选择性必修第一册 Unit 2 Onwards and Upwards 第2课时（Word教师用书）-【创新方案】2025年高考英语一轮总复习（外研版2019）

第2课时——强化表达功·写作短板的专项补弱 祈使句＋and＋陈述句 (1)“祈使句＋and＋陈述句”表示“如果……就……”，其中祈使句相当于一个if引导的条件状语从句， and之后的句子相当于主句。 (2)“祈使句＋or (else)/otherwise＋陈述句”表示“……否则……”。 (3)“祈使句＋并列连词＋陈述句”句型可以转换为“名词＋并列连词＋陈述句”结构。 |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点) 　 ①If you follow these tips, your time spent doing research on the Internet will be much more worthwhile. →Follow_these_tips,_and_your_time_spent_doing_research on the Internet will be much more worthwhile. ②If you put your prices too high, you'll frighten the customers off. →Don't_put_your_prices_too_high,_or you'll frighten the customers off. |再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ③用恰当的方法努力学习英语，你就会发现它并不难学。 Work_hard_at_English_in_a_proper_way,_and you will find it not hard to study. ④多吃健康食品，不然你的身体迟早会垮掉的。 More healthy food, or_(else)/otherwise_you'll_break_down_sooner_or_later. 1．赏衔接与句式之美 This, however, was a time when women were not encouraged to become writers. As the then Poet Laureate, Robert Southey, wrote to one of them: “Literature cannot be the business of a woman's life, and it ought not to be.” Nevertheless, the sisters didn't stop trying. Their response was to write a book of poems under male names. Even when the book sold only two copies, the sisters still didn't give up. 写法领悟：文中作者使用了副词however，Nevertheless，Even将整段串联在一起，使衔接紧凑，行文顺畅。同时使用了when引导的定语从句和时间状语从句，以英国维多利亚时代的勃朗特三姐妹为例，形象地描述了尽管她们当时身处逆境，但仍然坚持不懈，烘托了“挫而不败”的精神。 2．赏写作手法之美 “We regret to inform you ...” These are the words that every writer dreads receiving, but words every writer knows well ... ... ... Keep trying and eventually you will read the words “We are delighted to inform you ...” 写法领悟：尾段中的We are delighted to inform you ...照应了文章的开头，这种首尾呼应的写作手法使文章结构严谨、前后贯通。且尾句中的delighted一词与首句中的regret形成鲜明对比，在突出文章中心的同时也增强了语言的感染力。 [针对练笔] 1．运用对比手法完成句子 Although there exist some negative_effects,_the development of the science and technology mostly has_a_positive_effect_on the environment. 尽管存在一些负面影响，但科学技术的发展大多对环境有积极的影响。 2．根据所给提示完成尾段写作 “Don't judge a book by its cover，” the old saying goes.Unfortunately, as a teenager, that is often exactly what you do to yourself ... ... ...However, like_a_book,_the_contents_are_much_more_important_than_the_cover (就像一本书，内容要远比封面重要)．If you can learn to see the good things about yourself — your individuality, your value to others, your achievements — you will soon begin to love yourself just the way you are. [命题导向] 本单元主题为“勇往直前，永不放弃的精神”，属于人与自我的主题语境。读后续写中常以励志故事为命题点，如2022年新高考Ⅰ卷中主人公克服身体障碍参加越野比赛的故事。前文部分一般会描述主人公遇到的挫折，面对的挑战和选择，续写部分则结合主人公的抉择彰显其克服困难、勇于挑战的优秀品质。此类命题旨在引导考生学习主人公坚韧不拔的毅力、不屈不挠的精神，培养面对挫折不轻言放弃的毅力和品质，形成面对困境不妥协、面对失败不放弃的积极的人生态度。 构建语义场 (一)遭遇挫折 1．feel low　　 　　 (感到)情绪低落 2．spend years surviving on little money 过了很多年拮据的生活 3．face criticism along with rejection 在被回绝的同时还要遭受批评 4．I felt embarrassed, even though no one could see me. 我觉得很尴尬，即使没有人会看到我。 5．My heart sank because I thought I would be punished again. 我的心一沉，因为我以为我又要受惩罚了。 6．With life being made up of ups and downs, it is not always easy to maintain a good and enthusiastic attitude.生活充满了起起落落，要保持积极乐观的态度并不总是那么容易。 (二)战胜困难 1．refuse to give up　　　　 拒绝放弃 2．challenge oneself 挑战自我 3．look on the bright side 怀有乐观的态度 4．have a positive effect on 对……有积极的影响 5．positive ways of facing frustration 面对挫折的积极的方法 6．build character and develop physical fitness 塑造性格，强化身体素质 7．Success rarely happens overnight. 成功不是一朝一夕可以获得的。 8．Nevertheless, she persevered. 尽管如此，她依然坚持不懈。 9．Even though being a camper has its challenges, I feel it is worthwhile. 尽管做一名露营者有很多困难，但我觉得这是值得的。 10．While a lot of hard work and a touch of luck play a part, perseverance is the key. 不懈的努力和一点点运气固然很重要，但坚持不懈才是关键。 平时勤练笔 写作任务——读后续写的片段训练 (一)语境片段训练(依据提示补全下列语段) 1．面对挫折时的心理变化(迷茫失落→勇敢面对) But just before the competition, his old injury returned, which meant he could go no further in sports.He was at a great loss and ①felt_low (感到情绪低落), wondering where his future was.His father ②encouraged_him_to_go_back_to_high_school(鼓励他重回高中) for academic study after so many years of sports life.It could be very hard for he had lost too much time on studies.Thanks to his years of sports training, he ③developed_the_spirit_of_never_giving_up (养成了永不放弃的精神)．He regained his confidence and ④decided_to_challenge_himself_bravely(决定勇敢地去挑战自我)． 2．直面挫折(意志坚定→勇敢抗争) As David grew up，①he_was_fairly_strong－willed (他意志相当坚定)．Despite ②the_challenges_that_he_faced (他面临的这些挑战), he continued to attend the school for visually impaired children.He ③insisted_he_should_take_the_bus (坚决要求他应乘公交车) home on his own.Often, he would walk through the main door ④looking_embarrassed (看起来有些尴尬) and saying the same phrase, “Sorry Mum, I am late.I boarded the wrong bus again.”⑤Tough_as_life_was (尽管生活是艰难的；as) , there was always silver lining of misfortune. (二)续写构思训练(根据提示构思、续写语段) 前情概述： John酷爱篮球，他把业余时间都用在练习打篮球上，他梦想着自己有一天能成为大学篮球队的一员。但是一天，不幸的事发生了。他在回家的路上遭遇了一起交通事故，摔断了双腿。得知自己不得不依靠轮椅行动时，他绝望极了，他想自己再也进不了篮球队了。出院后，他去了一家康复中心继续接受治疗。在那里，他遇到了Sunny。同样因意外事故而不得不坐上轮椅的Sunny在帮他进行康复训练的同时，带他加入了自己组织的篮球队…… 场景1: John加入篮球队之后的具体表现…… John was glad that his dream of being a member of the basketball team came true.