选择性必修第三册 Unit 4 Protecting Our Heritage Sites 第2课时（课件PPT）-【创新方案】2025年高考英语一轮总复习（译林版2020）

第2课时——强化表达功·写作短板的专项补弱 目 录 出彩句式 句子高级·表达脱俗 亮点写法 语段优美·彰显功底 课时作业评价 主题写作 命题热点·追根教材 句子高级·表达脱俗 出彩句式 1．the＋比较级 ..., the＋比较级 ... (1)the＋比较级 ..., the＋比较级 ...意为“越……，就越……”，主、从句的两个谓语是同时进行的，表示一方随另一方程度的变化而变化。 (2)第一个“the＋比较级 ...”是表示条件的状语从句(在表示将来意义时，从句用一般现在时表示将来)；第二个“the＋比较级 ...”是主句；此外，本结构可以用省略形式。 ①If you devote more time to practicing your spoken English, it will become more fluent. →The more time you devote to practicing your spoken English,__________________________. 先学通 (通过句子变换把握句式特点) the more fluent it will become ②If you take in more fat before bedtime, you will put greater burden on your body at night. →___________________________________, the greater burden you will put on your body at night. The more fat you take in before bedtime ③问题越难，他回答出来的可能性就越小。 _________________the questions are, _____________he is to answer them. ④公众越了解文化保护的重要性，我们就会从他们那里获得越有力的支持。 _________________________the importance of culture protection, ____________________we can get from the public. 再写美 (通过句子仿写做到运用自如) The more difficult the less likely The more they know about the stronger support 2．Sb./Sth.seem(s)/seemed＋不定式 (1)“Sb./Sth.seem(s)/seemed ＋不定式”是一个固定句型，表示“看来……；好像……”，该句型可转化为It seems/seemed that ...。 (2)含seem的相关句型常用的还有： It seems＋adj./n.＋to do sth.　 做某事看起来 好像…… It seems as if/as though ... 看起来好像…… There seems (to be) ... 似乎…… ①He seems to be fit for the present job. →_____________ he is fit for the present job. ②When his feet left the ground, time seemed to stand still. →When his feet left the ground,____________________________. 先学通 (通过句子变换把握句式特点) It seems that it seemed that time stood still ③此刻没有风，世界好像停止了，河流也停下了脚步。 There is no wind at this moment,_____________________________, and the river has stopped its footsteps. 再写美 (通过句子仿写做到运用自如) the world seems to have stopped ④(2023·浙江1月高考写作)这只鸟似乎在等我。它那双圆溜溜的眼睛盯着我，似乎想要表达感激之情。 ________________the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey gratitude. It seemed that 语段优美•彰显功底 亮点写法 1．赏用词之美 Sometimes, amazing ancient clay sculptures and buildings are accidentally destroyed by missile attacks during periods of violence.In some conflict areas where civil wars often break out, fighters have even destroyed heritage sites on purpose. 写法领悟：第二句中使用了程度副词“even”，起到加强语气的作用，强调了对文化遗产地的蓄意破坏，且短语“on purpose”与上一句中的“accidentally”相呼应，从有意及无意两个方面阐述了人类对遗产地的破坏。 2．赏用词之美 Covering vast distances and an astonishing variety of landscapes, the Silk Road was a network of ancient trade routes that extended from East Asia all the way to the Mediterranean.A key section of the extensive Silk Road network is the Chang'an-Tianshan Corridor，which stretches over a distance of around 5,000 kilometres through China, Kazakhstan and Kyrgyzstan, covering a total of 8,700 kilometres of trade routes. 写法领悟：第一句中的“network”用词贴切，与前半句中的“vast distances”及“an astonishing variety of”搭配使用，突出了丝绸之路覆盖面之广、辐射的区域之辽阔。此处在描写丝绸之路绵延不绝时使用了两个同义词extend与stretch，避开了重复用词造成的表达枯燥乏味。 ①Most of the house remains intact__________________________. 即使过了两百年，这座房子的大部分还是保持完好。 ②The damage couldn't have been caused____________.It must be done_____________. 这次损毁不可能是偶然因素引起的，肯定是被有意破坏的。 针对练笔 (根据提示完成句子) even after two hundred years accidentally on purpose ③The white beach extends along the coast and _______________ _____________________. 白色海滩沿着海岸延伸开了，从西到东绵延数英里。 it stretches for miles from west to east 命题热点•追根教材 主题写作 本单元主题是“遗产保护”，属于“人与自然、人与社会”的主题语境。此类话题通常以倡议书或演讲稿为载体倡导世界遗产保护的重要性。该命题角度旨在引导学生充分认识世界遗产的意义和价值，增强保护世界遗产的意识，自觉宣传世界遗产保护，践行遗产保护的理念。　 命题导向 (一)世界遗产 1．an incredible UNESCO cultural heritage site 一处令人叹为观止的联合国教科文组织文化遗产地 2．pursue an application for UNESCO World Heritage status致力于申报联合国教科文组织世界遗产 构建语义场 3．The temples of Angkor in Cambodia are typical examples of unique architecture. 柬埔寨吴哥的庙宇是独特建筑的典型代表。 4．The city has been recognized as the musical capital of Europe since the 16th century, home to the likes of Mozart and Beethoven. 自16世纪以来，这座城市就被认为是欧洲的音乐之都，莫扎特和贝多芬等人都曾来过这里。 5．