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第2课时——强化表达功·写作短板的专项补弱
目 录
出彩句式 句子高级·表达脱俗
亮点写法 语段优美·彰显功底
课时作业评价
主题写作 命题热点·追根教材
句子高级·表达脱俗
出彩句式
1.“疑问词+-ever”引导的从句
(1)“疑问词+-ever”既可以引导让步状语从句,又可以引导名词性从句。引导让步状语从句时,“疑问词+-ever”与“no matter+疑问词”可以互换。
(2)“no matter+疑问词”只可以引导让步状语从句,不能引导名词性从句。
①Anything that is worth doing is worth doing well.
→__________________________is worth doing well.
②Whenever I'm in trouble, my friend will come to help me.
→___________________________, my friend will come to help me.
先学通
(通过句子变换把握句式特点)
Whatever is worth doing
No matter when I'm in trouble
③Whatever the result is, we should accept it with a smile, because we have tried our best.
→__________________________, we should accept it with a smile, because we have tried our best.
No matter what the result is
④无论我们是谁,都会有弱点和长处。
We all have weaknesses and strengths —______________________
_______.
⑤无论她在教学中遇到什么困难,她都不放弃。
_______________________________________________________,
she doesn't give up.
再写美
(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)
Whatever/No matter what difficulties she encounters in teaching
whoever/no matter who
we are
⑥不管工作有多难,一个有决心的人总是会努力去完成。
A determined person always tries to finish the job, ____________
____________.
no matter how
hard it is
2.next time引导时间状语从句
next time为名词词组作连词用,引导时间状语从句。类似结构还有:
(1)由time构成的名词词组:each time, the last time, the first time, every time, any time等。
(2)the+瞬间名词:the minute, the instant, the second, the moment等。
(3)the+时间名词:the day/week/year, the spring/summer/autumn/winter等。
注意:for the first time为介词短语,意为“首次,第一次”,在句中一般作状语。
①Whenever we face fears, we gain strength, courage and confidence in the doing.
→____________________________, we gain strength, courage and confidence in the doing.
先学通
(通过句子变换把握句式特点)
Each/Every time we face fears
②He became interested in the young teacher's lesson when he attended his class for the first time.
→He became interested in the young teacher's lesson ___________
__________________.
the first time
he attended his class
③再遇到John时我要向他道歉。
I will apologize to John___________________.
④每次我遇到困难,你都会及时出现并给予我帮助。
__________________________, you would turn up in time and give me a hand.
再写美
(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)
next time I meet him
Every time I got into trouble
⑤他一在街上看到那个受伤的男孩,就毫不犹豫地下车,像箭一样冲过去帮助他。
________________________________________________________
_________, he got off his car without hesitation and rushed like an arrow to assist him.
The moment/minute/instant/second he saw the injured boy on the
street
3.do 强调谓语动词
(1)“do/does/did+动词原形”构成强调句,意为“确实;的确”,用来加强谓语动词的语气,但必须符合以下两个条件:①句子是肯定句;②句子的时态为一般现在时或一般过去时。
(2)在祈使句中运用“do+动词原形”形式,往往不表示命令,而表示强烈的请求,有时表达更加客气的语气。
(强调蓝体部分)
①The baby is generally healthy, but every now and then she catches a cold.
→The baby is generally healthy, but every now and then she_________________.
先学通
(通过句子变换把握句式特点)
does catch a cold
②Tom comes from a European country.
→Tom __________from a European country.
③I hope you can take my suggestions into consideration.
→I __________you can take my suggestions into consideration.
does come
do hope
④我确实相信你将会度过一段美好的时光。
I _____________________that you will have a great time.
⑤无论你做什么,都要全力以赴,最终你就会成功。
Whatever you do, _____________________and finally you will succeed.
再写美
(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)
do have the confidence
do devote yourself to it
语段优美•彰显功底
亮点写法
1.赏修辞之美
Just as the poor passengers on the real Titanic saw the tip of the iceberg, what we see on the cinema screen is just the tip of the huge iceberg of film-making.Hopefully, next time you go to the cinema, you'll spare a thought for all those talented people behind the scenes.They have worked for months and even years so that you can have two hours of enjoyment!
写法领悟:第一句使用了暗喻的修辞手法,强调电影制作中其实还隐藏着许多不为人知的辛勤劳动。最后一句中的“for months and even years”与后面的“two hours”形成对照,突出强调了我们所享受的两小时愉悦的观影时光是电影幕后工作者长时间辛苦劳动的成果。
2.赏结构之美
Based on a true story, the film is set in London in the 1930s.Prince Albert, second son of King George Ⅴ, suffers from a terrible speech problem.The Prince has given up hope of a cure but his wife, Elizabeth, takes him to see Lionel Logue, an Australian speech doctor living in London.
