内容正文:
读后续写情感细节描写之“激动”和“兴奋”
续写词块积累
续写金句背诵
①to one's excitement/thrill 令某人激动的是
②contain one's excitement
抑制内心的激动
③(eyes) sparkle/twinkle/shine/dance with
excitement (眼里)闪烁着激动的光芒
④be flushed with excitement
激动得(脸/面颊)通红
⑤be filled with excitement
满心激动
⑥thump/pound with excitement
心激动得怦怦跳
⑦tremble with excitement
激动得发抖
⑧dance/jump with excitement
激动得雀跃/跳起来
1.On the journey to the lake,a feeling/wave/burst/rush of excitement flooded over/swept/washed over Mom.
在去往湖边的途中,妈妈一阵兴奋。
2.Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village,her eyes sparkling/twinkling/shining with excitement.
妈妈坚决要求我们在下一个村庄露营,她的双眸闪着兴奋的光芒。
3.Mom admired the beautiful view, her heart thumping/pounding with excitement.
妈妈欣赏着美景,兴奋得难以自已。
4.As it was the first time that we had helped Dad cook food outdoors,my brother and I were flushed with excitement.
因为这是第一次帮爸爸在户外做饭,我和哥哥激动得脸通红。
5.Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food,we jumped up and down with excitement.
我们呼吸着新鲜的空气、闻着饭菜的香味,兴奋地蹦蹦跳跳。
Ⅰ.词形转换
1.The biggest challenge in our life is to challenge ourselves to overcome the challenging problems.(challenge)
2.I would like to do some voluntary work in the exhibition.So I am writing to apply to be a volunteer.(volunteer)
3.With the help of the advanced technology,we can complete the task in advance.(advance)
4.There are a great many tourist attractions in China worth visiting.For example,so attractive is the Summer Palace that it attracts many visitors from home and abroad.(attract)
Ⅱ.选词填空
be attracted to,focus on,sign up for,clean up
1.Some parents focus on their children's study,ignoring the education of survival skills.
2.Since I entered senior high school,I have been attracted to basketball,so I joined in the basketball club activities.
3.Before you sign up for advanced classes,you should first register your information.
4.My parents and I spent the whole morning cleaning up our house for welcoming an important guest.
Ⅲ.单句写作
1.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷应用文)因此,我建议应该允许我们自己寻找练习伙伴,这样我们就可以选择一个最适合我们的搭档。(so that引导目的状语从句)
Therefore,I recommend that we should be allowed to find our own practicing partners so that we can choose the one most suitable for us.
2.学好英语不容易,你应该每天抽出一些时间来读英语。(动名词短语作主语)
Learning English well is not easy and you should set aside some time every day to read it.
3.(2022·全国乙卷短文)智能手机和电脑的日益普及为我们在线学习英语提供了方便。(make it+adj.+for sb.to do sth.)
The growing popularity of smartphones and computers has made it convenient for us to learn English online.
1.prefer vt.(preferred,preferred)较喜欢;选择某事物(而不选择其他事物) (☞preference n.偏爱;优先权;偏爱的事物) [练透]——单句语法填空/句型转换
(1)Half of the students surveyed prefer to learn (learn) English by watching English movies.(2022·全国乙卷)
(2)As you have a preference (prefer) for traditional Chinese culture,your suggestions will be greatly helpful to us.
(3)I prefer to appreciate the columns specially designed for teenagers rather than read those about politics and economy.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷应用文)
→I prefer appreciating the columns specially designed for teenagers to reading those about politics and economy.(prefer doing to doing)
(1)prefer to do sth. 更喜欢做某事
prefer (doing) sth.to (doing) sth.
宁愿(做)某事而不愿(做)某事
(2)
2.confuse vt.使糊涂;使迷惑;使为难;使混乱;混淆 (☞confused adj.糊涂的;迷惑的☞confusing adj.难以理解的;不清楚的☞confusion n.困惑)
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)I always confuse John with/and his brother;they are so much alike.
(2)Surprised and stunned,they showered us with tons of confusing (confuse) questions.
