必修第二册 Unit 3 On the Move 第2课时（课件PPT）-【创新方案】2025年高考英语一轮总复习（外研版2019）

第2课时——强化表达功·写作短板的专项补弱 目 录 出彩句式 句子高级·表达脱俗 亮点写法 语段优美·彰显功底 课时作业评价 主题写作 命题热点·追根教材 句子高级·表达脱俗 出彩句式 1．“主语＋be＋adj.＋to do ...”结构 (1)在“主语＋be＋adj.＋to do ...”中，动词不定式用主动形式表示被动含义。使用此结构须具备两个前提条件： ①不定式和句子的主语之间构成逻辑上的动宾关系； ②常用于该句型的形容词有：difficult, hard, easy, comfortable, pleasant, interesting, exciting等。 (2)如果动词不定式是take care of, look after, deal with, sit on, cooperate with, live in等这样的不及物动词短语，介词不能省略。 (通过题点训练把握用法规则)　 (单句语法填空) ①The bike seemed too heavy and difficult __________ (control)． ②My old partner is easy to cooperate _____. 先学通 to control with (通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ③饺子很容易做，而且很好吃。 Dumplings ________________ and they are delicious. ④虽然有些问题我似乎很熟悉，但它们很难回答。 Though some of the questions seem familiar to me, _______________________. 再写美 are easy to make they are difficult to answer 2．“make＋宾语＋宾语补足语”结构 (1)“make＋宾语＋宾语补足语”结构的几种形式： (2)make后接名词作宾语补足语时，若作宾语补足语的名词表示职位或头衔，如 president, chairman, monitor, headmaster, manager, head, captain等，则该名词前不用任何冠词。 (3)“make＋宾语＋宾语补足语”结构变为被动语态时，作补语的动词不定式需加to。 (通过题点训练把握用法规则)　 (单句语法填空) ①(2022·新高考Ⅱ卷)Writing an essay is a difficult process for most people. However, the process can be made ______ (easy) if you learn to practice three simple techniques. 先学通 easier ②He is very popular among his students as he always tries to make them __________ (interest) in his lectures. ③You should make your views _______ (know) to the public. ④I was made ________ (wait) at the train station for two hours. ⑤Your contribution will certainly make the event __ huge success. interested known to wait a (通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ⑥作为我们市的一名市民，保护我们城市的环境，使它成为一个更绿色的居住地是我们的责任。 As a citizen of our city, it's our duty to protect our city's environment and _____________________ to live in. 先学通 make it a greener place ⑦我们的英语老师经常让我们复述课文，这对我们的英语学习很有帮助。 Our English teacher often________________________, which is beneficial to our English study. makes us retell the texts 语段优美•彰显功底 亮点写法 赏写作手法与修辞之美 These days, football is one of the most popular sports in the world. Given that Neil Armstrong wanted to take a football to the Moon，we could even say that it is also the most popular sport out of this world! ... “Some people believe football is a matter of life and death，...” said Bill Shankly, the famous footballer and manager. “I can assure you it is much, much more important than that.” This might sound funny, but one only has to think about the Earth to realise that our planet is shaped like a football. 写法领悟：节选部分为文章的开头部分与结尾部分，采用了首尾呼应的写作手法，使得文章结构紧凑，逻辑完整。首段中第二句话“Given that Neil Armstrong wanted to take a football to the Moon ...”采用了幽默、夸张的手法让读者充分体会到足球是现今世界上最受欢迎的运动之一。尾段同样用夸张、幽默的手法强调了“足球无关生死但又高于生死”，与首段递进式呼应。另外尾段采用了“引用”与“比喻”的修辞手法，引用了比尔·香克利的话，以地球比喻足球，耐人寻味，颇有道理，让人感慨生命之中总有一些东西值得你用生命去追求，从而巧妙地对文章进行了升华。 [针对练笔]　(依据提示完成句子) ①______________ a lark is my daughter, whose presence makes everyone happy and relaxed. 我的女儿快乐得就像一只百灵鸟。她的出现让每个人都心情愉快、情绪放松。 ②When she heard the bad news,________________________. 当她听到这个坏消息时，她泪流成河。 As happy as a river of tears poured out 命题热点•追根教材 主题写作 本单元主题是“体育锻炼”，属于人与社会的主题语境。命制读后续写时，前文一般会描述作者因各种原因而缺乏锻炼，为下文续写埋下伏笔；然后，随着情节发展到顶峰，出现矛盾冲突——面临各种健康问题。续写部分往往是描述作者认识到锻炼的重要性，然后采取具体行动，解决这些健康问题的过程。通过这种类型的命题，旨在引导学生了解体育锻炼的益处，积极参加锻炼，养成健康的生活方式。　　 命题导向 (一)体育锻炼的益处 1．improve his fitness　　　 提高了他的身体素质 2．help you reduce stress 帮助你减轻压力 3．get over negative feelings 克服负面情绪 构建语义场 4．be good for your mental health 对你的心理健康有好处 5．do wonders for the body and mind 对身心大有益处 6．increase the efficiency of your heart and lungs 增强你的心肺功能 7．take your first step towards a new and improved you 向新的、更好的自己跨出了第一步 8．