The more we acknowledge the outstanding universal value of our heritage sites, the more likely we are to treat them with respect. 我们越明白遗产地突出的普遍价值，就越可能会尊重它们。 6．These sites are the great wonders of our world and tell the story of human civilization. 这些遗址是我们世界的伟大奇迹，讲述着人类文明的故事。 (二)其面临的危险 1．face a variety of dangers 　　 面临着各种危险 2．at risk from natural forces 受到自然力的威胁 3．gradually wear down heritage sites 逐渐侵蚀遗产地 4．cause a great deal of damage to 对……造成很大的破坏 5．destroy heritage sites on purpose 蓄意破坏遗产地 6．give rise to a series of problems 引发一系列问题 7．at risk of being lost forever 面临永远消失的危险 8．wear down these ancient buildings 磨损这些古老的建筑 9．on the List of World Heritage in Danger被列入濒危世界遗产名单 10．lead to irreparable destruction of the internal structure 导致内部结构无法弥补的破坏 11．put our cultural and natural heritage sites in danger 使我们的文化和自然遗产地处于危险之中 12．Millions of tourists travel to UNESCO World Heritage Sites every year, so it is only natural that the sites suffer a bit of wear and tear. 每年有大量游客到联合国教科文组织世界遗产地旅游，所以这些遗产地遭受些损坏是很自然的。 (三)保护遗产的重要性 1．in urgent need of protection 亟需保护 2．preserve sites of cultural and natural importance to mankind 保护对人类具有文化和自然重要性的遗址 3．Heritage protection is at the top of the agenda for the benefit of all mankind. 为了全人类的利益，遗产保护是当务之急。 4．If your heart breaks like mine at the thought of our irreplaceable heritage being lost forever, please take action. 如果你们像我一样，一想到我们无可取代的遗产会永远消失就觉得心碎，那么就请采取行动吧。 写作任务——基础写作的建模训练 [题目]　随着经济的发展，越来越多的文化遗产遭到破坏。假定你是红星中学高中生李华，请给当地英文报社写一封信，内容包括： 1．文化遗产的重要性； 2．呼吁人们保护文化遗产。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 平时勤练笔 [构思与要点表达] 第一部分　描述现象，导入主题 [从教材中学]　Unfortunately, they face a variety of dangers and many of them are in urgent need of protection. [到写作中用]　如今，越来越多的文化遗产面临着消失的危险，亟需保护。 Nowadays, more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearing and in urgent need of protection. 第二部分　说明文化遗产的重要性 要点1：记载过去，传承文化 [从教材中学]　 1．As well as being home to a wide diversity of ocean species, the reef can boost tourism and fishing in the local area, providing many job opportunities. 2．Such dangers can have disastrous outcomes not only for the sites themselves, but also for people. [到写作中用]　文化遗产代表着我们的历史文化，不但为我们提供了一个了解过去发生的事情的绝佳机会，而且让我们的传统文化代代相传。 Cultural heritage represents our historic cultures, ____________ ___________________________________________________________in the past but also making our traditional cultures handed down from generation to generation. not only providing us with a great opportunity to learn about what happened 要点2：历史悠久，价值极高 [从教材中学]　These sites are the great wonders of our world and tell the story of human civilization. [到写作中用]　这些遗址是我们世界的伟大奇迹，具有突出的普遍价值，它们中的大部分已经存在了很长时间，而且通常非常罕见和珍贵。 ______________________________________________________ _________________________, most of which have survived for a long time and they are usually very rare and valuable. These sites are the great wonders of our world with the outstanding universal value 第三部分　呼吁保护文化遗产 [从教材中学]　We all share a joint responsibility to protect and preserve them, not just for ourselves, but for future generations. [到写作中用]　我们都有保护和保存它们的共同责任，不仅是为了我们自己，还是为了子孙后代。所以，让我们携起手来，立即采取行动。 We all share a joint responsibility to protect and preserve them, not just for ourselves, but for future generations.So let's join our hands and take action immediately. [衔接与逻辑成篇] 运用补加、过渡与衔接，将上述语句连接成篇 Nowadays, more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearing and in urgent need of protection.So we must attach importance to the problem and try our best to protect them. Cultural heritage represents our historic cultures, not only providing us with a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past but also making our traditional cultures handed down from generation to generation.More importantly, these sites are the great wonders of our world with the outstanding universal value, most of which have survived for a long time and they are usually very rare and valuable. We all share a joint responsibility to protect and preserve them, not just for ourselves, but for future generations.So let's join our hands and take action immediately. 