13 书面表达 应用文写作技能提升 - 2025年高考英语一轮复习基础知识能力提升全囊括（译林版2020）

书面表达---应用文写作技能提升 【小试牛刀一】词汇升级 1. increase steadily(平稳地增加)→_____________________________________ 2.decrease sharply(大减)→_____________________________________ 3.more and more people(越来越多的人)→_____________________________________ 4.more and more important(越来越重要)→_____________________________________ 5.be good/bad for（对...有好处/坏处）→_____________________________________ 6.want to do(想做)→_____________________________________ 7.don't know不知道→_____________________________________ 8.all kinds of种类繁多→_____________________________________ 9.understand理解→_____________________________________ 10.believe相信→_____________________________________ 11.be careful小心谨慎→_____________________________________ 12.be different from与……不同→_____________________________________ 13.because of因为→_____________________________________ 14.try one's best to do sth.尽力做→_____________________________________ 15.being built正在建设→_____________________________________ 16.be worried about担心→_____________________________________ 17.feel comfortable感到舒心→_____________________________________ 18.in my opinion在我看来→_____________________________________ 19.on purpose故意→_____________________________________ 20.refuse to listen to置若罔闻→_____________________________________ 答案：1.experience a steady increase 2.undergo a sharp decrease 3.an increasing number of people 4.increasingly significant 5.have a positive/negative effect on 6.intend to do/desire to do/ be eager to do/be crazy about doing 7.be at a loss 8.a wide variety of 9.make sense of/figure out 10.be convinced 11.be cautious 12.differ/vary from 13.on account of/due to/thanks to/as a result of/owing to 14.spare no effort to do sth. 15.under construction 16.be concerned about 17.feel at ease 18.as far as I am concerned 19.deliberately/by design 20.turn a deaf ear to 【小试牛刀二】句子升级 1. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. →_________________________________________________________________________________ 2.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things. →_________________________________________________________________________________ 3.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. →_________________________________________________________________________________ →_________________________________________________________________________________ 4.I passed the physics exam because of your help. →_________________________________________________________________________________ →_________________________________________________________________________________ 答案：1.Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab. 2.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 3.①It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.②Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened. 4.①I could not have passed the physics exam but for your help.②If you had not helped me,I could not have passed the physics exam. 技巧一 “美”词汇 “多”妙语 运用高级词汇 1.标新立异 恰当地使用一些蕴含感情色彩的高级词汇，可以彰显自己的语言水平。 I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. →Eventually/At last,I won first prize of the contest. (浙江卷书面表达) I'll thank you if you think about my suggestion. →I'll appreciate it if you take my suggestion into consideration. (福建卷满分作文) We'll try our best to improve the working conditions. →We'll spare no efforts to promote the working conditions(山东卷标准范文) 2.短语优先 写作中，要想写出亮点就要注意挖掘自己掌握的词汇，多使用词组、习语来代替单词，以使 短文内容丰富，表达更有力度。 Your art skills are excellent and admirable,which impressed me greatly. →Your art skills are excellent and admirable,which leaves me a deep impression.(天津卷书面表达) We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future. →We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.(福建卷书面表达) 技巧二 “高”句式 “鲜”句子 (一)利用复合句式，提升文章档次 复合句包括定语从句、状语从句和名词性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从 句)。考生仅用基本的句型不能体现出较强的语言运用能力，即使表达无错误，也不容易得高 分；相反，如果考生使用了较复杂结构，即使有个别小错误，作文也会处于较高的档次。 There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the history of Tang Dynasty in advance,which will make the class go smoothly.(同位语从句，定语从句) It's said that a large number of paper-cut works by experts throughout China will be on show.(主语从句) If you're interested in the Chinese folk art,please e-mail me.We can make it any day to visit the exhibition.(状语从句) (二)利用句式变化，增加得分亮点 在整篇文章中，避免仅使用一两个句型，要灵活运用多种语法结构。富有变化的句式可以 给文章增色不少。 1.谚语习语运用巧 As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.” Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more As an old saying goes,“Living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass.” 2.特殊句式用法妙 (1)倒装句 By the means of controlled release,I only need to deliver books to other participants—not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well. (2)强调句 It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. 3.分词结构不可少 Meanwhile,some beautiful paper-cutting works,collected from all over the country,will be exhibited there Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis,I wonder if you'd like to join... I'm so glad to hear from you.With the college entrance examination drawing near... 4.虚拟语气要用好 If only I could go back and reset my goals Were I three years younger than I am now,I would strongly recommend that I set(should set)more practical and specific goals. 