写法领悟:第一句为介绍影片或文学作品的常用句式,注意其句型提炼:Based on ..., the film/story is set in ...。影评的写作注重简洁高效,以简单的语言传达丰富的内涵,如第一句中运用非谓语动词及两个介词短语交代了故事背景及故事发生的时间、地点;第二、三句中则使用了同位语从而简化表达。
①_____________that drives winter from the human face.(比喻修辞)
爱是太阳,能驱走人们脸上的冬天。
②________________________, full of twists and turns.(比喻修辞)
生活是一条未被涉足的河流,充满坎坷和曲折。
针对练笔
(根据提示完成句子)
Love is the sun
Life is an unexplored river
③_______________________, the film ___________________in contemporary China.
这部电影改编自一部网络小说,以当代中国的一座小城为背景。
Based on a network novel
is set in a small city
命题热点•追根教材
主题写作
本单元主题是“影视娱乐”,属于“人与社会”的主题语境。应用文写作在设题时通常以推荐信的形式向对方推荐某一佳片,或以影片评论的形式探究影视作品的内涵,引导学生领略电影艺术的魅力,进而通过电影感悟人生真谛。
命题导向
(一)影视常识
1.the amazing sets 令人惊叹的布景
2.visual special effects 视觉特效
3.a special effects technology 一种特效技术
4.use clever camera angles 利用巧妙的拍摄角度
构建语义场
5.Actually, the film you see on the screen is the product of a huge amount of hard work, most of which takes place behind the scenes.
事实上,你在银幕上看到的电影是大量艰苦工作的产物,其中大部分工作发生在幕后。
6.Just as the poor passengers on the real Titanic saw the tip of the iceberg, what we see on the cinema screen is just the tip of the huge iceberg of film-making.
正如真正的“泰坦尼克号”上那些可怜的乘客们所看到的冰山一角一样,我们在影院银幕上看到的也只是电影制作这座巨大冰山的一角而已。
(二)佳片推荐
1.win many awards 获得了许多奖项
2.be shot in different locations 在不同的地方拍摄
3.be directed by ... 由……导演
4.All these factors contribute to the film's success.
所有这些因素都促成了影片的成功。
5.Based on a true story, the film is set in London in the 1930s.改编自一个真实的故事,影片发生在20世纪30年代的伦敦。
6.What's more, it conveys a message that we should take a positive attitude towards life.
此外,它传达了一个信息,即我们应该采取积极的生活态度。
写作任务——基础写作的建模训练
[题目] 假定你是李华,计划参加学校英语俱乐部开展的影片分享活动。请你根据看过的一部电影,写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.电影简介; 2.推荐原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
平时勤练笔
[构思与要点表达]
第一部分 发言稿的开头语
[头脑风暴] 发言稿的常见开头语有哪些?
1.我很高兴有机会谈论……
I am delighted/pleased/glad to have the opportunity to talk about ...
2.我很荣幸在这里和大家分享……
It's my honor to be here to share with you ...
第二部分 电影简介
要点1:介绍片名
[从教材中学] In 1967, Disney adapted the book into a cartoon film, which is widely regarded as a classic.
[到写作中用] 我最喜欢的影片之一是《阿甘正传》,改编自温斯顿·格罗姆的小说。
One of my favourite films is Forrest Gump, ___________________
__________written by Winston Groom.
which is adapted from
the novel
要点2:介绍主演
[从教材中学] The film stars Colin Firth as King George Ⅵ, Geoffrey Rush as Lionel Logue and Helena Bonham Carter as Queen Elizabeth.
[到写作中用] 这部电影由汤姆·汉克斯饰演阿甘,一个天生智商较低,但个性热情、意志坚定的人。
_____________Tom Hanks_________________, a man born with a lower IQ, but a warm personality and strong determination.
The film stars
as Forrest Gump
第三部分 推荐的原因
要点1:影片亮点一
[从教材中学] The new film uses much more advanced technology — not only the animals but also the jungle is digitally created.
[到写作中用] 这部影片不仅充满温情和善良,它还传达了一个信息,即我们应该采取积极的生活态度。
____________________________a tender feeling and kindness ________________________________we should take a positive attitude towards life.
Not only is the film filled with
but it also conveys a message that
要点2:影片亮点二
[从教材中学] All these factors contribute to the film's success.
[到写作中用] 此外,语言的使用很吸引人,这也促成了影片的成功。
Besides, the use of language is striking, ________________________
__________________.
which also contributes to
the film's success
第四部分 结束语
[从教材中学] All in all, I highly recommend this film.
[到写作中用] 我强烈建议你去观看,这部电影绝不会让你失望。
_________________________________and the film will never disappoint you.
I strongly recommend you to watch it
[衔接与逻辑成篇]
运用补加、过渡与衔接,将上述语句连接成篇
Good evening!
My name is Li Hua.It's my honor to be here to share with you one of my favourite films — Forrest Gump, which is adapted from the novel written by Winston Groom.The film stars Tom Hanks as Forrest Gump, a man born with a lower IQ, but a warm personality and strong determination.
