第02讲 怎样跳出写作“大众分'' - 2025高三英语一轮高效精准复习备考

第二讲怎样跳出“大众分’’ 典例研习、解题技巧 技巧1.书写要美观 评卷厌倦点 1.出现了书信格式错误,开头格式不对。 2.书写潦草,有涂改、增补现象。 3.有较多的单词拼写错误,更谈不上高级词汇。 4.有较多的语法错误,且句式单一,没有高级句式。 5.表达方式不地道,出现了大量的汉式英语。 6.语言基础不扎实,整篇文章。 评卷兴奋点 1.外在美:书写规范，卷面整洁，令人赏心悦目。 2.结构美:段落层次合理,条理清晰。利用“三段式”作文法: 3.词汇美:选词准确,能灵活运用高级词汇。 4.句式美:句式多变,长短句结合，能灵活运用定语从句等高级句式。 5.衔接美:内容连贯,衔接自然，结构紧凑，能有效地使用句子间的衔接词。 技巧2.表达要“明”，错误要“少” 1.掌握基本句型,力避常见错误 (1)主语十谓语(不及物动词) 该句型常用来表示主语的动作或状态,其特点是句子的谓语动词能表达完整的 意思，这类动词叫作不及物动词,后面可以跟副词,介词短语、状语(从句)等。 How time flies! We arrived yesterday。 (2) 主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语 该句型的特点是谓语动词均为及物动词,都是主语发出的动作,但不能表达完整的意思,后面必须跟宾语[宾语可以由名词(短语)、代词、动名词(短语)、不定式(短语)等充当],即动作的承受者,才能使意思完整。 The students and teachers shared a great time. I love you. .(3)主语十系动词+表语 该句型侧重说明主语是什么或怎么样,表语多为形容词,也可以是名词(短语)、介词短语、不定式(短语)及形容词化分词(短语)等。 You are so diligent and I am glad to teach you. She looks happy. (3) 主语十谓语(及物动词)+间接宾语十直接宾语 (4) 该句型中的谓语动必须跟两个宾语才能表达完整的意思。一个是表示人的间接宾语:另一个是表示事物的直接宾语，一般间接宾语在前面,直接宾语在后面。 That surely gave us a great sense of achicvement. My mother bought me a new book yesterday. (5)主语+谓语(及物动词)十宾语+宾语补足语 该句型中的动词虽然是及物动词,但是只跟一个宾语还不能表达完整的意思，必须加上一个补充成分来说明宾语,才能使意思完整.宾语补足语是用来补充说明宾语的情况的，直接跟在宾语之后， The news made me happy. 2.考场作文常见的三类错误 第一类 词汇类错误 (1)单词拼写错误 (2)词形变化错误 (3)词类使用错误 第二类语法类错误 (1)时态错误 (2)语态错误 (3)非谓语动词使用错误 第三类结构类错误 (1)纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序 (2)句子成分残缺 (3)句子成分多余 技巧3词汇要“美”，妙语要“多” 1. 运用高级词汇“三原则” (1)标新立异 恰当地使用一些过渡词或高级的蕴含感情色彩的词汇,来彰显自己的英语水平。 I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. →Eventually/At last, I won first prize in the contest. I'll appreciate it if you can take my suggestion into consideration. We'll try our best to improve the working conditions. (2) 短语优先 写作中,要想写出“亮点”,就要注意挖掘自己现存的词汇潜力。多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,会使文章内容丰富,表达更有力度，更能增添文采。 Your art skills are excellent and admirable, which impressed me greatly. →Your art skills are excellent and admirable, which left me a deep impression. We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future. →We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future, (3)手法多样 当表达相同或相近的意思时,要尽量避免过多地使用同一个单词或短语，可以用其他同义或近义的单词或短语来代替,这样能让阅卷老师感觉到你词汇丰富。如果找不到代替的单词或短语,变换说法,或许有更好的效 (4)亮点词汇 支持support/in favour of 合适的proper-appropriate 计划plan-schedule 小心谨慎be careful/be cautious 与…不同be different from.../differ/vary from... 有帮助的be helpful/be of help 因为because of/on account of/due to/thanks to 渴望做某事be eager to do sth/be dying to do sth/long to do sth. 成功做某事succeed in doing sth/manage to do sth. 尽力做某事 try one's best to do sth./spare no effort to do sth./struggle to do sth. 正在建设 being built/under construction 担心be worried about/be concerned about 感到舒心feel comfortable/feel at ease 一方面...…另一方面……on one hand... on the other hand 故意on purpose/deliberately/by design 突然 suddenly→ all of a sudden 技巧4句式要“高”，句子要“鲜” 1.利用复合句式,提高文章档次 复合句包括定语从句、状语从句和名词性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句)。考生仅会用基本的句型不能体现出较强的语言运用能力,即使表达方面无错误,也不能得高分;相反,如果考生使用了较复杂的句式,即使有些小错误,作文也会处于较高的档次。 I'm glad to learn that your gallery will hold a Chinese painting exhibition.(宾语从句) It's said that a large number of paper-cutting works by experts throughout China will be on show.(主语从句) 2.利用句式变化、增加得分亮点 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用多种语法结构、句式，可以令文章增色不少,整篇文章也因此生辉。 (1)谚语、习语巧运用 As the saying goes.practice makes perfect. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more. As an old saying goes. living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. (2)特殊句式用法妙 ①倒装句 By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well. ②强调句 It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. (3)分词结构不可少 Meanwhile,some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be exhibited there. Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis, I wonder if you'd like to join. I'm so glad to hear from you. With the college entrance examination drawing near... (4)虚拟语气要用好 If only I could go back and reset my goals. If you could provide more specific information, I would be grateful. 技法5衔接要“巧”，过渡要“妙” 1.“起”--创造良好开端 (1)常用开头词汇 First, I think everyone needs friends and is eager to get friendship. First of all, we must make full use of every 45-minute lesson. Nowadays/Recently,people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. In the first place, she can read at the rate of 100 words a minute. (2)常用开头句式 As the proverb says/As the saying goes, “Time is money” There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind. 2.“承”--顺势承上启下 (1)常用顺承词汇 secondly, In addition, Furthermore, After that, Worse still (2)常用顺承句式 for example, As far as I am concerned, What's more 3.“转”--巧妙转折过渡 常用转折过渡词汇 Yet but however on the other hand although on the contrary unfortunately On the other hand, 4.“合”--完美结束全文 (1)常用结尾词汇 All in all, In conclusion, In a word, To sum up, On the whole (2)常用结尾句式 I'd appreciate it if ... It is high time that ... 高考话题下的书面表达 般定你是李华,你校学生会准备开展“低碳生活,从我做起"的活动,现面向全校征集活动方案。请你给学生会主席写信提出建议,内容包括，1.写信目的 2.具体建议 3.希望建议被采纳。 注意: 1.词数80左右 2.可适当增加细节 参考词汇:低碳生活a low-carbon life Dear President, Knowing that the student union of our school is preparing to carry out the activity of "Low carbon Life. Start From Me", and is now soliciting activity plans from the whole school,I am writing to offer my suggestions, Firstly, to call on everyone to live a low-carbon life, we should ask students to eat up what they buy, so an Empty Plate activity can be held in the school canteen.Secondly, to reduce the amount of air pollution, we can advocate the students who live nearby should walk or ride bikes. Thirdly. it is important for us to save electricity and water. So we should punish the students who leave the lights on in the empty classes or leave water running after washing. Though these are all little things, I think small changes in our way of life can make a big difference to the earth! 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