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 场景2: Sunny对John的评价以及对人生的感悟…… Sunny saw all John did, lost in thought.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： John was glad that his dream of being a member of the basketball team came true. Basketball was like medicine for him.John was much better and more confident than before.John practiced hard to improve himself.He was always the first to come to the court, and the last to go back home.Although it was not easy for him to play and he did badly at first, he never thought about giving up hope.He was a boy with a strong mind. Sunny saw all John did, lost in thought. He could not help praising John for his courage and love for basketball.There were many ups and downs in life.No one knew what would happen.However, as long as there was love and hope in our heart, nothing could stop us from achieving what we desired.As a matter of fact, what we should do was hold fast to dreams and fight to the end. Ⅰ.根据要求完成下列句子 1．(完成句子)Surprised_and_happy (又惊又喜), Tony stood up and accepted the prize. (形容词短语作状语) 2．(完成句子)It_is_for_this_reason_that (正因为这个原因) Spanish is the main official language of Peru.(强调句型) 3．(一句多译)这本参考书值得买，因为它对你的学习很有帮助。 ①The reference book is_worth_buying,_because it is a great help for your study.(worth) ②The reference book is_worthy_to_be/of_being_bought,_because it is a great help for your study.(worthy) ③It_is_worthwhile_buying/to_buy the reference book, because it is a great help for your study.(worthwhile) 4．If you work hard, you will make progress every day. →Work_hard_and_you_will make progress every day. (祈使句＋and) →Working_hard,_you will make progress every day. (分词短语作状语) 5．When a person is healthy enough, he can afford to overcome all hardships. →Only_when_a_person_is_healthy_enough_can_he_afford to overcome all hardships. (用倒装句升级) Ⅱ.读后续写 (2024·济宁模拟)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sally had longed to become a dancer since three.However, a terrible car accident made that ambition nearly come to an end overnight in 2011.Sally，then a 15－year－old high school student in California, was injured severely in the accident that left her paralyzed (瘫痪的) from the waist down.For most people, that would have dashed any hope of a dancing career.But for Sally, it was just the beginning of new life.Instead of being a barrier, her wheelchair made her more courageous.“I wanted to prove to my community and to myself that I was still‘normal’，”she said with a determined look，“Whatever normal meant.” In her eyes, normal meant dancing, so Sally did it in her wheelchair right alongside her nondisabled high school dance team.“Half of my body was taken away from me, and I have to move it with my hands，” Sally said.“It definitely took a lot of learning and patience.” After graduation, Sally expanded her dance network to include women who had the same situation as her.She met people online who had suffered various spinal cord injuries (脊髓损伤), and invited them to dance with her by sharing her determination.“It was such an amazing experience.” Hoping to reach more people in a larger city, Sally moved to Los Angeles in 2016 and formed a team of dancers with disabilities called DREAM.“I want to show that dance is dance, whether you're walking or you're rolling.” In Sally's dancing team, there was a girl Ella aged 12, who had been feeling depressed since the terrible accident.Having known about the girl's situation, Sally made efforts to seek every chance to help the little girl find back the confidence to live.Thanks to Sally's continuous efforts, the little girl recovered physically and mentally day by day.The other day, an invitation to a national dancing competition arrived.After a heated discussion, they reached an agreement that they would recommend Ella to the competition on behalf of the team. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 On hearing the decision, Ella felt more than worried.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ The audience stood up and clapped for Ella's excellent performance._________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： On hearing the decision, Ella felt more than worried. She knew that it was their trust on her that made her get the chance to dance on that large stage.So she began to practice hard every day.Whenever she met with problems, she would turn to Sally for help.The competition day came finally, and it was Ella's turn to show herself.Ella controlled her worry and excitement, and danced with gentle elegance and strength. The audience stood up and clapped for Ella's excellent performance. Ella looked around and noticed that Sally and all her teammates were sitting under the stage, with their eyes filled with tears and smiles on their faces.At that moment, Ella knew that she was successful.She was very grateful to Sally and all her teammates.Thanks to their support and belief, she could gain confidence and succeed in dancing at last.She had made up her mind to go on this way forever. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$