It has also been proven that active people tend to have better immune systems and are at lower risk of diseases. 有证据表明，经常锻炼的人往往免疫系统会更好，患病的风险更低。 (二)影响锻炼的因素及锻炼方法 1．have no time for exercise　　 没有时间锻炼 2．regular exercise 定期锻炼 3．plan an exercise routine 制定锻炼计划 4．wear proper clothes and equipment 穿戴合适的衣服和护具 5．To be honest though, I don't know how to make exercise a regular part of my life.但老实说，我不知道如何让锻炼成为我生活中的一部分。 6．You should also start small and slowly work your way to a longer and harder exercise routine to avoid getting hurt. 此外，刚开始锻炼强度要小，要循序渐进地增加日常锻炼的时间和强度，以防受伤。 7．Above all, choose activities you enjoy, because in this way, you're more likely to stick with them. 而最重要的是，要挑选你喜欢的项目，因为这样你更有可能持之以恒。 8．Last but not least, I think it's hard for me to stick with an exercise routine. 最后但同样重要的是，我认为我很难坚持日常锻炼。 (三)体育锻炼的经历与体验 1．be more energetic during the day 白天精力更充沛 2．relax my mind 放松我的心态 3．enjoy the benefits it has brought me 享受它带给我的好处 4．When my friend first suggested that we join the new Tai Chi Club at school, I hesitated. 一开始，当朋友建议我们参加学校新成立的太极拳俱乐部时，我犹豫了。 5．One year later, I can honestly say it has had a huge effect on me physically and mentally. 一年后，我可以实话实说了，太极拳对我的身心都产生了巨大的影响。 6．A year of practising tai chi has had a positive effect on my everyday life. 一年练习太极拳的经历已经对我的日常生活产生了积极的作用。 写作任务——读后续写的片段训练 (一)语境片段训练(依据提示补全下列语段) 1．认识到锻炼的重要性 I told him that ①__________________________ (我每个周末去散步). Then he replied，“Hmm, that's not a lot. Sport and health go together. They affect your mental, physical and emotional health. For example, 平时勤练笔 I go for a walk every weekend ②_________________________________ (运动能改善你的心理健康), allowing your brain to think better and focus. ③___________________ __________(它能帮助你学习起来更轻松). Is that clear, Jane？” sport can improve your mental health It will help you to learn more easily 2．作出改变(参加运动→放松心态→成功减肥→更加自信) So every day after school, I would do various activities for more than one hour, such as rope jumping, running, playing basketball and so on.Taking exercise ①____________________________________ (帮助我放松，带给我内心的平静), and is a simple way to deal with pressure. Also, I succeeded in losing about 10 kilograms. I began to helps me relax and brings me peace inside ②___________________ (感到精力更充沛). What's more, ③________ ______________ (我变得更自信). By being positive about myself and my body, I became both happier and healthier. feel more energetic I became more confident (二)续写构思训练(根据提示构思、续写语段) 前情概述：作者本来认为自己的生活方式很健康。直到有一天，他卧病在床，医生慎重地告诉他：他身体超重，缺乏锻炼…… 场景1：听了医生的话，作者陷入了沉思。他决定作出改变，但是却不知道该怎么做，他不喜欢一个人锻炼，觉得太单调枯燥。 The doctor's words left me lost in thought. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 场景2：医生给作者提出建议：参与团体运动。作者觉得这是个好主意。 “Exercising alone is hard. Why not try some team sports？” the doctor suggested. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： The doctor's words left me lost in thought. It dawned on me that if I truly desired a life filled with good health and contentment, I had to start doing exercise. However, I was uncertain about how to take my first step. How boring it is to exercise alone! Imagine jogging along the same path every morning, repeating the same movement day after day and having no one to talk to! “Exercising alone is hard. Why not try some team sports？” the doctor suggested. His words struck a chord with me. I had always dreaded the thought of exercising alone but the idea of being part of a team sparked a sense of excitement within me. The thought of having others to share the experience with, to push me to be my best, and to celebrate successes was just what I needed to get motivated. I was eager to explore different options and find the right team to join. Finally, I felt ready to take that first step towards a new and improved myself. 