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读后续写情感细节描写之“悲伤”和“沮丧”
续写词块积累
续写金句背诵
①sadness clouds one's face 一脸悲伤
②cry one's eyes out 痛哭
③be filled with/full of sadness
满是悲伤
④with a heavy/sinking/sorrowful/broken heart 心情沉重/难过/心碎
⑤be down/low in spirits 情绪低落
⑥sob/weep with one's face buried in one's hands 掩面啜泣
⑦cry one's heart out 悲痛欲绝
⑧fight back tears 抑制住泪水
⑨in tears 流着泪
⑩in a sorrowful/sad tone/voice
悲伤的语气/声音
1.Wang Hua rose with a sinking heart and stepped out of the classroom.
王华心情沉重地站起来,走出教室。
2.She dropped/hung/bowed/lowered her head in sadness,great sorrow/sadness/depression filling her eyes.
她难过地低着头,她的双眸满是忧伤。
3.An air of sadness could be sensed ten meters away.
十米以外都能感觉到一种悲伤的气氛。
4.Disappointment and sadness came in waves,and tears streamed/rolled/flowed down her cheeks.
失望和悲伤如潮水般涌来,泪水顺着她的脸颊流下来。
5.She was just desperate to rush home and throw herself onto her little bed and weep wildly!
她只想冲回家,倒在她的小床上大哭一场!
Ⅰ.词形转换
1.Ensure that you get your battery charged (charge) before you set off from your office.
2.Surrounded by trees and flowers,the surroundings of the cottage are quite beautiful.(surround)
3.I hold the firm belief that you are bound to achieve your dream of being admitted to a key university,which will give you a wonderful sense of achievement.(achieve)
4.The puzzled expression on his face showed that the question was puzzling.(puzzle)
5.Mary announced to her teammates that she was to marry a Chinese boy.The announcement of their marriage would appear in the local newspaper next week.(announce)
Ⅱ.选词填空
belong to, keep your eyes open (for), break away (from sb./sth.), as well as, take over
1.Young as Charles was,he took over as chief executive of this company.
2.Only then did I realize that it was so foolish of me to break away from all of my friends and never contact them.
3.Please keep your eyes open for opportunities,for they wait for no man.
4.It was your great efforts as well as your professional guidance that helped me make great progress.
5.Chinese,Maths,English,Physics,Chemistry and Biology all belong to the College Entrance Examination subjects.
Ⅲ.单句写作
1.(2022·北京卷邀请信)如果不方便,告诉我你何时方便。(省略句)
If not convenient,let me know what time suits you best.
2.由于他们仍旧气喘吁吁、心跳加快,他们相信刚刚所发生的事是真的。 (with复合结构)
As they were still breathless,with their hearts beating wildly,they were convinced that what had happened just now was true.
3.你昨天晚上熬夜到那么晚,今天犯困不足为奇。(It is+adj.+that)
You stayed up so late last night; it is not surprising that you feel sleepy today.
1.break away(from sb./sth.)突然离开;脱离;背叛;逃脱
[练透]——用break的相关短语填空/完成句子
(1)My dog suddenly broke away from me,charged at the door and began to bark fiercely.(读后续写之动作链描写)
(2)He was charging his mobile phone when the fire broke out.
(3)In my opinion,marriage based on money is likely to break up.
(4)听到这个消息,他崩溃了,眼泪从脸颊流下来。(读后续写之神态描写)
He broke down at the news,tears pouring down his cheeks.
break down (机器等)出故障; (身体) 垮掉,(精神)崩溃; 失败; 分解
break in 闯入,强行进入
break out 突然发生
break up 粉碎; 分裂; (婚姻等)结束
2.belong vi.应在(某处);适应(☞belonging n.[U]归属;[C]所有物;财产)
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)The pub belonging (belong) to me was burnt to the ground,which made me crash into the limitless abyss (深渊).
(2)正是由于我慷慨善良的同学们,我才有了归属感。
It is because of my generous and kind-hearted classmates that I feel a sense of belonging.
(3)我是绘画俱乐部成员,这能让我加深游客对中国文化的了解。(应用文之申请信)
I belong to a painting club,which enables me to deepen visitors' understanding of Chinese culture.
