第1部分 必修第一册 40分写作规范增分练(一)（PPT课件）-【高考领航】2025年高考英语大一轮复习（人教版2019）

40分写作规范增分练(一) 必修第一册 第一部分　模块综合复习 1 第一节(满分15分) (2024·江苏省南通市高三考前练习卷)假如你是李华， 上周五你校举办了一次远足研学活动。请给你校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括： 1．活动目的； 2．活动内容； 3．活动反响。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 1 An Educational Outing _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 [参考范文] An Educational Outing Last week，our school organized an educational outing with the purpose of broadening students' perspectives，cultivating their abilities and increasing their cultural literacy. During the activity，we hiked through countryside，visited some villages，and admired the breathtaking scenery.We also participated in outdoor games and team-building activities，which helped us learn to work together and improve our communication skills. 1 Overall，the outing was a valuable experience，where we gained a better understanding of the world around us.What's more，we were able to develop a sense of responsibility towards the environment. 1 第二节(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·福州市质量检测)Jim dreams of becoming a famous artist to help lift his family from poverty.However, an illness in the family forces Jim to give up everything he worked so hard for. Jim used to draw skyline on the roof of the school building, with a broken piece of pencil lead he'd found in a rubbish can.His drawing was close to perfect except for some color.His family lived from hand to mouth so Jim could only rely on himself.He had to help out on the local farm after school and saved some of the money for paints. 1 One day Mom fell seriously ill and was rushed to hospital at once.While the rest of his family were still at the hospital waiting, Jim ran back home to get the household emergency money.But his heart sank when he saw the pitiful money.It'd never be enough to pay for Mom's medical treatment.He ran into his bedroom and reached for his savings. “Goodbye, paints and brushes，” Jim said as he added his to the emergency money. One night on the way home, thinking of Mom in hospital，he wanted to do something for her.He bent down beneath a streetlight and put his fingers in the dirt on the roadside.Before he knew it, he drew a portrait (肖像) of Mom. 1 He found red dust and mixed it with mud to add shadow, then picked up some grass and turned it into some kind of paint.He used this to add definition around Mom's nose, eyes and hair. When he was finished, Jim stood back up to study his work.The linework and shading were fine, but the colors ... “It's still no good，” Jim shook his head. “I disagree.” Jim turned around and found a stranger standing behind him.He gave Jim a friendly smile and introduced himself as Mr.Finn. 1 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 “I am an editor for an art magazine.” Mr.Finn continued._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________With the payment from the magazine, Jim could not hide his joy.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 【语篇解读】　本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了家境贫寒但喜欢画画的Jim想要成为艺术家改变家人的生活。他放学后去农场帮忙，以便存钱买绘画工具。但不幸的是，妈妈患了重病，家里的钱不够，Jim拿出自己存的钱。一天他一边思考该怎么做，一边无意识的在地上画出了妈妈的肖像画，这一幕被Mr.Finn看见了。 1 段落续写： ①根据第一段首句“‘我是当地一家艺术杂志的主编，’Finn先生继续说道。”可知，下文可描写Finn很欣赏Jim的画，请他为自己的杂志画一幅封面画，Jim同意了，因为这可以帮到妈妈。 ②根据第二段首句“得到杂志的付款，Jim无法掩饰他的喜悦。”可知，下文可描写Jim不仅用这些钱支付了妈妈的医疗费，还买了绘画工具。想到能通过画画帮助家人，Jim很开心。 续写线索： Finn介绍自己——Finn欣赏Jim的画——邀请Jim为杂志画封面画——Jim同意——得到报酬难掩喜悦——支付妈妈的医疗费——买绘画工具——感悟 1 [参考范文] “I am an editor for an art magazine，” Mr.Finn continued.“I love what you've done here.Such an unusual choice of medium, but what an excellent result! This is a very exciting form of artistic expression, young man.With your permission, I'd like to use a photo of your work for the cover of our next issue.” Jim nodded before he figured out how much he would be paid.But he was sure that he would earn some money and help his mom. 1 With the payment from the magazine, Jim could not hide his joy.Jim counted the bills Mr.Finn gave him several times on the way to the hospital.After he paid for Mom's medical treatment, there was still some money left.Without hesitation, he rushed to the store to buy some painting tools and pigments.His heart almost burst with joy at the thought of being able to take care of his family through painting. 1 本部分内容讲解结束 按ESC键退出全屏播放 1 $$