(3)As for Bailey,she is more confused (confuse) about why her act is considered a big deal.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)
(4)一看到我来了,他就笑个不停,这使我很困惑。(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写)
At the sight of my coming,he didn't stop laughing,which made me feel confused.
(1)confuse ...with/and ... 混淆;辨别不清
be confused by 被……弄混;糊涂
(2) with a confused expression
面带困惑的表情
3.recommend vt.建议;推荐;介绍(☞recommendation n.建议;推荐)
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)My English teacher recommended buying (buy) an English-Chinese dictionary which he thought would be of great help to my studies.
(2)Additionally,to ensure that our oral practice goes smoothly,I recommend that you (should) put (put) three to four students together,with one as the group leader.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷应用文)
(3)得知你想选我们学校的特色课程,我强烈向你推荐国画课程。(应用文之推荐信)
Learning that you would like to take a characteristic course of our school,I strongly recommend the course of Chinese painting to you.
(4)我建议你练中国传统运动太极,因为练太极能助你身心健康。(应用文之建议信)
I recommend you to practice Tai Chi,a traditional Chinese sport,for practicing it regularly will help you stay healthy physically and mentally.
(1)recommend doing sth. 建议做某事
recommend sb.to do sth. 建议某人做某事
recommend that sb.(should) do sth. 建议某人做某事
(2)recommend sb.sth. 向某人推荐某物
recommend sth.to sb. 把某物推荐给某人
4.advance n.前进;发展 vt.发展;促进 vi.前进;发展(☞advanced adj.高等的;先进的;高级的)
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)But no matter when you travel,it's a good idea to make your reservations at least 90 days in advance.(2023·浙江卷1月)
(2)Anyone who wants to take the advanced (advance)literature course must sign up for it ahead of schedule.
(3)脸上带着坚定的表情,大卫站起来,向起跑线前进。(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写)
With a determined look spreading on his face,David rose to his feet and advanced on/towards the starting line.
(1)in advance=ahead of time 提前
(2)advance on/towards sb./sth.
向着某人/某物前进
5.responsible adj.负责的;有责任的(☞responsibility n.责任;义务)
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)Taking responsibility (responsible) for mistakes is a positive step,but don't beat yourself up about them.(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)
(2)首先,做家务有助于我们成为一个负责任的人。(2021·全国乙卷书面表达)
Firstly,doing housework is helpful for us to be a responsible person.
(3)我们应该对我们的行为负责,尽全力去保护海洋不受污染。(2022·全国甲卷书面表达)
We are supposed to be responsible for/take responsibility for our own behaviour and spare no effort to protect oceans from being polluted.
(1)be responsible for sth. 对……负责
(2)take responsibility for sth. 对……负责
a sense of responsibility 责任感
It is one's responsibility to do sth. 做某事是某人的职责。
6.schedule n.工作计划;日程安排 vt.安排;预定
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)We should work extra hours on the project to complete it on schedule or even ahead of schedule.
(2)访谈时间定在本周五晚上7点到9点,主题是“如何高效学习英语”。(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷应用文)
The interview is scheduled for this Friday from 7:00 pm to 9:00 pm,with the theme “How to Learn English Efficiently”.
(3)按照计划,活动由主题演讲、短剧表演、摄影展和画展四个部分组成。(应用文之通知)
As scheduled,the activity consists of four parts,a themed speech,short drama performances,a photo show,and a painting exhibition.
(1)ahead of/behind schedule 提前/逾期
on schedule 按时;准时
(2)be scheduled for ... 预定在……时间
be scheduled to do sth. 预定/安排做某事
as scheduled 如期;按照预定时间
7.attract vt.吸引;引起……的注意(或兴趣)(☞attraction n.[U]吸引;[C]吸引人的事物)
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)As time progressed,I was attracted (attract) by his single-mindedness and intelligence.(2022·浙江卷1月读后续写)
(2)Aiming to make our school more attractive (attract) and create a better environment,the Students' Union organized the activity,which took place last Saturday afternoon.
(3)更重要的是,北京的著名旅游景点每年都吸引着大量来自世界各地的游客。(2021·天津卷3月)
More importantly,it is the famous tourist spots of Beijing that attract a large number of tourists from all over the world every year.
