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写作专栏】高中英语写作提升训练：提出建议或请求（写作步骤+套用公式） 任务呈现 假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Eric把自己写的英语短剧发给你看，希望你能提出一些建议。请你根据以下要点给他回一封邮件：1. 收到Eric发来的短剧；2. 提出建议；3. 希望建议有用。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 写作步骤 1、 任务分析 1. 审题：确定文章的人称和时态根据写作任务可知，李华的外国朋友发来自己写的英语短剧征求建议，李华需要提出自己的建议，故人称以第二人称为主；时态以一般现在时为主。 2. 确定文章结构此建议信的正文可以分为三段。第一段：说明已收到对方发来的短剧，并打算提出建议；第二段：整体评价短剧，并提出自己的建议；第三段：希望自己的建议对对方有帮助。 二、词语、句子罗列 1. 词语 (1) 愿意做某事 would like to do sth. (2) 与……分享…… share … with … (3) 总体来说 generally speaking/in general (4) 引起某人的兴趣 arouse one’s interest (5) 如果……就更好了 It would be better if …  (6) 把……加到……上 add … to … (7) 创作一个开放式结局 create an open ending 2. 句子 (1) 读了你的短剧后，我想和你分享一下我的看法。 ●After I read it, I’d like to share my opinions with you. ●Having read it, I’d like to share my opinions with you. (2) 总体来说，你的短剧主题新奇有趣，是很不错的。 ●Generally speaking, your short play, whose theme is interesting and novel, is good. (3) 你应该丰富一下剧情，这样才能引起读者的兴趣，从而吸引更多人。 ●You should enrich the plots of the play, which will arouse readers’ interest and attract more people. (3) 如果你能改一些台词，并在其中加入一些非正式表达就更好了。 ●It would be better if you could change some lines and add some informal expressions to them. (4) 此外，如果可以的话，你可以创作一个开放式结局。 ●In addition, if possible, you may create an open ending.  2、 扩充要点，连句成文 Dear Eric,  I’m glad to receive your English short play. Having read it, I’d like to share my opinions with you.  Generally speaking, your short play, whose theme is interesting and novel, is good. However, there are a few places that you can improve to make the play more attractive. Firstly, you should enrich the plots of the play, which will arouse readers’ interest and attract more people. Secondly, some of the lines are too formal. It would be better if you could change some lines and add some informal expressions to them. In addition, if possible, you may create an open ending.  I hope that you’ll fi nd my suggestions helpful.   Yours, Li Hua 知识储备 向别人提出建议或请求时的常用句式 向别人提出建议时 ●I am writing to give you my suggestions/advice about/on … ●Learning that you are …, I am writing to give you  ●some advice/suggestions about/on … ●You have asked me for my advice about/on … and I will try to give you some advice/suggestions. ●Talking of/Speaking of this problem, I suggest that … ●In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned/From my point of view, you’d better/you may as well … ●It would be a good idea if … ●I hope that you will fi nd these suggestions helpful/practical/useful. ●I trust/believe that you will take my suggestions into account/consideration. ●I hope my advice will be of use to you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 向别人提出请求时 ●I am … I’d like to ask if/whether you have …/can provide me with … ●I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with … ●I’d like to know something about … ●Would you be so kind as to …?  ●I have made up my mind to write to you in the hope that you can give me some help/suggestions.  ●At the same time, I beg you to …  ●In addition/Furthermore/Moreover/What’s more, I would like you to … ●I really don’t know what to do and expect you to give me your advice/suggestions/help.  ●I have no idea what I should do and I long for/am eager for your advice/help.  ●I hope that this request will not trouble you too much.  ●I would appreciate any of your help/anything you can do to help me with this matter. ●Thank you for your help with great respect!  ●Thank you for your time and patience, and I’m looking forward to your reply. ●I would be grateful if you could give me some advice/suggestions on/about … 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$