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读后续写情感细节描写之“失望”和“孤独”
续写词块积累
续写金句背诵
①a look of disappointment/loneliness flashed across/spread over one's face
脸上露出失望/孤独的表情
②be overcome /be overwhelmed by disappointment 非常失望
③hide one's disappointment
掩饰某人的失望
④much to one's disappointment
令某人非常失望的是
⑤weep bitter tears of disappointment
失望地痛哭流涕
⑥a feeling of disappointment and loneliness
一种失望和孤独的感觉
1.Overcome with bitter disappointment at his failing to win a prize,he locked himself up in his room.
他对未能获奖感到极度失望,于是把自己锁在房间里。
2.Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.
托尼感觉突然被投入一个黑暗的世界,陷入了绝望。
3.He stared at me,disappointment written all over his face.
他满脸失望地看着我。
4.Depression settled over me like a dark cloud.Memories of my past birthdays crowded in on me/into my mind,which were filled with laughter.
沮丧像乌云一样笼罩着我。过去的充满欢笑的生日回忆涌上心头。
5.I looked around,but no one came into sight. A feeling of disappointment and loneliness suddenly overwhelmed me.
我环顾四周。视线里一个人也没有,一种失望和孤独的感觉突然涌上我的心头。
Ⅰ.词形转换
1.To my satisfaction,I got a satisfying result of the exam,which made my mother quite satisfied.(satisfy)
2.Our school offers good equipment and you will be well equipped with knowledge and skills for your future job.(equip)
3.The patient is under medical treatment now and is treated with a new drug.(treat)
4.I often dream of performing on a wonderful stage and winning an award for my excellent performance.(perform)
5.To keep energetic,he sets aside two hours a day to take exercise.That's why he is always full of energy.(energy)
Ⅱ.选词填空
in addition (to sb./sth.), fall in love with,get through, set sth.up
1.Though it was the first time that I had visited the old town,I fell in love with it immediately.
2.The organization was set up to preserve this endangered species from extinction.
3.In addition,practicing with partners who share similar interests can inspire more in-depth conversations.
4.It was your encouragement and support that cheered me up and helped me get through the hard times.
Ⅲ.单句写作
1.(2022·全国乙卷书面表达)如图所示,12%的学生在提高英语技能时选择访问英语学习网站。(as引导状语从句)
As is shown in the chart,12% of the students choose to visit English-learning websites when enhancing English skills.
2.受邀参加这次的毕业典礼是我莫大的荣幸。(it作形式主语)
It is a great honour for me to be invited to attend the graduation ceremony.
3.我们必须要提出一个足够环保的方式来解决这个问题。(定语从句)
We must come up with a way that/which is environment-friendly enough to solve the problem.
1.perform vi.& vt.表演;履行;执行(☞performance n.表演;演技;表现☞performer n.表演者;演员)
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)The famous doctor is going to set out to perform (perform) the operation,so please keep calm.
(2)没有你及时的帮助,我就不会在期末考试中考得这么好。(应用文之感谢信)
Without your timely help,I would not have performed so well in the final exam.
(3)当他们在舞台上表演时,我感到既激动又自豪。(读后续写之情感描写)
A wave of excitement and pride swept over me when they gave a performance on stage.
(1) perform a(n) ...role in ... 在……中起……作用
perform one's duty/promise 履行职责/承诺
perform well/poorly/badly 表现或运转得好/差
(2)put on/give a performance 进行一次表演
2.award vt.授予;奖赏 n.奖品
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)Learning that you were awarded (award) the first prize,I am writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.(应用文之祝贺信)
(2)I often dream of performing on a wonderful stage and winning an award for my performance.
(3)当我领奖时,我的心怦怦直跳,我的呼吸哽在喉咙里,泪水盈眶。(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写)
When I accepted the award,my heart skipped a beat,my breath caught in my throat,and tears filled my eyes.
