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第2课时——强化表达功·写作短板的专项补弱
目 录
出彩句式 句子高级·表达脱俗
亮点写法 语段优美·彰显功底
课时作业评价
主题写作 命题热点·追根教材
句子高级·表达脱俗
出彩句式
1.sb./sth.is said to do ...
(1)可用于此句型结构的过去分词有:thought, reported, believed, advised, required, hoped, suggested等。
(2)to do为一般式,根据情况,不定式也可用进行式或完成式。
(3)此句型可转化为It is said that ...句型。
①(2023·全国甲卷书面表达)Zheng He was believed to be one of China's most influential explorers.
→_________________Zheng He was one of China's most influential explorers.
②The book is known to have been translated into ten languages.
→______________the book has been translated into ten languages.
先学通
(通过句子变换把握句式特点)
It's believed that
It is known that
③It was said that she had written a report about wildlife protection the other day.
→She _______________________a report about wildlife protection the other day.
was said to have written
④据说,数百幅古代艺术家创作的中国画将进行展出,参观者将从中感受到丰富多彩的中国文化。
→_____________ hundreds of Chinese paintings by ancient artists will be on display, from which visitors will feel the colourful Chinese culture.
→Hundreds of Chinese paintings by ancient artists _____________
__________, from which visitors will feel the colourful Chinese culture.
再写美
(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)
It's said that
are said to be
on display
⑤据报道,这些关于中国传统文化的纪录片在国外很受欢迎。
→___________________the documentaries about the traditional Chinese culture are well received outside China.
→The documentaries about the traditional Chinese culture ____________________________outside China.
It is reported that
are reported to be well received
2.no wonder难怪;不足为奇
No wonder (that) ...=It's no wonder (that) ...难怪……;……不足为奇
It's a wonder that ... 奇怪的是……
I wonder whether (if)/when/why/how ...
我想知道是否/什么时候/为什么/怎么……
(单句语法填空)
①He hasn't slept at all for three days.______ wonder that he is tired out.
②She studies very hard and _____is no wonder that she stands out in every subject.
③I plan to pay a visit to you this Saturday morning.I wonder __________ you will be free then.
先学通
(通过题点训练把握用法规则)
No
it
whether/if
④(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷写作)我想知道你是否方便参加这个节目。
________________________it is convenient for you to take part in the programme.
⑤他就是爱忘事。难怪他因为没有按时完成任务而被责备。
It's typical of him to forget._____________________ he was blamed for not finishing the task on time.
再写美
(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)
I am wondering whether
(It is) No wonder that
语段优美•彰显功底
亮点写法
1.赏用词之美
Aerobic activities, like jogging, swimming and skiing, develop your heart and lungs.Strength training, such as pull-ups and weightlifting, increases muscle strength and encourages bone development.Flexibility training, including gymnastics and tai chi, helps stretch your muscles and improve your body's range of movement.
写法领悟:本段注重灵活使用不同的词汇来表达相同的意义,避免了重复用词,增加了文章的生动性。如在举例时,分别使用了like, such as, including;在表述运动带来的益处时用了词义相近的动词develop, increase, stretch, improve。
2.赏用词与修辞之美
Like cars that run on petrol, your body burns carbohydrates for energy.Foods like noodles, rice, fruit and vegetables give your body plenty of carbohydrates to keep up your energy during a long workout.
写法领悟:“Like cars that run on petrol (就像汽车要烧汽油才能跑)”采用了比喻的修辞手法,使表达的内容更通俗易懂。第二句中的keep up有“持续保持”之意,与后面的a long workout搭配更贴切。
①(运用不同的词汇完成句子)我认为他很诚实。
→____________ he is honest.
→____________ he is honest.
→____________ he is honest.
→____________he is honest.
→____________, he is honest.
针对练笔
(根据提示完成句子)
I think that
I believe that
I admit that
I assume that
In my opinion
②_____________________________, you should put yourself in the English environment.(比喻修辞)像婴儿学习语言一样,你(也)应该把自己置身于英语环境中。
③Walk on ____________________________at the end of the road.
