内容正文:
Module 7 A famous story
模块话题满分范文必背
1.学校要进行主题为“学英语,讲故事”的演讲比赛,班里选你为代表去参加比赛。请把小时候听过的《龟兔赛跑》的故事先在班里讲一遍作为练习吧。
注意:1.句子通顺连贯,语法正确;
2.词数不少于70,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:tortoise 乌龟 proud 骄傲的 have a race举行赛跑 catch up with sb. 赶上某人
Good morning, everyone! I’d like to tell you _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your attention!
【答案】例文:
Good morning, everyone! I’d like to tell you an interesting and meaningful story.
There was a rabbit and a tortoise in the forest. One day, they decided to have a race. At first the rabbit ran much faster than the tortoise and he thought the tortoise could never catch up with him. He was so proud that he decided to have a rest under a tree. In the end, the tortoise arrived while the rabbit was sleeping.
So try your best to do everything. Nothing is impossible.
Thank you for your attention!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿,主要讲述《龟兔赛跑》的故事;
② 时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,包括故事的主要角色、情节和故事的寓意。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍故事的主要角色——兔子和乌龟;
第二步,具体阐述故事的情节。先介绍兔子和乌龟的比赛,然后描绘兔子的自满和乌龟的坚持;
第三步,最后是总结故事的寓意和教训。
[亮点词汇]
① decide to do 决定做
② catch up with 追赶
③ in the end 最后
[高分句型]
① At first the rabbit ran much faster than the tortoise and he thought the tortoise could never catch up with him.(and连接的并列句;thought后为省略了that的宾语从句)
② In the end, the tortoise arrived while the rabbit was sleeping.(while引导时间状语从句)
2.同学们,你们一定了解“乌鸦喝水”这个寓言故事吧。请根据上图,以“The Crow and the Pitcher”为题, 用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,在学校广播站“英语之声”栏目播出。
要求:
1. 包含图片全部要点;
2. 你从中得到哪些启发,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:乌鸦crow;口渴的thirsty;鹅卵石pebble;罐子pitcher
The Crow and the Pitcher
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【答案】例文:
The Crow and the Pitcher
It was a hot day. A crow felt so thirsty that he looked for water everywhere. Finally, he found a pitcher. But there wasn’t much water in it. His beak couldn’t reach it. He was very distressed.
When he wanted to give up, he came up with a good idea. He picked up a small pebble and dropped it into the pitcher. Then he took another and dropped it in. Gradually, the water rose and he was able to drink the water.
How clever the crow was! We should learn from the crow. When we meet with difficulties, we should try to solve them instead of giving up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中自己从中得到的启发,注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍乌鸦喝水这个寓言故事;
第二步,阐述自己从中得到了启发。
[亮点词汇]
①so...that...太……以至于……
②give up放弃
③come up with想出
④pick up捡起
⑤be able to能够
⑥instead of代替
[高分句型]
①A crow felt so thirsty that he looked for water everywhere.(that引导结果状语从句)
②But there wasn’t much water in it.(there be句型)
③When he wanted to give up, he came up with a good idea. (when引导时间状语从句)
④How clever the crow was!(感叹句)
3.中国的传统文化博大精深,我们中国也有很多美好的神话故事,你喜欢神话故事吗?请从Yu Gong Moves a Mountain,Hou Yi Shoots the Suns 和Nu Wa Repairs the Sky中任选一个故事,给我们讲讲吧!
要求:
1. 语句通顺,书写工整,要包括故事的六要素。
2. 不得出现真实的学校和姓名。
3. 可适当增加内容,不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
Yu Gong Moves a Mountain
Once there lived an old man called Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. So Yu Gong decided to move the mountains.
Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family. So Yu Gong started digging. At that time, a “clever” man called Zhi Sou laughed at him and told him that it was impossible to move such high mountains. But Yu Gong didn’t listen to him and said that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:本文主要从三则故事中选择一个故事讲述。
[写作步骤]
第一步,详细介绍愚公移山的故事;
第二步,讲述从中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②listen to听
③continue to do sth.继续做某事
[高分句型]
①Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family. (although引导的让步状语从句)
②The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. (that引导的宾语从句以及as long as引导的条件状语从句)
4.假设你是阳光中学八年级的学生李平,你的英国笔友Henry向你请教成语“守株待兔”。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 描述故事;2. 概括寓意。
注意: 1. 词数90左右;2. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇:野兔hare;树桩tree stump
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Henry,
I’m glad to tell you the story of Wait for Wind Falls. In ancient China, there was a poor farmer. He was too lazy to work hard every day.
One day, while the farmer was working on the farm, a hare ran so fast that it bumped into the tree stump and died. The farmer was very happy to take the hare home and cooked a delicious meal. From then on, he didn’t work anymore. He waited near the tree stump for hares day after day until he was dying. Also, the crops in the field all died because of lack of care.
