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第2课时——强化表达功·写作短板的专项补弱
“do/does/did+动词原形”强调谓语动词
“do/does/did+动词原形”构成强调句,意为“确实;的确”,用来加强谓语动词的语气,但须符合以下两个条件:
(1)句子是肯定句;
(2)句子的时态为一般现在时或一般过去时。
|先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)
①I really appreciate your help and hope to have a chance to give it in return.
→I really appreciate your help and do_hope_to_have_a_chance to give it in return.
②She told me about the meeting, but I totally forgot about it.
→She_did_tell_me_about_the_meeting,_but I totally forgot about it.
|再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)
③这次活动确实弘扬了优秀的传统文化,也让我们体验了文化的魅力。
The activity did_promote_excellent_traditional_culture as well as allowing us to experience the charm of culture.
④如果你对郊游感兴趣,一定要让我们提前知道。
If you are interested in the outing, do_let_us_know_ahead_of_time.
1.赏场景之美
I walk through the doors into the waiting area, where there's a familiar atmosphere of boredom and tension.People sit uncomfortably on plastic chairs, looking through old magazines, all of which have been read hundreds of times previously.Anxious parents do what they can to comfort nervous and crying children.
写法领悟:文中作者使用where引导的定语从句,形象地描述出了候诊区紧张和焦虑的氛围。在第二句中不仅使用了all of which引导的定语从句,还连续使用了动词或短语sit、 looking through、 read 以及副词uncomfortably,生动地描写了家长在等候时的焦躁心情。第三句使用了描写心理的形容词nervous和表示动作的分词crying,准确表达出了患儿的紧张和痛苦。这几处的场景描写为接下来小丑医生的出场做好了铺垫。
2.赏用词之美
Although she is clearly still in some pain, her scared and anxious look has been replaced — first by a small smile, and then by loud laughter as I “magically” produce her sock from out of my pocket.
写法领悟:文中作者使用了形容词 scared, anxious和名词 pain, smile, laughter,同时运用了对比的写作手法,灵活、生动并形象地描绘出了小丑医生给病人带来的变化。
[针对练笔] (依据提示完成句子/补全语段)
①He could hardly wait to share his trip, eyes shining and face glowing with delight.
他迫不及待地分享起他的旅程,双眸闪闪发亮,脸上洋溢着(glow)喜悦。
②A crash of thunder made_me_lift_my_head,_and lightning suddenly lit_up_the_night.A few moments later, we were in the middle of a storm, with a violent wind shaking_the_windows.(场景描写)
一声惊雷使我抬起了头,闪电突然间点亮了黑夜。片刻之后,我们处于暴风雨之中,狂风摇晃着窗户。
[命题导向]
本单元主题为“乐观的生活态度”,属于人与自我的主题语境。读后续写中常以趣闻轶事为命题点,如浙江高考中的南瓜趣事、健忘的妈妈等。前文部分一般会描述一件生活中遇到的尴尬事,续写部分通常是描述当时的尴尬场景及紧张情绪,并通过幽默的语言、巧妙的情节设置引出趣味性的结局。此类命题旨在帮助考生更好地管理自己的情绪,养成豁达、包容的性格,保持愉悦的心情,以积极的心态去面对生活,树立乐观的人生态度。
构建语义场
(一)积极的情绪
1.cheer up (使)高兴起来
2.be all smiles 笑容满面
3.crack a smile 笑了起来
4.smile slightly 微微一笑
5.laugh very loudly 很大声地笑
6.laugh one's head off 捧腹大笑
7.grin from ear to ear 咧嘴大笑
8.roar with laughter 哄堂大笑
9.look extremely happy 看起来很开心
10.be pleased about 对……感到满意
(二)消极的情绪
1.long face 愁眉苦脸
2.feel frightened 感到害怕
3.more than a little bored 非常无聊
4.a strong sense of loss 强烈的失落感
5.a scared and anxious look 恐惧和焦虑的表情
6....there's a familiar atmosphere of boredom and tension.
……这里充斥着常见的厌烦和紧张情绪。
7.Fear slowly creeps upon her.
恐惧慢慢袭上她的心头。
8.She felt her stomach knot with fear.
