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读后续写情感细节描写之“后悔”、“内疚”和“自责”
续写词块积累
续写金句背诵
①guilt written all over one's face 满脸愧疚
②a guilty look on one's face
脸上露出惭愧的表情
③a regretful smile 歉意的微笑
④regretful tears 悔恨的泪水
⑤be full of guilt/regret
满心愧疚/悔恨/遗憾
⑥drown in feelings of guilt
沉浸在内疚感之中
⑦much to one's regret/to one's great regret 令某人深感遗憾的是
⑧with deep/great regret/guilt
很遗憾地/非常愧疚地
⑨a feeling of guilt 内疚感
1.On hearing the bad news,she lowered down her head with great guilt,tears of regret streaming down her cheeks.
听到这个坏消息,她非常内疚地低下了头,悔恨的泪水顺着她的脸颊流下来。
2.So honest was the little boy that the wife was struck a great deal, guilt written on her flushing/burning face.
小男孩诚实的品质让妻子深受触动,红红的脸上写满了愧疚。
3.I froze, drowning in feelings of guilt about her.If only I had not quarreled with her!
我愣住了,沉浸在对她的负罪感中。要是我没和她吵架多好啊!
4.With regretful tears welling up in my eyes,I dashed downstairs to apologize to Ann.
我眼里涌出懊悔的泪水,冲下楼向安道歉。
Ⅰ.词形转换
1.(2023·全国甲卷书面表达)He was born in a small town in Zhejiang Province and his childhood experiences became a source of inspiration (inspire) for his future writings.
2.The library in our school is accessible to students,and they can get easy access to it when they want to look for needed information any time.(access)
3.From your letter I know you take a great interest in Chinese characters and Chinese culture,which is beneficial (benefit) to you.
4.The girl felt embarrassed when seeing the embarrassing pictures.She turned away with embarrassment.(embarrass)
5.It was rude of you to injure his pride last night, so you must offer him an apology for your rudeness.(rude)
Ⅱ.选词填空
in shape, keep( ...) in mind, go through, make fun of
1.My mother often reminds me to keep in mind that where there is a will,there is a way.
2.It's rude to make fun of this disabled boy,and we should respect everyone.
3.This couple had gone through a lot of difficulties before they successfully set up their own business.
4.To stay in shape, we should set aside some time to work out regularly in the fitness club.
Ⅲ.单句写作
1.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写)听到这个好消息,我非常高兴,立即和老师分享。 (so ...that ...)
On hearing the good news,I was so happy that I immediately shared it with my teacher.
2.无论何时我遇到困难,她积极的生活态度和克服困难的决心总是让我受到鼓舞。(whenever引导状语从句)
Her positive attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always make me inspired whenever I am in trouble.
3.但是,你越是焦虑,你的表现就会越差。(the+比较级 ...,the+比较级 ...)
However, the more anxious you are, the worse your performance will be.
1.convenient adj.方便的;近便的(☞convenience n.[U]便利;方便[C]便利设施☞inconvenience n.不便)
[练透]——单句语法填空/翻译句子
(1)If it is convenient for you,let's go outing next Sunday.(2021·北京卷道歉信)
(2)Would it be convenient for you to pick (pick) me up at four o'clock and take me to the airport?
(3)To enjoy the convenience (convenient) of digital payment,many senior citizens started to use smart phones.
(4)如能尽早回复我将不胜感激。(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷应用文)
I would appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
(1)It is convenient for sb.to do sth. 某人方便做某事
(2)at one's convenience 在某人方便的时候
for convenience 为了方便起见
2.benefit n.益处;利益;好处 vt.使受益 vi.得益于(☞beneficial adj.有利的;有益的;受益的)
[练透]——单句语法填空/一句多译
(1)You can also go over the knowledge at the same time and you are sure to benefit from it.
(2)As a result,for the benefit of your health,it is necessary that you should have enough sleep and rest.
(3) 最后,给我介绍了一本关于我们在生活中经常看到的植物的小册子,这使我受益匪浅。(2023·浙江卷1月应用文)
①Ultimately,I was introduced to a brochure about plants we usually see in life, which benefited me a lot.(benefit vt.)