Not only is the film filled with a tender feeling and kindness but it also conveys a message that we should take a positive attitude towards life.Besides, the use of language is striking, which also contributes to the film's success.
I strongly recommend you to watch it and the film will never disappoint you.
That's all.Thank you for listening!
主题表达升格训练
课时作业评价
Ⅰ.根据要求完成下列句子
1.(完成句子)_________________________________________ and be gentle to every one.(typical)
她一向是面带笑容,待人温和。
It's typical of her to wear a smile on her face
2.(完成句子)The family shared breakfast together, ___________
_______________,delight spreading through the house.(代词+of+关系代词)
一家人一起吃早餐,他们都欣喜万分,屋里洋溢着喜悦。
all of whom
were overjoyed
3.(完成句子)I _________my suggestions can be helpful to you to ___________________________as soon as possible.(强调谓语;adapt)
我真的希望我的建议能帮助你尽快适应新环境。
4.(完成句子)____________________________, in my opinion, what you have to do is learn some daily Chinese.
关于准备工作,在我看来,你必须做的是每天学习一些日常汉语。
do hope
adapt to the new environment
In/With regard to preparations
5.(一句多译)随着高考的临近,我们都在忙着为考试做充分的准备。
①______________________________________________, we are busy making full preparations for it.(with复合结构)
②______________________________________________, we are busy making full preparations for it.(as引导状语从句)
With the College Entrance Examination approaching
As the College Entrance Examination is approaching
6.He is so attached to the computer games that he can't concentrate on his study.
①____________________________________, he can't concentrate on his study. (升级为过去分词短语作状语)
②_______________________________________he can't concentrate on his study.(升级为倒装句)
Attached to the computer games so much
So attached to the computer games is he that
Ⅱ.语法填空
(2024·广州调研)The need for speed is so deeply rooted in modern society that we often forget to press the pause button and think about the things that get 1 (good) with time: antiques, aged wine, long-term relationships and expertise over the years.
Beijing Opera is a slow process too. An often-repeated saying goes as follows: three minutes on stage, 10 years 2 stage. It's meant as a nod to its demanding nature and a reminder of its high standards that ensure that any performance 3 (do) in the way the forefathers wanted.
Beijing Opera is demanding because of the extensive list of skills it 4 (require). A performer is an actor, singer, dancer, acrobat, mime and martial artist all rolled into one. They're also expected 5 (apply) delicate make-up, put on heavy costumes and, 6 (depend) on their character, perform on stage in 15cm platform shoes.
There is so much to take in 7 disciples (门徒) usually start their career as young children, spending years conditioning their bodies and minds for the stage.
So what chance does 8 theatre beginner with little patience and zero flexibility like me stand against Beijing Opera? Do I have what it takes to put on a 9 (success) show? There's only one way to find out: I'm rolling up my sleeves and training under the 10 (guide) of senior stage masters in the field.
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。文章主要讲述了作者作为一名京剧初学者对京剧的理解。
1.better 考查形容词比较级。结合常识和本句描述可知,此处指随着时间变化而变得更好的东西,所以空处填better。
2.off 考查介词。结合本句描述可知,此处是一句谚语“台上三分钟,台下十年功”。对应表“台上”的介词on,此处指的是“台下”,所以空处填off。
3.is done 考查动词的时态、语态和主谓一致。分析句子结构可知,空处在句中作谓语。此处描述了一个客观事实,时态用一般现在时;do意为“做”,与主语是被动关系,且主语any performance为单数概念,所以空处填is done。
4.requires 考查动词的时态、语态和主谓一致。分析句子结构可知,空处在定语从句中作谓语。此处为客观描述,时态用一般现在时;require意为“需要,要求”,与主语是主动关系;主语it指代京剧,为单数概念。所以空处填requires。
5.to apply 考查非谓语动词。be expected to do sth.意为“被期待做某事”,为固定用法,所以空处填to apply。
6.depending 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知,此处是非谓语,且depend与主语They之间是逻辑上的主动关系,所以空处填depending。
7.that 考查固定句型。根据句意并分析句子结构可知,此处为so ... that ...结构,意为“如此……以至于……”,故填that。
8.a 考查冠词。结合句意可知,此处泛指“一个戏剧初学者”,且theatre以辅音音素开头,所以空处填a。
9.successful 考查形容词。空后show是名词,应用形容词修饰,且此处表示“成功的”,故填successful。
10.guidance 考查名词。根据空前的“the”和空后的“of”可知,空处应填名词 guidance。
Ⅲ.应用文写作
(2024·石家庄质检)假定你是李华,你校英语戏剧社将于下个月举行英文戏剧展演。请你用英语为该社写一则通知,内容包括:
1.活动介绍;
2.鼓励报名;
3.截止日期。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
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参考范文:
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