她感到害怕,胃都揪紧了。
(三)欢笑与幽默的重要性
1.make sb. feel better 让某人感觉更好
2.make ... a friendlier place
使……成为一个更友善的地方
3.make people laugh 给人们带来欢笑
4.have a light-hearted attitude towards life
拥有轻松愉快的生活态度
5.After all, it really is true that “laughter is the best medicine”.
毕竟,“欢笑是最佳灵药”这句话是千真万确的。
6.Sharing jokes and laughing together can bring individuals and even communities together.
一起分享笑话、一起欢笑可以使不同的个体甚至是团体凝聚在一起。
7....humour isn't just about laughter, but is a way of life and a tool that can be used to illuminate the world.
……幽默不只能带来笑声,它还是一种生活方式,是一种可以用来阐明世界的工具。
8.Living and working with others can sometimes be complicated, and humour makes this easier.
和其他人在一起生活和工作有时候并不是一件容易的事,而幽默可以让它变得更简单。
平时勤练笔
写作任务——读后续写的片段训练
(一)语境片段训练(依据提示补全下列语段)
1.遭遇尴尬境地后的心理活动(尴尬→鼓足勇气道歉→感到好笑)
With a deep blush on her face, ①so embarrassed did she feel (她感到如此尴尬;倒装句) that she couldn't utter a single word.Then, the lift arrived at her floor. As the lift doors slid open, the woman ②picked_up_all_her_courage (鼓起她所有的勇气), “I do apologize for my misunderstanding on you!”Two gentlemen replied ③with_all_smiles (笑容满面), and said a good evening to her. With an effort of will she picked up one foot and slipped out of the lift, ④leaving_both_of_them_laughing_continuously (留下他们俩继续笑个不停). Casting back what a spectacle she had made of herself she couldn't help ⑤cracking_a_smile (笑了起来). “It must be the most embarrassing and funny experience I have owned.”
2.笑对生活(主旨升华部分)
They ①laughed_their_head_off (捧腹大笑) in the house of mirrors.Therefore, they saw thousands of laughing faces in the mirrors. They ②felt_extremely_happy (感到非常开心). In fact, all the faces in the world are mirrors.What kind of reflections you see in the faces of the people you meet depend on what expression they find in your face. Thus,③to_make_the_world_a_friendlier_place (为了让这个世界成为一个更友善的地方), you have to ④have_a_light-hearted_attitude_towards_life_first (首先要拥有轻松愉快的生活态度).
(二)续写构思训练(根据提示构思、续写语段)
前情概述:作者在车站的自助餐厅候车时,买了一杯咖啡和一袋巧克力饼干,并找了张空桌坐下,开始做报纸上的填字游戏。几分钟后,一位男子坐在了作者的对面,他看起来像是一个商业人士……
场景1:忽然,对面的男士将手伸过桌子打开作者的饼干袋子,开始吃了起来。作者感到非常震惊,但是因为不喜欢惹麻烦,作者没有多说什么,只是也随着拿了一块饼干,然后假装专心地玩填字游戏。
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场景2:饼干很快被吃完了,当作者拿起最后一块时,看了对面的男士一眼,发现对方正怒视着自己。作者有些不安,决定离开。但还没等到作者起身,对面的男士已迅速地站起来离开了。作者如释重负。又等了几分钟作者准备离开,拿起报纸时竟发现……
After I took the last biscuit and glanced at the man, he was staring at me angrily.________________________________________________________________________
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参考范文:
Suddenly he reached across the table, opened my packet of biscuits, took one, and put it into his mouth. I couldn't believe my eyes! How could a city businessman do that? I was too shocked to say anything. Anyway, I didn't want to make trouble, so I decided to pretend to ignore it. As a matter of fact, I always avoid trouble if I can. I just took a biscuit myself and went back to my crossword puzzle. When the man took a second biscuit, I didn't look up or make a sound. I pretended to be enjoying the crossword puzzle.
After I took the last biscuit and glanced at the man, he was staring at me angrily.I nervously put the biscuit into my mouth, and decided to leave. I was ready to get up and go when the man suddenly pushed back his chair, stood up and hurried out of the buffet. I felt very relieved and decided to wait two or three minutes before going. I finished my coffee, folded my evening newspaper and stood up. And there, on the table, where my evening newspaper had been, was my packet of biscuits, without being touched.
