必修第一册Unit 2 Let’s talk teens(话题-提建议)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(译林版2020)

Unit 2 Let’s talk teens 单元写作深度指导 （建议信） 单元话题 考题展示 提建议 2024·北京·高考真题 　建议信是写信人对某事提出自己的建议和忠告, 可能是写给个人, 就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点; 也可能是写给某个组织或机构, 就改进服务提出建议或忠告。 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 考向分析与应对策略 高考英语建议信的考查趋势显示出其作为高频作文话题的重要性。‌近十年来，‌尽管高考英语作文涵盖了多种类型，‌如邀请信、‌告知信、‌求助信等，‌但建议信也占据了一定的考查比例‌。‌这表明建议信在高考英语作文中具有不可忽视的地位。‌在准备建议信时，‌考生应注意其固定的结构和常用句式。‌建议信通常包括开头陈述问题、‌中间提出建议及理由，‌以及结尾表达期望和鼓励‌。‌此外，‌使用一般现在时或一般将来时是建议信时态的常见选择。 建议信的内容既实用又全面，‌可以遵循以下几个步骤：‌ 1.明确目的‌ 在开始撰写之前，‌明确建议信的目的和受众。‌了解受众的需求和背景，‌以便更好地提供有针对性的建议。‌ 2.结构清晰‌ 使用标准的书信格式，‌包括开头、‌正文和结尾。‌开头部分简要介绍自己，‌并说明写信的目的。‌正文部分详细阐述建议，‌每个建议作为一个独立的段落。‌结尾部分总结建议，‌并表达希望对方采纳的意愿。‌ 3.具体详细‌ 提供具体的建议，‌而不是泛泛而谈。‌用具体的例子简要支持你的建议，‌增加说服力。‌ 4.全面考虑‌ 在提出建议时，‌考虑问题的多个方面，‌包括可能的影响等。‌确保建议既符合实际又可行，‌避免提出不切实际或难以实施的建议。‌ 5.语言得体 使用礼貌、‌专业的语言，‌避免使用过于口语化或情绪化的表达。‌检查语法和拼写错误，‌确保信件的准确性和专业性。‌ 6.鼓励反馈‌ 在结尾部分，‌鼓励对方提供反馈或进一步讨论你的建议。‌这可以建立一种开放的沟通氛围，‌并有助于你了解对方对建议的看法。‌‌ I.话题词汇 (1)give you some advice on. . . 给你一些关于……的建议 (2)spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力去做某事 (3)as we all know 众所周知 (4)as far as I am concerned 据我所知 (5)be of great importance to 对……极其重要 (6)communicate with sb. 与某人交流 (7)had better do 最好做…… (8)take/follow my advice 采纳我的建议 (9)get along with 相处, 进展 (10)feel stressed 感到有压力的 II. 话题句式 (1) 建议信开头常用句式 ①I am sorry to know that you are worried about the coming exam. 了解到你对即将到来的考试很担心我很难过。 ②I’m glad that you are getting along well with your study. 我很高兴你的学业进展顺利。 ③You asked me in your letter how to get on with your deskmate. 你在信中问及如何与你的同桌相处。 (2)表达建议常用句式 ①You don’t have to worry about it. 你不必为此事担心。 ②First of all, try to invite some of your good friends to take part in after-class activities. 首先, 尽量邀请你的一些好朋友参加课外活动。 ③What’s more, help others when they’re in trouble. 更重要的是, 当别人有困难时帮助他们。 ④In my opinion, you should find a chance to talk with her. 依我看来, 你应该找机会与她谈谈。 (3)建议信结尾常用句式 ①I hope these suggestions will help you. 我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。 ②I’m sure you’ll make it. 我确信你能行。 ③I hope everything goes well with you. 我希望你万事如意。 III.模版建构 英语建议信的写法通常遵循一定的格式和要点，‌以下是写作指南：‌ ▲‌开头 1.明确写信目的：‌在第一段中，‌开门见山地表明写信的原因和目的。‌例如，‌可以提到了解对方的情况或问题，‌因此写信提供建议。‌ 常用句式：‌Learning/Knowing/Hearing that..., I'm writing to give you some suggestions. 2.表达关切或赞赏：‌可以适当表达对收信人情况或问题的关切，‌或对其请求的赞赏。‌ ▲‌正文 1.具体说明问题：‌简要回顾或说明对方遇到的问题或需要改进的地方。‌ 2.给出具体建议：‌ 详实充分：‌建议内容要具体、‌可行，‌避免泛泛而谈。‌ 诚恳礼貌：‌语气要诚恳、‌有礼貌，‌尊重对方的意见和感受。‌ 逻辑清晰：‌使用过渡词使建议之间的逻辑清晰，‌如First/Firstly, Second/Secondly, Last but not least等。‌ 常用句式：‌ You should do... You’d better do sth... I would like to suggest that ... 3.解释建议理由：‌对于每个建议，‌可以简要解释其理由或好处，‌增强说服力。‌ ▲‌结尾 1.表达心愿：‌简洁明了地表达希望对方能采纳建议的心愿。‌ 常用句式：‌I hope you will find my suggestions/advice/tips useful/helpful. 2.结束语：‌使用礼貌的结束语，‌如Yours sincerely, Respectfully yours等。‌ 【写作模版】 一、写作积累 1. Trying to be perfect is nothing too bad.（动名词短 语 Trying to be perfect 作主语） 2. Instead, it's a valuable virtue you should stick to. （you should stick to为省略了that的定语从句） 3. What you should do is just try your best. （What you should do为what引导的主语从句） 4. Please keep in mind that process is far more important than outcome. （that process is far more important than outcome为that引导的宾语从句） 二、典例分析 假定你是Teens杂志社“悄悄话（Secret Words）”的栏目编辑David，刚收到李华的一封求助信（信件内容附后）。请阅信后给他回一封信。内容包括： 1. 感谢对方信任，并表明写信目的； 2. 肯定对方的优点，并回应他的困惑； 3. 表达希望。