(1)belong to 属于;是……的成员;是……的组成部分
belong to无被动语态和进行时,常用v.-ing形式作定语。
(2) a sense of belonging 归属感
3.as well as同(一样也);和;还
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)As well as having (have) difficulty adapting herself to the new school life,she found the culture difference was another challenge for her.
(2)Our headteacher as well as five student representatives was invited (invite) to deliver a speech at yesterday's coming-of-age ceremony.(2020·天津卷书面表达)
(3)她泪如泉涌,心也要碎了。(读后续写之情感描写)
Tears welled up in her eyes,and her heart seemed to be torn as well.
(1)as well as意为“除……外(还/也)”,用来连接两个并列成分,后接动词时多用-ing形式;
(2)当“A as well as B”结构作主语时,谓语动词应与A在人称和数方面保持一致。
(3)as well as ...同……一样好
(4)may/might as well do sth. 做某事也无妨
(5)as well意为“也”,置于肯定句句末
4.surround vt.围绕;包围(☞surrounding adj.周围的;附近的☞surroundings n.周围的事物;环境)
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1) Surrounding (surround)yourself with people who'll provide you with support can be very beneficial.
(2)It is wise to surround yourself with people who have a high level of self-discipline.
(3)绿树掩映,这个农场坐落于我们学校附近的山脚下。一条小河曲曲折折穿行其中。
Surrounded by green trees,the farm is located at the foot of the hill near our school.There is a small river flowing through the farm.
(4)总之,欢迎你来我们学校并希望你能很快适应新环境。
In a word,you are welcome to our school and I hope you can adapt to the new surroundings soon.
(1)surround ...with ... 用……包围/围绕……
be surrounded by/with ... 被……包围
(2)the surrounding country 附近的国家
5.charge n.收费;指控;主管 vt.收费;控告;充电
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)The shop owner charged me nothing for the noodles,I felt a wave of warmth and gratitude welling up within me.(读后续写之情感描写)
(2)Two men involved in the accident have been arrested and charged with drunken driving.
(3)上周我们就市民是否可以免费进入科学博物馆展开了激烈的讨论。
Last week we had a heated debate about whether citizens can access the Science Museum free of charge.
(4)我是李华,在我们学校的广播电台负责英语节目“Talk and Talk”。(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷应用文)
I'm Li Hua,who is in charge of the English program “Talk and Talk” in our school's radio station.
(1)in charge 主管;看管
in charge of 掌握;负责
in the charge of 在……掌管之下
take charge of 掌管;负责;控制
(2)free of charge 免费
(3)charge sb.for ... 因……向某人收费
charge sb.with sth. 控告某人某事
6.amount n.数量;金额 v.总计,共计; 等于
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)So far,a large amount of money raised in the charity sale has been donated (donate)to the local school.(话题写作之活动介绍)
(2)青少年吃垃圾食品的数量逐年上涨,这逐渐损害了他们的健康。(话题写作之饮食健康)
The amount of junk food teenagers eat goes up year by year,which gradually ruins their health.
(3)为了保持健康,有规律的适量锻炼是相当必要的。(应用文之建议信)
In order to keep healthy, a proper amount of regular exercise is quite necessary.
(4)暑假期间我总共挣了300美元,这笔钱可以帮助养活我的家人。(2021·浙江卷6月读后续写)
The money I earned during the summer holiday amounted to 300 dollars,which could help support my family.
(1)the amount of ... ……的数量
(2)“大量/少量的”表达:
a large/small amount of+n.[U]+v.(单数)
large/small amounts of+n.[U]+v.(复数)
(3)amount to 共计,总计;等于,相当于
7.approach n.接近;方法;途径 vt.接近;接洽;着手处理 vi.靠近
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)The figures of the chart show there are various approaches to learning (learn)English beyond the classroom.(2022·全国乙卷书面表达)
(2)As I approached (approach)the farm,I was greeted by a spicy smell of the barbecue,urging me to walk faster.(2023·浙江卷1月应用文)
(3)At the approach of the Mid-Autumn Festival,I'd like to invite you to join us in celebrating it.