②Ultimately,I was introduced to a brochure about plants we usually see in life, which was greatly beneficial to me.(beneficial)
③Ultimately,I was introduced to a brochure about plants we usually see in life, which was of great benefit to me.(benefit n.)
(1)for the benefit of sb.=for one's benefit 为了某人的利益
(2)benefit sb./sth. 使某人或某物受益
benefit from/by ... 从……中受益/获益
(3)be beneficial to ...=be of benefit to ... 对……有益;对……有利
3.distance n.距离(☞distant adj.远的;远处的;疏远的)
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)It was difficult for the young to run so long a distance (distant),not to mention David with a brain disease.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写)
(2)我们将于下周六在一家距我们学校两公里远的农场进行水果采摘活动。(2020·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)
We'll hold a fruit-picking activity next Saturday on a farm which is at a distance of two kilometres from our school.
(3)了解到其他同学总是疏远你,我写信是为了给你一些建议。(应用文之建议信)
Learning that other students always keep you at a distance,I am writing to offer you some suggestions.
(4)切特静静地坐了几个小时,凝视着远方,想着可能会发生的事情。(读后续写之动作描写)
Chet sat quietly for hours staring into the distance,thinking of what might have happened.
in the distance 在远处
at/from a distance 隔一段距离;从远处
at a distance of 在……远的地方
keep sb.at a distance 对某人冷淡;与某人疏远
within walking distance 走着就能到
4.access n.通道;(使用、查阅、接近或面见的)机会 vt.进入;使用;获取(☞accessible adj.可接近的;可进入的;可使用的)
[练透]——单句语法填空/猜测加黑词access的含义/完成句子
(1)Our school stadium is accessible to us students,and we can get easy access to it when taking exercise.(access)
(2)Many stations have wheelchair access from the car park or entrance to the station platforms.通道
(3)鉴于你对中国文化很感兴趣,我建议你申请北京大学,在那里你可以接触到最好的中国文化。(应用文之建议信)
Considering your keen interest in Chinese culture,I suggest you apply for Peking University,where you can gain access to the best Chinese culture.
(1)have/get/obtain/gain access to
拥有/得到/获得……的机会;可以接近/进入
(2)be accessible to
可接近的;可靠近的;可使用的
5.account n.账户;描述
[练透]——猜测加黑词account for的含义/完成句子/词汇升级
(1)Those who visit English-learning websites account for 12%.(2022·全国乙卷书面表达)占……(比例)
(2)All this accounts for why I choose Xiamen University,where I can major in Environmental Engineering.解释
(3)我写信的目的是向您详细讲述我在志愿者项目中难忘的经历。
I'm writing to give you a full account of my unforgettable experience in a volunteer programme.
(4)In a word,it's my sincere hope that you can consider what I've stated above.
→To sum up,it's my sincere hope that you can take what I've stated above into account.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷应用文)
(1)account for 说明;做出解释;占……(比例)
(2)on account of 由于,因为
on no account 决不(置于句首时,部分倒装)
take account of(=take ...into account/consideration) 考虑到……
give an account of ... 叙述/描述……
[名师点津] 表示“决不”的其他短语: ①by no means ②at no time ③in no way ④under no circumstances ⑤in no case
6.upset adj.心烦的;苦恼的;沮丧的vt.(upset,upset)使烦恼;使生气;打翻;搅乱
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子/句型转换
(1)I was upset to find (find) that my pumpkin had been upset by her brother.(2021·浙江卷读后续写)
(2) The other day,all my plans were upset (upset) by the sudden change of the weather.
(3)既沮丧又无助,我静静地站着,泪水顺着脸颊流淌。(读后续写之悲伤心理描写)
Upset and helpless,I stood silently,tears streaming down my cheeks.
(4) I was upset that a man with a stick beat my beloved dog Poppy without mercy.
→①What upset me was that a man with a stick beat my beloved dog Poppy without mercy.(what引导的主语从句)
→②It upset me that a man with a stick beat my beloved dog Poppy without mercy.(it作形式主语)
(1)be upset about/over/at sth. 为某事心烦
be upset to do sth. 对做某事感到不安
(2)What upsets sb.is ... 让某人心烦的是……
It upsets sb.to do sth./that ... 做某事让人心烦/让某人心烦的是……
7.go through经历;度过;通读,浏览;完成;用完
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)As time goes by,I am gradually aware of the importance of keeping a balance between study and health.