技巧三 “巧”衔接 “秒”过度 (一)“起”——创造良好开端 [常用开头词汇] First,I think everyone needs friends and is eager to get friendship. First of all,we must make full use of every 45-minute lesson Nowadays/Recently,people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. In the first place,she can read at the rate of 100 words a minute. To begin with,smoking should be banned in public areas. Generally speaking,the more you practise,the more skillfully you can write in English. [常用开头句式] As the proverb says/As the saying goes,“Time is money.” As can be seen from the table,nearly everyone owns one mobile phone in China There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind It is believed that health is above wealth It is well known that an elephant is a very kind and gentle animal. I'm excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine. (二)“承”——顺势承上启下 [常用顺承词汇] Also,do let me know if you need more information. Secondly,we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions. Obviously,a good learning habit can help us to speed up to reach our destinations. What's more,good books can help us to develop good characters. I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse/what is worse,it became dark In addition,we shouldn't neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society. Meanwhile/At the same time,I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean and healthy. Take Beijing for example,it is one of the oldest cities in the world Worse still,I don't even know much about the word and format of the enclosure Furthermore,voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible. After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills As far as I'm concerned,every summer I stay at my uncle's house in the country for three weeks and enjoy a wonderful life there. Besides,I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. (三)“转”——巧妙转折过渡 [常用转折过渡词汇] But unfortunately I mind my own business without considering my parents. However,not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser. On the other hand,online shopping also has many disadvantages. In the contrary,they always claim that they are tired. Visiting this exhibition,we will not only enjoy the folk art works,but also learn a lot Although the answer seemed a little strange,nobody but I doubted it. (四)“合”----完美结束全文 [常用结尾词汇] All in all,travelling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges. In conclusion,a good citizen should observe traffic regulations. In a word,success is important,and so is failure,because it's the mother of success. To sum up,environmental protection is of great importance,which can make us live more comfortably and healthily. Therefore,I hold a positive attitude towards on-line voting In short,Internet voting,to some extent,is unfair,if not immoral,and cannot be trusted. [常用结尾句式] We can,therefore,come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world From what has discussed above,we may draw the conclusion that you must have self-confidence if you want to achieve something I'll appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience. （Passage 1） 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者帮助接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括： 1.口语能力。 2.相关经验。 3.应聘目的。 注意： 1.词数为80左右。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路导航】 本文是一封应聘书信，内容是应聘校英语协会志愿者。写作时注意以下几点：1.涵盖所有 内容要点，重点要表达自己的经验与能力。2.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。3.在 写作过程中，注意关联词和过渡句的使用，并有意识地使用高级词汇和复杂句式，以提高得分 档次。 【高分范文】 One possible version: Dear Sir/Madam, I've learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to receive foreign students visiting our school.I'm writing to apply to join it,thinking that I'm well qualified for the job For one thing,I have developed fluency in spoken English.I have no difficulty communicating with foreigners.What's more,I have accumulated related experience by working part-time in a travel agency,accompanying some foreign tourists.And I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective as well as improve my spoken English. Looking forward to your reply at your convenience. Yours, Li Hua 【名师点评】 1.本文格式正确，要点齐全，行文连贯，细节补充恰当合理。 2.本文作者语言文字功底深厚，灵活运用了高级词汇、句式等，展示了较高的综合运用英 语的能力。 (1)高级词汇有in need of,be qualified for,develop fluency in,have no difficulty communicating with,treasure...as,broaden my perspective,at your convenience等。 (2)作者对现在分词的运用较熟练，文中出现了作状语和定语的现在分词短语，运用得非常巧妙。 3.本文衔接过渡方面也颇有亮点，“For one thing...”“What's more...”“And...”的使用体现了作者较强的逻辑思维能力。 （Passage 2） 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter对 中医文化很感兴趣，发来邮件向你咨询。请你 回复邮件，内容包括： (1)简要介绍中医文化； (2)推荐央视《中华医药》(Traditional Chinese Medicine)栏目。 注意： (1)词数80左右， (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：央视网址：www.cctv.com. Dear Peter ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 参考范文 Dear Peter I'm so glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese medicine Traditional Chinese Medicine relies on natural products and has been playing a significant role in health protection and disease control for thousands of years.If you would like to learn more about it,I strongly recommend you to watch TCM broadcast on CCTV-4 weekly.You can find it on twww.cctv.com.Hopefully my introduction is helpful to your understanding of traditional Chinese medicine Please don't hesitate to let me know if you have any questions. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua （Passage 3） 假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内 容包括： 1.参加人员。 2.跑步路线———从校门口到南山脚下。 3.活动反响。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 A Cross-Country Running Race ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路导航】 本文是一篇新闻报道，内容是报道学校的越野赛跑活动。写作时注意以下几点：1.涵盖所 有内容要点。2.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。3.注意语言结构不能太复杂，叙述 要简明扼要。 【高分范文】 One possible version: A Cross-Country Running Race Last Sunday,our school held a five-kilometer cross-country running race.All students in Senior 3 took part in it.The purpose of this race was to inspire us students to pay more attention to physical exercise. At 7 a,m.we started at the school gate.And then we ran all the way to the foot of South Hill.On the way,although some students fell behind,they kept running until the finishing line. From this activity,we have realized that building up our body is of great importance,and we have also learned more about“Persistence leads to success”. 【名师点评】 1.本篇范文要点全面、层次分明、语言流畅，词数符合要求。 2.文章使用了较多的高级词汇，如inspire sb.to do sth.,all the way,fall behind,keep running,build up,be of great importance等；运用了不定式作表语(...was to inspire us...)等 语法结构和“we have realized that...”等句型，在一定程度上增加了文章的亮点。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$