(4)简颤抖着站起来,向丈夫走去,扑进他的怀里,在他的肩膀上哭个不停。(读后续写之动作链描写)
Jane got to her feet shakily, approached her husband and threw herself into his arms,sobbing uncontrollably on his shoulders.
(1)an approach to (doing) sth. (做某事的)方法/途径
at the approach of 在快到……的时候
(2)be approaching 正在/将要接近
(3)approach sth./sb. 接近某物/某人
8.eager adj.渴望的;热切的(☞eagerly adv.热切地;急切地☞eagerness n.热切;渴望)
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)To perform well,we are eager for your professional advice.(2020·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)
(2)He eagerly (eager) wanted to give a special present to Grandma,but he was short of money.
(3)我一路跑回家,因为我渴望向我的父母宣布我在写作比赛中获得第一名的好消息。(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写)
I ran all the way home because I was very eager to announce the good news that I won the first prize in the writing contest to my parents.
(4)当这个男孩被问及是否想要一个生日礼物的时候,他无法掩饰他的渴望。(读后续写之心理描写)
When asked whether he wanted a gift for his birthday, the boy couldn't hide his eagerness.
(1)be eager to do sth. 渴望做某事
be eager for sth. 渴望得到某物
(2)with eagerness 热切地;急切地
hide one's eagerness 掩饰某人的渴望
9.句型公式:if条件状语从句的省略形式
教材原句:So what is the difference between them, if any?
如果有的话,那么它们之间有什么区别呢?
[练透]——补全句子/句型转换
(1)If so (如果是这样的话),I wonder if you could take the trouble to send me my wallet.
(2)There may be some mistakes in my composition.If any (如果有的话),please help me point them out.
(3)Keep your eyes open for the surrounding views.If not (如果不),you will regret sooner or later.(应用文之推荐信)
(4)If it is necessary,our school will provide the students with the language training courses.
→If necessary,our school will provide the students with the language training courses.(省略句)
if any(如果有的话)是一个省略句,相当于if (there is/are) any ...
if not 如果不是这样的话
if so 如果是这样的话
if ever 如果曾有的话
if necessary 如果有必要的话
if possible 如果可能的话
10.句型公式:with复合结构
教材原句:The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
“绿宝石(爱尔兰)岛”风光宁静秀美,郡县草木葱茏,青山连绵起伏,牛羊点缀其中,堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴。
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子/句式升级
(1)With too much work to do (do),I suffer from anxiety and can't sleep well at night.
(2)With all the preparations made (make),he jumped with joy,his eyes glittering with excitement.(读后续写之兴奋心理描写)
(3)他脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容,告诉我他为我的精彩表现感到骄傲。(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写)
With a broad smile spreading on his face,he told me that he was proud of my wonderful performance.
(4)Tom threw himself into his mother's arms and tears of shame and embarrassment welled up in his eyes.(读后续写之羞愧心理描写)
→①Tom threw himself into his mother's arms, with tears of shame and embarrassment welling up in his eyes.(with复合结构)
→②Tom threw himself into his mother's arms, tears of shame and embarrassment welling up in his eyes.(独立主格结构)
with复合结构在句中作状语和定语,其结构为:
(1)with+宾语+介词短语/形容词/副词
(2)with+宾语+doing(表示主动或进行)
(3)with+宾语+done(表示被动或完成)
(4)with+宾语+to do(表示将来的动作)
层级一 语基落实练
维度1 单句语法填空
1.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写)My name was announced (announce) as the winner in the writing contest,and I was invited to attend the award presentation.
2.Located (locate) where the Belt meets the Road,Jiangsu will contribute more to the Belt and Road construction.
3.In many cases,the clothes people wear identify them as belonging (belong) to a particular social class.
4.Judy and I had our car parked in an underground car park near Trafalgar square,where we could get our car battery charged (charge).
5.Approaching (approach)the nearby position,we were greeted by the peaceful landscape and its rolling green hills dotted (dot)with sheep and cattle.
6.Many people at the meeting came from the surrounding (surround) towns,most of whom found the updated report really puzzling (puzzle).
7.Now that they have made great achievements (achieve),they are looking forward to the celebration eagerly (eager).
8.Without your generosity (generous) and inspiration,I would not made such striking (strike) progress.