(1)win/get an award for sth. 因……而得奖
take up an award 接受奖项
(2)award sth.to sb.=award sb.sth. 授予/判给某人某物
3.absorbed in sth./sb.意为“被……吸引住;专心致志”
[练透]——猜测加黑词absorb的含义/一句多译
(1)Besides,we can absorb all kinds of resources to learn more efficiently.(2021·全国乙卷书面表达)吸收
(2)A good book can absorb our attention so completely that we forget our surroundings.吸引
(3)我沉浸在冰雪活动中好几天了,我已经爱上了滑雪,并且一有机会就坚持练习。
①Absorbed in ice and snow events for days,I've fallen in love with skiing and keep practicing it whenever possible.(过去分词短语作状语)
②Absorbing myself in ice and snow events for days,I've fallen in love with skiing and keep practicing it whenever possible.(现在分词短语作状语)
(1)absorb oneself in ... 专心于;全神贯注于
(2)absorb one's attention 吸引某人的注意
absorb new knowledge 掌握新知识
absorb ...into ... 把……吸收进……
4.relief n. (焦虑、痛苦的)减轻或消除;(不快过后的)宽慰、轻松或解脱(☞relieve vt.使减轻;缓解)
[练透]——完成句子
(1)他们凝视彼此,心生宽慰。(读后续写之情感描写)
Staring at each other,they felt a wave of relief flooded over them.
(2)飞机安全着陆,我顿时放下心来。(读后续写之情感描写)
I breathed a sigh of relief as the plane landed safely.
(3)她松了口气回家了,心头重担卸下。(读后续写之情感描写)
Relieved,she went home with a weight lifted off her heart.
(1)to one's relief 令某人感到欣慰的是
It is a relief to do sth. 做某事很放心/舒心
in/with relief 如释重负;松了口气
breathe a sigh of relief 松了一口气
(2)relieve sb.of ... 解除某人……方面的负担
5.aim n.目的;目标 vi.& vt.力求达到;力争做到;瞄准 vt.目的是;旨在
[练透]——单句语法填空/句式升级
(1)My aim is to try (try)out for a talent show to prove that even a person with no arms is capable of playing the piano.
(2)The program aims to help (help) students develop science skills,environmental awareness,and healthy lifestyles.(2023·新课标Ⅱ卷)
(3)The radio program was founded in 2016.It is aimed at providing a good platform for the students to share their school life.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷应用文)
→①The radio program was founded in 2016,which is aimed at providing a good platform for the students to share their school life.(定语从句)
→②The radio program was founded in 2016,aimed at providing a good platform for the students to share their school life.(过去分词短语作状语)
→③The radio program was founded in 2016 with the aim of providing a good platform for the students to share their school life.(介词短语)
(1)achieve one's aim 实现目标
take aim at 向……瞄准
with the aim of 以……为目标;意在……
(2)aim to do sth. 意欲/旨在做某事
be aimed at doing sth. 目的是/旨在做某事
6.in addition (to sb./sth.) 意为“除……以外(还)”
[练透]——对比填空(in addition;in addition to)/完成句子
(1)In addition,being “the lungs of our planet”, oceans provide most of the oxygen we breathe.(2022·全国甲卷书面表达)
(2)In addition to learning about the past,history teaching can help students to think for themselves.
(3)该课程除了给你一些提示,还提供一些有用的策略。
In addition to giving you some tips,the course also provides some useful strategies.
(1)in addition 另外(相当于副词)
besides adv. 另外
what's more 另外,此外
moreover adv. 而且
furthermore 此外, 而且
(2)in addition to “除……以外(还)”,用作介词短语
7.satisfaction n.满足;满意;欣慰(☞ satisfy vt.使满意☞satisfied adj.满意的☞ satisfactory adj.令人满意的☞satisfying adj.令人满意的)
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)Finally,my hard work paid off—we were awarded an A,which gave me great satisfaction (satisfy).(2022·浙江卷读后续写)
(2)When we saw our fruits of labor were loaded onto the truck,we all felt satisfied (satisfy) and excited.
(3)为了满足我的需要,爸爸为我创造了一个好的学习氛围。看着我的成绩单,我爸爸满意地点了点头,脸上绽开了微笑。(读后续写之心理描写)
To satisfy my needs,my father created a good learning atmosphere for me.Looking at my report card, my father nodded with satisfaction,a smile spreading across his face.