主题表达升格训练 课时作业评价 Ⅰ.根据要求完成下列句子 1．(完成句子)To make it easier to ________________ (与……取得联系) us, you'd better keep this card at hand. 2．(完成句子)I'm confident to tell you that the house _____________________(住起来很舒服). get in touch with is comfortable to live in 3．(完成句子)All the efforts _______________________________ ___________(将会让这首诗更容易被理解) by the western audience.(make＋宾语＋宾语补足语) 4．(完成句子)________________________ (电梯出故障了), so we had to walk up to the tenth floor. will make the poem more easily understood The elevator/lift broke down 5．(完成句子)___________________________ (以我弟弟为例), he often plays basketball and swims on weekends. 6．(完成句子)________________________ (随着社会的快速发展), it's necessary for us to have a good command of English. Take my brother for example As society develops quickly 7．That stone structure going back to the Ming Dynasty is so breathtaking that it has been attracting many visitors. →That stone structure ____________________________________ is so breathtaking that it has been attracting many visitors.(定语从句) which/that goes back to the Ming Dynasty Ⅱ.语法填空 (2024·济南模拟)Margarita Albelaes, is a Havana resident.She 1 (make) her way through the streets of the city's Chinatown to the Cuban School of Wushu and Qigong every day, 2 she has done for the past 15 years. The first day of school saw 3 return of nearly 70 students.The students appeared enthusiastic. Roberto Vargas Lee, president of the school, said he believes Chinese martial arts (武术) have helped Cubans better deal with health 4 (risk) and social stress. “We are helping people stay 5 harmony with nature, protect their immune systems, breathe pure air, and forget 6 (they) daily problems，” Vargas said.“Chinese martial arts are 7 (much) necessary than ever.” Younger generations have also benefited from 8 (practise) Chinese martial arts.With most gyms and sports centers 9 (close) due to some reasons, more Cubans turned to Chinese martial arts.Related classes have been aired on local TV and a network of nearly 120 instructors consider Chinese martial arts a treasure and so far they 10 (spread) knowledge about martial arts across Havana's 15 districts. 语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章以Margarita Albelaes, Roberto Vargas Lee的事例来说明中国武术在古巴深受当地人的欢迎。 1．makes　考查动词的时态和主谓一致。根据本句的时间状语every day可知，要用一般现在时，因为主语为She，因此要用单数形式。故填makes。 2．which　考查定语从句。空处指代上文中的“She (make) her way ...every day”这件事情，且在定语从句中充当done的宾语。故填which。 3．the　考查冠词。根据下文中的“return of nearly 70 students”可知，空处特指70名学生的返校。故填the。 4．risks　考查名词复数。根据and后并列的名词stress可知，空处要用名词，因为risk为可数名词，前面无不定冠词修饰，故此处要用复数。故填risks。 5．in　考查介词。stay in harmony with ...为固定短语，意为“与……和谐共处”。故填in。 6．their　考查代词。根据下文daily problems可知，空处要填形容词性物主代词作定语。故填their。 7．more　考查比较级。根据下文的than可知，空处要用比较级。故填more。 8．practising　考查非谓语动词。根据上文的介词from可知，空处要用practising作宾语。故填practising。 9．closed　考查非谓语动词。此处为“with＋宾语＋宾语补足语”结构，宾语most gyms and sports centers与宾语补足语close为被动关系，因此要用closed。故填closed。 10．have spread　考查动词的时态。根据so far确定空处要用现在完成时态。故填have spread。 Ⅲ.应用文写作 假定你是李华，你校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目正在征集稿件，请你就上周参加学校运动会的一个项目写一篇短文投稿。内容要点包括： 1．比赛过程；　2.赛后感想。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： Last week, I participated in our school sports meet, competing in the 400－meter race — a thrilling and unforgettable experience. On hearing the sharp whistle, I dashed out, the wind rushing against my face and the crowd's cheers echoing around me. My attempts to match the pace of fellow runners proved challenging, but I did not give up. I pushed myself to the limit and crossed the finish line with all my strength. I was glad that I took part in the sports meet, which not only pushed my limit but also inspired me the importance of persistence. $$