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear David, I’m Li Hua, a faithful reader of Teens. I’m writing to ask you for help. I’m under psychological pressure now. To be honest, I’m a motivated boy, so I always expect myself to be perfect in every aspect. But the truth is that I can’t always satisfy myself or meet others’ expectations. I feel so tired and helpless. What should I do next? Can you help me? Looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to hear that you are a faithful reader of Teens. __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, David 第一步：审题谋篇 审题：1、审人称：第一、二人称；2、审时态：一般现在时； 谋篇布局： 第一段感谢对方信任，并表明写信目的； 第二段为主体段，肯定对方的优点并回应他的困惑； 第三段表达希望。 第二步：核心词汇 1. ask for 请求 2. pressure n. 压力 3. editor n.编辑 4. take place 发生 第三步：连词成句 1. 完成句子 （1） 追求完美没什么不好。 __________ __________ __________ __________ is nothing too bad. （2） 相反，这是一种宝贵的美德。你应该坚持美德。 Instead, it’s a __________ virtue. You should __________ __________ the virture. （3） 事情并不总是按计划进行。 Things do not always take place __________ __________. （4） 你应该做的就是尽你最大的努力。 __________ __________ __________ __________ is just try your best. （5） 过程远比结果重要。请记住这一点。 Process is __________ __________ important __________ outcome. Please keep it in mind. 2. 句式升级 （6） 将句（2）改写成含定语从句的主从复合句。 __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ （7） 将句（5）改写成含宾语从句的主从复合句。 __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 第四步：连句成篇 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、单句翻译 1. 在成长的过程中, 我们经历一些身体的变化是正常的。 During the process of growing up, ___________ we experience some body changes.   2. 真正重要的是, 我们应该保持均衡的饮食。 It really matters that ___________________.   3. 除此之外, 我们经常与我们的父母或朋友发生争论。其原因是我们越来越成熟, 逐渐倾向于相信自己。 Besides, we often ___________________ our parents or friends. Because we are becoming more and more mature and gradually ___________________ ourselves.   4. 为了解决这个问题, 我认为我们应该更多地和家人、朋友及老师交流。 ___________________, I think we should talk to our family, friends and teachers more.   5. 沟通是一个你向别人表达感情的重要方式, 然后他们能更好地理解你并帮助你。 Communication is an important way ___________________, and then they can understand you better and help you.   ·句式升级 6. 用it is+adj. +for sb. to do. . . 升级句1 During the process of growing up, _________________________________________ 7. 用what引导的名词性从句作主语升级句2 _________________________________________ 8. 用the reason why. . . is that. . . 升级句3 _________________________________________ 二、语篇翻译 Dear Li Hua, 　　How is everything going? I hope _____________________(你很好). I’m fine, but tired. Right now it is the summer vacation and _____________________(我正在农场帮助我父亲). It is the time of year for the rice harvest, _____________________( 所以我每天从黎明工作到天黑). Sometimes we go on working after dark by the lights of our tractors. We grow rice in the south of the States, but in the north _____________________(在比较冷的北方, 他们种小麦). _____________________(尽管农场很大), my dad has only two men working for him.   　　Most Saturday evenings there is a party, even at harvest time. These parties often _____________________(使我们非常高兴). Some of my friends drink beer. I don’t, _____________________(因为聚会后我得开车回家). Hope you can join us when you pay a visit to our country.   　　Give my best regards to your parents. Yours, Tom 三．书面表达 　假设你是李华,你的好朋友Jim最近经常因周末时间安排和父母争吵,请你就此情况给他写一封信,就如何与父母更好地交流提出你的建议。内容包括: 1.表示理解;2.提出建议。 