(1) with satisfaction 满意地
to one's satisfaction 令某人满意的是
a sense of satisfaction 满足感
(2)satisfy one's needs/demands 满足某人的需要
(3)be satisfied with 对……感到满意
be satisfied to do sth. 对做某事感到满意
8.get through (设法)处理;完成;打通(电话);通过;用完;耗尽;熬过(困难时期)
[练透]——用get的相关短语填空/完成句子
Learning that you have difficulty (1) getting used to your new school life,I am writing with the aim of offering you some tips.Firstly,why not (2) get down to taking part in some interest groups so that you can find friends with similar interest?In addition,you can turn to the school adviser who can help (3) get over/get through your hardships.Last but not least,if you communicate with your classmates sincerely,you will (4) get your meaning across.In brief,follow the above suggestions,and thus,you can (5) get along well with your classmates as soon as possible.(应用文之建议信)
(6)既然我们都住在一个屋檐下,我们应该学会如何和睦相处。(话题写作之人际关系)
Now that we all live under one roof,we should learn how to get along well with each other.
get down to doing sth. 开始着手做某事
get used to (doing) sth. 习惯于做某事
get along (well/badly)with 和……相处(得好/坏);进展(得好/坏)
get over 克服(困难);从……中恢复过来
get across (使)被理解;把……讲清楚
9.assume vt.以为;假设(☞assumption n.假定;假设)
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)Our world can be a better place on the assumption (assume) that everyone can make a contribution to our society.
(2)普遍认为,压力是工作过重所致。
It is generally assumed that stress is caused by too much work.
(3)如果你对此感兴趣,请发邮件到123456@ sina.com。(应用文之邀请信)
Assuming that you are interested in it,please send an email to 123456@ sina.com.
(1)assume sb./sth.to be 假定/假设某人/某物为
It is assumed that ... 据认为……
(2)make an assumption (about ...) (对……)作出假设
on the assumption that ... 假定……
(3)assuming (that) ... 假设/假定……
10.句型公式:as引导定语从句
教材原句:As one virtual choir member said,“Music helps me to ...forget my problems.With music,I become someone else.”
正如一位虚拟合唱团成员所说:“音乐帮助我……忘记我的问题。有了音乐,我变成了另一个人。”
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)Judging from my own experience,I want to say a few words to those who have the same trouble as I have.
(2)As is seen from the picture,a student is overloaded with piles of homework and endless after-school training,making him breathless.
(3)Most importantly,we have developed a deep friendship through these activities,which has doubled my joy!
(4)众所周知,一个小小的善举可能足以起很大作用。(读后续写之主旨升华)
As is known to us,a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a difference.
关系代词as引导定语从句,as在从句中作主语、宾语或表语。
(1)as引导非限制性定语从句,有“正如”之意,常放于主句之前;
(2)as引导限制性定语从句,先行词常被the same,such,as,so等修饰;
(3)which引导非限制性定语从句,意为“这一点”,不可位于句首。
11.句型公式:the way作先行词的定语从句
教材原句:During those times,music can help you in the same way that it helped me.
在那时,音乐可以帮助你,就像它曾经帮助我一样。
[练透]——完成句子
(1)她低下头,为自己在晚会上的行为羞愧不已。(读后续写之情感描写)
She lowered her head,feeling ashamed of the way that/in which she behaved at the party.
(2)在离开实验室前,他以一种让我印象深刻的方式检查了数据。(2022·浙江卷读后续写)
Before leaving the lab,he checked the data in a way that/which impressed me deeply.
(1)当the way后面的定语从句不缺主语和宾语时,定语从句用in which或that引导,也可省略关系词;
(2)当the/a way后面的定语从句缺少主语或宾语时,关系词用that或which,作宾语时可省略。
层级一 语基落实练
维度1 单句语法填空
1.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写)Giggling instantly with a broad smile spreading on his face,he told me that he was proud of my wonderful performance (perform).
2.The government aims (aim) to improve public services,especially education.
3.The talented (talent) girl has suffered from a strange disease,but now she is under treatment (treat) and her health has gradually (gradual) picked up.
4.The professor was unhappy because the idea he stuck to proved (prove) wrong.
5.He made a lot of money by doing a part-time job,enabling (able) him to go on with his study.
6.We have reached a stage where we must take effective measures to protect the environment from being polluted.
7.You can always find him absorbed (absorb) in literature.And it is not the first time that he has been awarded (award) for the best writer.
8.Assuming (assume) I have an opportunity to travel to a nearby country,I must keep my eyes open for the customs.
