们中的一员。 回应: 续写中，警察们为他举办了一个生日派对，让他体验了警察团队的团结和支持。 伏笔: Allen的生日派对主题是警察，他希望得到一个模型警车作为生日礼物。 回应: 续写中，Officer Smith和其他警察送给他一个精致的模型警车，满足了他的愿望。 伏笔: Allen邀请的朋友都无法参加派对。 回应: 续写中，尽管他的朋友们不能来，但整个警察局的成员代替了他的朋友们，为他庆祝生日。 伏笔: Allen的母亲Rachel在考虑是否取消派对。 回应: 续写中，Officer Smith的介入和警察局的支持使得派对得以举行，避免了取消。 伏笔: 警察的职责是服务和保护。 回应: 续写中，Officer Smith通过为Allen举办生日派对，体现了服务社区的精神。 伏笔: Allen的生日派对原本可能因出席率低而取消。 回应: 续写中，警察局的参与和对Allen的支持转变为了一个温馨和难忘的庆祝活动。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由开头语内容“After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag.(他们吃完蛋糕后，Smith警官拿出了一个礼物袋)”可知，续写段落应从警官Smith拿出一个礼物袋开始，描写Allen打开礼物袋的情景以及他发现里面是他梦寐以求的模型警车时的反应。 2.续写线索：拿出礼物袋——打开礼物袋——发现模型警车——反应——表达感谢 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①打开：open/unwrap/reveal ②发现：find/discover ③欢呼起来：erupt in cheers/break into cheers/burst out cheering 情绪类 ①喜悦得笑出来：lit up with/radiate with/gleam with an unbeatable smile ②感谢：say thanks/express gratitude/convey appreciation 【点睛】[高分句型1] The room erupted in cheers as Allen’s face lit up with an unbeatable smile.（as引导的时间状语从句） [高分句型2] Allen’s heart was full, not just from the gift, but from the overwhelming sense of love and acceptance he felt from everyone in the room.（省略关系词的定语从句） 主旨升华句 1. In the face of disappointment, community support can transform a day from one of despair to one filled with joy and celebration. 2. The spirit of service is not only about protecting and serving the community but also about nurturing dreams and inspiring the future generation. 3. What seemed like a lonely celebration turned into a testament to the power of unity and the warmth of strangers who become a second family. 4. The act of giving, especially when it comes from the heart, can light up a child's world and reaffirm the values they aspire to uphold. 5. The birthday that began with the absence of friends ended with a profound lesson in camaraderie, showing that sometimes, the most meaningful connections are found in unexpected places. 【参考答案】 With trembling hands, Allen opened the bag to find a model police car, exactly like the one he had dreamed of. The room erupted in cheers as Allen’s face lit up with an unbeatable smile. Allen’s heart was full, not just from the gift, but from the overwhelming sense of love and acceptance he felt from everyone in the room. He said thanks to all on the scene loudly and sincerely. This wasn’t just a celebration of his seventh birthday; it was a celebration of dreams, kindness, and the beginning of lifelong aspirations. 下水文1 After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. To Allen's surprise, it contained a detailed model police car, just as he had wished for. His eyes lit up with excitement and gratitude, and he couldn't help but smile from ear to ear. Officer Smith explained that the model car was a collaborative gift from the entire police force, symbolizing their support and admiration for Allen's dream. As Allen carefully unwrapped the model, the officers shared stories of their own experiences, inspiring the young boy and solidifying his resolve to pursue a career in law enforcement. The party, which had begun with uncertainty, ended up being the most memorable birthday celebration Allen could have ever imagined, all thanks to the kindness and dedication of Officer Smith and his fellow officers. 下水文2 After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. Inside was the model police car Allen had been dreaming of, complete with flashing lights and a siren that could be activated with a switch. The room erupted in applause as Allen's face lit up with the biggest smile anyone had ever seen. Officer Smith also included a miniature police badge, a symbol of the pride and honor that the police force felt in having Allen as a future colleague. As Allen held the model car and badge, the officers gathered around, sharing words of encouragement and advice for his future endeavors. The party, which had started with a risk of disappointment, turned into a heartwarming celebration of dreams and dedication, leaving an indelible mark on Allen's young heart. 下水文3 After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag with a twinkle in his eye. He handed it to Allen with a flourish, and as Allen opened it, he found the most exquisite model police car, meticulously crafted and painted in the colors of the local police department. Alongside the car was a small, hand-painted plaque that read, "To our future officer, Allen." The officers in the room cheered and clapped, making Allen feel like a true member of their team. Officer Smith then led Allen through a pinning ceremony, placing a small badge on his chest, a tradition for new recruits. It was a moment of pure joy and pride for Allen, as he was surrounded by the camaraderie and support of the police force that he aspired to join one day. The birthday party, once threatened by the absence of friends, had become a celebration of community and the spirit of service. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$