注意:写作词数应为80个左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【根据上述要求及提示补全语篇】 Dear Jim, 　　I understand quite well what you’re 1._____________________(经历,经受).It’s not unusual for us teenagers to have difficulty 2._____________________(和……友好相处) parents.  　　Take it easy! But remember 3._____________________(……很重要) learn to control your anger.After all, those who easily get irritated are less likely to become a good listener and communicator.Thus, when your parents 4._____________________(指责你的周末安排), don’t explode but explain tenderly and patiently.Besides, don’t forget to tell them how much you love them.  　　Hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful. Yours, Li Hua （2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:   ⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）； ⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容； ⑶希望从中有何收获。 注意： ⑴词数不少于100； ⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； ⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 2 Let’s talk teens 单元写作深度指导 （建议信） 单元话题 考题展示 提建议 2024·北京·高考真题 　建议信是写信人对某事提出自己的建议和忠告, 可能是写给个人, 就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点; 也可能是写给某个组织或机构, 就改进服务提出建议或忠告。 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 考向分析与应对策略 高考英语建议信的考查趋势显示出其作为高频作文话题的重要性。‌近十年来，‌尽管高考英语作文涵盖了多种类型，‌如邀请信、‌告知信、‌求助信等，‌但建议信也占据了一定的考查比例‌。‌这表明建议信在高考英语作文中具有不可忽视的地位。‌在准备建议信时，‌考生应注意其固定的结构和常用句式。‌建议信通常包括开头陈述问题、‌中间提出建议及理由，‌以及结尾表达期望和鼓励‌。‌此外，‌使用一般现在时或一般将来时是建议信时态的常见选择。 建议信的内容既实用又全面，‌可以遵循以下几个步骤：‌ 1.明确目的‌ 在开始撰写之前，‌明确建议信的目的和受众。‌了解受众的需求和背景，‌以便更好地提供有针对性的建议。‌ 2.结构清晰‌ 使用标准的书信格式，‌包括开头、‌正文和结尾。‌开头部分简要介绍自己，‌并说明写信的目的。‌正文部分详细阐述建议，‌每个建议作为一个独立的段落。‌结尾部分总结建议，‌并表达希望对方采纳的意愿。‌ 3.具体详细‌ 提供具体的建议，‌而不是泛泛而谈。‌用具体的例子简要支持你的建议，‌增加说服力。‌ 4.全面考虑‌ 在提出建议时，‌考虑问题的多个方面，‌包括可能的影响等。‌确保建议既符合实际又可行，‌避免提出不切实际或难以实施的建议。‌ 5.语言得体 使用礼貌、‌专业的语言，‌避免使用过于口语化或情绪化的表达。‌检查语法和拼写错误，‌确保信件的准确性和专业性。‌ 6.鼓励反馈‌ 在结尾部分，‌鼓励对方提供反馈或进一步讨论你的建议。‌这可以建立一种开放的沟通氛围，‌并有助于你了解对方对建议的看法。‌‌ I.话题词汇 (1)give you some advice on. . . 给你一些关于……的建议 (2)spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力去做某事 (3)as we all know 众所周知 (4)as far as I am concerned 据我所知 (5)be of great importance to 对……极其重要 (6)communicate with sb. 与某人交流 (7)had better do 最好做…… (8)take/follow my advice 采纳我的建议 (9)get along with 相处, 进展 (10)feel stressed 感到有压力的 II. 话题句式 (1) 建议信开头常用句式 ①I am sorry to know that you are worried about the coming exam. 了解到你对即将到来的考试很担心我很难过。 ②I’m glad that you are getting along well with your study. 我很高兴你的学业进展顺利。 ③You asked me in your letter how to get on with your deskmate. 你在信中问及如何与你的同桌相处。 (2)表达建议常用句式 ①You don’t have to worry about it. 你不必为此事担心。 ②First of all, try to invite some of your good friends to take part in after-class activities. 首先, 尽量邀请你的一些好朋友参加课外活动。 ③What’s more, help others when they’re in trouble. 更重要的是, 当别人有困难时帮助他们。 ④In my opinion, you should find a chance to talk with her. 依我看来, 你应该找机会与她谈谈。 (3)建议信结尾常用句式 ①I hope these suggestions will help you. 我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。 ②I’m sure you’ll make it. 我确信你能行。 ③I hope everything goes well with you. 我希望你万事如意。 III.模版建构 英语建议信的写法通常遵循一定的格式和要点，‌以下是写作指南：‌ ▲‌开头 1.明确写信目的：‌在第一段中，‌开门见山地表明写信的原因和目的。‌例如，‌可以提到了解对方的情况或问题，‌因此写信提供建议。‌ 常用句式：‌Learning/Knowing/Hearing that..., I'm writing to give you some suggestions. 2.表达关切或赞赏：‌可以适当表达对收信人情况或问题的关切，‌或对其请求的赞赏。‌ ▲‌正文 1.具体说明问题：‌简要回顾或说明对方遇到的问题或需要改进的地方。‌ 2.给出具体建议：‌ 详实充分：‌建议内容要具体、‌可行，‌避免泛泛而谈。‌ 诚恳礼貌：‌语气要诚恳、‌有礼貌，‌尊重对方的意见和感受。‌ 逻辑清晰：‌使用过渡词使建议之间的逻辑清晰，‌如First/Firstly, Second/Secondly, Last but not least等。