维度2 熟词生义
1.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)The wind picked up and thunder rolled.vi.(雷或鼓)隆隆作响
2.(2021·全国甲卷)Here's the good news.In a wired world with constant global communication,we're all positioned to see flashes of genius wherever they appear.v.安置;把……放在适当位置
3.The helicopter landed near our camp and its loud noises scared the bear.He looked irritated and charged at us again.vi.向……冲去
4.Nicolo and another bidder battled until Nicolo finally won the paintings for $32.vi.争夺
维度3 完成句子/句型转换/一句多译
1.她热泪盈眶地见证了女儿的婚礼。(with复合结构)
With tears of joy in her eyes, she witnessed her daughter's wedding.
2.为了解决这个问题,我们应该节约资源来减少垃圾的数量。(amount)
To solve the problem,we should economize on resources in order that we can reduce the amount of garbage.
3.As the last day of our trip was approaching, David and I unwillingly said goodbye to all of our friends.
→With the last day of our trip approaching, David and I unwillingly said goodbye to all of our friends.(with复合结构)
4.王先生负责该画廊,他宣布禁止任何人在画廊拍照。
(1) Mr.Wang is in charge of the gallery and he announces that any individual mustn't take pictures in the gallery.
(2) The gallery is in the charge of Mr.Wang,who announces that any individual mustn't take pictures in the gallery.
层级二 写作提分练
维度1 应用文写作提分练之参观青岛的一个村庄
假定你是李华,上周末你和同学们参观了一个村庄。请你写一篇文章介绍参观的情况,向学校的英文报投稿。
一、用本单元所学词汇、句式完成下面的应用文写作并背诵全文。(黑体部分用本单元词汇)
1.上周末,我和我的同学们参观了青岛的一个村庄。这个村庄三面环山。
Last weekend,I as well as my classmates paid a visit to a village in Qingdao,surrounded by mountains on three sides.
2.在村庄的西边有一个博物馆,它展示了近十年来这里的人们的伟大成就。
There is a museum located in the west of the village,displaying the great achievements of people here in the past decade.
3.村庄的中心有一家工厂,每天生产大量的牛奶。
In the centre of the village is a factory,where a large amount of milk is produced every day.
4.宜人的环境和善良的人们给我们留下了深刻的印象。
The pleasant surroundings and kind people left a deep impression on us.
二、请利用恰当的过渡衔接词汇将以上各句合并成美文,注意用衡水字体书写呦!
[参考范文]
Last weekend,I as well as my classmates paid a visit to a village in Qingdao,surrounded by mountains on three sides.There is a museum located in the west of the village,displaying the great achievements of people here in the past decade. Besides,in the centre of the village is a factory,where a large amount of milk is produced every day.The pleasant surroundings and kind people left a deep impression on us.What a nice place!
维度2 读后续写提分练——宿营欣赏美景
续写语料
语段背诵
情感描写
①eager adj.热切的;渴望的
②fascinating adj.极有吸引力的;迷人的
根据左栏词汇,补全小语段,并背诵成文
(1)As we approached the camping site surrounded by mountains (随着我们靠近群山围绕的宿营地),we had difficulty containing our excitement.On reaching it,my mom opened the door immediately,charged outside and eagerly urged us to put up the tent.(2) The surrounding fascinating landscape was a true feast for our eyes (周围迷人的风景堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴),with its rolling green trees dotted with various wild flowers.We were bathed in the sun and breathed in the sweet scent of fresh flowers.Birds were singing happily (3) as if they were warmly greeting us (好像在热情地迎接我们).My family chatted comfortably,(4) sweet memories of the past crowding in on us (过去美好的记忆涌上我们心头).
动作描写
①approach n.方法;途径;接近 vt.接近;接洽;着手处理
②charge n.收费;指控;主管 vt.收费;控告;充电
③greet vt.问候;迎接
④crowd vt.挤满;使……拥挤 n.人群;一群人;民众
环境描写
①landscape n.(陆上,尤指乡村的)风景
②surround vt.围绕;包围→surrounding adj.周围的;附近的→surroundings n.环境
③location n.地方;地点;位置→located adj.坐落于;位于
④scent n.气味;气息
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