(2)As more and more greenhouse gases are released to the atmosphere,the global temperature is going up.
(3)Lily went against her mother's wishes when she married Tony.
(4)直到露丝经历了真正的苦难她才意识到对家人的爱是很重要的。(读后续写之心理描写)
Not until Lucy went through real hardship did she realise the love for her family is important.
go against 违背;违反
go by 逝去;过去
go on 继续;进行;发生
go out 出去;熄灯
go over 复习;仔细检查
go up 上涨;上升;攀登
8.keep ( ...) in mind牢记
[练透]——补全句子/完成句子
(1)Several different approaches came to the children's mind (孩子们想到) when they were making popcorn.
(2)Although he is very stubborn,I have determined to persuade him to change his mind (改变主意).
(3)不管发生什么,你应该牢记天道酬勤。因此, 趁着我们年轻, 我们应该专心致志学习。(读后续写之主旨升华)
No matter what happens,you need to keep in mind that hard work pays off.So we should put our mind to our studies while we are young.
change one's mind 改变主意
make up one's mind 下决心;决定
read one's mind 看出某人的心思
put one's mind to 全神贯注于;专心致志于
cross/come to one's mind 某人想到
9.case n.盒;箱;情况;案件
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)I have often seen cases where students have some trouble getting along well with others.
(2)As is often the case,senior three students feel anxious and upset before important examinations.
(3)另外,我建议你把三到四个学生放在一起,其中一个作为组长,这样我们就可以更深入地交流。(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷应用文)
In addition,I recommend that you put three to four students together,with one as the group leader, in which case we can communicate with each other at a great depth.
(4)我决不会忘记他眼中的失望。(读后续写之神态描写)
In no case shall I forget the disappointment in his eyes.
in case 以防(万一)
in case of ... 万一……,如果发生……
in any case 无论如何;总之
in no case 决不(置于句首时,句子用部分倒装)
as is often the case 这是常有的事
10.句型公式:so ...that ...意为“如此……以至于……”
教材原句:She was so inspired by the people she met online that she decided to start an IT club to teach older people how to use computers and the Internet.
她受到网友的启发,决定成立一个IT俱乐部来教年长一些的人们学习使用电脑和互联网。
[练透]——单句语法填空/一句多译
(1)The exhibition displays such wonderful pictures that you can understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better.(2021·浙江卷宣传稿)
(2)He is so smart a boy that he soon got familiar with the functions of the machine.
(3)我很自豪我和父母一起分担家务,这也表明我长大了。(2023·全国乙卷书面表达)
①I was so proud that I shared housework with my parents,which also showed I had grown up.
②So proud was I that I shared housework with my parents,which also showed I had grown up.(倒装句)
(1)so ...that ...句型的常见形式:
(2)such ...that ...句型的基本结构:
(3)当so/such及其后成分放在句首时,主句用部分倒装。
11.句型公式:the+比较级 ...,the+比较级 ...意为“越……,就越……”
教材原句:However, the more polite you are,the less likely it is you will be attacked.
但是,你越有礼貌,你被攻击的可能性就越小。
[练透]——完成句子
(1)你越用功,进步就会越大。(应用文之建议信)
The harder you work, the greater progress you will make.
(2)Jane在森林里走得越远,她越紧张焦虑。(读后续写之心理描写)
The further Jane went in the forest, the more nervous and anxious she became.
(3)她越想这件事,越感到害怕,手心在冒汗,心跳得厉害。(读后续写之心理描写)
The more she thought about it, the more frightened she felt,her palms sweating and her heart pounding wildly.
the more ...,the less ... 越……,越不……
the more ...,the better ... ……越多,……就越好
层级一 语基落实练
维度1 单句语法填空
1.(2023·新课标Ⅱ卷)As cities balloon with growth,access to nature for people living in urban areas is becoming harder to find.
2.He arrived an hour later, so our arrangements were upset, which made us upset.(upset)
3.He was aware that his rudeness (rude) at the party really made his parents embarrassed (embarrass).
4.The two friends sat in the corner,chatting (chat) about the progress they had made.