‌ 常用句式：‌ You should do... You’d better do sth... I would like to suggest that ... 3.解释建议理由：‌对于每个建议，‌可以简要解释其理由或好处，‌增强说服力。‌ ▲‌结尾 1.表达心愿：‌简洁明了地表达希望对方能采纳建议的心愿。‌ 常用句式：‌I hope you will find my suggestions/advice/tips useful/helpful. 2.结束语：‌使用礼貌的结束语，‌如Yours sincerely, Respectfully yours等。‌ 【写作模版】 一、写作积累 1. Trying to be perfect is nothing too bad.（动名词短 语 Trying to be perfect 作主语） 2. Instead, it's a valuable virtue you should stick to. （you should stick to为省略了that的定语从句） 3. What you should do is just try your best. （What you should do为what引导的主语从句） 4. Please keep in mind that process is far more important than outcome. （that process is far more important than outcome为that引导的宾语从句） 二、典例分析 假定你是Teens杂志社“悄悄话（Secret Words）”的栏目编辑David，刚收到李华的一封求助信（信件内容附后）。请阅信后给他回一封信。内容包括： 1. 感谢对方信任，并表明写信目的； 2. 肯定对方的优点，并回应他的困惑； 3. 表达希望。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear David, I’m Li Hua, a faithful reader of Teens. I’m writing to ask you for help. I’m under psychological pressure now. To be honest, I’m a motivated boy, so I always expect myself to be perfect in every aspect. But the truth is that I can’t always satisfy myself or meet others’ expectations. I feel so tired and helpless. What should I do next? Can you help me? Looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to hear that you are a faithful reader of Teens. __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, David 第一步：审题谋篇 审题：1、审人称：第一、二人称；2、审时态：一般现在时； 谋篇布局： 第一段感谢对方信任，并表明写信目的； 第二段为主体段，肯定对方的优点并回应他的困惑； 第三段表达希望。 第二步：核心词汇 1. ask for 请求 2. pressure n. 压力 3. editor n.编辑 4. take place 发生 第三步：连词成句 1. 完成句子 （1） 追求完美没什么不好。 __________ __________ __________ __________ is nothing too bad. （2） 相反，这是一种宝贵的美德。你应该坚持美德。 Instead, it’s a __________ virtue. You should __________ __________ the virture. （3） 事情并不总是按计划进行。 Things do not always take place __________ __________. （4） 你应该做的就是尽你最大的努力。 __________ __________ __________ __________ is just try your best. （5） 过程远比结果重要。请记住这一点。 Process is __________ __________ important __________ outcome. Please keep it in mind. 2. 句式升级 （6） 将句（2）改写成含定语从句的主从复合句。 __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ （7） 将句（5）改写成含宾语从句的主从复合句。 __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 答案：（1） Trying to be perfect （2） valuable; stick to （3） as planned （4） What you should do （5） far more; than （6）Instead, it’s a valuable virtue you should stick to. （7）Please keep in mind that process is far more important than outcome. 第四步：连句成篇 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to hear that you are a faithful reader of Teens. As an editor in the column of Secret Words, I’m thankful for your trust. I’m writing to give you my humble opinions. Trying to be perfect is nothing too bad. Instead, it’s a valuable virtue you should stick to. However, don’t be too hard on yourself or too critical of yourself. Things do not always take place as planned. What you should do is just try your best. Enjoy the process of achieving goals. Please keep in mind that process is far more important than outcome. I wish my opinions above will be helpful to you. Keep in touch! Yours sincerely, David 一、单句翻译 1. 在成长的过程中, 我们经历一些身体的变化是正常的。 During the process of growing up, it is normal that we experience some body changes.   2. 真正重要的是, 我们应该保持均衡的饮食。 It really matters that we should keep a balanced diet.   3. 除此之外, 我们经常与我们的父母或朋友发生争论。其原因是我们越来越成熟, 逐渐倾向于相信自己。 