维度2 熟词生义
1.(2023·新课标Ⅱ卷)The nature language enhances work performance. n.业绩, 表现
2.Whatever stage of life you're at,wherever you go and whatever project you do in GDA,you'll create positive changes in a poor and remote community.n.阶段
3.The course is designed to help students with colour and composition.n.构图
维度3 完成句子/一句多译
1.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写)观众们爆发出热烈的掌声,大卫为完成比赛所付出的努力最终得到了回报。(pay off)
The audience erupted into loud applause and David's efforts to finish the race eventually paid off.
2.她因出色的表演而获奖后,她高兴极了,两眼闪烁着兴奋的光芒。(award)
After receiving an award for her good performance,she felt on top of the world,eyes twinkling with excitement.
3.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写)在那一刻,感激之情笼罩了我,因为我发现一个人可以对我产生深远的影响。(impact)
At that moment,gratitude enveloped me,for I discovered a single person can have a profound impact on me.
4.(2023·浙江卷1月应用文)活动持续了一整天,我感到非常幸运能有这样一个宝贵的机会。(be+adj.+to do)
The activity lasted for the whole day and I felt greatly lucky to have such a precious opportunity.
5.他在教学方面富有经验,因此受到全体学生的尊重。
(1) He is equipped with much experience in teaching,so he is well respected by all his students.
(2) Equipped with much experience in teaching,he is well respected by all his students.(过去分词短语作状语)
(3) Equipping himself with much experience in teaching,he is well respected by all his students.(现在分词短语作状语)
层级二 写作提分练
维度1 应用文写作提分练之邀请外教参加音乐节
假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请你写信邀请你的外教布莱克先生(Mr.Black)前来参加。
一、用本单元所学词汇、句式完成下面的应用文写作并背诵全文。(黑体部分用本单元词汇)
1.为丰富学生的学校生活,宣扬我们的中国传统文化,我们学校将举办音乐节。
Aimed at enriching students' school life and promoting our traditional Chinese culture,a Music Festival will be held in our school.
2.音乐节计划在下周五举行。届时将会有各种各样的活动。
The Music Festival is scheduled to take place next Friday,when there will be various activities.
3.我们真诚地邀请您参加音乐节,并进行表演。
We sincerely invite you to be involved in the Music Festival and give a performance.
4.而且,我们还欢迎您为获奖者颁奖。
In addition,you are welcome to issue the prizes to the winners.
二、请利用恰当的过渡衔接词汇将以上各句合并成美文,注意用衡水字体书写呦!
[参考范文]
Dear Mr.Black,
How are you doing? I'm writing to invite you to join us in the Music Festival.
Aimed at enriching students' school life and promoting our traditional Chinese culture,a Music Festival will be held in our school.The Music Festival is scheduled to take place next Friday,when there will be various activities.We sincerely invite you to be involved in the Music Festival and give a performance.In addition,you are welcome to issue the prizes to the winners.
I do hope you could squeeze your time for the Music Festival and have fun with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
维度2 读后续写提分练——帮助Bernard渡过难关
续写语料
语段背诵
情感描写
①satisfaction n.满足;满意;欣慰→satisfy vt.使满意;满足→satisfied adj.满意的→satisfying adj.令人满意的→satisfactory adj.令人满意的
②relief n.(焦虑、痛苦的)减轻或消除;(不快过后的)宽慰、轻松或解脱→relieve vt.使减轻;缓解→relieved adj.轻松的;解脱的
③absorbed in sth./sb. 被……吸引住;专心致志
根据左栏词汇,补全小语段,并背诵成文
Bernard and John (1) were absorbed in popping the corn (专心于爆爆米花).Hearing the crackling of the corn,they were over the moon,picturing many customers (2) would fall in love with their popcorn(爱上他们的爆米花).(3)To their satisfaction,they made it at the first attempt and they sighed with relief (令他们满意的是,第一次尝试他们就成功了,他们松了一口气).Then they put the popcorn into paper bags,rode a tricycle and headed for a nearby market like happy birds.Their promotion plans (4) proved effective (证明有效).With the money earned,Bernard could send for a doctor (5) to cure his father of his disease (治愈父亲的疾病),believing that his family (6) could get through the tough time (渡过这个难关).
动作描写
①enable vt.使能够;使可能
②prove vt.证明;展现
③cure vt.治愈;治好(疾病);解决(问题) n.药物;治疗;(解决问题、改善糟糕情况的)措施
④reaction n.反应;回应→react vi.(对……)作出反应
⑤fall in love with爱上
⑥get through (设法)处理;完成;熬过(困难时期)
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