读后续写 个人顿悟篇 课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习

高考续写 - 个人顿悟篇 1. 欧亨利式转折 ✔ 转折情节设置 2. 人生导师 ✔ 3. 个人顿悟 ✔ 想要炫耀 骑车去学校 急刹车摔倒 Paragraph 1: I picked my self up and put a trembling hand into my pocket. Paragraph 2: “That’s not the right way. Patience. Will, patience,” a voice echoed in my ear after the boy left. 4 负 我匆忙着急 我耐心平静 定全文主线 正 转 想起祖父的话 5 人物 主题词 细节词 grandfather; my mother; boys; Crawley the watch; patience Rome number; possessions; impress; bike 动词可以变词性、变时态或者非谓语 名词可以改变单复数，单用所有格’s 不算划线词 划线词不可以改变词性和词义 理下划线词 grandfather; the watch; patience; my mother; boys; ; Rome number; possessions; impress; bike Crawley 6 推下文情节 衔接第一段开头 P.1: I picked my self up and put a trembling hand into my pocket. P.2: That’s not the right way. Patience. Will, patience,” a voice echoed in my ear after the boy left. 被男孩嘲笑，我很生气 衔接第二段开头 根据第二段开头倒推首段结尾 找不到 查看手表 心理 顿悟 7 找不到+震惊/紧张 1️⃣【衔接】 推下文情节 情绪/动作/心理/语言/渲染 衔接第一段开头 找不到 查看手表 男孩嘲笑+ 我生气 根据第二段开头倒推首段结尾 2️⃣ 环顾四周+即将哭泣 3️⃣ 看到手表⌚️ 4️⃣ 蹲下来 捡手表+检查 5️⃣ 男孩嘲笑+我生气 grandfather; the watch; patience; my mother; boys; ; Rome number; possessions; impress; bike； Crawley 8 顿悟 1️⃣【衔接】 推下文情节 情绪/动作/心理/语言/渲染 2️⃣ 【语言】对自己说 3️⃣ 4️⃣ 衔接第二段开头 顿悟 心理 拭去眼泪+抱着手表 走向学校+内心平静 grandfather; the watch; patience; my mother; boys; ; Rome number; possessions; impress; bike； Crawley 9 空的！我口袋里什么也没有找到！这一事实让我目瞪口呆，我觉得好像有一只长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。 Empty！I found nothing in my pocket! The fact leaving me dumbfounded, I felt as If a spear had pierced into my heart which started to bleed immediately. 连情节成句 找不到+震惊/紧张 1️⃣【衔接】 P.1: I picked my self up and put a trembling hand into my pocket. 10 我交集地环顾四周，几乎哭了起来。 Looking around with mounting anxiety, I almost burst into tears. 连情节成句 2️⃣ 环顾四周+即将哭泣 11 连情节成句 3️⃣ 看到手表⌚️ 突然，手表出现在我的视线里，在我躺着的自行车旁边，它的金表壳坏了 All of sudden, into my sight came the watch, near my lying bike, whose golden case was broken. 12 我热泪盈眶，蹲了下来，小心翼翼地把整个东西放在掌心上，仔细检查了一下损坏情况。 With tears briming in my eyes, I squatted down, deliberately put the whole thing on my cupped palms and inspected the damage. 连情节成句 4️⃣ 蹲下来+捡手表+检查 13 就在这时，Crawley带领的一群男孩从我身边走过，他们大声笑着，用“多么漂亮的破表啊！”讥讽我。听到这话，我生气得握紧拳头！ Just at this moment, a group of boys led by Crawley passed me, who laughed loudly and sniffed at me with words “what a finest broken watch!” Hearing the words, I clenched my fist with anger. 连情节成句 5️⃣ 男孩嘲笑+我生气 14 顿悟 1️⃣【衔接】 推下文情节 情绪/动作/心理/语言/渲染 2️⃣ 【语言】对自己说 3️⃣ 4️⃣ 衔接第二段开头 顿悟 心理 拭去眼泪+抱着手表 走向学校+内心平静 grandfather; the watch; patience; my mother; boys; ; Rome number; possessions; impress; bike； Crawley 15 我突然意识到我已故祖父所说的是对的。 It dawned on me that what deceased grandfather had said was right. 连情节成句 顿悟 1️⃣【衔接】 16 “木已成舟，我应该有耐心。”我喃喃地对自己说。 “What was done was done and I need to have patience.” murmured to myself. 连情节成句 2️⃣ 【语言】对自己说 17 我没有回应，拭去眼泪，用一张纸包着我珍贵的手表。 连情节成句 3️⃣ 拭去眼泪+抱着手表 I didn’t respond to those boys, wiping away my tears and wrapped my precious watch with a piece of paper. 无灵主语 创造奇迹 work wonders 18 当我大步走向学校时，我发现我的内心世界是平静的，因为我确信这只破了的手表会一直提醒我要耐心，直到真相出现。 As I strode towards school, I found my inner world was peaceful for I knew for sure that this broken watch would always remind me to be patient until truth emerged itself. 连情节成句 4️⃣ 走向学校+内心平静 19 全文整合 Empty！I found nothing in my pocket! The fact leaving me dumbfounded, I felt as If a spear had pierced into my heart which started to bleed immediately. Looking around with mounting anxiety, I almost burst into tears. All of sudden, into my sight came the watch, near my lying bike, whose golden case was broken. With tears briming in my eyes, I squatted down, deliberately put the whole thing on my cupped palms and inspected the damage. Just at this moment, a group of boys led by Crawley passed me, who laughed loudly and sniffed at me with words “what a finest broken watch!” Hearing the words, I clenched my fist with anger. It dawned on me that what deceased grandfather had said was right. “What was done was done and I need to have patience.” murmured to myself. I didn’t respond to those boys, wiping away my tears and wrapped my precious watch with a piece of paper. As I strode towards school, I found my inner world was peaceful for I knew for sure that this broken watch would always remind me to be patient until truth emerged itself. 20 $$