读后续写 夏日垂钓：耐心与收获的故事 讲义-江苏省射阳中学2024-2025学年高三上学期7月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In my childhood, under the influence of my el der brother and my peers in the neighborhood, I tried a number of outdoor activities. Of course, I was not so taken by all of them. whether I was doing them for the first time or continuously. However, fate had its own plans in store. You never know when an outdoor activity will change my life. The name of this activity is “fishing”. About ten years ago, I didn't really like the idea of sitting on the bank of a lake or river, spending long hours under the sun's ultraviolet rays, which can cause sunburns and skin damage, and anxiously anticipating some fish to be kind to take my bait(诱饵). In fact, I used to think of this outdoor activity as some kind of “hide-and-seek-game” that is popular with most young kids, except that it was much harder because I could see my “prey (猎物)” only after catching it.     However, all that changed when I paid a visit to my aunt in the countryside during a summer holiday. I was finally convinced by one of my cousins to accompany him to a nearby lake in order to do some fishing practice with him. In fact, he even assured me that fish would eat my baits. So I agreed and went to the lake expecting to catch some fish. Before throwing my fishing line into the water, my cousin did some tricks attaching some sort of food to my fishing pole. Learning to fish in a river or lake can be challenging for the beginners like me. The act of dropping a line is easy, but being a successful fisher is hard. That's why they call it fishing but not catching But with practice and patience, it can become easier over time. Patience is essential in lake fishing. It may take some time to find the right spot or lure (鱼饵) that will attract fish. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My cousin had to repeatedly remind me to keep patient. ________________________________________________________ When we finally left the lake, I had caught three fish! ________________________________________________________ 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者童年，在哥哥和邻居的影响下，我尝试了一些户外活动。在某一次尝试了钓鱼之后，作者喜爱上了这项活动，变成了一个充满激情的渔夫，喜欢花时间在户外，欣赏生活的简单乐趣。 原文中有几处伏笔，为续写提供了方向和可能的情节发展： 对钓鱼的初次印象：作者最初对钓鱼并不感兴趣，认为它是一种“hide-and-seek-game”，这为续写中作者态度的转变提供了对比。 对户外阳光的担忧：提到了长时间在户外可能导致的晒伤和皮肤损伤，这为续写中作者可能遇到的困难或对钓鱼体验的进一步认识提供了铺垫。 表兄弟的保证：表兄弟向作者保证鱼会吃他的鱼饵，这为续写中作者是否真的能钓到鱼以及他对此的反应提供了悬念。 表兄弟的技巧：表兄弟在钓鱼竿上做了一些技巧，这暗示了钓鱼可能需要特定的技能或知识，为续写中作者学习这些技能或体验成功与失败提供了基础。 耐心的重要性：文中强调了耐心在钓鱼中的必要性，这为续写中作者如何培养耐心以及耐心如何帮助他成功提供了线索。 在续写中，这些伏笔得到了回应： · 作者最初对钓鱼的不感兴趣转变为通过实践和耐心学会了欣赏钓鱼的过程，这回应了对钓鱼初次印象的伏笔。 · 作者在续写中体验到了户外阳光的直接后果，但最终认识到了耐心和等待的价值，回应了对户外阳光担忧的伏笔。 · 表兄弟的保证在作者钓到鱼时得到了验证，回应了保证鱼会吃鱼饵的伏笔。 · 作者通过实践学会了钓鱼的技巧，并体验了成功的喜悦，回应了表兄弟技巧的伏笔。 · 作者在续写中展现了耐心的培养过程，以及耐心如何帮助他最终钓到鱼，回应了耐心重要性的伏笔。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我表姐不得不一再提醒我要有耐心”可知，第一段可描写作者钓上鱼的经过。 ②由第二段首句内容“当我们最后离开湖时，我已经钓到了三条鱼！”可知，第二段可描写作者喜爱钓鱼以及对钓鱼的感悟。 2.续写线索：提醒有耐心——指导作者——鱼上钩——喜爱钓鱼——对钓鱼感悟     【答案】One possible version: My cousin had to repeatedly remind me to keep patient. He taught me how to adjust my pole based on the movements of the fish and how to determine the best time to lift the pole when a fish was on the hook. Under his guidance, I calmed down gradually, staying focused to wait patiently. Then suddenly, I felt a jerk of my pole. A surge of thrill sweeping over me, I pulled the fishing pole out of water and I caught my first fish! So excited was I that I even gave a jump in the air. It was a small one, but it was a milestone for me! When we finally left the lake, I had caught three fish! Thrilled and fulfilled, I skipped all the way home with my cousin, telling him it was a pity that I had been missing out on so much by avoiding this simple outdoor activity before. Since then, I have become a passionate fisherman and love spending time outdoors, appreciating the simple pleasure of life. Fishing has taught me to be patient and persistent and most importantly, it has also taught me a lesson that we should not miss out on these opportunities just because they are simple or just we do not know how to do them well. 下水文1 My cousin had to repeatedly remind me to keep patient. The sun was beating down, and the only sound that broke the silence was the occasional ripple of water as my line touched the surface. I watched the float with bated breath, willing it to move, to signal the presence of a fish. The wait seemed interminable, and my initial excitement began to wane. Yet, my cousin's calm demeanor and his words of encouragement helped me to understand that fishing is as much about the wait as it is about the catch. It's about being in the moment, enjoying the tranquility of nature, and learning to appreciate the quiet victories that come with stillness and time. When we finally left the lake, I had caught three fish! The sense of achievement was immense, and it was a far cry from the frustration I had felt just hours before. Each tug on the line had been a small victory, a testament to the patience I had learned to cultivate. As I held my catch, I realized that fishing had taught me more than just a new hobby; it had given me a lesson in perseverance and the joy of simple pleasures. The sunburn and the long hours under the sun seemed insignificant compared to the satisfaction of the experience. That summer holiday turned out to be more than just a break from routine; it was the beginning of a lifelong appreciation for the art of fishing. 下水文2 My cousin had to repeatedly remind me to keep patient. The initial enthusiasm of casting the line was replaced by the monotony of waiting. The tranquility of the lake was a stark contrast to my growing impatience. Each time the bobber remained still, my disappointment grew, and I was tempted to give up. But my cousin's persistent whispers of "Patience, it's all about patience," echoed in my ears, reminding me that the true sport of fishing was in the wait, not just the catch. When we finally left the lake, I had caught three fish! The first tug on the line had sent a thrill through me, a mix of surprise and excitement. With each subsequent catch, my confidence grew, and the initial frustration transformed into a sense of accomplishment. My cousin's teachings had paid off, and the patience I had learned was rewarded. The sun had set, casting a golden glow over the water, and as I looked at the fish I had caught, I felt a deep connection with nature and a newfound respect for the sport. Fishing had become more than just an activity; it was a meditation, a lesson in patience, and a cherished memory from my summer in the countryside. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$