继续往前走,你将在路尽头发现一个美丽的山谷。
Like a baby learning a language
and you'll find a beautiful valley
命题热点•追根教材
主题写作
本单元围绕“体育锻炼”展开,属于“人与自我”的主题语境。命制读后续写时,前文一般会描述作者因各种原因而缺乏锻炼,为下文续写埋下伏笔;然后,随着情节发展到高潮,出现矛盾和冲突——面临各种健康问题。续写部分往往是认识到锻炼的重要性,采取具体行动,解决这些问题的过程。通过这种类型的命题,旨在引导学生认识体育锻炼的益处,积极参加锻炼,养成健康的生活方式。
命题导向
(一)体育锻炼的益处
1.do wonders for the body and mind
对身心大有益处
2.increase the efficiency of your heart and lungs
增强心肺功能
构建语义场
3.be good for your mental health 对心理健康有好处
4.help you reduce stress 帮助你减轻压力
5.get over negative feelings 克服负面情绪
6.It has also been proven that active people tend to have better immune systems and are at lower risk of diseases.有证据表明,经常锻炼的人往往免疫系统会更好,患病的风险更低。
(二)锻炼的方法
1.start doing exercise 开始锻炼
2.regular exercise 经常锻炼
3.plan an exercise routine 规划日常锻炼
4.wear proper clothes and equipment 穿戴合适的衣服和护具
5.You should also start small and slowly work your way to a longer and harder exercise routine to avoid getting hurt.此外,刚开始锻炼强度要小,要循序渐进地增加锻炼的时间和强度,以防受伤。
6.Finally, remember to warm up before exercising and stretch at the end of your workout.
最后,记住锻炼前要热身,结束后要拉伸。
(三)影响锻炼的因素
1.have no time for exercise 没有时间锻炼
2.How boring it is to exercise alone!
一个人锻炼是多么无聊啊!
3.You know, it's really difficult to fit exercise into my busy schedule.
你知道,我太忙了,很难抽空锻炼。
4.Last but not least, I think it's hard for me to stick with an exercise routine.
最后但同样重要的是,我认为我很难坚持锻炼。
5.Imagine jogging along the same path every morning, repeating the same movement day after day and having no one to talk to!
想象一下,每天早上沿着同一条路慢跑,日复一日地重复同样的动作,却没有人说话!
(四)体育运动的经历
1.be more energetic during the day 白天精力更充沛
2.relax my mind 放松我的心态
3.enjoy the benefits it has brought me 享受它带给我的好处
4.When my friend first suggested that we join the new Tai Chi Club at school, I hesitated.
一开始,当朋友建议我们参加学校新成立的太极拳俱乐部时,我犹豫了。
5.A year of practising tai chi has had a positive effect on my everyday life.一年练习太极拳的经历已经对我的日常生活产生了积极的作用。
写作任务——读后续写的片段训练
(一)语境片段训练(根据提示补全下列语段)
1.认识到锻炼的重要性
I told him that ①__________________________ (我每个周末去散步).Then he replied,“Hmm,that's not a lot.Sport and health go together.They affect your mental, physical and emotional health.
平时勤练笔
I go for a walk every weekend
For example, ②____________________________________ (运动能改善你的心理健康), allowing your brain to think better and focus.
③_______________________________ (它能帮助你学习起来更轻松).Is that clear, Jane?”
sport can improve your mental health
It will help you to learn more easily
2.做出改变(参加运动→放松心态→成功减肥→更加自信)
So every day after school, I would do various activities for more than one hour, such as rope jumping, running, playing basketball and so on.①_____________________________ (锻炼让我的心态得到了放松).Also, I succeeded in losing about 10 kilograms.I began to ②_________________ (感到精力更充沛).What's more, ③________
_____________ (我变得更加自信).By being positive about myself and my body, I became both happier and healthier.
Taking exercise relaxed my mind
feel more energetic
I became
more confident
3.锻炼的收获(工作压力大→开始锻炼→焦虑消失)
As a computer engineer, there're always new challenges just around the corner!It can be quite stressful at times, though, which in turn ①_____________________ (让我感到焦虑).To help deal with this, ②____________________ (我开始锻炼) and go running as often as I possibly can.
makes me feel anxious
I start doing exercise
③___________________________________ (无论在健身房还是在路上), my nervous energy pushes me through mile one.By mile two,
④_________________________________________ (这种紧张感就从大脑转移到了双腿).By the end of the run, all my stress has disappeared and I'm ready to face the next day at work!