(4)西湖,一处位于杭州的旅游胜地,每年吸引成千上万的游客。(应用文之推荐信)
The West Lake,a tourist attraction lying in Hangzhou,attracts thousands of tourists every year.
(1)attract one's attention 吸引某人的注意力
attract sb.to sth. 吸引某人关注某事
(2)tourist attraction 旅游景点
8.focus vt.& vi.集中(精力,注意力等);(使)调节焦距 n.焦点;中心;重点
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)With so many people focusing (focus) their eyes on him,he felt very nervous.
(2)我写信想邀请您给我们做一个关于英语写作的线上座谈。(2022·北京卷邀请信)
I'm writing to invite you to give us an online talk which focuses on English writing.
(3)我一走上舞台,我立刻成为大厅里唯一的焦点。(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷读后续写)
The moment I stepped on the stage,I immediately became the only focus in the big hall.
(1)focus on/upon ... 集中于……
focus one's attention/eyes/energy on ...
集中注意力
(2)the focus of attention/concern
注意力/关注的焦点
[名师点津] 意为“集中注意力于……”的短语:①concentrate on ②pay attention to ③center on ④focus on/upon
9.addicted to对……很入迷
[练透]——单句语法填空/句式升级
(1)His addiction (addict) to computer games got his parents anxious.
(2)Because they are addicted to online games,many teenagers don't focus on their learning.(2021·全国乙卷书面表达)
→Addicted to online games,many teenagers don't focus on their learning.(形容词短语作状语)
(1)be/become addicted to ... 沉溺于……
(2)addicted adj. 入了迷的;上了瘾的
addiction n. 沉溺;嗜好;癖好
10.句型公式:make+it+adj./n.(+for sb.)+to do sth.
教材原句:But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.
但是花太多的时间上网有损健康,也会让你很难集中精力在生活中的其他事情上。
[练透]——单句语法填空/完成句子/一句多译
(1)I find it no use persuading (persuade) him to change his mind.
(2)然后大卫明确表示他会参加比赛。(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写)
Then David made it clear that he would participate in the race.
(3)你最好提前掌握一些汉语基础知识,这使你容易适应在北京的新生活。(应用文之建议信)
①You'd better master some basic Chinese in advance,which makes it easy for you to adjust to the new life in Beijing.
②You'd better master some basic Chinese in advance,making it easy for you to adjust to the new life in Beijing.(现在分词作结果状语)
(1)此句型it作形式宾语,真正的宾语是动词不定式。类似句型还有:
make+it+形容词+that从句
make+it+useless/no use/no good ...+doing sth.
(2)常用于这种句型的动词:make,consider,think,feel,find等。
层级一 语基落实练
维度1 单句语法填空
1.(2023·全国甲卷)She warns of the environmental dangers facing society,and she teaches that people must take responsibility (responsible) for saving their environment.
2.At last,the confident girl who can speak English really fluently (fluent) came up with a solution (solve) to the problem.
3.Then Catherine launched a holiday card drive for the homeless after being inspired by her volunteering (volunteer) experience at the shelter.
4.The Xi'an City Wall is the most complete city wall that has survived (survive) China's long history.
5.Tom had graduated (graduate) from high school before his father returned from the voyage to Africa.He preferred (prefer) to find a job before moving (move) to London.
6.(2022·全国乙卷)It is believed that today's children and teenagers are consuming three times the recommended (recommend)level of sugar,putting them at a higher risk of the disease.
7.Challenging (challenge) as the activity was,all the participants benefited a lot from it.
维度2 熟词生义
1.(2023·全国乙卷完形)By winning the Olympic all-around title,she became the first black woman to do so. n.冠军
2.Being a graduate in English,I make English lectures with ease. n. 毕业生
3.The outgoing volunteer is expert in driving cars. adj. 熟练的;内行的
维度3 完成句子/词汇升级/一句多译
1.更重要的是,你提前为任务制定计划是明智的,这可以帮助你在生活和学习中取得更多的成就。(it+be+adj.+of sb.to do)
More importantly,it's wise of you to make a plan for your tasks in advance,which can help you achieve more in life and study.