Besides, we often have arguments with our parents or friends. Because we are becoming more and more mature and gradually tend to believe in ourselves.   4. 为了解决这个问题, 我认为我们应该更多地和家人、朋友及老师交流。 To solve this problem, I think we should talk to our family, friends and teachers more.   5. 沟通是一个你向别人表达感情的重要方式, 然后他们能更好地理解你并帮助你。 Communication is an important way to express your feelings to others, and then they can understand you better and help you.   ·句式升级 6. 用it is+adj. +for sb. to do. . . 升级句1 During the process of growing up, it is normal for us to experience some body changes.   7. 用what引导的名词性从句作主语升级句2 What really matters is that we should keep a balanced diet.   8. 用the reason why. . . is that. . . 升级句3 Besides, the reason why we often have arguments with our parents or friends is that we are becoming more and more mature and gradually tend to believe in ourselves.   二、语篇翻译 Dear Li Hua, 　　How is everything going? I hope you are very well(你很好). I’m fine, but tired. Right now it is the summer vacation and I’m helping my dad on the farm(我正在农场帮助我父亲). It is the time of year for the rice harvest, so every day I work from dawn until dark( 所以我每天从黎明工作到天黑). Sometimes we go on working after dark by the lights of our tractors. We grow rice in the south of the States, but in the north where it is colder they grow wheat(在比较冷的北方, 他们种小麦). Although the farm is large(尽管农场很大), my dad has only two men working for him.   　　Most Saturday evenings there is a party, even at harvest time. These parties often make us very happy(使我们非常高兴). Some of my friends drink beer. I don’t, because I have to drive home after the party(因为聚会后我得开车回家). Hope you can join us when you pay a visit to our country.   　　Give my best regards to your parents. Yours, Tom 三．书面表达 　假设你是李华,你的好朋友Jim最近经常因周末时间安排和父母争吵,请你就此情况给他写一封信,就如何与父母更好地交流提出你的建议。内容包括: 1.表示理解;2.提出建议。 注意:写作词数应为80个左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【根据上述要求及提示补全语篇】 Dear Jim, 　　I understand quite well what you’re 1.going through(经历,经受).It’s not unusual for us teenagers to have difficulty 2.getting along well with(和……友好相处) parents.  　　Take it easy! But remember 3.it’s significant to(……很重要) learn to control your anger.After all, those who easily get irritated are less likely to become a good listener and communicator.Thus, when your parents 4.criticize your weekend arrangements(指责你的周末安排), don’t explode but explain tenderly and patiently.Besides, don’t forget to tell them how much you love them.  　　Hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful. Yours, Li Hua （2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:   ⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）； ⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容； ⑶希望从中有何收获。 注意： ⑴词数不少于100； ⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； ⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin 【参考范文】 Dear Chris,  I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation. When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply. Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。 【要点详解】 1.词汇积累 做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech 提供：provide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth. 机会：opportunity→chance 采纳建议：take one’s advice→follow one’s advice 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. 拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. 【高分句型1】When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$