Ⅰ.根据要求完成下列句子
1.(同义替换)They sat at the back of the room, talking happily in a low voice.
in_a_whisper/in_whispers
2.(同义替换)From this story, we can conclude that hard work will pay off sooner or later.
come_to/arrive_at/draw/reach_a_conclusion
3.(完成句子) Listening to some soft music does_relax_your_mood (的确可以放松你的情绪) and give you a new start.(强调谓语)
4.(完成句子) While_waiting_for_the_train (在等火车时), I had a long talk with my sister about her work.(while+分词)
5.(完成句子) I wanted to keep_the_birthday_present_a_secret (对生日礼物保密) but she still knew it.
6.(完成句子) The first thing that Jack wanted to do was (to)_rush_home_and_tell_his_parents_the_good_news (飞奔回家告诉他父母这个好消息).(不定式作表语)
7.(一句多译)我今天太累了,现在没心情和我弟弟玩耍。
①I am too tired today and in_no_mood_to_play with my brother now.
②I am too tired today and in_no_mood_for_playing with my brother now.
8.I go from junior high school to senior high school and it is a really big challenge.
→Going_from_junior_high_school_to_senior_high_school is a really big challenge.(用动名词短语作主语升级)
Ⅱ.语法填空
Charlie Chaplin once said, “A day without laughter is a day wasted.”
Humor in the workplace can be a powerful force for good, if it __1__ (do) correctly.Work can be stressful and challenging, and humor can provide a much-needed break __2__ the pressure.When employees are able to laugh and joke with one another, it can help lead to higher levels of job __3__ (satisfy) and overall productivity.In addition, it can help to break down barriers and build trust, __4__, in turn, can lead to more __5__ (effect) teamwork and better communication among colleagues.
However, attempting humor in any situation, especially when you don't know people well, can be risky and may end up __6__ (cause) tension.And the workplace is often full of relationship dynamics (动态) that make certain types of humor __7__ (risky) than others.In fact, some company leaders or employees may lack the __8__ (able) to tell when to stop joking or when they are using negative humor.They may offend others or make __9__ improper joke.As a result, they can create an isolated environment for coworkers who don't feel “in” on the joke.So it is important to use humor in a professional manner __10__ (ensure) that it is not harmful to others.
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文,主要介绍了在工作场合使用幽默的好处及注意事项。
1.is done 考查动词的时态和语态。根据语境可知,do与主语it(it 指代humor) 为被动关系,且陈述的是一般事实,故用is done。
2.from 考查介词。幽默可以让你从压力中解脱出来, a break from ...意为“暂停,中断……”。
3.satisfaction 考查名词。根据语境可知,此处意为“工作满意度”,故用名词。
4.which 考查定语从句。根据语境可知,此处是一个非限制性定语从句,which 指代前面提到的幽默有助于打破障碍,建立信任。
5.effective 考查形容词。空处修饰名词teamwork,意为“更有效的团队合作”。
6.causing 考查非谓语动词。end up doing sth.为固定搭配,意为“最终做某事”。
7.riskier 考查形容词比较级。此处把某些类型的幽默与其他类型的幽默作比较,且空后有介词 than,故此处填 riskier。
8.ability 考查名词。根据语境可知,有些雇主或雇员没有能力判断该什么时间停止说笑话或什么时候他们正用不适宜的幽默, the ability to do sth.意为“做某事的能力”。
9.an 考查冠词。根据语境可知,此处表泛指,且improper 的发音以元音音素开头,故用不定冠词 an修饰。
10.to ensure 考查非谓语动词。此处不定式作目的状语,意为“因此,以专业的方式使用幽默是很重要的,以确保它不会对他人造成伤害”。
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华,你校的Humor and Health Club 计划于本周六晚上举办一场相声小品专场晚会。请根据下面的要点提示,给你的留学生朋友 Chris写一封电子邮件,邀请他来观看。内容包括:
1.写信目的; 2.活动介绍; 3.你的期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:相声crosstalk 小品sketch
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参考范文:
Dear Chris,
How have you been? I am writing to invite you to an open-air comedy show to be held by our school's Humor and Health Club this Saturday evening.I think it will be a great opportunity for you to experience some Chinese humor and have a good laugh with us.
The show will take place on the school play- ground at 7 pm.It will feature some classic Chinese sketch and crosstalk shows to be performed by students from our school, and I am sure you will enjoy it.
I am looking forward to seeing you there.
Best regards,
Li Hua
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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