内容正文:
观点对比类
应用文
例文赏析
假设你是李华,你们班上周二举行了一次班会,班会的主题是:太空探索的意义。请结合下表内容,用英语给你校英语报写一篇文章,客观地介绍班会上同学们讨论的的情况并表达你自己的观点。
【写作要求】
1、词数80左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
赞成的理由 1.获得新知识;
2.扩大人类未来生存空间;
反对的理由 1.耗资巨大;
2.宇航员的安全问题
你的观点 ......
例文赏析
Dear editor,
We had a discussion on whether it is necessary to carry out outer space exploration at a class meeting last Tuesday. Different students have different opinions towards it.
On the one hand, some of us strongly believe that it is very important to research the outer space. First of all, people can get a better understanding of outer space through their exploration. Besides, the exploration may expand the living space for mankind in the near future.
On the other hand, others hold a different view. They think that it will cost too much money to do the exploration. Worse still, it is dangerous for astronauts to do such work in the outer space.
In my opinion, space explorations are worth trying out because it will benefit our future generations.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
一、审题
1. 审体裁:这是一篇_________________ 。
2. 审时态:以______________时态为主。
3. 审人称:以第________人称为主。
4. 审要点:__________________________
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观点对比类应用文
一般现在时
一、三
1.赞成观点及理由
2.反对观点及理由
3.自己的观点
范文赏析
Dear editor,
We had a discussion on whether it is necessary to carry out ourter space exploration at a class meeting last Tuesday. Different students have different opinions towards it.
On the one hand, some of us strongly believe that it is very important to research the outer space. First of all, people can get a better understanding of outer space through their exploration. Besides, the exploration may expand the living space for mankind in the near future.
On the other hand, others hold a different view. They think that it will cost too much money to do the exploration. Worse still, it is dangerours for astronauts to do such work in the outer space.
In my opionion, space explorations are worth trying out becase it will benefit our future generations.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第一段:引出话题
第二段:介绍正方观点及理由
第三段:介绍反方观点及理由
第四段:简单说明自己的观点
二、观点对比类应用文结构
第一段: 引出话题
第二段:介绍正方观点及理由
第三段:介绍反方观点及理由
第四段,简单说明自己的观点
三、Useful sentence patterns.
(一)、引出话题
1.最近,某某人讨论/辩论了...的话题。
Recently,...(sb.) had a heated discussion/debate on/about whether...
2. 对此,人们的观点/看法各不相同。
(1)Different people/students have different opinions towards
it/this topic.
(2)There are different opinions/attitudes among us concerning
this topic.
即时练习:
最近我们班就“出国留学是个好主意吗”的话题进行了热烈的讨论,大家的意见不同。
Recently, we had a heated discussion on whether studying abroad is a good idea. Different students have different attitudes/opinions towards it.
(二)、介绍正方观点及理由
On the one hand, some people/students are in favor of this idea. (一方面,一些人/学生同意这个观点)
On the one hand, some strongly believe that it is important /necessary/worthwhile to ...
(一方面,一些人坚信做某事是重要的/必要的/值得的...)
列举理由:(表示递进)
First/First of all / To begin with,…
Besides / In addition/What’s more …
即时练习:
1.一方面,我们当中的一些人同意这个观点。他们坚信留学是非常值得的。
On the one hand, some of us strongly believe that it is worthwhile to study abroad.
2.首先,留学有利于开拓学生的视野
First of all, studying abroad will broaden students’ horizons.
3.其次,留学能促进文化交流。
Besides, studying abroad can promote cultural exchange.
(三)、介绍反方观点及理由
1. However, other people/others hold a different view. They think that...(然而,其他人持不同看法。他们认为...)
2. On the other hand, some are against it/this topic. They argue that...(另一方面,一些人不赞成这个观点。他们认为...)
列举理由(缺点):(表示递进)
What's worse, ...
To make things worse, ....
即时练习:
另一方面,其他人反对(学生带手机进学校)。他们认为这会影响学习。更糟糕的是,手机会伤害学生的视力(eyesight)。
On the other hand, others are against the idea. They argue that
this will affect their study. What’s worse, cellphones will do harm
to their eyesight.
(四)、简单说明自己的观点
1. As far as I’m concerned, ...
2. In my opinion, I think...
即时练习:
我认为留学对学生有非常大的益处。
In my opinion, studying abroad is of great benefit to students.
牛刀小试:
假设你是李华,你们班上周二举行了一次英语辩论会,辩题是:Is studying abroad a good idea?请结合下表内容,用英语写一篇文章,客观地介绍班会上同学们辩论的情况并表达你自己的观点,发表在学校的英语报上。
【写作要求】
1、词数80左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
赞成的理由 1.有利于开拓学生的视野
2.能促进文化交流
反对的理由 1.面临巨大经济压力
2.难以适应新的生活方式
你的观点 ......
词汇准备:
1、促进文化交流
promote cultural exchange
2.拓展视野:
broadern one’s horizons
3.一种生活方式:
a way of life
4. 经济压力
economic pressure
适当使用连接词,使上下文连贯:
一方面:On the one hand,...
而另一方面(对立面):On the other hand,...
列举理由(正方):
First/First of all / To begin with,…
Besides / In addition/What’s more …
列举理由(缺点):What's worse, ...
To make things worse, ....
自己的观点:In my opinion/As far as I am concerned/personally speaking...
One possible version
Dear editor,
We had a debate on whether it is a good idea to study abroad last Tuesday. Different students have different opinions towards it.
On the one hand, some strongly believe that it is worthwhile to study abroad. First of all, studying abroad will broaden students’ horizons. Besides, it can also promote cultural exchange, which will be very helpful to the development of China.
On the other hand, others hold a different view. They argue that students will face great economic pressure if they study abroad.What’s worse, it will be difficult for the students to adjust to a new way of life.
As far as I am concerned, studying abroad is beneficial to students.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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