5.They set off for the destination too late; or they wouldn't have been stuck (stick) in the storm.
6.The project is targeted (target) at encouraging students to volunteer in environmental protection.
7.Taking part in the music festival is certain to help you get more familiar with Chinese folk music.
8.Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience (convenient) of the shared bikes.
维度2 熟词生义
1.(2023·新课标Ⅱ卷)Our lives in the 21st century are networked.v. 将……连接成网络
2.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)I stuck the chicken in the freezer.vt.(尤指迅速或随手)放置
3.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷) Human speech contains more than 2,000 different sounds, from the common “m” and “a” to the rare clicks of some southern African languages.n.吸气音
维度3 完成句子/句型转换
1.(2021·北京卷道歉信)因为要参加一个重要的班会,这个周末我不能和你郊游了。(with复合结构)
With an important class meeting to attend,I can't go outing with you this weekend.
2.网上有丰富的学习资源,使我们更方便地提升我们的学习。(现在分词短语作结果状语)
There exist rich learning resources online,making it more convenient for us to improve our studies.
3.他把鼻子贴在了窗户上,眯起眼睛往下看了一眼人行道。(press)
He pressed his nose against the window and narrowed his eyes and glanced down at the pavement.
4.(2022·浙江卷1月读后续写)The work consumed me so much that there was a sense of challenge that completely overtook me.
→ So much did the work consume me that there was a sense of challenge that completely overtook me.(部分倒装)
层级二 写作提分练
维度1 应用文写作提分练之网络安全
网络带给我们很多便利,但是它也有弊端,其中一点就是安全问题。请你写一篇博客,谈谈如何保证网络安全。
一、用本单元所学词汇、句式完成下面的应用文写作并背诵全文。(黑体部分用本单元词汇)
1.尽管因特网带给我们很多便利和好处, 但我们面临着网络安全问题。
Although the Internet brings a lot of convenience and benefits to us,we are faced with the problem of online safety.
2.今天,我想写篇博客谈一谈网络安全问题。
Today,I want to write a blog about online safety.
3.我们最好访问熟悉的网站。我们要用安全级别高的密码。
We'd better visit the website that we are familiar with.We should use strong passwords.
4.记住不要用公共电脑,因为这更有可能泄露我们的个人信息。
Keep it in mind that don't use the public computers,for it is more likely to let out our personal information.
二、请利用恰当的过渡衔接词汇将以上各句合并成美文,注意用衡水字体书写呦!
[参考范文]
Although the Internet brings a lot of convenience and benefits to us,we are faced with the problem of online safety.Today,I want to write a blog about online safety.How to stay safe online?
To begin with,we'd better visit the website that we are familiar with. In addition, we should use strong passwords. More importantly,keep it in mind that don't use the public computers,for it is more likely to let out our personal information.
Do you have some good advice for online safety? Post your comments below!
维度2 读后续写提分练——尴尬的经历
续写语料
语段背诵
情感描写
①stuck adj.卡住;陷(入);困(于)
②tough adj.艰难的;严厉的
③upset adj.心烦的;苦恼的;沮丧的 vt.使烦恼;使生气;搅乱
④rude adj.粗鲁的;无礼的
⑤embarrassing adj.让人难堪(尴尬;害羞)的→embarrassed adj.感到难堪(尴尬)的→embarrassment n.尴尬
根据左栏词汇,补全小语段,并背诵成文
On the school bus in the morning,(1) I was chatting with my friends cheerfully (我在和朋友们兴高采烈地聊天).At one stop,Fat Ryan got on hurriedly,tripped over someone's foot accidentally and fell flat onto the floor.(2) Afraid of being made fun of (害怕被取笑),Ryan struggled to his feet,his face burning with embarrassment.(3) Stuck in such an embarrassing situation (陷于如此尴尬的境地),he froze there.(4) So upset and embarrassed was he that tears streamed down his face uncontrollably (他是如此沮丧和尴尬,泪水止不住地往下流).What a tough moment he was going through!
动作描写
①chat vi.聊天;闲聊
②stream vt.流播(不用下载直接在互联网上播放音视频);流出 vi.流动 n.小河;溪流
③make fun of取笑;戏弄
④go through经历;度过;通读
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