Whether I'm at the gym or on the road
the tension has moved from my mind to my legs
(二)续写构思训练(根据提示构思、续写语段)
前情概述:“我”本来认为自己的生活方式很健康。直到有一天,“我”卧病在床,医生慎重地告诉“我”:“我”身体超重,缺乏锻炼……
场景1:听了医生的话,“我”陷入了沉思。“我”决定做出改变,但是却不知道该怎么做,“我”不喜欢一个人锻炼,觉得太单调、枯燥。
The doctor's words left me lost in thought.___________________
I truly desired a life filled with good health and contentment, I had to start doing exercise.However, I was uncertain about how to take my first step.How boring it is to exercise alone! Imagine jogging along the same path every morning, repeating the same movement day after day and having no one to talk to!
It dawned on me that if
场景2:医生给“我”提出建议:参与团体运动。“我”觉得这是个好主意。
“Exercising alone is hard.Why not try some team sports?” the doctor suggested._________________________________________________
the thought of exercising alone but the idea of being part of a team sparked a sense of excitement within me.The thought of having others to share the experience with, to push me to be my best, and to celebrate successes was just what I needed to get motivated.I was eager to explore different options and find the right team to join.Finally, I felt ready to take that first step towards a new and improved me.
His words struck a chord with me.I had always dreaded
主题表达升格训练
课时作业评价
Ⅰ.根据要求完成下列句子
1.(完成句子)As is known to us all, __________________________
between the young and the old.
众所周知,年轻人和老年人之间存在代沟。
there exists a generation gap
2.(完成句子)________________________________ here; they're all away at a meeting.
难怪你找不到人,他们都开会去了。
3.(完成句子)If you study hard, you are very likely to __________
_________________________.
如果你努力学习,你很有可能被你梦想的大学录取。
No wonder you can't find anybody
be admitted
to your dreaming university
4.(完成句子)Our teacher often ___________________________
__________________.
我们的老师经常激励我们尽最大努力去实现我们的梦想。
inspires us to try our best to
realize our dreams
5.(一句多译)我们祝贺你们通过了高考。
①We _________________________________________your passing the College Entrance Examination.(congratulation)
②We ____________________your passing the College Entrance Examination.(congratulate)
express/offer/send our congratulations to you on
congratulate you on
6.While I was working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
→_________________, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.(用省略句升级)
While working
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·深圳模拟)Ballet was a way of life in Kelly's family.Her elder sister Serena was now dancing at a top college.Though Kelly's mom always wanted her to follow in her sister's footsteps and Kelly herself was good at ballet, her love for ballet had faded years before, and she was eager for a new challenge.
One day at school, as Kelly left the dance studio,she walked past the gym, fascinated by boxers (拳击手) training inside the boxing ring.She was deeply impressed by how hard they hit and how fast they moved.In fact, she'd long been attracted to boxing.
She pulled a piece of paper from her backpack.On the familiar Oakwood High School Club Sign-up Sheet was the phrase: BOXING CLUB TRYOUT (选拔).That was what Kelly really wanted to do.She knew her mom had high expectations for her when it came to ballet.Tired of trying to keep up with her sister, Kelly was ready to carve her own path.
The next day, she gathered her courage and told Serena about her new passion.At first, Serena didn't understand and thought she was just joking.But when she saw Kelly was serious, she replied,“You know Mom wants you to be a ballet dancer, right? Besides, boxing is only for boys, and you're so good at ballet.Lean into your strength, Kelly.”
“But this is where I want to put my strength,”Kelly insisted,“and what exactly does ‘only for boys’ mean, anyway? Boxing is a sport for everyone!”
Gradually, touched by her determination and passion, Serena began to understand and support her.Kelly could feel it.Her sister was going to respect her decision, no matter what.But that was nothing compared to the preparations for the tryout, where she was required to show her footwork and punching (击打) abilities with other candidates.Boxing didn't come naturally to Kelly, but she had made up her mind to stick with her choice.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Then Kelly began her training for the tryout, keeping it a secret from her mom.
The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout came out.
参考范文:
Then Kelly began her training for the tryout, keeping it a secret from her mom. The training spot was filled with boys and she was the only female.It felt so odd when she had to pump hard and stand in a typical boxing position.However, it didn't affect her determination at all.Day by day she was building up her strength.When the big day for tryout came, she knew she was ready for it.Only one thing troubled her determined mind, which was how to tell the truth to her mom.
The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout came out. Kelly's name was printed on the top of the list.She smiled to herself inwardly.Hard work paid off.The only problem left was to convince her mom that boxing was her real passion and she wished to pursue what she loved to do.Serena promised to help her when she broke the news.At first Mom was startled and furious that Kelly cheated on her.However, gradually she sensed that it was time to let her child follow their own heart to do something they persisted.She started to appreciate that her daughter actually outgrew her wit.
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