Unit2写作课件2024-2025学年沪教牛津版七年级英语上册

Unit 2 Writing Daily life Let’s write What do you usually do ? 2 Key words and phrases get up get dressed wash face brush teeth comb hair have breakfast go to school by bus study English play sports play basketball listen to music do some reading go home watch TV do homework take a shower do housework go to sleep 3 假设你是林涛，请以 “My Daily Life”为题，写一篇 80-100 字左右的短文，描述你的生活。 In the morning 6:30 get up / wash my face / brush my teeth 6:50 breakfast 7:15 go to school (骑自行车) 7:45 morning exercise 8:00 school start / four classes 11:55 school be over / lunch at school In the afternoon 14:30-17:00 three classes 18:00-21:00 supper / homework 22:30 go to bed 1. 写作步骤 审题 列大纲 遣词造句 检查 Let’s write 表格要点 1 2 3 4 5 题目： 字数： 人称： 时态： 内容： 审题 扩充内容 My Daily Life 80-100 字 第一人称 一般现在时 Let’s write 一般现在时只能用于介绍类的文章，描述周末生活的就不能用这个时态 让学生自己说会怎么写，然后调侃大家是老师的话多少分呀？ 因为这里只是造句，不是作文，造句和作文的区别在于有内容 列大纲 开头 引出话题 简单自我介绍，引出日常生活 按照 顺序描述 正文 事件介绍 对一天进行总结，表达情感 结尾 重申主题 时间 汉堡后出 开头：引出话题 简单自我介绍 引出日常生活 My name is Lin Tao. I am very busy every day. 我叫林涛，我每天都很忙碌。 【基础版】 过渡句：承上启下 我叫林涛，我每天都很忙碌。 【升级版】 My name is Lin Tao. I am very busy every day. My daily life is as follows. 我的日常生活如下。 Daily是本节课词汇之一，如果routine太难老师们可以改成daily life 正文： 事件介绍——按照时间顺序描述（上午） Let’s write I get up at 6:30. Then I brush my teeth and wash my face. I have breakfast at 6:50. 我早上6点30分起床，然后我刷牙洗脸。我6点50分吃早餐。 【基础版】 扩句技巧① 举例子 At 6:50, I have breakfast, 我6点50分吃早餐， 【升级版】 比如面包、鸡蛋和牛奶。 such as bread, eggs and milk. (such as) 这里的单页上是直接从6点50开始造句 先让学生造句，然后讲解for example 和such as 两个的区别（逗号、+句子/+短语） 扩句技巧 1 —— 举例子 I went to the zoo yesterday. There were many animals.I was very happy. 【基础版】 【升级版】 I went to the zoo yesterday. There were many animals, such as tigers, elephants and pandas. I was very happy. 我昨天去了动物园。那里有好多动物。我很高兴。 我昨天去了动物园。那里有好多动物，比如……。我很高兴。 【仿写练习】 动物加框 Why? I usually go to school by bike at 7:15. 我经常在7点15分骑车上学。 I usually go to school by bike at 7:15 because it is environment-friendly. 我经常在7点15分骑车上学， 【升级版】 【基础版】 因为这是环境友好的。 扩句技巧② 加原因 (environment-friendly adj. 对环境友好的) I get to school at 7:45 and do morning exercise. 我7点45分到了学校，开始晨练。 【基础版】 I get to school at 7:45 and do morning exercise 我7点45分到了学校，开始晨练， 【升级版】 because it is good for our health. 扩句技巧 2 —— 加原因 【仿写练习】 对...有好处=be good for/be benificial to 因为对我们的健康有好处 。 【仿写 8:00 Class starts at 8:00. I have four classes in the morning. 早上八点开始上课，我有4节课。 【基础版】 My favorite subject is English 我最喜欢的科目是英语 【升级版】 because it is not only practical but also interesting. ，因为英语不仅实用而且有趣。 (practical) 扩句技巧③ 补细节 + 加原因 + 细节： + 原因： 最喜欢英语 实用、有趣 问学生基础版哪部分能扩？4节课能扩 作文要多写“为什么”“怎么样” 扩句技巧 3 —— 补细节 + 表原因 I have many teachers. 【基础版】 【升级版】 I have many teachers. 我有很多老师。 我有很多老师。 【仿写练习】 ，因为她又活泼又可爱。 我最喜欢Jesse My favorite one is Jesse because she is lively and lovely. 可以复习第一节写作课讲解的人物性格的词汇 School is over at 11:55. I have lunch at school. 11点55分放学，我在学校吃午餐。 检查表格是否写全 Let’s write From 14:30 to 17:00, I have three classes. 从14点30到17点，我有三节课。 从18点到21点，我吃晚饭和做作业。 在22点30分，我上床睡觉。 正文事件介绍——按照时间顺序描述（下午） I have supper and do my homework from 18:00 to 21:00. I go to bed at 22:30. 这一部分可以让学生在单页上自己造句 结尾：重申主题 对一天进行总结，表达情感 It’s a very busy but nice day for me. 对我来说，这真是一个忙碌而美好的一天。 Sleep Relax Eat Study Let’s write My name is Lin Tao. I am very busy every day. My daily life is as follows. I get up at 6:30. Then I brush my teeth and wash my face. At 6:50, I have breakfast. I usually go to school by bike at 7:15. I get to school at 7:45 and do morning exercise. Class starts at 8:00. I have four classes in the morning. School is over at 11:55. I have lunch at school. From 14:30 to 17:00, I have three classes. I have supper and do my homework from 18:00 to 21:00. I go to bed at 22:30. It’s a very busy but nice day for me. 