This story tells us we should not always depend on good luck. The past experience doesn’t always work. Happy life comes from hard work.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。内容是给你的英国笔友Henry介绍成语“守株待兔”的故事内容和寓意。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。首先描述故事;其次概括寓意。
第三步:书写结语。过去的经验并不总是有效的。幸福的生活来自努力工作。
[亮点词汇]
①too…to…太……而不能……
②from then on从那时起
③day after day日复一日
④because of因为,由于
⑤depend on依靠
[高分句型]
①One day, while the farmer was working on the farm, a hare ran so fast that it bumped into the tree sturmp and died.(while引导的时间状语从句)
②He waited near the tree sturmp for hares day after day until he was dying.(until引导的时间状语从句)
5.根据下列提示简单描述刻舟求剑的故事,可以适当发挥,不少于80 字。
1. 楚国一个人过河时,宝剑掉到了水里;
2. 他立刻在船上做了一个记号;
3. 船停下时,他从船上做记号的地方跳到水里去寻找他的宝剑;
4. 船动宝剑没动;
5. 你对这个故事的看法(至少一点)
楚国 the State of Chu;宝剑 sword;立刻 at once;做记号 make a mark
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【答案】例文
Making His Mark (Ke Zhou Qiu Jian)
A man from the State of Chu was crossing the river in the boat. His sword fell into the water because he was not careful. He made a mark on the boat at once. When the boat stopped, he jumped into the water to look for his sword from the mark he made on the boat. The boat moved but the sword did not. I think it is very stupid of him to look for a sword in this way.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的“个人看法”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,按照提示叙述“刻舟求剑”故事情节;
第二步,表达自己的观点看法。
[亮点词汇]
①cross the river过河
②look for寻找
③move移动
④in this way用这种方法
[高分句型]
①His sword fell into the water because he was not careful.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②When the boat stopped, he jumped into the water to look for his sword from the mark he made on the boat.(When引导的时间状语从句)
③I think it is very stupid of him to look for a sword in this way.(省略that的宾语从句;it作形式主语的句型)
6.假设你是姚姗,下周一你所在班级将举行英语课外阅读交流会。请根据以下提示, 用英语写一篇短文,向同学们介绍“The Famous Rabbit-Tortoise Race”这一故事。
Rabbit
win the second race, be good at running
Tortoise
the third race, swim across the river
take turns to, put...on the back, reach...together
What I have learned
【答案】参考范文:
The Famous Rabbit-Tortoise Race
We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise. After that, the rabbit decided to have a second race. This time he didn’t sleep and won because he was good at running.
However, the tortoise didn’t give up. He had a third race with the rabbit. There was a river on the way. The tortoise swam across it quickly and won.
The story does not end here. In the last race, they took turns to put each other on the back and reached the finishing line together.
From the story, I have learned that with teamwork all of us can be successful.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,题目要求根据提示内容介绍“The Famous Rabbit-Tortoise Race”我们所熟悉的龟兔赛跑的故事;要包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:结合所给材料,可知本文主要记述的是过去发生的事情,故时态采用一般过去时;人称为第三人称。写作时要注意将故事的内容介绍清楚,并介绍我们从中得到的教训;要注意叙述顺序,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。要注意避免句式的单调重复,避免单词及语法错误。
7.你准备参加学校“英语角”开展的“用英语讲故事”活动, 你选取了“曹冲称象”这个大家熟悉的故事。
请你根据下边图片内容, 用英语写一篇80个词以上的小短文。
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【答案】How Cao Chong Had the Elephant Weighed
Cao Chong was very glad to have received an elephant as a present. He wanted to know how heavy the elephant was, but there was no scale(秤)big enough to weigh such a huge creature.
One day, Cao Chong said to his father, “I’ve found a way to weigh the elephant. ”Cao Chong asked a man to lead the elephant onto a boat. When the boat stopped sinking the man drew a line along on the boat side. After the elephant was led away, Cao Chong had some men put stones into the boat until the water reached the line.
Cao Chong asked the men to weigh each stone from the boat and put down the number. “Add up all the numbers and we will know the weight of the elephant. ”Cao Chong said to his father with kind of pride.