2.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写)备受鼓舞的大卫决心自信地迎接挑战,而不是怀疑自己。(take up)
Inspired,David determined to take up the challenge confidently rather than doubting himself.
3.It is strongly suggested that the school should give students more free time to join in sports activities.
→It is strongly recommended that the school should give students more free time to participate in sports activities.
4.显然,保持健康和均衡的饮食对我们大家都很重要。
(1)It is obvious that maintaining a healthy and balanced diet is of great importance to us all.
(2)Obviously,maintaining a healthy and balanced diet is of great importance to us all.
5.我们应该早睡早起,这样我们才能精力充沛地上课。
(1)We are supposed to go to bed early and get up early so that we can attend classes full of energy.
(2)We are supposed to go to bed early and get up early in order that we can attend classes full of energy.
(3)We are supposed to go to bed early and get up early so as to/in order to attend classes full of energy.
层级二 写作提分练
维度1 应用文写作提分练之电子邮件
假定你是李华,你的好友彼得(Peter)前不久去了新西兰留学,他来信说不适应那里的学习生活。请你用英文给他回一封电子邮件。
一、用本单元所学词汇、句式完成下面的应用文写作并背诵全文。(黑体部分用本单元词汇)
1.听说你在新学校遇到了一些挑战,我感到很遗憾。
I feel sorry to hear that you have met some challenges in the new school.
2.我强烈建议你报名参加高级英语课程。这些课程能够帮助你讲流利的英语。
I strongly recommend that you sign up for advanced English courses,which can help you speak English fluently.
3.你可以尝试通过加入一些俱乐部来结交更多的朋友,如志愿者俱乐部、辩论俱乐部等。
You can try to make more friends by joining some clubs,such as Volunteer Club,Debate Club,etc.
4.积极参加一些合适的课外活动也会是一个不错的选择。
It would also be a good choice to take an active part in some suitable extra-curricular activities.
二、请利用恰当的过渡衔接词汇将以上各句合并成美文,注意用衡水字体书写呦!
[参考范文]
Dear Peter,
I feel sorry to hear that you have met some challenges in the new school.
I'd like to offer you some suggestions.To begin with,I strongly recommend that you sign up for advanced English courses,which can help you speak English fluently.Secondly,you can try to make more friends by joining some clubs,such as Volunteer Club,Debate Club,etc.Finally,it would also be a good choice to take an active part in some suitable extra-curricular activities.
I do hope these suggestions are of great help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
维度2 读后续写提分练——双胞胎为妈妈准备生日早餐
续写语料
语段背诵
情感描写
①content adj.满意的;满足的
②confuse vt.使糊涂;使迷惑→confusing adj.难以理解的;不清楚的→confused adj.糊涂的;迷惑的
③responsible adj.负责的;有责任的
④addicted adj.有瘾的;上瘾的;入迷的
⑤embarrassed adj.尴尬的,窘迫的
⑥awkward adj.尴尬的
根据左栏词汇,补全小语段,并背诵成文
(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)In the morning,(1)as scheduled,the twins got up early (按照所安排的,双胞胎早早起床),tiptoed to the kitchen and scooped some flour out of the bag.Once they set about making bread,(2) they felt confused (他们感到迷惑).At that time,their father slid into the kitchen,patted the twins' shoulders and comforted them in a soft voice,“Don' t quit.You can (3) overcome the challenge (战胜这个挑战).” The twins made the bread smoothly.Then they carried the breakfast,(4) advanced upstairs and woke up their mother (向楼上走去,喊醒他们的妈妈).With her eyes glittering with excitement,(5) the mother was so content that she gathered her children into her arms (妈妈是如此满足,她把孩子们揽入怀中).
动作描写
①debate vt.& vi.辩论;争论
②challenge vt.怀疑;向……挑战
③recommend vt.建议;推荐;介绍
④advance v.前进
⑤quit vt.& vi.停止;戒掉;离开
⑥schedule vt.安排;预定
⑦gather sb.into one's arms把某人揽入怀中
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
$$