主题表达升格训练 课时作业评价 Ⅰ.根据要求完成下列句子 1．(完成句子)What the young lack now is _____________________ practical experience.(not ... but) 现在年轻人缺少的不是书本知识而是实践经验。 not book knowledge but 2．(完成句子)At the beginning, learning English _____________ __________and I wanted to give up even without trying. 一开始，学习英语好像很难，我甚至没有尝试就想放弃。 3．(完成句子)_____________________, the better you will speak English. 你练习得越多，英语就会说得越好。 seemed to be difficult The more you practise 4．(完成句子)__________________________, he bowed his head in shame.(分词作状语) 听到这些话后，他羞愧地低下了头。 Having heard these words 5．(一句多译)有导游带路，我们很容易就找到了那个村子。 ①____________________________，we had no difficulty in finding the village.(with复合结构) ②_________________________, we had no difficulty in finding the village.(独立主格结构) With the guide leading the way The guide leading the way 6．Will you get a free evening next week? If you are free, let's have a dinner. →Will you get a free evening next week?_________, let's have a dinner.(升级为省略结构) If so Ⅱ.读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·合肥质检)Sam, Wayne and Tim were three men in their 60s, jamming in the same dusty old garage where they used to play music when they were in high school.They chatted about old days, remembering the school days when they would take the stage and play together as a band. Wayne looked around, wide-eyed.“It's been more than 40 years since we practised here.” “Yes! And remember how we promised to keep in touch and play together once a week？” Tim laughed.“Sam, remember our brilliant plans？” “Ah yes! We thought we were inseparable! Now, look at us! Old and wrinkled, joints hurting, meeting at each other's grandkids' weddings ...we're terrible at keeping in touch, except Will, of course.He was always calling and messaging.Where is Will? He's the guy who planned this，”Sam smiled. Just then, the three men's phones buzzed (嗡嗡地响), and the message they received made their hearts sink.It was a message from Jenny, Will's wife.Wayne rushed to his car, and the others followed.A short drive later, the three men knocked on the door of Will's house and tried to wait patiently. Jenny looked almost unrecognizably pale and told them that Will was taking a nap.The medicines made him all weak.It moved the three men to tears to see their fourth band member in such poor health. And that day, they found out the whole story of Will's illness.Will's heart condition was serious, and it had been worsening over the past few months.The doctor said only an operation could help.But it was going to cost at least $15,000.And after all the previous treatments, Will and Jenny didn't have that kind of money anymore.Jenny said the doctors had given Will 6 months, bursting into helpless tears.The three men comforted her and wiped their own tears.“Money isn't an issue，” Sam said as an idea came to him. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 The next day, the three men brought their instruments to the busy street corner. Will was finally admitted to hospital three months later.　 参考范文： The next day，the three men brought their instruments to the busy street corner.They set up the sound, and there was a stand with the band name “Playing for Will” and a big stack of flyers to hand out.The men stood there for hours, playing song after song from the golden era of music.They were still perfect together, except for Will's soulful voice that was missing.Although they were very busy, they were very happy to collect money for Will. Will was finally admitted to hospital three months later.With enough money, they paid for Will's life-saving surgery.The doctors were highly qualified and the surgery was very successful.Will soon recovered smoothly.Will and Jenny were very grateful to their three friends.After that, there was another jam session at the same dusty old garage.Only this time, there weren't just three happy old men recalling the old days; there were four.It seemed like yesterday once more. $$