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇看图作文,要求根据图片内容描写“曹冲称象”的故事。
2.写作指导:“曹冲称象”这个故事大家都比较熟悉,由于这是介绍过去发生的故事,所以本文主要时态就是一般过去时态,人称以第三人称为主;本文应该写成记述文的形式,要按照开头,经过和结尾的三段式结构来写。写作中可以使用大量的短语和句式,为文章增添色彩;注意语句通顺,逻辑合理。
8.假如你是杨森,你的英国笔友Sally对中国文化很感兴趣,她希望你能给她介绍一些经典的寓言故事。请你根据下面的提示及要求,给Sally写一封邮件,给她讲讲“狐假虎威”的故事,然后请她谈一谈对该故事的看法。
提示:
1. 很久以前,一只老虎在森林里抓到一只狐狸,想吃掉它;
2. 狐狸告诉老虎它是被派来做百兽首领的,如果老虎吃了它,后果会很糟糕;
3. 老虎不信,就跟在狐狸后面看其他动物是不是真的怕狐狸,结果动物们一看到老虎就都逃走了,老虎以为他们害怕狐狸,所以把狐狸给放了。
要求:
1. 包含提示内容,可以适当发挥,使全文连贯;
2. 词数:80词左右(邮件的开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sally,
I’m glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Today I’ll tell a story about a tiger and a fox.
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What do you think of the tiger and the fox? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Yang Miao
【答案】参考范文
Dear Sally,
I’m glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Today I’ll tell a story about a tiger and a fox.
Once upon a time, a tiger caught a fox in the forest and wanted to eat him. But the fox told the tiger that he was sent to be the leader of all the animals. The consequences would be terrible if the tiger ate him. The tiger didn’t believe him, so he followed the fox to see if the animals were afraid of the fox. The animals all ran away as soon as they saw the tiger. The tiger thought they were scared of the fox, so he let him go.
What do you think of the tiger and the fox? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Yang Miao
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇电子邮件写作。要求给笔友Sally讲讲“狐假虎威”的故事。要包含所有要点,并适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文时态为一般现在时和一般过去时,开头结尾用第一人称来书写,第二段主体部分用第三人称书写。写作时可分为三段式:第一段感谢Sally对中国文化如此感兴趣;第二段结合要点介绍“狐假虎威”这个故事;第三段写期待收到Sally的回复。在写作时应该注意符合故事情节,同时注意语言的准确性和连贯性,可适当补充细节使文章连贯。
9.同学们都读过童话故事——丑小鸭,请根据提示用英语表达出来。70词左右。
1. 一只丑小鸭被自己的“兄妹”嘲笑,“妈妈”也不喜欢它。
2. 历尽磨难。鸭儿们啄(peck)他。小鸡打他,喂鸡鸭的主人用脚踢他。无家可归,他差点死于饥饿和寒冷。
3. 最后变成美丽的天鹅。
提示:鸭子 (duck) ;天鹅 (swan)
【答案】
例文: Long long ago, there was an ugly duck. He was different from his sisters and brothers. His mother didn’t like him. Other ducks often laughed at him and pecked him. Chickens often hit him. Even the host kicked him with her foot. One day, he was lost and became homeless. He nearly died of hunger and cold. But he never gave up and tried his best to do with all kinds difficulties. At last, he became a beautiful swan and flew to the sky.
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。题目要求是根据提示内容请你用英语把童话故事——丑小鸭表达出来,内容要包含所有提示要点,可适当增加细节。
2. 写作指导:本文叙述的是丑小鸭的故事,所以时态采用一般过去时,人称主要为第三人称;首先,我们要根据提示要点(不能遗漏要点),用正确的英语把要点表达出来,可适当添加内容,但要保证词汇正确,语句通顺,符合英文表达习惯;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意时态、主谓一致等问题,不要出现语法错误;最后要细心审核检查,确保正确无误。
10.假如你是李梅,你在美国的笔友Jim正在参加一个汉语文化项目,发Email向你请教“塞翁失马”的故事。请用英文给他回一封Email。
内容包括:
1)简述塞翁失马的故事经过;
2)说说你对故事的看法。
要求:
1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数100左右。
注:blessing n.好事 disguise n.掩饰,伪装
Dear Jim,
I am happy to know you are learning about Chinese culture. The story “Sai Weng Lost His Horse” is also called “A Blessing in disguise”.
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【答案】例文:
Dear Jim,
I am happy to know you are learning about Chinese culture. The story “Sai Weng Lost His Horse” is also called “A Blessing in disguise”.
Once upon a time, there lived an old man. Later, he was called “Sai Weng”. One day, his horse ran away. People came to comfort him. The old man said: “It may be a good thing!” After a few months, the horse led several horses back. When the old man’s son rode a horse, he fell off and broke his leg. Many people felt bad for the old man. But he said it might be a good thing. After a year, a war happened. All the young men took up arms to fight. Most of them died. But his son didn’t go because of his broken leg.
The story tells us every coin has two sides. No matter what you meet is “blessing” or “disaster”, you should keep a happy mind.
Yours,
Li Mei
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目以记叙为主,要求在电子邮件中给笔友介绍一下中国“塞翁失马”的故事,并发表自己对故事的看法。题目已给出开头,我们写正文就好。
2.写作指导:介绍故事时,主要用第三人称,时态采用一般过去时,简单介绍“塞翁失马”的故事就可以。最后用第一人称,发表自己对这个故事的看法,时态采用一般现在时。
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