Unit 7-8写作专项提优课件2024-2025学年译林版（2024）七年级英语上册

写作专项提优 Unit 7　Be wise with money 01 佳作赏析 02 素材积累 03 写作演练 目 录 长辈给孩子压岁钱是中国的传统习俗之一。如何管理压岁钱成为大 家争论的焦点。请根据以下问题提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，谈谈你 的做法。 提示： 1. When do children get their lucky money？ 2. What do you often spend your lucky money on？ 3. How will you manage your lucky money？ 返回目录 　　Now， parents or other relatives give children more and more lucky money on birthdays or at festivals.❶ Everyone has his or her own way of spending the money.❷ For me， I usually spend most of my lucky money on snacks and drinks I like. School things also cost a part of my money， like pens and books.❸ I don’t think I spend my money wisely. In the future， I plan to make better use of my money.❹ First， I will spend less on snacks. Second， I will try to help others. Third， I should save some money for future use. 返回目录 [名师点评] 本文是一篇记叙文。本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第 一人称为主。本文根据三个问题将文章分为三个段落。 第一段讲述了压岁钱的来源。句型①为高分句型，用give sb. sth.结 构，简洁并清楚地回答了第一个问题。 第二段讲述了自己如何使用压岁钱。第一句用one’s way of doing结 构总领全段。接着陈述了自己压岁钱的用途，并谈了自己的想法。其中 句型②和③为高分句型。 最后一段陈述了作者对未来压岁钱的管理计划。反思不足并提出措 施。句型④为高分句型。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. I’d like to share how I manage my pocket money every month. 2. I usually make a budget for my pocket money. 返回目录 1. I spend 50％ of the money on books. 2. They are necessary for my life. 3. Besides， I plan to have a holiday with my friends. 4. Finally， I spend about 20％ helping children in need. [中间句] 返回目录 1. It’s important to spend money wisely. 2. It’s not just about spending or saving. 3. It’s about how I can use money to create a better life for myself and others. [结尾句] 返回目录 1. I believe every little bit of love counts. 我相信每一点爱都很重要。 2. Save for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。 [名言警句] 返回目录 为倡导理性消费，增强学生理财意识，学校 开展“零用钱管理能 手”评选活动。请结合以下图表，写一篇英语短文参与评选，谈谈你每 月零用钱的使用情况及理由。 返回目录 1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥。 2. 词数90左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 [思路点拨] 1. 文体：记叙文。 2. 时态：一般现在时。 3. 人称：以第一人称为主。 　要求： 返回目录 Para. 1 总体说明自己 每月制订的计划 manage pocket money make a budget Para. 2 具体说明零花 钱的使用方案 I spend 50％ of ...on ... I plan to ... I save about 30％ ... I believe ... Para. 3 介绍对管理零 花钱的看法 ...important ... It’s not just ... It’s about ... [写作提纲] 返回目录 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　I spend 50％ of the money on books， pens and other daily things. They are necessary for my study and hobbies. Besides， I plan to travel to Xi’an this summer holiday， so I save about 30％ every month for future use. Finally， I spend about 20％ helping children in need. I believe every little bit of love counts.　 　Managing money is important for me. It’s not just about spending or saving. It’s about how I can use money to create a better life for myself and others.　 [妙笔生花] 　　I’d like to share how I manage my pocket money every month. ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ I usually make a budget for my pocket money at the beginning of every month.　 返回目录 Unit 8　Let’s celebrate！ 01 佳作赏析 02 素材积累 03 写作演练 目 录 学校双语比赛开设了中国传统文化专栏，请以“My favourite traditional Chinese festival”为题，用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。内 容包括： 1. 节日名称。2. 节日时间。3. 庆祝方式。4. 你过节时的感受。 要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 文中不得透露个人信息。词数90左右。 返回目录 When the Spring Festival is coming， people are busy cleaning the house and cooking traditional food.❶ On the evening before the festival， people get together to have a big family dinner. During the festival， people in new clothes visit each other and give lucky money to kids to send good wishes. When I follow the traditions， I have a lot of fun and also feel proud of the traditional culture.❷ And it’s relaxing to have time off and stay with friends and families.❸ My favourite traditional Chinese festival My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. It is also called Chinese New Year. It’s the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar. 返回目录 [名师点评] 本文是一篇记叙文。本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人 称为主。本文分为三个段落。 第一段作者讲述了最爱的节日名称及时间。 第二段作者按时间顺序讲述了庆祝该节日的方式。其中①含有when 引导的时间状语从句，为高分句型。 第三段讲述了作者过节的感受。他首先为传统文化感到自豪，其次 因为有假期而感到放松。②和③为高分句型。 返回目录 [开头句] 1. Thank you for telling me about the Dragon Boat Festival. 2. I like the Dragon Boat Festival best. 3. It is an important traditional festival in China. 4. It usually comes in June every year. 5. Most Chinese families celebrate it. 返回目录 1. People usually celebrate it. 2. Family members get together. 3. They have a big dinner. 4. They eat a kind of special food. 5. There are different kinds of rice dumplings in my hometown. 6. They watch dragon boat races. 7. They like to let off fireworks at night. [中间句] 返回目录 1. It is a special day. 2. It is really wonderful. 3. Everyone has lots of fun/a good time on that day. [结尾句] 返回目录 1. On festive occasions more than ever one thinks of one’s dear ones far away. 每逢佳节倍思亲。 2. When in Rome， do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。 3. Zero in on your target， and go for it. 认准目标，全力以赴。 [名言警句] 返回目录 端午节是我国的传统佳节之一。请你根据表格提示，用英文简单介 绍你家乡端午节的情况。 端午节 节日时间 通常在每年的六月份 庆祝方式 1. 家人聚会 2. 吃特色食物粽子…… 3. 观看龙舟赛…… 个人看法 1. 非常精彩 2. 玩得开心 返回目录 　　要求：1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻 译。2. 词数90左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。 [思路点拨] 1. 文体：记叙文。 2. 时态：一般现在时。 3. 人称：以第三人称为主。 返回目录 Para. 1 总起全文，介绍 你最喜爱的节日 是端午节 I like ...best. It’s an important ... Para. 2 介绍端午节的时 间和相关庆祝 活动 It usually comes in ... People get together ... They have/eat ... There are ... Para. 3 介绍自己的感受 It is really ... Everyone has ... [写作提纲] 返回目录 　It usually comes in June every year. Most Chinese families celebrate it. People get together with family members and have a big dinner. They eat a kind of special food-rice dumplings. There are different kinds of rice dumplings in my hometown. On that day， there are lots of activities， like watching dragon boat races.　 [妙笔生花] 　　Of all the festivals， 　 ⁠ ⁠ I like the Dragon Boat Festival It’s an important traditional festival in China. 　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ It is really wonderful. Everyone has a good time on that day.　 返回目录 $$