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40分写作规范增分练(二)
必修第二册
第一部分 模块综合复习
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第一节(满分15分)
(2024·浙江省绍兴市高三模拟)假定你是校英文报编辑李华,你报正在开展“致敬身边的您”征文活动。请你写一篇英文征稿启事,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.征文要求;
3.投稿方式。
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注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Contributions Wanted
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Editorial Department of English Newspaper
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[参考范文]
Contributions Wanted
To show respect for those great individuals around us, we are calling for contributions with the theme of “Salute Everyday Heroes”.
Everyone is welcome to write about the person you admire most in terms of who the person is, why you think he/she is great and how he/she touches you.Your writing is expected to be real and original in not more than 1,000 words.Please be reminded that all contributions should be addressed to studentsunion@ qq.com no later than May 30th.
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Good examples are the most powerful inspirations.Let's spread love and goodness and thus make the world a better place! Looking forward to your active involvement.
Editorial Department of English Newspaper
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第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·山东省聊城市齐鲁名校大联盟模拟)Eight-year-old Kayzen Hunter visits Waffle House every weekend to have breakfast with his family.They always choose to sit in Devonte Gardner's section, because they get the best care from their favorite waiter.
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The family instantly felt close to Gardner, who would greet Kayzen with a high-five every time they entered the restaurant.Kayzen never needed to say his order again, because Gardner already knew it by heart.The family really believes he's the nicest person ever, which is why they were eager to help him when they learned his story.
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One day, while dining at the restaurant with his grandfather John Donofrio, Kayzen discovered that behind Gardner's kindness and warmth were a lot of personal struggles.At the time, Gardner asked the pair if they knew where he could buy an affordable car to use to get to work.It turned out the waiter had been walking a long distance to and from work every day.He and his family, consisting of a wife and two young daughters, were living in a motel (汽车旅馆) room after their apartment became unsuitable to live in.They had been living in a motel for months.
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Kayzen couldn't erase his friend's story from his mind, so he immediately told his mom about it when he got home.“We have to start a GoFundMe page and help Gardner get a car!” he kept saying.He didn't give up on the idea until his mom Vittoria gave in.Their goal was to get $5, 000 in donations so Gardner could purchase a car.Vittoria and her husband were eager to help their son achieve the goal, especially since they had the same experience years ago.It took a long time to rebuild their lives, but they were able to bounce back.Now, they wanted to help Devonte do the same.
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注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
A local news station picked up the story, and before they knew it, more donations began pouring in._______________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Upon discovering what Kayzen had done, Gardner wept.____________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了8岁的Kayzen Hunter得知自己喜欢的服务员Gardner遇到困难后,决定通过筹款的方式帮助他。
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段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当地一家新闻电台报道了这个故事,在他们意识到之前,更多的捐款开始涌入。”可知,第一段可描写越来越多的人开始为Gardner捐款。
②由第二段首句内容“得知Kayzen的所作所为后,Gardner哭了。”可知,第二段可描写Gardner甚为感动,决定将爱传递下去。
续写线索:
同情并为Gardner筹款——捐款蜂拥而至——拜访Gardner——Gardner非常感动——将爱传递下去
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[参考范文]
A local news station picked up the story, and before they knew it, more donations began pouring in.Soon, they achieved their goal,$5,000, and the number kept increasing.They now had over $100,000 in donations for Gardner and his family.The money was more than enough for a car, and would enable Gardner and his family to move out of the motel and live in a more comfortable space for over a year.Soon, they thought it was time to let Gardner know what they had done for him, so they visited Gardner and his family on a sunny day.
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Upon discovering what Kayzen had done, Gardner wept.He expressed his thankfulness to all the people who had helped him and his family.Now they had over $100, 000 in donations to help them bounce back.After renting a simple apartment and purchasing a car,Gardner went to work at ease and lived comfortably with his family.After he was no longer worried about his life, he thought he should put forward this act of kindness, so he gave the extra money to these who were in need like him, and he hoped someone would continue this great circle.
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