【基础版】 Let’s write 先基础版，再升级版（挖空），再三个技巧，再填空 My name is Lin Tao. I am very busy every day. My daily life is as follows. I get up at 6:30. Then I brush my teeth and wash my face. At 6:50, I have breakfast _________________________. I usually go to school by bike at 7:15 _____________________________. I get to school at 7:45 and do morning exercise ___________________________. Class starts at 8:00. I have four classes in the morning. _____________________________________________________ _________________. School is over at 11:55. I have lunch at school. From 14:30 to 17:00, I have three classes. I have supper and do my homework from 18:00 to 21:00. I go to bed at 22:30. It’s a very busy but nice day for me. 【升级版】 , such as bread, eggs and milk because it is environment-friendly because it is good for our health My favorite subject is English because it is not only practical but also interesting 1. 举例子 2. 加原因 3. 补细节 + 加原因 先基础版，再升级版（挖空），再三个技巧，再填空 In the morning 6:30 get up / wash my face / brush my teeth 6:50 breakfast 7:15 go to school (骑自行车) 7:45 morning exercise 8:00 school start / four classes 11:55 school be over / lunch at school In the afternoon 14:30-17:00 three classes 18:00-21:00 supper / homework 22:30 go to bed 在早上 （一段时间）之后 说到；当提到…… 在……之后 在一天的结尾 记叙文衔接词 1. 记叙文衔接词 1. 在早上/ 下午/ 晚上 2. （一段时间）之后 3. 说到；当提到 4. 在……之后 5. 在一天的结尾 In the morning/afternoon/evening 一段时间 + later, … When it comes to + n. , … After + n. , … At the end of the day, … Let’s write 让学生尝试背一下 记叙文衔接词：练习 ______________, I get up at 6:30. ______________, I have breakfast, such as bread, eggs and milk. _______________ the afternoon, I have three classes. ___________, I do my homework from 18:00 to 21:00. __________________, I go to bed at 22:30. When it comes to After supper At the end of the day 20 minutes later In the morning 先放这一页是因为这三个衔接比较难， 而且前面在【下午】只讲解了基础版，刚好这一页练习完衔接词的升级版之后，相当于这篇文章终于讲完了 My name is Lin Tao. I am very busy every day. My daily life is as follows. In the morning, I get up at 6:30. Then I brush my teeth and wash my face. Twenty minutes later, I have breakfast, such as bread, eggs and milk. I usually go to school by bike at 7:15 because it is environment-friendly. I get to school at 7:45 and I do morning exercise because it is good for our health. Class starts at 8:00. I have four classes in the morning. My favorite subject is English because it is not only practical but also interesting. The school is over at 11:55. I have lunch at school. When it comes to the afternoon, I have three classes. After supper, I do my homework from 18:00 to 21:00. At the end of the day, I go to bed at 22:30. It’s a very busy but nice day for me. 参考范文 扩句技巧 I have breakfast such as bread, eggs and milk. _________ I usually go to school by bike at 7:15 because it is environment-friendly. _________ Class starts at 8:00. I have four classes in the morning. My favorite subject is English because it is not only practical but also interesting. _______ 举例子 加原因 补细节+加原因 这两页是笔记页，可以下课截屏发到群里 记叙文衔接词/句 在早上/ 下午/ 晚上 （一段时间）之后 说到；当提到 在……之后 在一天的结尾 In the morning/afternoon/evening 一段时间 + later, … When it comes to + n. , … After + n. , … At the end of the day, … 这两页是笔记页，可以下课截屏发到群里 Let’s write Let’s write c a b d How TO: 收件人地址 结尾：Yours、Sincerely yours, ** Subject:发件主题 Dear **， 正文 29 How 2 4 3 1 邮件必不可少---4部分 30 How 邮件可用模版1 Dear,称 呼 I haven't seen you for a long time. Glad to hear from you. I want to share with you my new book, . (写信目的）First of all(首先）, . Scondly（其次）, . Thirdly（再次）, . Finally（最后）, . Wish you all the best!/Have a good time ! Yours, Li Lei 注意：齐头式，每段落第一行顶格写正文，段落之间空一行书写， 左对齐。 31 How 邮件可用模版2 Dear称 呼， I haven't seen you for a long time. Glad to hear from you. I want to share with you my new book, . (写信目的）To begin with(首先）, .What’s more/In addition/Additionally（其次）, . Last but not least（最后但同样重要的是）, . Looking forward to your reply! Sincerely, Li Lei 32 出门测 1. 20分钟后，我吃早餐，比如面包、鸡蛋和牛奶。 2. 我最喜欢的科目是英语，因为英语不仅实用而且有趣。 3. 说到下午，我有3节课。 Twenty minutes later, I have breakfast, such as bread, eggs and milk. My favorite subject is English because it is not only practical but also interesting. When it comes to the afternoon, I have three classes. 建议改为出门测 出门测 1. 20分钟后，我吃早餐，比如面包、鸡蛋和牛奶。 2. 我最喜欢的科目是英语，因为英语不仅实用而且有趣。 3. 说到下午，我有3节课。 建议改为出门测 $$